高三英語寫作專項之讀后續(xù)寫之親情NoTime課件

1、親情話題NO TIME原題呈現(xiàn) No Time With a broad smile on her lips, 15yearold Sirin rushed to her mom to show off her new painting. But Mom raised her eyebrows with eyes wide open and spoke in an impatient tone, “No time, baby. Right now I am busy with an important talk. Just wait for some time, OK？” Holding he

2、r oil painting, she frowned, and then searched for her dad. “Dad, see what I have done，” Sirin announced aloud in a thrilling voice. Her dad turned around while adjusting his tie, grinned at her, and showed his thumbs up! Immediately, blowing her two cheeks, Sirin replied angrily, “Dad, you havent s

3、een it yet.” He smiled at her saying, “No time, baby. I will see it later.” He just patted her back lovingly, kissed her forehead, and rushed for his office. She was not a kid to be pleased with simple gesture or smile. She stood there for a few seconds, and then stormed off to her own bedroom. Hot

4、air was blowing from her nostrils (鼻孔); her face turned into red apple. She threw the painting on the table, slammed (把砰地關上) the door and threw herself on her bed. “Why is everybody so busy？” she recalled thousands of incidents that hurt her in preschool, middle school and even in high school too！Sh

5、e assumed at least her own family members would give some values to her thoughts, but they were no exception. Unconsciously, her eyes were filled with tears. The knocking sound on the door put a sudden brake to her thought. Her mom was calling her for dinner. Sirin deliberately came late to join the

6、m. She kept silent and didnt look at anyone, scratching the table mat with her nail. Her mom was puzzled at the unusual behavior. Suddenly, the morning incident clicked in her mind. Softly, she asked, “Honey, did I do anything wrong？”Sirin showed off her work for praise but both her mother and fathe

7、r ignored herSirins anger and her thoughtsAt dinner time, mother noticed her unusual behaviorone day.when back from school the next daySirins homeSirin, her mom, her dadwhenwherewhowhatwhyhowSirin tried to show off her new painting her mother and father were too busy to appreciate her paintingAt din

8、ner time, her mom remembered the incident in the morning and asked herproud, full of expectationangryupset and angry?THEMEProper attention and mutual understanding are the keys to a harmonious family.Paragraph 1At this very moment, Sirin could no longer resist her anger. “Why is everybody so busy？”_

9、Paragraph 2When back from school the next day, Sirin was surprised to see her beautifullydecorated painting on the wall._when at dinner time, at nightwhere at home, at her roomwho Sirin, mother and fatherwhat Sirin: complain Father and mother: apologize or explainhow Sirin: angry, sad father and mot

10、her: apologeticwhen the next day after schoolwhere at home, at her roomwho Sirin, mother and fatherwhat Sirin: thank and apologize Father and mother: apologize or explain mutual understandinghow Sirin: moved Translation(paragraph 1)1. 就在這時，Sirin再也控制不住她的怒氣。2. 她咆哮著，眼淚流下來。3. 她尖叫著，幾乎哽咽。4. 出于憤怒，她抓起桌上的畫，撕

11、成兩半。5. 媽媽感到很震驚，快速地站起來。6. 她緊緊地抱住她，細心地安慰她。Translation(paragraph 1)1. 就在這時，Sirin再也控制不住她的怒氣。At this very moment, Sirin could no longer resist her anger.2. 她咆哮著，眼淚流下來。She roared, tears streaming down.3. 她尖叫著，幾乎哽咽。She screamed, nearly choked.4. 出于憤怒，她抓起桌上的畫，撕成兩半。Out of great anger, she grabbed the paintin

12、g on the table and tore it in half.5. 媽媽感到很震驚，快速地站起來。Shocked, Mom quickly rose to her feet.6. 她緊緊地抱住她，細心地安慰她。She threw her arms around her tightly, comforting her with care and patience.Translation (paragraph 2)1. 她驚訝地看到了墻上裝飾精美的畫。2. 它被裝上了漂亮的畫框，邊上有感人的話：“我們?yōu)槟愀械津湴粒覀兊男√焓埂薄?. 一看到，她就哭了出來。4. 她跑向媽媽，緊緊地抱住她，

13、意識到里媽媽的愛，5. 她爸爸站在那里，笑著點頭。6. 回想起父母來自于工作和生活的壓力，她對她之前的行為感到后悔。7. 他水汪汪的眼睛看著他們，道歉道“.”8. 他們想到在一個家庭中，正是適當?shù)年P注和互相理解幫助建立牢固的關系。Translation (paragraph 2)1. 她驚訝地看到了墻上裝飾精美的畫。Sirin was surprised to see her beautifullydecorated painting on the wall. 2. 它被裝上了漂亮的畫框，邊上有感人的話：“我們?yōu)槟愀械津湴?，我們的小天使”。It was beautifully framed,

14、accompanied by the touching words: “We are so proud of you, our little angel！”3. 一看到，她就哭了出來。On seeing it, she burst out crying. 4. 她跑向媽媽，緊緊地抱住她，意識到里媽媽的愛。She ran to her mom and hugged her tightly as well and was fully aware of her moms love. 5. 她爸爸站在那里，笑著點頭。Her dad stood there, nodding with a big smi

15、le.6. 回想起父母來自于工作和生活的壓力，她對她之前的行為感到后悔。Recalling her parents stress from work and daily life, she was regretting her previous behavior.7. 他水汪汪的眼睛看著他們，道歉道“.”She looked up with watery eyes, apologising, “.”8. 他們想到在一個家庭中，正是適當?shù)年P注和互相理解幫助建立牢固的關系。It dawned on them that in a family, it was proper attention and

16、 mutual understanding that help build a strong bond.One possible versionAt this very moment, Sirin could no longer resist her anger. “Why is everybody so busy？” she roared, tears streaming down. She assumed that her mom and dad would be proud of her great talent and would appreciate her painting but

17、.She was deeply hurt with everybody having “no time” for her. “I hate you！” She screamed, nearly choked. Out of great anger, she grabbed the painting on the table and tore it in half. Shocked, Mom quickly rose to her feet. She threw her arms around her tightly, comforting her with care and patience,

18、 “Baby, I am so sorry! I promise we will try our best to make it right.”When back from school the next day，Sirin was surprised to see her beautifullydecorated painting on the wall. It was beautifully framed, accompanied by the touching words: “We are so proud of you, our little angel！” On seeing it,

19、 she burst out crying. She ran to her mom and hugged her tightly as well and was fully aware of her moms love. Her dad stood there, nodding with a big smile. Recalling her parents stress from work and daily life, she was regretting her previous behavior. She looked up with watery eyes, apologising,

20、“Sorry, Mom! Sorry, Dad！” It dawned on them that in a family, it was proper attention and mutual understanding that help build a strong bond.素材積累1. with a broad smile on her lips2. raise her eyebrows with eyes wide open3. speak in an impatient tone4. Holding her oil painting, she frowned, and then searched for her dad.5. announce aloud in a thrilling voice(表情及感官)(聯(lián)動)1. Her dad turned around while adjusting his tie, grinned at her, and showed his thumbs up.2. He just patted her back lovingly, kissed her forehead, and rushed for his office.3. She stood ther