高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作課件

1、作文高分突破概要寫作 12021屆高考英語主要內容一篇好的概要所具備的特點概要寫作中存在的問題案例分析一篇好的概要所具備的特點What is a summary?a short retelling of the main idea of a text or a topic. Examples: a news report a description of a movie a blurb on the back of a book What makes a good summary?a. A good summary should include: 1. the main ideas 2. Im

2、portant detailsb. A good summary is short, true and fair. （客觀、準確、公正；不渲染、不加入自己的主觀評價或觀點） c. A good summary is written in your own words and in a clear order that the original text is presented in. 概要寫作高考要求評分時主要從以下4個方面考慮： 1. 對原文要點的理解和呈現(xiàn)情況 2. 應用語法結構和詞匯的準確性 3. 上下文的連貫性 4. 對各要點表達的獨立性情況 提供一篇350個單詞左右的文章 （體裁一

3、般為說明文或議論文），要求考生基于該短文寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要。概要寫作要心懷讀者，假定讀者看不到原文本，你寫的文本是否 make sense。寫概要時，要想象你是在對你的朋友描述或解釋這篇文章。1. Unable to find the structure 2. Unable to find the key points 3. Unable to rewrite in your own words 4. Unable to write with beautiful language 概要寫作中存在的主要問題Read it thoroughly to get the topic and s

4、tructure of the passage Underline topic sentence and important details in each paragraph （leave out unimportant details）Rely on your memory first to rewrite the main idea of each part Revise it to ensure that your writing is to the point and clear and the language is well written. 概要寫作的過程Free readin

5、g is the best kind of homework for the students to do. Students get to choose what they want to read. Some students might read an adventure story. Others might read a mystery. Students can choose to read about topics they do not learn about in class. Students can take their time reading at home inst

6、ead of having to read only in class. 案例分析請閱讀下面這段文字并寫概要：案例來自于 外灘英語Free reading is the best kind of homework for the students to do. Students get to choose what they want to read. Some students might read an adventure story. Others might read a mystery. Students can choose to read about topics they do

7、 not learn about in class. Students can take their time reading at home instead of having to read only in class. 案例分析Free reading is the best kind of homework for the students to do. Students get to choose what they want to read. Some students might read an adventure story. Others might read a myste

8、ry. Students can choose to read about topics they do not learn about in class. Students can take their time reading at home instead of having to read only in class. 案例分析第一句 copying第二句 minor details最后一句 confusing order看看下面這篇概要的問題在哪兒？Free reading is the best kind of homework for the students to do. St

9、udents could read adventure stories or mysteries. I like mysteries best. They can use free reading to learn about different topics. They can also take more time to read outside of class. Students can choose what they read.第三句 your own opinionFree reading is the best homework for students. It allows

10、students to choose what to read and learn about and also ensures them more time to read. Random reading should be acknowledged as the superb assignment for students which empowers them to obtain more alternatives and guarantees ample reading time.Students should have free reading as their homework.

11、It is important for students to choose what they read and learn about. Reading at home can give students more reading time. 主位缺失，邏輯混亂。這篇概要的主位應該是free reading, 不是students 或reading at home。辭藻華麗， 晦澀難懂121. 包含文章所有要點，每個要點獨立，邏輯清晰。2. 按照原文出現(xiàn)的順序，用自己的語言表達，字數(shù)60左右。3. 表達連貫，內容客觀、清晰，不渲染，不參入自己的觀點。4. 語言準確、嚴謹、簡練、高級?？偨Y：

12、什么是一篇好的概要？Topic of the article Part1 Part 2 Part 3 Part4TS 1KD 1, 2 KD 1, 2 KD 1, 2 KD 1, 2 Mi 1, 如何確定文章的關鍵信息TS 2TS 3TS 4Mi 1, Mi 1, Mi 1, How to locate the main ideas and important details?Mind Map (overall / big picture of a text, the structure of the text) Group words (words or phrases frequently

13、 appearing)Signal words (first，last，but, however, for example, besides, therefore, in conclusion，on the contrary, meanwhile, on the one hand, on the other hand, someothers, consequently, ) 確定文章的關鍵信息幾個策略Relationship between sentencesMind Map (structure of a text) M4U2: Chemical or Organic FarmingPara

14、.1： introductionPara.2: problemsPara.3: solution Para.4: other solutionsproblems caused by chemicals(damage the health of people and soil)organic farming (definition, benefits) other methods to keep soil fertilechemical fertilizers (welcomed but harmful)Mind Map (structure of a text ） M3U4: Communic

15、ation : No Problem? Para.1 backgroundPara.2&3 problem-noticingPara.4 Problem-analyzingPara.5 Problem-solvingMeet international students at the airport (watching them)Some major misunderstandings of their greeting body languageNot all cultures greet the same way(examples) .not good or bad 2. studying

16、 international customsLike any other facility, keeping a school open requires a great deal of money. Keeping school open in the middle of summer requires air conditioning, and that adds significantly to the schools expenses. Besides, teachers must be paid for all the weeks hey are working. For examp

17、le, a high school in Arizona had a cost increase of $157,ooo when they switched to year-round schooling. Some schools may not be able to handle such increases, and other schools that can handle these expenses could be doing better things with the money.Group words can indicate the main idea.Gene tec

18、hnology can help people to give birth to more healthy and clever children. Some families have genetic diseases. This means theirchildren will for sure have the family disease, which is a great trouble for these families. In the past, doctors could do nothing about genetic diseases. But gene technolo

19、gy can solve this problem perfectly. Scientists justneed to find the wrong gene and correct it, and a healthy child will be born.Group words can indicate key supporting information.As is known to all, sports stars earn large amounts of money every year. LeBron James, the famous American basketball s

20、tar, for instance, earns an income of more than 20 million dollars a year. Some people hold the view that these stars do not deserve the high pay that they are getting. Some even argue that sports stars do nothing to society apart from entertaining people. Their contribution to society are much less

21、 than those made by doctors, firemen, scientists, professors, etc. But I can never agree with that.Signal words may help to locate main idea.but, however等后面的信息一般是段落的重要信息舉例后的信息一般屬于次要信息 Actually, vacation happiness is based onthe following top rules. First, choose your travel companions wisely, becaus

22、e nothing contributes more significantly to a trip than the right companions. Second, dont spend your vacation time in a place where everything is too expensive so as to maintain a positive mood. Third, shop wisely, for meaningful experiences provide more long-term happiness than physical possession

23、s.Signal words may help to locate key details.3個Rules要作為重要細節(jié)寫到概要中The biggest factor in short-sightedness is a lack of time spent outdoors. Exposure to daylight helps the retina (視網(wǎng)膜) to release a chemical that slows down an increase in the eyes axial length, which is what most often causes myopia (近視). A combination of not being outdoors and doing lots of work focusing up close (like writing characters or reading) worsens the problem. But if a child has enough time in the open, they can study all they