ETM8語段翻譯解析-high comedy課件

ETM8語段翻譯

難點與重點解析

“highcomedy”語段英譯Thereisnothinginthehighcomedyoftheworldsoadmirablycomicasthespecialdepartmentcalled“Fame.”Idon’tmeancomicinthesensethatitmakesyouroarwithlaughter;Imeancomicinthesensethatitillustratesthenatureofman.Allmendesirefame.Ihaveneverknownasingleexceptiontothatrule,andIdoubtifanyoneelsehas,thoughIhaveknownafewveryholymenwhohaveverynearlygotridoftheloveoffame;therewasleftnomorethanatraceofit.IsaythatinafewveryholymenIhaveinthecourseofmylifemetthosewhohadleftinthemonlyatraceofthisloveoffame.AverymuchlargernumberofexceedinglyunholymenhaveImetwhohavelargelylostthelovefamebecausetheyweretiredout.Theyhadsufferedorenjoyedsomanyemotions;theyhadseensomanymenrisetoprominence,oftensuddenly,asarule,withoutanygoodreasonfortheirelevation;theyhadfeltsomanydisappointments,rushingafterandnearlyalwaysmissingit;theyhadreachedsuchacontemptfortheirfellow-beings,themobwhoarethemakersoffame,thattheyhadbecomeinsomelargemeasureindifferent.((FromSelectedEssays:HilaireBelloc,editedbyJ.B.Morton)1）抽象結構的體驗-建構性操作步驟；2）第1步：明確department

詞典義項的核心義素，并將其析取出來，該義素就是department

與參數(shù)因子發(fā)生認知關聯(lián)的義素，我們將其稱為“義基”（meaning-base）。理據(jù)：“義基”是語境中關聯(lián)性參數(shù)因子能將自身的語義特征映射到該“義基”之上的基礎語義部分，是department

被當下語境化（傳統(tǒng)上被認為是引申）的關聯(lián)性語義基礎。

department

詞典釋義中可析取的關聯(lián)性義素

M1:eachofseveraldivisionsofagovernment,business,shop,department,university,etc.;department

M2:areaofactivityofknowledge

M3:administrativedistrictdepart.=division？/area？/district？第2步：確定對depart.的關聯(lián)性參數(shù)因子及其語義特征：

Thereisnothinginthehighcomedy

oftheworldsoadmirablycomicasthespecialdepartment

calledFame.

P1=comedy:lightoramusingplay

P2=fame:well-knownnessP3=comic:causingpeopletolaugh;

funny

department=？第3步：進而明確凸顯性關聯(lián)性參數(shù)因子——comedy的概念語義場及其與depart.

的認知語義關系：上、下義關系。

comedydepartment

hyponymy

語境關聯(lián)性參數(shù)因子對depart.的映射機制

hyponymyhyponymycomedyact

scenedepartmentdivision

areadistrict內涵義素析出[2]Idon’tmeancomicinthesensethatitmakesyouroarwithlaughter;Imeancomicinthesensethatitillustratesthenatureofman.要點：語篇翻譯語義連貫性——comic（戲劇性）照應下文的各種追求聲名的、具有戲劇性的表現(xiàn)。我所指的并非那種讓人開懷大笑的喜劇性，而是指能展現(xiàn)人性的戲劇性。[5-6]IsaythatinafewveryholymenIhaveinthecourseofmylifemetthosewhohadleftinthemonlyatraceofthisloveoffame.AverymuchlargernumberofexceedinglyunholymenhaveImetwhohavelargelylosttheloveoffamebecausetheyweretiredout.

要點：[1]句際銜接性性增譯；[2]照應性增譯；[3]正說反譯；[4]語義渲染+四字結構我要說明的是[1]，在我平生所遇到的為數(shù)不多的[2]幾個稱得上十足的虔誠圣潔之士身上，這種熱衷于聲名的跡象是微乎其微的。我也遇到過為數(shù)不少的極俗之徒[3]，他們對聲名追逐的酷愛大大消褪，其原因是他們早已心力交瘁了[4]。[7]Theyhadsufferedorenjoyedsomanyemotions;theyhadseensomanymenrisetoprominence,oftensuddenly,asarule,withoutanygoodreasonfortheirelevation;要點：[1]分譯，譯出句子內部的邏輯搭配關系及情感表達；[2]注意動詞過去完成時：譯出語法意義；

[3]概念語義融合

他們曾飽受過情緒變化，時而痛苦不堪，時而欣喜若狂[1]；他們目睹過[2]眾多因升遷而聲名顯赫者，而且通常是一舉成名（或：一夜成名）[3]，這種升遷又往往毫無端由；[8-9]theyhadfeltsomanydisappointments,rushingafterandnearlyalwaysmissingit;theyhadreachedsuchacontemptfortheirfellow-beings,themobwhoarethemakersoffame,thattheyhadbecomeinsomelargemeasureindifferent.要點：[1]動詞過去時的表達；[2]概念內涵語義渲染與增益；[3]分譯；

[4]注意作者用詞的詞義褒貶特征的表達；[5]語義缺省的補譯

他們已感到過無盡的沮喪[1]，他們曾拼命追逐聲名帶來的愉悅[2]，卻幾乎總是與之失之交臂[3]。他們對曾對自己共事過的家伙[4]，即那些刻意粉飾以博取聲名的男女感到厭惡之極[4]（用褒貶之詞，以揭示其心態(tài)），以致于在很大程度上對“聲名”[5]感到淡漠（或：漠然置之了）。[TranslatedbyZeng]在這極富色彩的人間喜劇里，還沒有什么能比稱作“聲名”的這一特殊劇目/場景更具戲劇性，那么讓人嘆為觀止。我所指的并非那種讓人開懷大笑的喜劇性，而是指能展現(xiàn)人性的戲劇性。人人都渴望聲名遠揚。就我所知還沒有過任何人能獨善其身，淡薄聲名，我不相信其他人能舉出例外來。雖然我知道有那么幾個圣潔之人，他們追逐聲名的熱情已近乎殆盡，只露出點跡象而已。我要說明的是，在我平生所遇到的為數(shù)不多的幾個稱得上十足的虔誠圣潔之士身上，這種熱衷于聲名的跡象是微乎其微的。我也遇到過為數(shù)不少的極俗之徒，他們對聲名追逐的酷愛大大消褪