初三英語中考復(fù)習課-寫作指導(dǎo)-話題作文-課件整理+學案-無答案

寫作指導(dǎo)—話題作文寫作指導(dǎo)—話題作文thecityofBeijingtheTian’anmenSquarethecityofBeijingtheTian’antheGreatWalltheGreatWallthePalaceMuseum/theForbiddenCitythePalaceMuseum/theForbidtheTempleofHeaventheTempleofHeaventheSummerPalacetheSummerPalacetheBeihaiParktheBeihaiParktheBeijingZootheBeijingZootheOlympicParktheOlympicParkWritingSteps1.PREWRITE2.OUTLINE3.DRAFT 4.REVISE 5.PROOFREAD6.PUBLISH

構(gòu)思/審題列提綱打草稿改進校對定稿謄寫WritingSteps1.PREWRITE

北京是一座美麗的城市，作為一名北京的中學生，你一定對這里的景點非常熟悉。某英語報紙正在向北京的中學生征文，請你通過一次旅行經(jīng)歷，介紹你去過的一個景點，在那兒所做的事情以及你的感受。

提示詞語:theBeihaiPark,goboating,takepictures,interesting

提示問題: ●Wheredidyougo？ ●Whatdidyoudothere？ ●Howdidyoufeelaboutthetrip？WritingTask 北京是一座美麗的城市，作為一名北京的中學生，你一定對Prewrite---How?What?1.明確文章的用途和功能2.標注出主題和要點中的關(guān)鍵詞3.確定好每個要點的時態(tài)4.確定好每個要點的人稱Prewrite---How?What?1.明確文章的用

北京是一座美麗的城市，作為一名北京的中學生，你一定對這里的景點非常熟悉。某英語報紙正在向北京的中學生征文，請你通過一次旅行經(jīng)歷，介紹你去過的一個景點，在那兒所做的事情以及你的感受。

提示詞語：theBeihaiPark,goboating,takepictures,interesting

提示問題:●Wheredidyougo？ ●Whatdidyoudothere？ ●Howdidyoufeelaboutthetrip？審題：用途、主題、要點、時態(tài)、人稱 北京是一座美麗的城市，作為一名北京的中學生，你一定ThreeparagraphsThreeanswers/ThreetopicsentencesOutlineThreeparagraphsOutlinePara1---Answer1(Topicsentence1)_____________________________Para2---Answer2(Topicsentence2)______________________________Para3---Answer3(Topicsentence3)______________________________OutlineIwenttotheBeihaiParklastweekend.Iwentboatingandtookalotofpictures.Thetripwasveryinterestingbecause...OutlineIwenttotheBeihaiPThreeparagraphsUsesentencepatternsUsetransitionalwordsMakesureyouwritecorrectsentencesDraftThreeparagraphsDraftKeepinmindBasicprinciplesofbeinggoodwriting:honesty,clarity,brevity,andvariety.Beinghonest:Baseyourwritingonthesubject.Beingclear:Don’tpuzzleyourreaders.Beingbrief:Don’twasteyourreaders’time;don’trepeat.Seekingvariety:Varysentencelength/expressions/vocabulary,workonaliveness.KeepinmindBasicprincipleso第一檔：（9~10分）

完全符合題目要求，觀點正確，要點齊全，句式多樣，詞匯豐富，語言準確，語意連貫，表達清楚，具有邏輯性。書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔。REVISE第一檔：（9~10分）REVISEComestraighttothepoint:IwenttotheBeihaiParklastweekend.Descriptionoftheplace:TheBeihaiParkliesinthecenterofBeijinganditisfamousfortheWhiteTower.Significancecomesfirst:TheBeihaiParkisoneofthemostpopularplacestovisitinBeijing.Quotesandsayings:Asthesayinggoes,“HewhodoesnotreachtheGreatWallisnotatrueman.”REVISE---豐富內(nèi)容Wheredidyougo?Comestraighttothepoint:I*visitoldbuildings/palaces*enjoythebeautifulflowersandgreentrees*takephotos(of…)/climbthehill/themountain*learnaboutChineseculture/goboating*takeawalk/haveapicnicREVISE---豐富內(nèi)容Whatdidyoudothere?*visitoldbuildings/palacesREItwasa/anwonderful/terrific/unforgettabletripbecause...Howdidyoufeelaboutthetrip?Ienjoyedthetripverymuchbecause...Thetripwasfullofsurprisesbecause…Ithelpedmelearnmoreabouttheculture.Iwasimpressedwiththebeautifulviewsandtheoldbuildings.“AwalkaboutPariswillprovidelessonsinhistory,beauty,andinthepointofLife.”(ThomasJefferson)REVISE（改進）---豐富內(nèi)容Itwasa/anwonderful/terrificFirst,…Then,…Afterthat,…Finally,…Inthemorning…Intheafternoon…REVISE---邏輯清晰、銜接自然First,…REVISE---邏輯清晰、銜接自然萬能句型：notonly…butalso…Itisnecessary/important…(forsb.)todo…spend…doingsth./onsth.help(sb.)dosth./withsth.makesb./sth.do…/makesb./sth.adj.so…that…REVISE

---句型意識很重要萬能句型：REVISE---句型意識很重要Thetripwasinteresting.wasfulloffun wasmeaningfulwasofgreatvaluemadeadifferencetomylife

REVISE---詞匯豐富Thetripwasinteresting.REV

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TheBeihaiParkisoneofthemostpopularplacestovisitinBeijing.Iwenttherewithmyclassmateslastweekendandwehadagreattime. Wearrivedthereearlyinthemorning.Theairwascoolandfresh.Aswewalkedalongthelake,wesawmanypeopledoingexercisesanddancing.WealsotooklotsofpicturesofthebeautifulflowersintheGarden.Thenwecrossedthebridgeandclimbedupthehill.Itwasgreattoenjoytheviewsfromthetop.Intheafternoonwetookaboattourinthelakeandwesanghappilytogether.

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TheBeihaiParkisoneofthemostpopularplacestovisitinBeijing.Iwenttherewithmyclassmateslastweekendandwehadagreattime. Wearrivedthereearlyinthemorning.Theairwascoolandfresh.Aswewalkedalongthelake,wesawmanypeopledoingexercisesanddancing.WealsotooklotsofpicturesofthebeautifulflowersintheGarden.Thenwecrossedthebridgeandclimbedupthehill.Itwasgreattoenjoytheviewsfromthetop.Intheafternoonwetookaboattourinthelakeandwesanghappilytogether.

Itwasawonderfultrip.Weallfeltrelaxedandhappy.I'mlookingforwardtovisitingmorebeautifulplacesinBeijing.Asamplewriting TheBeihaiParkis初三英語中考復(fù)習課-寫作指導(dǎo)—話題作文-課件整理+學案-無答案HomeworkFinishthedraft.Reviseyourdraft.Publishyourwriting.HomeworkFinishthedraft.1.新聞特寫則是用形象的事實說話。它常常抓住事物有特征的一面進行描述，比消息更細膩、更生動、更形象。2.由于新聞特寫的畫面感特別強，因此常給讀者以身臨其境的感受。3.“花香蝶自來，題好一半文”，一篇文章有一個好的標題，就像一個人有一雙明亮有神的眼睛一樣，留給別人的是將是十分美好而深刻的印象，同時也是文學修養(yǎng)，語言功底，思想魅力的最直接的流露，從考試的角度來說，更是作文質(zhì)量高底的一桿標尺。4.對于話題作文的擬題我們一定要多一些有針對性的訓練，掌握一定的技巧，達到需要應(yīng)用時信手拈來，出語不俗的效果，感動自己，征服讀者。5.這些根據(jù)材料提供的話題，進一步挖深、提煉出來的題目，源源源于材料而高于材料，加進去個體的感悟與理解，充滿了理性的光輝，于平凡中見奇倔，也是很多喜歡定議論文的同學擬題一種好方法，很有思想深度。6.路在腳下，更在心中，“前方轉(zhuǎn)彎”的路牌不是要你停下，而是提醒你該轉(zhuǎn)彎了，心隨路轉(zhuǎn)，心路常寬。讓思維轉(zhuǎn)彎是人生的智慧，因為挫折往往是轉(zhuǎn)折，危機同時也是轉(zhuǎn)機。

7.自主性是天才的基本特征。正如居里夫人所說：“我們每個人都有能力干好一件事?！惫沤裰型猓嗌偃嗜酥臼恳宰灾鳛榻?jīng)，以勤奮為緯，編織成功。8.生存于宇宙間，同頂烈日炎炎，共沐明月清輝，我不比別人多，也不比別人少。只要勇于展示自己的個性與風采，我就沒必要仰視任何人。1.新聞特寫則是用形象的事實說話。它常常抓住事物有特征的一面寫作指導(dǎo)—話題作文寫作指導(dǎo)—話題作文thecityofBeijingtheTian’anmenSquarethecityofBeijingtheTian’antheGreatWalltheGreatWallthePalaceMuseum/theForbiddenCitythePalaceMuseum/theForbidtheTempleofHeaventheTempleofHeaventheSummerPalacetheSummerPalacetheBeihaiParktheBeihaiParktheBeijingZootheBeijingZootheOlympicParktheOlympicParkWritingSteps1.PREWRITE2.OUTLINE3.DRAFT 4.REVISE 5.PROOFREAD6.PUBLISH

構(gòu)思/審題列提綱打草稿改進校對定稿謄寫WritingSteps1.PREWRITE

北京是一座美麗的城市，作為一名北京的中學生，你一定對這里的景點非常熟悉。某英語報紙正在向北京的中學生征文，請你通過一次旅行經(jīng)歷，介紹你去過的一個景點，在那兒所做的事情以及你的感受。

提示詞語:theBeihaiPark,goboating,takepictures,interesting

提示問題: ●Wheredidyougo？ ●Whatdidyoudothere？ ●Howdidyoufeelaboutthetrip？WritingTask 北京是一座美麗的城市，作為一名北京的中學生，你一定對Prewrite---How?What?1.明確文章的用途和功能2.標注出主題和要點中的關(guān)鍵詞3.確定好每個要點的時態(tài)4.確定好每個要點的人稱Prewrite---How?What?1.明確文章的用

北京是一座美麗的城市，作為一名北京的中學生，你一定對這里的景點非常熟悉。某英語報紙正在向北京的中學生征文，請你通過一次旅行經(jīng)歷，介紹你去過的一個景點，在那兒所做的事情以及你的感受。

提示詞語：theBeihaiPark,goboating,takepictures,interesting

提示問題:●Wheredidyougo？ ●Whatdidyoudothere？ ●Howdidyoufeelaboutthetrip？審題：用途、主題、要點、時態(tài)、人稱 北京是一座美麗的城市，作為一名北京的中學生，你一定ThreeparagraphsThreeanswers/ThreetopicsentencesOutlineThreeparagraphsOutlinePara1---Answer1(Topicsentence1)_____________________________Para2---Answer2(Topicsentence2)______________________________Para3---Answer3(Topicsentence3)______________________________OutlineIwenttotheBeihaiParklastweekend.Iwentboatingandtookalotofpictures.Thetripwasveryinterestingbecause...OutlineIwenttotheBeihaiPThreeparagraphsUsesentencepatternsUsetransitionalwordsMakesureyouwritecorrectsentencesDraftThreeparagraphsDraftKeepinmindBasicprinciplesofbeinggoodwriting:honesty,clarity,brevity,andvariety.Beinghonest:Baseyourwritingonthesubject.Beingclear:Don’tpuzzleyourreaders.Beingbrief:Don’twasteyourreaders’time;don’trepeat.Seekingvariety:Varysentencelength/expressions/vocabulary,workonaliveness.KeepinmindBasicprincipleso第一檔：（9~10分）

完全符合題目要求，觀點正確，要點齊全，句式多樣，詞匯豐富，語言準確，語意連貫，表達清楚，具有邏輯性。書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔。REVISE第一檔：（9~10分）REVISEComestraighttothepoint:IwenttotheBeihaiParklastweekend.Descriptionoftheplace:TheBeihaiParkliesinthecenterofBeijinganditisfamousfortheWhiteTower.Significancecomesfirst:TheBeihaiParkisoneofthemostpopularplacestovisitinBeijing.Quotesandsayings:Asthesayinggoes,“HewhodoesnotreachtheGreatWallisnotatrueman.”REVISE---豐富內(nèi)容Wheredidyougo?Comestraighttothepoint:I*visitoldbuildings/palaces*enjoythebeautifulflowersandgreentrees*takephotos(of…)/climbthehill/themountain*learnaboutChineseculture/goboating*takeawalk/haveapicnicREVISE---豐富內(nèi)容Whatdidyoudothere?*visitoldbuildings/palacesREItwasa/anwonderful/terrific/unforgettabletripbecause...Howdidyoufeelaboutthetrip?Ienjoyedthetripverymuchbecause...Thetripwasfullofsurprisesbecause…Ithelpedmelearnmoreabouttheculture.Iwasimpressedwiththebeautifulviewsandtheoldbuildings.“AwalkaboutPariswillprovidelessonsinhistory,beauty,andinthepointofLife.”(ThomasJefferson)REVISE（改進）---豐富內(nèi)容Itwasa/anwonderful/terrificFirst,…Then,…Afterthat,…Finally,…Inthemorning…Intheafternoon…REVISE---邏輯清晰、銜接自然First,…REVISE---邏輯清晰、銜接自然萬能句型：notonly…butalso…Itisnecessary/important…(forsb.)todo…spend…doingsth./onsth.help(sb.)dosth./withsth.makesb./sth.do…/makesb./sth.adj.so…that…REVISE

---句型意識很重要萬能句型：REVISE---句型意識很重要Thetripwasinteresting.wasfulloffun wasmeaningfulwasofgreatvaluemadeadifferencetomylife

REVISE---詞匯豐富Thetripwasinteresting.REV

PROOFREADPROOFREADPUBLISH

PUBLISH

Asamplewriting

TheBeihaiParkisoneofthemostpopularplacestovisitinBeijing.Iwenttherewithmyclassmateslastweekendandwehadagreattime. Wearrivedthereearlyinthemorning.Theairwascoolandfresh.Aswewalkedalongthelake,wesawmanypeopledoingexercisesanddancing.WealsotooklotsofpicturesofthebeautifulflowersintheGarden.Thenwecrossedthebridgeandclimbedupthehill.Itwasgreattoenjoytheviewsfromthetop.Intheafternoonwetookaboattourinthelakeandwesanghappilytogether.

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