大學(xué)英語四級(jí)圖畫作文課件

1、四級(jí)圖畫作文By CUG Writing Workshop四級(jí)圖畫作文By CUG Writing Worksh作文四大要素根據(jù)教育部公布的大綱解析，大作文四大要素為描述、寓意、分析、評(píng)論。根據(jù)歷年考題，首段應(yīng)是圖畫描述，不應(yīng)發(fā)表太多議論，否則屬于跑題。圖畫描述至少應(yīng)有兩句，根據(jù)大綱解析，如果圖畫只字未提，扣三分之一的分?jǐn)?shù)；如果圖畫只描述一句，屬于描述不充分，扣3分。作文四大要素根據(jù)教育部公布的大綱解析，大作文四大要素為描寫作框架：1）第一段主要是描述圖畫中的信息和表達(dá)的含義。2）第二段的全文的重點(diǎn)，一般都是要求具體分析圖畫中暗含的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象。3）第三段的要求一般視具體的試題而定，有的要求給出自

2、己的評(píng)論、有的要求舉例、有的要求考生提出自己的建議以及針對(duì)現(xiàn)象應(yīng)該采取的措施。Tips：第二段和第三段的開頭最好寫一個(gè)主題句，既可以防止離題，又符合英文寫作的習(xí)慣。寫作框架：1）第一段主要是描述圖畫中的信息和表達(dá)的含義。議論文框架結(jié)構(gòu)：3段，12句，120180詞，35個(gè)關(guān)聯(lián)詞，35個(gè)從句第一段：引言/起始/淘金段，圖畫描述，3句1. 總體描述：人物/動(dòng)物/事物動(dòng)作環(huán)境 1句2. 挖掘細(xì)節(jié)詞、串連成句： 1句3. 文字說明/象征寓意： 1句議論文框架結(jié)構(gòu)：3段，12句，120180詞，35個(gè)關(guān)聯(lián)第二段：主體段，意義闡釋，5句1. 主題句：象征寓意，1句2. 論證：3句1）因果論證2) 影響論證

3、3) 舉例論證 3. 小結(jié)：概括論證，總結(jié)本段 1句 第二段：主體段，意義闡釋，5句第三段：結(jié)論段，建議措施，4句1. 結(jié)論句：1句2. 針對(duì)雙方提建議：2句3. 包裝結(jié)尾、展望未來：1句Only in this way can we solve this problem.It is high time that we solved this problem.第三段：結(jié)論段，建議措施，4句 第一段套話如何描述 第一段套話如何描述首段寫法其實(shí)，閱卷教師最重視的就是大作文第一段，也是最難寫的段落，盲目套用模板、空發(fā)議論，容易導(dǎo)致低分。閱卷教師最希望看到的寫法是:首句總體描述圖畫，點(diǎn)出人物、動(dòng)作和環(huán)

4、境；次句挖掘細(xì)節(jié)詞、串連成句，將圖中細(xì)節(jié)一網(wǎng)打盡；（根據(jù)情況而定）末句點(diǎn)出文字說明或象征寓意?？梢园l(fā)表議論，最好不要太多。首段寫法其實(shí)，閱卷教師最重視的就是大作文第一段，也是最難寫的描述圖畫的常用詞有關(guān)圖畫的名詞描述圖畫的形容詞修飾動(dòng)詞的副詞“寓意”、“字幕”如何翻譯？描述圖畫的常用詞有關(guān)圖畫的名詞替換picture的詞語drawing 指用線條或色彩繪成的圖畫。cartoon 指幽默或諷刺性漫畫。(amusing drawing in a newspaper or magazine, esp one that comments satirically on current events (報(bào)

5、刊上的)漫畫；（尤指）時(shí)事諷刺畫。)portrait 指肖像，只用于指人。illustration 插畫替換picture的詞語描述圖畫的形容詞 thought-provoking發(fā)人深省的enlightening 有啟迪作用/使人感悟的compelling/striking/intriguing引人注目/引起興趣profound含義深刻 =far-reaching implicationsinstructive有益的（=informative）（搭配ADV: extremely, highly, most, particularly, quite ）amusing 令人發(fā)笑的， ridicu

6、lous 荒謬可笑的illuminating (particularly revealing or helpful) 富有啟發(fā)性的；很有助益的；impressive 印象深刻的， exaggerative 夸張的描述圖畫的形容詞 thought-provoking發(fā)人深省修飾動(dòng)詞的副詞：graphically/ vividly生動(dòng)地symbolically象征性地conspicuously/ clearly / explicitly 清晰地subtly巧妙地，精細(xì)地修飾動(dòng)詞的副詞：graphically/ vividly生動(dòng)寓意： moral/ implications/ messagehav

7、e a profound implication寓意：字幕:Caption: words printed with an illustration or a photograph in order to describe or explain it （附於插圖、照片上的）說明文字1) We are informed by the caption that “_”. 2）The caption reads/indicates that “_”.字幕:Caption: words printed with 第一句描述圖畫怎么寫？ 第一句描述圖畫怎么寫？描述圖畫時(shí)需要遵循以下步驟：尋找出圖畫的中心事

8、物，并確定中心事物的位置。描述中心事物，可以從動(dòng)作和狀態(tài)兩個(gè)方面來描述。尋找中心事物周圍相關(guān)的事物，并進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單的描述。描述圖畫時(shí)需要遵循以下步驟：屌絲版：There is a man who is running on the playground. He is rushing to the final. The final is defined as another new start.1. 句型單一，2. 不具備可復(fù)制屌絲版：There is a man who is runnAs is shown in the picture, + 完全倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)（主系表 表系主）+ 非謂語動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)+定語

9、從句There is a man who is running on the playground.On the playground runs a young man.As is shown in the picture, + As is shown in the picture, + 完全倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)（主系表 表系主）+ 非謂語動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu) +定語從句There is a man who is running on the playground. He is rushing to the finnal.On the playground runs a young man, rushing to t

10、he finnal.As is shown in the picture, + As is shown in the picture, + 完全倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)（主系表 表系主）+ 非謂語動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu) +定語從句There is a man who is running on the playground. He is rushing to the finnal. The final is defined as another start.On the playground runs a young man, rushing to the finnal， which is defined as anoth

11、er start.As is shown in the picture, + 某個(gè)位置有中心事物 中心事物什么樣 周圍事物什么樣 完全倒裝 非謂語動(dòng)詞 非限定性定從某個(gè)位置有中心事物 中心事物什么樣 周圍事物什么樣常見可用于四級(jí)寫作的完全倒裝的系動(dòng)詞有 be, come, run, walk, jump, sit, stand, lie, crouch蜷縮, float等表示動(dòng)作的動(dòng)詞。常見可用于四級(jí)寫作的完全倒裝的系動(dòng)詞有 be, come, 屌絲版：As is shown in the cartoon, a candle is shining in the dark. It spreads

12、 brightness around itself.女神版：As is shown in the cartoon, in the picture stands a candle, spreading brightness around itself.屌絲版：As is shown in the cartoon屌絲版：As is shown above, a young man was asking his barber to have his hair cut like David Beckham.女神版：As is shown above, in the chair sits a young

13、 man, asking his barber to have his hair cut as cool as David Beckham.屌絲版：As is shown above, a young屌絲版：As is vividly depicted above, there is a bottle falling to the ground, the wine spile out. One man thinks its all over, while the other one thinks it still left a little.女神版：As is vividly depicted

14、 above, in the picture lies a bottle, falling to the ground with wine spilt out . One man who looks very sad thinks its all over, while the other one, happily rushing to the bottle, says it still left a little.屌絲版：As is vividly depicted abo練一個(gè)唄練一個(gè)唄As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, in the

15、picture stands a boy, worried about disposing of nuclear waste, while his father instructs him to empty the dustbin in his room first. (33 words)As is vividly depicted in the As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, in front of blackboard stands a teacher, teaching mathematics, however, one of h

16、er students holds the opinion that the knowledge he is learning might be outdated by the time hes in the job market. (42 words)As is vividly depicted in the As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, in the classroon stands a teacher, asking her student to read a work of literature as if he were r

17、eading a long text-message, while the student feels rather unpleasant. (37 words)As is vividly depicted in the 大學(xué)英語四級(jí)圖畫作文課件As is vividly depicted above, in the cartoon stand two men, dressed in traditional Arab clothes, watching the construction of ancient pyramid, which is the amazing achievement o

18、f teamwork.As is vividly depicted above, Homework Homework大學(xué)英語四級(jí)圖畫作文課件As is vividly depicted above, in the cartoon stand two travellers, travelling across mountains and grasslands with heavy baggages on their shoulders.As is vividly depicted above, 第一段常用首句句式As is shown/ depicted/ portrayed in the pi

19、cture/ cartoon,.The picture above vividly describe.The drawing above does demonstrate certain thought-provoking social phenomenon.What does the author intend to convey by describing. is that .第一段常用首句句式As is shown/ depicted第一段第二句由圖片描述上升到文字說明或寓意的闡釋第一段第二句由圖片描述上升到文字說明或寓意的闡釋由淺入深之句型Simple and funny as the

20、 cartoon is, it reflects that .The picture implicitly含蓄地，暗示地 raises the question of the importance of .The picture seems to be humorous at first glance/sight，but on second thoughts (=after reconsideration), you can find the fact that_. The primary purpose of the pictures above is that due attention

21、should be paid to .由淺入深之句型Simple and funny as theAs is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, in the picture stands a boy, worried about disposing of nuclear waste, while his father instructs him to empty the dustbin in his room first.Simple and funny as the cartoon is, it reflects that the father i

22、ntends to advise his son to do small things before undertaking big.As is vividly depicted in the As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, in front of blackboard stands a teacher, teaching mathematics, however, one of her students holds the opinion that the knowledge he is learning might be outda

23、ted by the time hes in the job market.The picture implicitly raises the question of the importance of the fundamental skills students learn in our classes.As is vividly depicted in the 看累了，練一個(gè)唄看累了，練一個(gè)唄As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, in the classroon stands a teacher, asking her student

24、to read a work of literature as if he were reading a long text-message, while the student feels rather unpleasant. The primary purpose of the picture above is that due attention should be paid to the importance of basic skills.As is vividly depicted in the As is vividly depicted above, in the cartoo

25、n stand two men, dressed in traditional Arab clothes, watching the construction of ancient pyramid, which is the amazing achievement of teamwork.Simple and funny as the cartoon is, it reflects that teamwork lies a fundamental base to the success.As is vividly depicted above, As is vividly depicted a

26、bove, in the cartoon stand two travellers, travelling across mountains and grasslands with heavy baggages on their shoulders.The picture implicitly raises the question that life, which is full of ups and downs, happiness and sorrow, oppotunities and challenges, is never a easy road to travel. As is

27、vividly depicted above, 第二段：即主體段落如何寫？第二段：第二段：主體段，意義闡釋，5句1. 主題句：象征寓意，1句2. 論證：3句1）因果論證2) 影響論證3) 舉例論證 3. 小結(jié)：概括論證，總結(jié)本段 1句 第二段：主體段，意義闡釋，5句topic sentencedevelopment: sub idea 1 development: sub idea 2brief conclusionLinking devicestopic sentencedevelopment: sub主題句（全段核心，全文關(guān)鍵,必寫）The symbolic meaning of the

28、picture is to show us that importance should be attached to.The purpose of the drawer is to show us that due attention has to be paid to .The picture illustrates the real meaning of .Undoubtedly, the drawing has symbolically revealed a serious problem in our daily life, .The cartoon conveys the mean

29、ing that A is like the process of B. (比喻類)The purpose of the picture is to remind us of the fact that we should not neglect the significance of.主題句（全段核心，全文關(guān)鍵,必寫）The symbolic 過渡句(“原因如下” ）的表述：Several factors, (both individual and social), could account for the (negative/ positive) phenomenon.The reaso

30、ns for the phenomenon may be complicated, but we can , to a large extent，ascribe/ owe/attribute (歸結(jié)于) it to the following factors.過渡句(“原因如下” ）的表述：The purpose of the picture is to remind us of the fact that we should not neglect the significance of fundamental skills. （主題句）The reasons for the phenome

31、non can be attributed to the following factors. （過渡句）找原因！2-3條1. 學(xué)習(xí)基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)不但能幫助我們獲得高等的技能，還能培養(yǎng)我們的情操。2. 基本技能永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)過時(shí)，因?yàn)樗谌粘Ｉ詈凸ぷ髦腥匀痪哂袑?shí)用性。The purpose of the picture is mastering the basic skills can not only help us acquire the advanced skills, but also cultivate our characters along the way we learn it.the

32、basic skills will never be out of date and they remain very practical in our daily life and work.1. 掌握基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)不但能幫助我們獲得高等的技能，還能培養(yǎng)我們的情操。2. 基本技能永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)過時(shí)，因?yàn)樗谌粘Ｉ詈凸ぷ髦腥匀痪哂袑?shí)用性。mastering the basic skills can下面具體指出幾個(gè)原因，第一個(gè)原因可以用Among the most important reasons cited by people is.Obviously, a variety of complicate

33、d factors contribute to the phenomenon, with the following one being the foremost.第二個(gè)原因可以用：Another important reason is.Also playing a part is.第三個(gè)原因可以用：The third reason, which can not be neglected, is that.In addition, (名詞) is also responsible for the phenomenon.last but not least, .下面具體指出幾個(gè)原因，第一個(gè)原因可

34、以用Among the most important reasons cited by people is that mastering the basic skills can not only help us acquire the advanced skills, but also cultuvate our characters along the way we learn it.Moreover, the basic skills will never be out of date and they remain very practical in our daily life an

35、d work. (55 words)for one thing, for anotheron the one hand, on the other handAmong the most important reasoThe picture illustrates the real meaning of dealing with trivial things first. （主題句）Several factors could account for the phenomenon. （過渡句）找原因1+21. 做小事不僅能夠培養(yǎng)我們的情操，而這正是做大事所需要的，而且還能磨礪人的耐性。2. 正如一

36、句言語所說，細(xì)節(jié)決定成敗，成功往往取決于小事情上。The picture illustrates the reDoing small things can not only help us cultivate the good qualities that we need in undertaking important tasks, but also develop our patience.As a proverb goes, it is detail that determines success, which was made up of by small things. Doing

37、small things can not onlThe picture illustrates the real meaning of dealing with trivial things first. （主題句）Several factors could account for the phenomenon. （過渡句）For one thing, doing small things can not only help us cultivate the good qualities that we need in undertaking important tasks, but also

38、 develop our patience. For another, as a proverb goes, it is detail that determines success, which was made up of by small things. (66 words)The picture illustrates the re主題句（6選1）+ 過渡句（2選1）+ 原因分析1, 2（,3）主題句（6選1）+ 過渡句（2選1）+ 原因分析1, 2（,主題句（6選1）+ 過渡句（2選1）+ 原因/影響分析1, 2（,3）主題句（6選1）+ 過渡句（2選1）+ 原因/影響分析1, 大學(xué)

39、英語四級(jí)圖畫作文課件列舉影響It will exert a profound influence.The positive effects, which are widely accepted, can be listed as follows.The negative effects, which are generally acknowledged, are presented below.To begin with, to make matters worse, worst of all列舉影響It will exert a profound i列舉影響法的模板如果全段都講的是正面影響，

40、主題句可以寫成：is beneficial in more than one ways.如果全段都講得是負(fù)面的影響，主題句可以寫成： is harmful in more than one ways.具體到連接全段的框架可以套用如下句型：The immediate result it produces is The influence is not confined to what is mentioned above. Whats more. Perhaps the most serious consequence (obvious advantage) is 列舉影響法的模板主體段落萬能角

41、度主體段落物質(zhì)回報(bào).can provide people with not only delicious food but fashionable colthes and such benefits as comfortable dwellings and handsome aotomobiles.individuals and organizations can make money, take profits and even obtain wealth by doing .It can improve ones living standards and make an easy an c

42、omfortable life.物質(zhì)回報(bào).can provide people with提供快捷信息.provides people with up-to-date, concrete and accurate and vivid information.can shrink the distance between cities and even continents, smooth the communication between residents and rid of the barrier between people.提供快捷信息.provides people with 安全角

43、度. can shield people from various kinds of hazards ranging from injury, robbery, assaults.can secure peoples food, health and shelter.安全角度. can shield people from身心角度.can relieve not only pressure but also anxiety and such problem from isolation and solitude.It can lessen peoples stress, pressure an

44、d tension.It cultivates an optimistic view toward the world, and extends peoples life span.can also have added benefit of increasing ones knowledge, giving us a new perspective of the outside world.身心角度.can relieve not only pr受益角度It can broaden ones mind, enrich ones experience, enhance vigor and put more enthusiasm to o