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范文1"GoodHealth"
1.身體健康的重要性。2.保持健康的途徑。3.我自己的實(shí)踐。
GoodHealth
Thedesireforgoodhealthisuniversal.Inourcompetitivesocietyitisimportanttomaintaingoodhealth.Ontheonehand,peoplewithgoodhealthcandoworkwithfullconfidenceandtheirprogressinworkinturncontributestotheirhealthandhappiness.Ontheotherhand,asickpersonisusuallynotinterestedineverythingaroundhimandthereforehelosesmanyopportunitiestobecomesuccessful.
Therearemanywaystokeepit.First,thosewhoarealwaysonthegofrommorningtillnightshouldfindtimetorelaxbecausetoomuchstresswillaffecttheirhealth.Second,enoughtimeshouldbeleftforsleepbecausethatwillhelponebecomerestedandrefreshed.Finally,regularphysicalexercisesbenefitone'shealthalot.Sooneshouldalwayskeepinmindthatacertainamountofexerciseisnotawasteoftime.
Asforme,Ilikeplayingtennisinthemorning.Ialsoattachmuchimportancetoenoughsleepandrelaxation.Ibelievethiswillensuremygoodhealthfortherestofmylife.<評(píng)析>這篇文章語句通順,語言流暢,句式變化多樣,用詞面比較寬。就內(nèi)容來說,則很切題,包括了提綱中的所有要點(diǎn)。第一段的第二句即主題句是從提綱發(fā)展而來的,第二段的首句,即主題句也是由提綱中的第二點(diǎn)發(fā)展而來。范文2HopeProjectEducationplaysaveryimportantroleinthemodernizationofourcountry.However,becauseofhistoricalfactors,therearestillalotofpeopleinChinawhoareundereducated,especiallyamongyoungstersinruralareas.Theycannotaffordtheexpensesofschoolingandneedhelp.Atthesametime,Chinaisnotabletoinvesttoomuchmoneyinthematteratpresenttime.Itisinthisparticularsituationthattheauthoritiescarryoutthe"HopeProject".
Thisprojectisnecessarytoourcountry.Itisanurgentmeasurethatthegovernmenthastaken.Inthefirstplace,thisprojectwillprovideconditionsfortheyoungsterstogobacktoschool,whichwillcontributetotheirfuturesuccess.Thusitwillleadtotheenhancementoftheintelligencelevelinourcountry.Secondly,educationmakesitpossibleforpeopletoacquireknowledge,whichisusefultotheirfuturework.Hence,thisProjectbenefitsthemodernizationofourcountryalot.Finally,itcanmakemorepeopleeducated.Therefore,itmayindirectlyresultintheincreaseofthelivingstandardsofourpeople.
Inmyopinion,thisprojectisofgreatimportancetoourcountryatthepresenttime.Anditalsowillhaveaprofoundeffectonthefutureachievementsofourcountry.Isuggestthatmoreworkbedonesothateverychildinthecountrysidecanreceiveelementaryeducation.<評(píng)析>次序詞的使用不僅限于first,second,third,本文第二段使用了inthefirstplace,secondly,finally列舉原因,說明希望工程為什么對(duì)我國(guó)很必需,條理清晰,層次分明范文3ModernizingChinaModernizationwillbringanumberofbenefitstothepeopleofChina.Advancementsinscienceandtechnologywillresultinbetterindustrialandconsumerproducts.Newroads,trucksandtrainswillimprovetransportationforbothpeopleandgoods.Withnewhealthcaremethodspeoplewilllivehappierandlonger.
However,modernizationalsogivesrisetoanumberofnewproblems.Pollutionoftheair,ground,andwaterhasbecomeaseriousprobleminmanypartsofChina.Anincreaseinvehiclesontheroadshasalsoresultedinmoretrafficaccidents,injuriesanddeaths.
Wecan,however,dealwiththeseproblemsifwearecareful.Wecantrainmanyenvironmentalscientistswhocanhelpfactoriesoperatecleanly.Wecanpassnewlawstoregulateourtrafficmoresafely.Finally,wemustexpandoureducationsystemtopreparebettereducatedpeoplefortomorrow.
<評(píng)析>本文是段與段之間使用過渡句較好的例子。文章第一段說現(xiàn)代化給中國(guó)人民帶來許多益處,第二段一開始就由however引出過渡句,指出現(xiàn)代化也同樣帶來新的問題。第三段段首的過渡句則用一個(gè)however巧妙地過渡到如何解決這些問題。過渡句的使用既表達(dá)了各段之間語義上的轉(zhuǎn)折,又使文章各段銜接自然。范文4PopulationControlProgressinscienceandtheimprovementoflivingconditionshaveledtotherapidgrowthoftheworldpopulation.Modernmedicine,forexample,hasmadeitpossibleforbabiestogrowuphealthilyandforpeopletolivelonger.Withimprovedlivingconditions,particularlyinthecountryside,peopletendtohavelargerfamilies.Asaresult,theworldpopulationhasincreasedsorapidlythatithasnowexceeded6billion.
Buttheovergrowthofpopulationpresentsathreattotheexistenceofhumansociety.Alargepopulationdemandsagreatdealoffoodsupplyandshelterspace.However,limitedproductivityandscarceworldresourcescanhardlymeettheneedsoftheever-increasingpopulation.Thus,inthelongrun,theovergrowthoftheworldpopulationwillonlyharmmankind.
Toguaranteethesteadydevelopmentofhumansociety,mankindmustrealizetheconsequencesresultingfromfastpopulationgrowthandcarryoutafamilyplanningprogramme.Onlybyadoptingeffectivemeasures,canhumansocietydevelopsteadilyandhaveabrightfuture.
<評(píng)析>本文把各個(gè)段落巧妙連接的方法是利用轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系:文章第一段說:科學(xué)的發(fā)展和生活條件的改善使世界人口出現(xiàn)了迅速增長(zhǎng)。第二段卻一轉(zhuǎn),說道:人口的過分增長(zhǎng)威脅了人類社會(huì)生存,第二段段首句引出的問題,是第一段討論內(nèi)容的又一方面。最后一段提出解決辦法,即人們必須采取行之有效的人口政策限制人口的增長(zhǎng)。
轉(zhuǎn)折過渡句往往用在這樣類型的文章,即所有事物都有正有負(fù),正、反兩方面均提出后,再尋找解決辦法。
范文5ControllingCancerTherearetwomaincausesofcancer:heredityandenvironment.Wecandonothingtochangeourheredity,thatis,thebasicphysicalcharacteristicsthatwerepassedontousbyourparents.However,wecandoagreatdealtocontrolourenvironment,whichmayaccountfor80-90%ofallcancers.
Environmentalpollutioncanbedividedintotwokinds:personalandimpersonal.Personalpollutionmaybedefinedroughlyasunhealthyhabitssuchassmoking,drinking,andeatingthewrongfoods.Clearly,withenoughwillpowerwecancontrolthispersonalenvironment.
Impersonalpollution,ontheotherhand,referstothosethingswhicharebeyondourindividualcontrol.Oneexamplewouldbeindustrialpollution,whichisveryhardtocontrolbecauseoftheexpenseinvolved.Itwouldbeexpensiveintermsofprofitsandperhapsjobs.TheAmericanautomobileindustry,forexample,resistedthelawrequiringsmog-controldevicesbecauseitfearedtheaddedexpensewouldreduceprofits.Nevertheless,somelawsprotectingtheenvironmenthavebeenquitesuccessfulinreducingpollution.<評(píng)析>文章第一段說:癌癥的起因有二,遺傳和環(huán)境。第二段說環(huán)境原因又有兩種,人為的和非人為的。第三段討論非人為原因造成的環(huán)境污染,這是全篇的重點(diǎn),所以筆墨最多。文章的討論由粗到細(xì),由大到小,最后歸結(jié)到了問題最嚴(yán)重,也最為關(guān)鍵的那一點(diǎn)。范文6EqualityBetweenMenandWomenAtpresent,moreandmorepeoplethinkthatmenandwomenshouldenjoyequalrights.Manycountriesevenhavepassedlawstoguaranteesuchanequalitybetweendifferentsexes.Accordingly,therearenownolongercertainjobsorcertainplacesthatareclosedtowomen.Thenumberofbusinesswomen,femaledoctors,scientistsandleadersisconsiderablyincreasing.
Therearethreemainreasonsfortheimprovementofwomen'ssocialposition.First,womenthemselveshavebeenpersistentlystrugglingforequality.Second,menalsorealizethatwomenarenotborninferiortothem.Womencandoagreatmanythingsaswellasorevenbetterthanmen.Third,socialdevelopmenthasproducedagreatdemandforwomen'sparticipationineveryfield.
Inspiteofthesechangestheliberationofwomenhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Prejudiceagainstwomenisdeeplyrootedstillinsomepeople'smind,especiallyindistantruralareas.So,mankindshouldtakefurtherpainstakingeffortstoreallyrealizeequality.<評(píng)析>本文過渡詞使用較好。文章的第二段,就是非常典型的用first,second,third為次序詞從三方面進(jìn)行論證的例子。范文7GettingtoKnowtheWorldoutsidetheCampus
1.大學(xué)生了解社會(huì)的必要性
2.了解社會(huì)的途徑(大眾媒介,社會(huì)服務(wù)等)。
3.我打算怎么做。GettingtoKnowtheWorldoutsidetheCampus
Withtherapiddevelopmentofoursociety,thecampusisnolongeran"IvoryTower".Studentsmustgetintouchwiththeworldoutsidethecampussothattheycanadaptthemselvestosocietymorequicklywhentheygraduate.
AlmostallstudentskeepthemselvesinformedbyTV,radiobroadcastsandnewspapers.Someofthemeventakeupapart-timejobintheirsparetime.Workingastutors,servinginsomefast-foodrestaurants…Allthesehavekeptstudentsintouchwithsociety.
NowthesummervacationwillcomeandI'vealreadyfoundmyselfajob-workingasatypistinanoffice.I'velearnedtypingformanyyearsandIthinkIcandoitwell.It'sagoodchanceformetogettoknowsociety,tolearnhowtogetalongwithmycolleaguesandtoseehowmyknowledgeisputintopractise.Whenthenextsemesterbegins,I'llstilltrytogetthiskindoflittlejob.Regardlessofthepay,IthinkthemostimportantthingisthatIcanreallyknowalotaboutsociety.<評(píng)析>本文采用重復(fù)使用中心詞(組)的方法來達(dá)到過渡。文章雖沒有使用任何過渡詞,但通篇文章讀起來通順流暢,并無邏輯問題,原因在于文章運(yùn)用關(guān)鍵詞重復(fù)的手法。文章標(biāo)題為“了解校園以外的社會(huì)”,所以文章的中心詞定位于“了解社會(huì)”。第一段中有"getintouchwiththeworldoutsidethecampus",第二段末尾有"getintouchwiththesociety",第三段中有"gettoknowthesociety",段尾又有"knowalotaboutthesociety",四次重復(fù)出現(xiàn)關(guān)鍵詞點(diǎn)出文章的主旨所在。范文8HumanBeingsandAnimalsHumanbeingsaredifferentfromanimalsinmanyways.Oneofthedifferencesistheabilityofhumanbeingstobuild.Itistruethatmanyanimalsarebuilders.Birdsmakenests,andbeesmakehives.ButnoanimalcouldbuildthepyramidsortheGreatWallortheEiffel范文9
Title:DifferentSocialCustomsBetweenAmericansandChinese
Keywordsandexpressions:
1)differ,if…not,misunderstanding,informal,social,impolite
2)difference,inaconversation,coat,cost,impolite,age,politics,religion,avoid
3)manyother,keep…inmind,better,understand
DifferentSocialCustomsBetweenAmericansandChineseSocialcustomsdifferindifferentpartsoftheworld.Ifwedon'trealizethis,misunderstandingmayarisebetweenpeoplethatbehavedifferently.IntheUnitedStates,peopleareveryinformalinsocialsituations.Forexample,theycalleachotherbytheirgivennameswhentwopeoplefirstmeet.Sodotheyoungtotheold.InChina,itwouldberegardedquiteimpolitetodoso.
Anotherdifferenceisaboutwhatcanbetalkedaboutinaconversation.AChinesethinksnothingofbeingaskedhowmuchhiscoatcostwhileAmericansthinkitimpolitetoasksuchaquestion.AChinesewomandoesn'tcareifsheisaskedaboutherage.Politics,religions,aswellasincomesareoftentalkedaboutamongChinese.ButintheUnitedStatesthesekindsofsubjectsareusuallyavoidedinconversation.
SincetherearemanyotherdifferentsocialcustomsbetweenAmericansandChinese,thewaythatwebehaveandwhatwetalkaboutrequiresourattention.Ifwekeeptheseinmind,wewilldoitbetterandunderstandeachotherbetter.<評(píng)析>:本文以所給關(guān)鍵詞為主線,合理填充內(nèi)容。第一段從世界范圍闡述社會(huì)習(xí)慣的存在,以美國(guó)作為例子,緊扣標(biāo)題。第二段
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