初三書面表達指導公開課一等獎省優(yōu)質(zhì)課大賽獲獎課件

初三英語書面表達指導Whatdoyouthinkoftheproblem?

ThinkoftheproblemIt’sseriousproblembecauseitdoesharmtoourhealth.It’scommonforstudentstohavedifficultiesinsleeping,andthisdoesharmtoourhealth.Oneisthatwehaveawrongdiet.Theotheristhatwefailtoreduceourpressure.Toomuchfriedfoodandtoomanysweetsarenotonlybadforourteethbutalsomakeusfat.Studentsdon’ttakeasmuchexerciseasbefore.Studentsareeatingjunkfoodinplaceofvegetablesandfruit.Itisthehugepressurethatbringsyoumanydifficulties.We’retoobusytodosports.Thereasonoftheincreasingweightisourbadbehaviorinhealthsuchaseatingjunkfood,stayingstillinfrontofTVandsoon.Howcanwesolvetheproblem?HealthdietsportsrelaxGiveadviceYoushould/shouldn’t..Whydon’tyou…Whynot…It’sagoodideato…Howabout…Try(not)to…DietDon’teattoomuchjunkfood,itmakesyouputonweight___________becominglesshealthy.It’sessentialtoeatfruitandvegetables_________junkfood.Ahealthydietcan_________________________people’shealth.Trytoeatmorefruitandvegetables_________junkfood.Abaddietmightleadyoutmakearealdifferencetoyou,______abaddietmightleadyouintotrouble._____________toeatmorevegetablesandfruit.Solvetheproblemaswellasinsteadofmakearealdifferenceto

ratherthanIt’sbetterwhile

SportsDosportsregularly____________putonweight.It’sagoodideatotakesomeoutdoorsports___________joggingandplayingbasketball.Choosethesportsyoulikebest______youwon’tfeelbored.It’sagreatwaytodosomesports_________eatinglessfood.inordernottoincludingsothatinsteadof

RelaxHaveenoughsleep___________________youcan.Pleasedonot_________toolateortakeexerciseinthenight.Arelaxingfeelingwillhelpyou_____________fastandmakeyourbodystronger.________

ismoreeffectivethanlisteningtosomelightmusic.Listeningtosomesoftmusicisagoodwayto____________.Anicefeelingcan_____________________duringkeepinghealthy.aspossibleasstayupfallasleepNothingrelaxyourselfplayanimportantrole最近，學校校園網(wǎng)英語論壇上，正在進行以“健康生活”為話題大討論。下面是學生們在討論中提到兩個實際問題，請你任選其一，從健康生活角度談談你想法。

內(nèi)容提醒以下：1.Whatdoyouthinkiftheproblem?2.What’syouradvice?要求：1.中心突出，語義連貫，層次清楚，書寫規(guī)范；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名3.詞數(shù)在80詞左右

審提醒語及要求,確定中心內(nèi)容Health1.Whatdoyouthinkoftheproblem?2.Youradvice

審

時態(tài)確定

普通現(xiàn)在時

列列提要確定文章結(jié)構（段落及段落中心）TalkabouttheproblemsandthereasonsParagraph2GivetheadviceParagraph3ShowyourhopeandbestwishesParagraph1連恰當利用關聯(lián)詞句，使得文章層次清楚，各個部分銜接自然。(一)段落寫作，到達各個段落統(tǒng)一、完整和連貫性。(二)段落間銜接過渡。

段落連貫性連貫性包含意連—內(nèi)在邏輯型

形連—使用過渡詞語、過渡句等使用某種邏輯次序表示原因：because,becauseof,for,since,nowthat表示讓步：though,although,eventhough,whether…or…,Nomatterwhat/how…

表示時間關系：when,while,until,before,after,assonnas,since表示并列關系：and,so,but,or,otherwise,both…and…,either…or…,neither…nor…,notonly…butalso…表示目：inorderto…,sothat表示條件：if,unless

怎樣做到行文連貫:恰當使用語句之間連接成份開始陳說:firstofall，aboveall,atfirst顯示事件先后次序firstly/secondly/thirdly；first/second/third,then,next,afterthis,afterthat,beforethis,beforethat表示“另外,還有”what’smore,besides,also,inaddition,still,aswellas結(jié)束陳說:

finally，lastly，intheend提供例子:like,suchas,forexample換一個方法表述:inotherwords,Thatistosay用于陳說事實:infact,Totellyouthetruth顯示資料起源:accordingto對一個話題進行總結(jié):Inshort,Allinall,Inaword

段落間銜接（過渡句）：1.Theproblemisn’tseriousbecausetherearemanywaystoloseweight.Here’ssomeadvice.2.However,whatshouldwedotos