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完型填空15語(yǔ)法填空10閱讀理解35信息匹配5-10基礎(chǔ)寫作15讀寫任務(wù)25高考英語(yǔ)答題時(shí)間注意答題順序：試卷順序（先易后難；作文最后）時(shí)間就是分?jǐn)?shù)，時(shí)間就是金錢，時(shí)間就是前途完型填空15信息匹配5-10高考英語(yǔ)答題時(shí)間注意答題1高金海莫小梅劉榮杰黃欣許杏楊天生梁媚羅洪慧林進(jìn)娣廖柏鴻126123120120119119118117113113120:4110:10100:1690:1889:23

班平均分:95.24級(jí)平均分：96.03理科排：13名高金海莫小梅劉榮杰黃欣許杏楊天生梁媚羅洪慧林進(jìn)娣廖柏鴻1262鄧數(shù)紅何偉楊富美李彬黃振鳳何月琳陳秋孟黃馨瑩黃曉青梁可兵125122120119119118118118117114120:3110:10100:1290:1789:32班平均分:92.05級(jí)平均分：96.03理科排：23名鄧數(shù)紅何偉楊富美李彬黃振鳳何月琳陳秋孟黃馨瑩黃曉青梁可兵123基礎(chǔ)寫作基礎(chǔ)寫作4存在問(wèn)題：1.詞匯嚴(yán)重缺乏，很多內(nèi)容無(wú)法表達(dá)2.中式英文,逐字翻譯，不按文法。3.時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤：4.書(shū)寫潦草，卷面不整潔。5.有相當(dāng)部分的學(xué)生沒(méi)寫作文或?qū)懸粌删?。我?guó)首次對(duì)高速公路行駛的小汽車實(shí)行免費(fèi)運(yùn)行政策Ourcountryisfirsttimetocarryoutthepolicythatcarsdriveonthehighwayarefree.第一句要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，而誤用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，陳述觀點(diǎn)本來(lái)要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或一般將來(lái)時(shí)的，但學(xué)生誤用了一般過(guò)去時(shí)等。存在問(wèn)題：我國(guó)首次對(duì)高速公路行駛的小汽車實(shí)行免費(fèi)運(yùn)行政策Ou5十一黃金周小汽車實(shí)行免費(fèi)通行刺激消費(fèi)第三產(chǎn)業(yè)親友駕車相聚人與人距離拉近了車流量猛增事故發(fā)生率上升theNationalDayholidayfreepassagewasgiventocarsonthehighwaycarscanrunonthehighwayforfreeyoucandrivecarsonthehighwayforfreestimulateconsumptionthethirdindustryfriendsandrelativesreunitewitheachotherbycarbringpeoplecloserthetrafficflowwillincreasetremendouslyhigheraccidentrate十一黃金周theNationalDayholidayf6好句子：1.Somepeopleareinfavorofitforthereasonthat

notonlycanitstimulateconsumption,whichisbeneficialtothedevelopmentofthethirdindustrysuchastourism,butalsoitcontributesalottoourgettingclosertoourrelativesandfriendsbydrivingtovisitthemoften.2.What’smore,sharingcarswithfriendsorrelativescanmakeeachothercloser.好句子：7DuringthelastNationalDayholidays,freepassagewasgiventocarsonthehighwayforthefirsttimeever,whichcausedaheateddiscussionnationwide.Onthebrightside,somebelievethatitisgoodtostimulateconsumptionandboostthethirdindustry,suchastourism.Tosomeextent,thispolicybringspeoplecloser,forthosewhowerereluctanttovisittheirfriendsaresomehowseducedtoreunitebycar.However,withcarsflockingtothehighways,othersareconcernedthatthetrafficflowwillincreasetremendously,DuringthelastNationalD8resultinginworsetrafficjamandhigheraccidentrate.Personally,freepassageiswhatthepublichavebeenlongingfor,butmorefollowingmeasuresshouldbetaken,forexample,somecontingencyplansshouldbemadetodealwiththepotentialproblemsandmoreclearroadsignsareneededtogivedriverspreciseguidance.resultinginworsetrafficjam9讀寫任務(wù)讀寫任務(wù)10存在問(wèn)題：A.概括部分：1、概括要點(diǎn)不全2、概括的表述錯(cuò)誤：Thepassagetellsusthatanationsurveyaboutthesenseofhappiness.1).CCTVdidasurveyaboutwhetheryouwerehappy2).mostpeoplegaveapositiveanswerwhilesomedidn’t3).theNobelPrizewinnerMoYansaidhedidn’tknowwhetherhewashappyornot存在問(wèn)題：Thepassagetellsusthat11B.正文部分：1.書(shū)寫潦草，涂改太多，卷面不整潔。2.每段段首空格不夠，全卷分段不明顯，影響卷面效果。3.時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。在正文部分第二段描述一件幸福的事時(shí)，有些學(xué)生全沒(méi)有應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去時(shí)的概念，或者有的學(xué)生忘了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的相應(yīng)詞尾變化。4.內(nèi)容不夠充實(shí)。5.存在一些表述錯(cuò)誤。如：謂語(yǔ)都是be+動(dòng)詞原形（myparentsisloveme.）、詞性亂用（happyisverysimply.）等,尤其中式英文出現(xiàn)率很高。B.正文部分：12好句子：1.AsfarasIamconcerned,IfirmlybelievethatIdolivehappilyforthereasonthatIhavesomanypeopletoloveandtobeloved.2.AlthoughIwillfacesomechallengessometimes,Ifeelsatisfiedastheyaretoosmallcomparedwiththepeoplewhoaresufferingfromhunger,coldandallkindsofillness.3.AsfarasIamconcerned,happinessliesintheprocessofpursuingourdreamsandthemomentwhenweachievethem.好句子：13完型填空15語(yǔ)法填空10閱讀理解35信息匹配5-10基礎(chǔ)寫作15讀寫任務(wù)25高考英語(yǔ)答題時(shí)間注意答題順序：試卷順序（先易后難；作文最后）時(shí)間就是分?jǐn)?shù)，時(shí)間就是金錢，時(shí)間就是前途完型填空15信息匹配5-10高考英語(yǔ)答題時(shí)間注意答題14高金海莫小梅劉榮杰黃欣許杏楊天生梁媚羅洪慧林進(jìn)娣廖柏鴻126123120120119119118117113113120:4110:10100:1690:1889:23

班平均分:95.24級(jí)平均分：96.03理科排：13名高金海莫小梅劉榮杰黃欣許杏楊天生梁媚羅洪慧林進(jìn)娣廖柏鴻12615鄧數(shù)紅何偉楊富美李彬黃振鳳何月琳陳秋孟黃馨瑩黃曉青梁可兵125122120119119118118118117114120:3110:10100:1290:1789:32班平均分:92.05級(jí)平均分：96.03理科排：23名鄧數(shù)紅何偉楊富美李彬黃振鳳何月琳陳秋孟黃馨瑩黃曉青梁可兵1216基礎(chǔ)寫作基礎(chǔ)寫作17存在問(wèn)題：1.詞匯嚴(yán)重缺乏，很多內(nèi)容無(wú)法表達(dá)2.中式英文,逐字翻譯，不按文法。3.時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤：4.書(shū)寫潦草，卷面不整潔。5.有相當(dāng)部分的學(xué)生沒(méi)寫作文或?qū)懸粌删?。我?guó)首次對(duì)高速公路行駛的小汽車實(shí)行免費(fèi)運(yùn)行政策Ourcountryisfirsttimetocarryoutthepolicythatcarsdriveonthehighwayarefree.第一句要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，而誤用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，陳述觀點(diǎn)本來(lái)要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或一般將來(lái)時(shí)的，但學(xué)生誤用了一般過(guò)去時(shí)等。存在問(wèn)題：我國(guó)首次對(duì)高速公路行駛的小汽車實(shí)行免費(fèi)運(yùn)行政策Ou18十一黃金周小汽車實(shí)行免費(fèi)通行刺激消費(fèi)第三產(chǎn)業(yè)親友駕車相聚人與人距離拉近了車流量猛增事故發(fā)生率上升theNationalDayholidayfreepassagewasgiventocarsonthehighwaycarscanrunonthehighwayforfreeyoucandrivecarsonthehighwayforfreestimulateconsumptionthethirdindustryfriendsandrelativesreunitewitheachotherbycarbringpeoplecloserthetrafficflowwillincreasetremendouslyhigheraccidentrate十一黃金周theNationalDayholidayf19好句子：1.Somepeopleareinfavorofitforthereasonthat

notonlycanitstimulateconsumption,whichisbeneficialtothedevelopmentofthethirdindustrysuchastourism,butalsoitcontributesalottoourgettingclosertoourrelativesandfriendsbydrivingtovisitthemoften.2.What’smore,sharingcarswithfriendsorrelativescanmakeeachothercloser.好句子：20DuringthelastNationalDayholidays,freepassagewasgiventocarsonthehighwayforthefirsttimeever,whichcausedaheateddiscussionnationwide.Onthebrightside,somebelievethatitisgoodtostimulateconsumptionandboostthethirdindustry,suchastourism.Tosomeextent,thispolicybringspeoplecloser,forthosewhowerereluctanttovisittheirfriendsaresomehowseducedtoreunitebycar.However,withcarsflockingtothehighways,othersareconcernedthatthetrafficflowwillincreasetremendously,DuringthelastNationalD21resultinginworsetrafficjamandhigheraccidentrate.Personally,freepassageiswhatthepublichavebeenlongingfor,butmorefollowingmeasuresshouldbetaken,forexample,somecontingencyplansshouldbemadetodealwiththepotentialproblemsandmoreclearroadsignsareneededtogivedriverspreciseguidance.resultinginworsetrafficjam22讀寫任務(wù)讀寫任務(wù)23存在問(wèn)題：A.概括部分：1、概括要點(diǎn)不全2、概括的表述錯(cuò)誤：Thepassagetellsusthatanationsurveyaboutthesenseofhappiness.1).CCTVdidasurveyaboutwhetheryouwerehappy2).mostpeoplegaveapositiveanswerwhilesomedidn’t3).theNobelPrizewinnerMoYansaidhedidn’tknowwhetherhewashap