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Part1:GettoknowViennaWhereintheworldwouldyoumostliketolive?Accordingtoanannualindex(年度指數(shù))bytheEconomistIntelligenceUnit,youshouldthinkaboutVienna.Themagazineagainrateditastheworld’s“mostlivable”city.BeatingmorepopularcitieslikeLondonandNewYork,Viennahascultureasitstrumpcard(王牌).Whetheryourpassionisart,musicorhistory,Viennahassomethingforyou.TheKunsthistorischesnationalmuseumhasoneofEurope’slargestartcollections,includingtheworld’slargestcollectionofworksbyDutchartistPieterBruegeltheElder.Meanwhile,theHofburgImperialPalaceisfreetoexplore.MusicloverscanenjoyVienna’sannualSummerNightConcert,playedbytheViennaPhilharmonic(愛樂樂團(tuán)).Itattractsover100,000people–whatelsecanyouexpectfromthehomeofMozart?Aswellasbeingaculturalmecca(勝地),Vienna’senvironmentisworld-class.Thecityhasmanygreenareas,suchastheNeueDonauhikingtrail(小徑),andanaveragePM2.5levelofjust18,accordingtotheWHO.Thiswas,inpart,achievedbyVienna’stransportsystem.In2013thegovernmentintroducedtheeuro-a-daysystemtogetmorepeopletouseregionaltrains.Itworked!Overhalfoftheresidents(居民)haveannualtravelcards,makingitbothreliableandcheapbyEuropeanstandards.Nottomention,youcantakeatram(有軌電車)andgetupclosewithVienna’sarchitecturallandmarks(地標(biāo)建筑),liketheBurgTheatreandStStephan’sCathedral.AustrianauthorKarlKrausfamouslysaid,“ThestreetsofViennaarepavedwithculture,thestreetsofothercitieswithasphalt(柏油).”Soifyou’relookingforasafeculturalcitywithalaid-back(悠閑的)lifestyle,Viennacouldbeyournextholidaydestination.

1.Thestyleofthepassageis_________.A.NarrationB.ExpositionC.ArgumentationBPart2:ReadforkeyinformationTask1:readforstructure2.StructureVienna:the“mostlivable”cityPart1:(para1)Part2:reasonscultureenvironmenttransportsystem(para2-3)(para4)(para5)Part3:topic:result:yournextholidaydestination(para6)Task2:Readforkeyinformation

Whereintheworldwouldyoumostliketolive?Accordingtoanannualindex(年度指數(shù))bytheEconomistIntelligenceUnit,youshouldthinkaboutVienna.Themagazineagainrateditastheworld's“mostlivable”city.Para1___________________________________________________________________________________aquestiontoleadtothetopicBeatingmorepopularcitieslikeLondonandNewYork,Viennahascultureasitstrumpcard(王牌).Whetheryourpassionisart,musicorhistory,Viennahassomethingforyou.TheKunsthistorischesnationalmuseumhasoneofEurope'slargestartcollections,includingtheworld'slargestcollectionofworksbyDutchartistPieterBruegeltheElder.Meanwhile,theHofburgImperialPalaceisfreetoexplore.MusicloverscanenjoyVienna'sannualSummerNightConcert,playedbytheViennaPhilharmonic(愛樂樂團(tuán)).Itattractsover100,000people--whatelsecanyouexpectfromthehomeofMozart?Para2-3__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________examples忽略具體事例或一筆帶過Aswellasbeingaculturalmecca(勝地),Vienna'senvironmentisworld-class.Thecityhasmanygreenareas,suchastheNeueDonauhikingtrail(小徑),andanaveragePM2.5levelofjust18,accordingtotheWHO.Para4_________________________________detailedinformation忽略具體信息或一筆帶過Para5Thiswas,inpart,achievedbyVienna'stransportsystem.In2013thegovernmentintroducedtheeuro-a-daysystemtogetmorepeopletouseregionaltrains.Itworked!Overhalfoftheresidents(居民)haveannualtravelcards,makingitbothreliableandcheapbyEuropeanstandards.Nottomention,youcantakeatram(有軌電車)andgetupclosewithVienna'sarchitecturallandmarks(地標(biāo)建筑),liketheBurgTheatreandStStephan’sCathedral.____________________________________detailedinformation通過具體信息簡要概括交通方面的特點(diǎn)——————————Para6AustrianauthorKarlKrausfamouslysaid,“ThestreetsofViennaarepavedwithculture,thestreetsofothercitieswithasphalt(柏油).”Soifyou’relookingforasafeculturalcitywithalaid-back(悠閑的)lifestyle,Viennacouldbeyournextholidaydestination.

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________aquote引語用來支撐要點(diǎn)，可忽略Para.Key

points1Themagazineagainrateditastheworld’s“mostlivable”city.2-3Viennahascultureasitstrumpcard.Whetheryourpassionisart,musicorhistory,Viennahassomethingforyou.4

Vienna’senvironmentisworld-class.5Vienna’stransportsystemis...6

Soifyou’relookingforasafeculturalcitywithalaid-backlifestyle,Viennacouldbeyournextholidaydestination.topicreasonsresultTipsforgettingkeyinformation1.Thetopicsentenceuauallyliesinthebeginningortheendoftheparagraph.2.Delectthedetailedinformation,examplesandquotes,orjustmentionthembriefly.

Task1:Tipsforparaphrasing詞匯：詞性轉(zhuǎn)換；使用同義詞或反義詞；使用廣義詞代替具體詞等。句式：語態(tài)變化特殊句式和正常語序句式的轉(zhuǎn)換非謂語動(dòng)詞和從句的轉(zhuǎn)換提煉概括、合并歸納等。Part3:WriteasummaryTask2:Para.1asanexampleThemagazineagainrateditastheworld’s“mostlivable”city.

1.TheEconomistIntelligenceUnitregardedViennaastheworld's“mostlivable”cityforasecondtime.2.Viennawasregardedastheworld's“mostlivable”cityforasecondtimebytheEconomistIntelligenceUnit.Tips:代詞轉(zhuǎn)化為具體信息同義詞主被動(dòng)的互換Para.Paraphrasedpoints1Viennawasregardedastheworld's“mostlivable”cityforasecondtimebytheEconomistIntelligenceUnit.2-34

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一、順序first,

tobeginwith,aboveall,second,third,furthermore,inaddition,moreover,besides,

finally,lastbutnotleast...二、并列aswellas,notonly...but(also),includingsth/sthincluded...三、對比ontheonehand...ontheotherhand...,onthecontrary...四、因果thanksto，owingto，becauseof，dueto，thus,therefore,so...五、總結(jié)inshort，inbrief，inconclusion...六、轉(zhuǎn)折however,nevertheless,but...七、舉例suchas,forexample,forinstance...Task3:TipsforconnectingTask4:GroupworkParaphraseeachparagraphsandthenconnectthemtomakeasummaryofabout60words.

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points1Viennawasregardedastheworld's“mostlivable”cityforasecondtimebytheEconomistIntelligenceUnit.

2-3Viennahascultureasitstrumpcard.Whetheryourpassionisart,musicorhistory,Viennahassomethingforyou.4

Vienna’senvironmentisworld-class.5Vienna’stransportsystemis...6

Soifyou’relookingforasafeculturalcitywithalaid-backlifestyle,Viennacouldbeyournextholidaydestination.Besides,Therefore,AlsoAboveall,

CulturegivesViennaacompetitiveadvantage.Therearemanyplacesforart,musicorhistoryloverstoexplore,suchastheKunsthistorischesnationalmuseum.

Vienna'senvironmentisthebestintheworld,includinggreenareasandfreshair.Vienna'stransportsystemiswell-developed.Peoplecantravelaroundthecitybyregionaltrainandtram.Youcanchoosetheculturalcitytorelaxyourselfnexttime.Asampleessay

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