全國(guó)初中英語(yǔ)八年級(jí)寫作課優(yōu)質(zhì)課賽課曬課一等獎(jiǎng)ppt精品課件基于思維能力的話題“飲食”寫作課優(yōu)課

----話題作文：健康飲食

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Doyouhaveahealthyeatinghabit?

Doyouknowanyotherfoods?思維層次：記憶healthyfoodunhealthyfoodmilkcolahamburgersFrenchfriesstrawberriesdumplingsapplesbarbecuefoodbreadfishcabbageicecreamEatIt’sgoodformeEatItisadjforsbtodosthV-ingisn./adj.ingtoinganappleadayisagoodhabit,becauseitcanhelpmekeepthedoctoraway.

drinkmilkeverymorning,becauseitcanmakemestronger.

spicyfoodismybadhabit,becauseitisbadformyhealth.思維層次：理解However,manypeople’seatinghabitsarebecomingworseandworse.Theylikejunkfood.Sotheyhavemanyhealthproblems.Forexample,theybecomefatterandfatter.DearEileen,Howareyou?Hopeeverythinggoeswellwithyou.I’mworriedaboutmyweightnow.Thedoctorasksmetoloseweight.ButIdon’tknowhowtodoit.Canyougivemesomeadvice?Herearemyeatinghabits.Idrinkmilkeverymorning,becauseitcanmakemestronger.Hamburgersandicecreamaremyfavoritefood,soIeatthemaboutfourtimesaweek.Ieatlittlevegetables,becausetheytastesbad.IalmosteatmeatEveryday.SometimesIeatsomefruit.IhopeyoucantellmewhatIshoulddo.Lookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Amy思維層次：應(yīng)用DiscussionIfyouareanutritionist(營(yíng)養(yǎng)師),whatadvicewillyougive?思維層次：分析First,sheshouldhavemore/less…,because…Poster(海報(bào))現(xiàn)在很多學(xué)生都有不健康飲食的習(xí)慣以提倡健康飲食為主題做一份海報(bào)內(nèi)容包括：

1.健康飲食的重要性

2.健康飲食的3個(gè)建議3.希望

Outline(提綱)HowtoEatHealthilyPara1:健康飲食的重要性Para2:健康飲食3個(gè)建議并附上相應(yīng)的原因Para3:寫出你的希望Thesedays,manystudentsgetfatterandfatter.Theyeatunhealthily.However,Ithink________.健康飲食重要性___________________.Hereissomeadvice.(過(guò)渡句)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________健康三個(gè)建議+原因(注意連詞)總結(jié)(希望)Ihope…Youshould/can...You’dbetter...Whynot...?Whydon’tyou...?FirstlySecondlyIntheend

FirstWhat’smoreThelastbutnottheleastPara1寫觀點(diǎn)(健康飲食重要性)2分Para23個(gè)健康建議和3個(gè)原因每點(diǎn)1分共6分Para3總結(jié)（希望）2分全文書寫2分語(yǔ)法每個(gè)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤-0.5,總共3分，扣完為止好句摘抄評(píng)價(jià)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)互改思維層次：評(píng)價(jià)ShowacompositioncorrectitagaintogetherStickyoursixcompositionsonthecolorpaper.Andyoucanalsodrawsomepicturesonthecolorpaper.(每組把你們6篇文章粘貼在卡紙上。你可以畫在紙卡上畫一些畫或貼一些其他東西，只要漂亮就行)思維層次：創(chuàng)造Summarywaystoeathealthilytwosentencepatt