作文-慰問信2017四校聯(lián)考

2017四校聯(lián)考第二節(jié)書面表達（滿分25分）假設你是李華，今天得知你的美國朋友Owen病了，你打他電話聯(lián)系不到他，請給他寫一封電子郵件，向他表示慰問。寫作內容如下：1．詢問病情；2．叮囑他注意身體健康（含具體事項）；3．表達祝福，約定探望時間。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．文中不可以出現(xiàn)具體的校名、班名和其他人名。DearOwen,It’sbeenalongtimesincewelastmet.

.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours，

LiHua第一段：今天得知你的美國朋友Owen病了，你打他電話聯(lián)系不到他，給他寫一封電子郵件，向他表示慰問。第二段：1．詢問病情；2．叮囑他注意身體健康（含具體事項）；第三段：約定探望時間，表達祝福目的和背景：(On)hearing/learning(thenews)thatyouareill/havefallenilltoday,Imadeyouaphonecall/madeaphonecalltoyouimmediatelybutfailedtogetthrough(toyou)/contactyou/connectyou/reachyou.Therefore,Iamwriting(theemail)toenquireaboutyourillnessandexpress/showmygreatconcernfor/aboutyou.Ihaveheardthatyouareill…..Greeting:somethingyousayordowhenyoumeetsometime打招呼Careabout關愛Ican’tcallyou.2.病情詢問:What’swrong/thematterwithyou?Howareyoufeelingnow?Haveyougotaheadache?Iwanttoenquireaboutyourillnessandisitseriousornot?3.叮囑他注意身體健康Topicsentence:

Ihopeit’sjustaslightcoldandthereisnothingserious.Ithinkitishightimeforyoutopayattentiontoyourphysicalhealth.Firstofall,itisnecessaryforyoutofollowthedoctor’sadviceandtakethemedicineontime.Besides,youhadbetter/itisbetterforyoutostayinbedandhaveagoodrest.Moreover,doremembertoopenthewindowregularlytoletfreshairin,whichwillspeedupyourrecovery.Mostimportantly,drinkwarmwaterandhavemorefruitsandvegetables,becausetheycanprovideyouwithrich/abundantvitaminstofightagainstyourdisease.Takeexerciseregularlyandhaveabalanceddiet,whichhelpstobuildupyourbody建議句型YoushoulddoYouaresupposedtodoitisnecessaryforyoutoyouhadbetterdoitisbetterforyoutododoremembertodoDon’tforgettodo…youareadvisedtodoItissuggested/advisabletodoFirstly,secondly,thirdly,lastly,Firstofall,moreimportantly,lastly,約定探望時間:Iwouldliketovisityou/payavisittoyouthisSaturdayafternoonsopleaseletmeknowwhetheritisconvenientforyou.Ifnot,wecanchangeanotherdaywhenyouarefree.表達祝福：Hopefully,mysuggestionswillhelpandyouwillrecoversoon.(On)hearing/learning(thenews)thatyouhavefallenill,Imadeyouaphonecallimmediatelybutfailedtogetthrough.Therefore,Iamwriting(theemail)toenquireabout/askaboutyourillnessandexpress/showmygreatconcernforyou.

What’swrongwithyou?Howareyoufeelingnowandisitserious?Ihopeit’sjustaslightcoldandthereisnothingserious.Anyway,Ithinkitishightimeforyoutopayattentiontoyourphysicalhealth.Firstofall,itisnecessaryforyoutofollowthedoctor’sadviceandtakethemedicineontime.Besides,youhadbetterstayinbedandhaveagoodrest.Moreover,doremembertoopenthewindowregularlytoletfreshairin,whichwillspeedupyourrecovery.Mostimportantly,youareadvisedtodrinkwarmwaterandhavemorefruitsandvegetables,becausetheycanprovideyouwithabundantvitaminstofightagainstyourdisease.IwouldliketovisityouthisSaturdayafternoonsopleaseletmeknowwhetheritisconvenientforyou.Hopefully,mysuggestionswillhelpandyouwillrecoversoon.

Hearingyouhavefallenill,Imadeyouaphonecallimmediatelybutfailedtogetthrough.Therefore,Iamwritingtoenquireaboutyourillnessandexpressmygreatconcernforyou.

What’swrongwithyou?Howareyoufeelingnow?Whatever,Ithinkitishightimeforyoutopayattentiontoyourphysicalhealth.Firstly,itisnecessarytofollowthedoctor’sadviceandtakemedicineontime.Besides,you’dbetterstayinbedandhaveagoodrest.Mostimportantly,drinkwarmwaterandhavemorefruitsandvegetables,whichcanprovidey