人教版九年級(jí)英語(yǔ)unit12寫(xiě)作教程課件

1、Unit12 Life is full of the unexpected.寫(xiě)作話題：Daily routines (日?；顒?dòng))whowhenwhy/howwhatwhere記敘文的要素 When talk about an event:Pre-writing 記敘文寫(xiě)作方法指導(dǎo)Language box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）1Unit topic languages（單元話題語(yǔ)言） 以連線、標(biāo)序號(hào)等形式列舉本單元與本話題寫(xiě)作相關(guān)的詞塊、句子。(1)Chunks（詞塊）動(dòng)詞詞塊： wake up, go off, rush out of, be about to將要, drive by開(kāi)車經(jīng)過(guò), giv

2、e sb. a lift in ones car用小車送某人一程be late for,be full of,turn into,介詞詞塊： by the time, as soon as一就, on the street, at least至少, (1)Chunks（詞塊）（2）Patterns（句型）I will always remember the date日期；This was the luckiest /unluckiest day of my life；I couldnt believe ；I think.；What a lucky/an unlucky day! 2. Exte

3、nsive languages（拓展性語(yǔ)言）Famous saying，proverbs, aphorisms and Classical sample sentences（名言、諺語(yǔ)、警句與經(jīng)典例句） 1. Plans can never catch up with changes. 計(jì)劃沒(méi)有變化快。 2. Every dog has his day. 凡人皆有得意日。 在成長(zhǎng)的過(guò)程中，我們經(jīng)歷了許許多多的事，事情的經(jīng)過(guò)或結(jié)果可能會(huì)出人意表，以致令我們至今難忘。請(qǐng)以“An Unexpected Day in My Life” 為題，寫(xiě)一篇記敘文。 要求：內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)句連貫，字?jǐn)?shù)80詞左右。S

4、tep 1 Think and Fill（想一想，填一填）審題體裁_人稱_時(shí)態(tài)_第一人稱 一般過(guò)去時(shí)記敘文用詞方面: 代詞主格,賓格； 名詞單復(fù)數(shù)；動(dòng)詞搭配；副詞位置 句子方面: 篇章方面: 細(xì)節(jié)方面: 句子完整；主謂一致；動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)；連詞使用內(nèi)容完整；要點(diǎn)齊全；布局合理 單詞拼寫(xiě)；標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)；大小寫(xiě) Step 3 Check（查一查）An Unexpected Day in My Life Last Monday morning, when I woke up, I found my alarm clock didnt go off. It was already 7 oclock! I was

5、 worried. So I rushed out my home without brushing my teeth and having breakfast. By the time I got to the bus stop, the bus had already gone. Just when I felt I was about to cry, my classmate Kevins dad drove by and asked if I needed a lift. I was so excited. Then he gave me a lift in his car. As s

6、oon as I reached the classroom, the bell rang. I wasnt late for school. Every dog has his day. I thought it was the luckiest day for me! when, so, by the time, then, as soon as等詞語(yǔ)的使用，使時(shí)間脈絡(luò)很清晰。 本文表達(dá)連貫，措辭準(zhǔn)確，句子流暢，行文自然。文章交代清楚事件的背景、發(fā)展及結(jié)果，讓讀者清晰地理解事件的本身。Every dog has his day.諺語(yǔ)的使用，給本文增色不少，起到錦上添花的作用。An Unex

7、pected Day in My Life Last Friday was my birthday. After I got up, I thought my mom would say “Happy birthday” to me. But she didnt. I was very disappointed and went to school. After school, I invited my good friends Lily and Lucy to my home for dinner. They said they would go to the movies. They mu

8、st forget my birthday, either. I was so upset and went home alone. When I opened the door, I heard “Happy birthday”. My dad smiled at me. My mom bought me a big cake. Lily and Lucy gave me birthday gifts. I was quite surprised and happy. It was really an unexpected day in my life! 文章語(yǔ)言表達(dá)生動(dòng)，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)法正確

9、、用詞得當(dāng)、語(yǔ)言標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。選材新穎，能讀者耳目一新，引起閱讀的興趣。另外作者選取身邊的事例，寫(xiě)出真情實(shí)感，容易打動(dòng)讀者。but, either反襯出作者的失望。very disappointed, so upset描述出作者的心情，敘述親切、自然，讓讀者身同感受。quite, really與之前的心情形成強(qiáng)烈的對(duì)比。第十二單元今天是你最不幸的一天。昨天我有許多作業(yè)要做，所以昨天晚上我熬夜到很晚。今天我的鬧鐘沒(méi)響，所以我起床晚了。在我起床后我發(fā)現(xiàn)我的自行車壞了。然后我跑著去車站。不幸的是， 到我到那里的時(shí)候公共汽車已經(jīng)離開(kāi)了。當(dāng)我到達(dá)學(xué)校時(shí)，老師已經(jīng)開(kāi)始講課。當(dāng)我坐到我座位上是，我發(fā)現(xiàn)我把背包忘到了

10、家里。在中午我想吃午飯，我發(fā)現(xiàn)我沒(méi)錢。放學(xué)后，我不能進(jìn)我的房間因?yàn)槲野谚€匙忘到了學(xué)校。多么不幸的一天 My Most Unlucky DayToday is my most unlucky day. Yesterday I had a lot of homework to do, so I stayed up too late last night. And today my clock didnt go off, so I got up too late. After I got up, I found my bike was broken. Then I ran to the bus st

11、op. Unluckily, by the time I got there, the bus had left. When I got to school, the teacher had begun her class. When I sat at my seat, I realized I had left my backpack at home. At noon I wanted to have lunch, and I found I had no money. After school, I couldnt go into my room because I had left my keys at school.What an unlucky day it is!Summary:記敘文5要素 本文根據(jù)要求是一篇記敘文。它主要是說(shuō)明