過(guò)考點(diǎn)22 連詞、連接詞和關(guān)系詞改錯(cuò)-短文改錯(cuò)

1、PAGE11專題5短文改錯(cuò)過(guò)考點(diǎn)22連詞、連接詞和關(guān)系詞改錯(cuò)Proofreading12022山西省五校高三上學(xué)期期中考試Ilefthomeat17andpaymyownwaythroughcollege.Inthepast20years,IhaveworkedforeverythingIneeded.Soitshocksmewhatsomepeopleintheir20sstillgettheirlifesupportedbyourparents.Someoftheseparentshavedifficultsupportingtheirfamilies.Itstruethatthejobm

2、arketismuchmoreharderthesedays.Therefore,therearecertainlysomewaystomakelivingonourown.Evenifourparentsisniceenoughtopayforourcollege,weshouldntburdenthemwithourproblems.Weshouldbefinancialresponsibleadults,madeourparentsproudofus.Proofreading22022重災(zāi)市教育聯(lián)盟高三上學(xué)期第一次考試Areyouafraidofdeliveringaspeechbefo

3、repeople?IcanwellrememberhisfirstspeechwhichwastitledARealTestinMyLifeattheageof9!YoucantimaginehowterribleshyIwasthemomentIthoughtofthatwithsomanyeyesfixedinme.Ihavenochoicebutprepareforit,though.Whenarealmomentcame,Istoodontheplatformwithmylegstrembledandmymindblank.Althoughitwashardformetofindmys

4、elfback,butImadeit!Fromthenon,Igraduallyturnedouttobeagreatspeakerswithoutanyfearoftalking.Proofreading32022東北三省名校教研聯(lián)合體高三聯(lián)合模擬考試IwillneverforgetamilitarytraininginCaliforniaSummerCampthatAugust.Thebigsunwasoverhead,burnedhot.Thedrillmasterwasverystrictandwewasallafraidofhim.Ifoneofusmadeamistake,allo

5、fuswillgetsuchpunishmentdelayingameal,standingfor10minutesorwhatever.Therefore,aftertraining,itwasnodoubtthatourdrillmasterwasenergeticandagreeable.Hisstronglocalaccentkeptuslaughmadly.Moreinterestingly,hesangoutoftune,frombeginningtoend.Everytimewhenhesang,wecouldhelplaughingtotears.參考答案Proofreadin

6、g1Ilefthomeat17andpaymyownwaythroughcollege.Inthepast20years,IpaidhaveworkedforeverythingIneeded.Soitshocksmewhatsomepeopleintheir20sthatstillgettheirlifesupportedbyourparents.Someoftheseparentshavedifficulttheirdifficultysupportingtheirfamilies.Itstruethatthejobmarketismuchmoreharderthesedays.There

7、fore,thereare去掉moreHowevercertainlysomewaystomakelivingonourown.Evenifourparentsisniceaareenoughtopayforourcollege,weshouldntburdenthemwithourproblems.Weshouldbefinancialresponsibleadults,madeourparentsproudofus.financiallymakingpaypaid【解析】考查時(shí)態(tài)。句意：我17歲離幵家,自食其力上完大學(xué)。此處描述過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情,并且根據(jù)前面的left可知,應(yīng)將pay改為pa

8、id。whatthat【解析】考查主語(yǔ)從句。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,itshocksme后為主語(yǔ)從句,it是形式主語(yǔ),其后的主語(yǔ)從句才是真正的主語(yǔ),故應(yīng)將what改為that。ourtheir【解析】考查代詞。根據(jù)上文中的somepeople可知,此處應(yīng)指他們的父母,故將our改為their。difficultdifficulty?！窘馕觥靠疾槊~。句意：這些父母當(dāng)中的些在養(yǎng)活他們的家人方面有困難。havedifficulty(in)doingsth.表示在做某事方面有困難,是固定搭配。刪除more【解析】考查比較級(jí)。句意：如今的就業(yè)市場(chǎng)更艱難,這是事實(shí)。在句中much修飾harder,more不能

9、修飾比較級(jí)。ThereforeHowever?！窘馕觥靠疾楦痹~。句意：然而,當(dāng)然會(huì)有一些我們自己謀生的方法。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知前后是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,而不是因果關(guān)系。make后加a【解析】考查冠詞。參見(jiàn)上題解析。makealiving表示謀生,屬于固定搭配。isare【解析】考查主謂一致。句意：盡管我們的父母足夠好,為我們支付了大學(xué)的費(fèi)用,但是我們不應(yīng)該再讓他們?yōu)槲覀兊膯?wèn)題而煩惱。主語(yǔ)是ourparents,系動(dòng)詞應(yīng)用are。financialfinancially【解析】考查副詞。句意：我們應(yīng)該成為經(jīng)濟(jì)上獨(dú)立的成年人,使我們的父母為我們感到驕傲。此處應(yīng)用副詞修飾形容詞,故將financial改為finan

10、cially。mademaking【解析】考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,此處應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)表示自然而然的結(jié)果。Proofreading2Areyouafraidofdeliveringaspeechbeforepeople?IcanwellrememberhismyfirstspeechwhichwastitledARealTestinMyLifeattheageof9!YoucantthatimaginehowterribleshyIwasthemomentIthoughtofthatwithsomanyeyesterriblyfixedinme.Ihavenochoicebutpr

11、epareforit,though.Whenarealmomentonhadtothecame,Istoodontheplatformwithmylegstrembledandmymindblank.Althoughittremblingwashardformetofindmyselfback,butImadeit!Fromthenon,Igraduallyturned去掉butouttobeagreatspeakerswithoutanyfearoftalking.speakerhismy【解析】考查代同。句意：我能清楚地記得在我九歲的時(shí)候,我第一次演講的題目是我人生中一次真正的考試。根據(jù)句

12、意可知,此處應(yīng)用I的形容詞性物主代詞my。whichthat【解析】考查定語(yǔ)從句。這是一個(gè)限制性定語(yǔ)從句，由于先行詞前有序數(shù)詞修飾,關(guān)系代詞只能用that。terribleterribly【解析】考查副詞。句意：你不能想象我一想到有如此多雙眼睛盯著我,我是多么害羞呀！此處應(yīng)用副詞修飾形容詞,故將terrible改為terribly。inon【解析】考查介詞。fixsth.onsb./sth.表示集中（目光、注意力、思想等）于,屬于固定搭配。havehad【解析】考查時(shí)態(tài)。句意：但是我別無(wú)選擇,除了為之做準(zhǔn)備。全文描述過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情,故本句中應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。but后加to【解析】考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。

13、havenochoicebuttodosth.表示除了做某事,別無(wú)選擇,屬于固定搭配。athe【解析】考查冠詞。句意：當(dāng)這一真正的時(shí)刻到來(lái)時(shí),我站在講臺(tái)上,兩腿發(fā)抖,大腦一片空白。根據(jù)句意可知,此處應(yīng)用定冠詞the表示特指。trembledtrembling【解析】考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。tremble為不及物動(dòng)詞發(fā)抖,搖晃,與legs構(gòu)成邏輯上的主謂關(guān)系,所以用現(xiàn)在分詞trembling。with+名詞+現(xiàn)在分詞/過(guò)去分詞的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu),例如：Withmymotherbeingill,Iwontbeabletogoonholiday.Withhisworkfinished,hewenthome.mymo

14、ther與be是邏輯上的主謂關(guān)系,所以用現(xiàn)在分詞；hiswork與finish是邏輯上的動(dòng)賓關(guān)系,所以用過(guò)去分詞。刪除but【解析】考查連詞。句意：盡管對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)很難找回自己,但是我最終做到了。although與but不能連用。speakersspeaker【解析】考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。句意：從那時(shí)起-我逐漸就變成了一個(gè)好的演說(shuō)家,不害怕講話了。根據(jù)前面的a可知,此處應(yīng)用單數(shù)。Proofreading3IwillneverforgetamilitarytraininginCaliforniaSummerCampthatAugust.theThebigsunwasoverhead,burnedhot.T

15、hedrillmasterwasverystrictandwewasallburningwereafraidofhim.Ifoneofusmadeamistake,allofuswillgetsuchpunishmentdelayingwouldameal,standingfor10minutesorwhatever.Therefore,aftertraining,itwasnodoubtHowevertherethatourdrillmasterwasenergeticandagreeable.Hisstronglocalaccentkeptuslaughlaughingmadly.More

16、interestingly,hesangoutoftune,frombeginningtoend.Everytimewhenhesang,wecouldhelplaughingtotears.去掉whennotathe【解析】考查冠詞。句意：我將永遠(yuǎn)忘不了8月份在加利福尼亞夏令營(yíng)的那次軍訓(xùn)。根據(jù)句意可知,此處應(yīng)用定冠詞the表示特指。burnedburning【解析】考查副詞。句意：大太陽(yáng)在頭頂,（天氣）酷熱。burninghot滾燙的,酷熱的,是固定搭配。waswere【解析】考查主謂一致。句意：教練對(duì)我們很嚴(yán)格,我們都怕他。由于主語(yǔ)是we,所以系動(dòng)詞用were。willwould【解析】考

17、查時(shí)態(tài)。句意：如果我們當(dāng)中有一人犯錯(cuò),我們所有的人將會(huì)受到如延遲吃飯或者罰站十分鐘之類的懲罰。全文描述過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情,結(jié)合條件狀語(yǔ)從句中的made可知,主句中應(yīng)用過(guò)去將來(lái)時(shí)。punishment后加as【解析】考查介詞。參見(jiàn)上題解析。such.as為固定用法,意為如一類的。such+名詞+as+例子=名詞+such+as+例子例如：Ienjoysuchsongsasthisone.=Ienjoysongssuchasthisone.ThereforeHowever【解析】考查副詞。句意：然而在訓(xùn)練之后,毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)我們的教官是充滿活力和討人喜歡的。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知,上下文為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,故用副詞However。itthere【解析】考查固定句型。thereis/wasnodou