高三英語寫作專項(xiàng) 【基礎(chǔ)梳理+考點(diǎn)探究】突破道歉信課件

Writing

LetterofApology

文體概述

道歉信是指因過失或疏忽等做錯(cuò)了事，給別人帶來了麻煩或損失，或因?yàn)槟承┰虿荒茏袷丶s定,而給對方賠禮道歉并請求對方原諒的信件。3

DearAnne,Thankyouforyourinvitationtodinneratyourhometomorrowevening.Unfortunately,IamreallysorrytosaythatIcannotjoinyouandyourfamily,becauseIwillbefullyoccupiedthenforanimportantexam.It’sapitytomissthechanceofsuchahappyget-together,andIhopethatallofyouenjoyagoodtime.Isitpossibleforyouandmetohaveaprivatemeetingafterward?Ifso,pleasedon'thesitatetodropmealineaboutyourpreferabledate.Idolongforapleasantchatwithyou.Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.yours,LiHua4

DearAnne,Thankyouforyourinvitationtodinneratyourhometomorrowevening.Unfortunately,IamreallysorrytosaythatIcannotjoinyouandyourfamily,becauseIwillbefullyoccupiedthenforanimportantexam.It’sapitytomissthechanceofsuchahappyget-together,andIhopethatallofyouenjoyagoodtime.Isitpossibleforyouandmetohaveaprivatemeetingafterward?Ifso,pleasedon'thesitatetodropmealineaboutyourpreferabledate.Idolongforapleasantchatwithyou.Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.yours,LiHua1.表示歉意

2.說明具體原因

3.提出補(bǔ)救辦法

4.再次致歉、希望得到理解

53.提出補(bǔ)救辦法2.說明具體原因道歉信寫作4步走1.表示歉意總結(jié)提升4.再次致歉望理解要求:1.書寫好2.結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰開頭段：中間段：

結(jié)尾段:

3.語言要精彩4.注意內(nèi)容之間的連接6Dear___________,Howareyoudoing?Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmyapologythat_________(道歉的原因).

Ifeelterriblysorryaboutit.__________(描述事件)Isincerelyhopeyoucanunderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology.Doyouthinkitispossiblethat_________（彌補(bǔ)）

Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecausedbyme.（再次致歉）YourssincerelyLiHua模板7第一部分:簡明說明寫信目的，表示歉意，希望得到諒解。1.因某事向某人道歉2.表達(dá)最誠摯的歉意3..向……說對不起4.很遺憾地告知你5..接受我的道歉6.為某事原諒某人7.并非故意做某事havenointentiontodosth.apologizetosb.forsth./makeanapologytosb.forsth.saysorryto...acceptmyapologyforgivesb.forsth.

convey/expressmydeepest/sincere/heartfeltapologyforregrettoinform/tellyouthat我寫這封信是因……向你致歉。2請接受我真誠的道歉。3.對于我說過的話/做過的事，我確實(shí)感到很抱歉。但請相信，我并非故意要……4.我很抱歉我做的事對你造成了不便1.Iamwritingthislettertoapologizetoyoufor…Iamwritingtoexpressmysincereapologyfor...2.Pleaseacceptmysincereapology(for…).3.IamindeedverysorryforwhatIsaid/did,butpleasebelieveIhadnointentionto…4.IamafraidwhatIhavedonehascausedmuchinconveniencetoyou.第二部分：詳細(xì)說明當(dāng)時(shí)情況，解釋原因，語氣要誠懇。10原因是由于…主要因?yàn)殄e(cuò)過機(jī)會(huì)約好做某事如約不能信守諾言11Thereasonwhy…

isthat…

Itismainlybecause…

missthechancetodo...makeanappointmenttodo...asscheduled/promisedcan'tkeepmypromisetodo...我本應(yīng)該提前告訴你。2.發(fā)生了意想不到的事。12Ishouldhavetoldyouinadvance.Somethinghappenedbeyondmyexpectation.第三部分：提出補(bǔ)救方法，具體提出自己的想法，希望能彌補(bǔ)過失，消除誤會(huì)。131.彌補(bǔ)_____________________2.賠償；償還_____________________3.給你帶來不便_____________________4.給你帶來許多麻煩_____________________5.更加小心_____________________bemorecarefulmakeupforpayfor/compensateforcauseyouinconveniencecauseyoumuchtrouble6.應(yīng)當(dāng)受到責(zé)備______________________7.承擔(dān)責(zé)任

_______________________8.難以接受的后果

______________________9.下不為例

______________________10.另找時(shí)間neverletithappenagainbetoblameberesponsiblefor/shoulder/undertaketheresponsibilityanunacceptableresult/consequencefixanothertime1.為了消除我們的誤會(huì)，我想邀請你…2.如果咱們能另找時(shí)間的話，我將非常感激3.我希望你能給我一個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)讓我彌補(bǔ)過錯(cuò)4.（下周五）你方便嗎？16Inordertoremoveourmisunderstanding,Iwouldliketoinvite…Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldallowmetofixanothertime.

Iwishyoucouldgivemeachancetomakeupformyfault.WoulditbeconvenientforyounextFriday?第四段：再次致歉望理解171.接受我的歉意和理解我的難處2.所引起的不便3.懇請你的原諒18acceptmyapologyandunderstandmysituationanyinconveniencecaused(byme)/(that)myactionshavecausedbegyourforgiveness1.我再次為我的行為道歉，我承諾我再也不會(huì)犯這種愚蠢的錯(cuò)誤2.對于所引起的不便，我再一次表示歉意。3.我再次為所造成的麻煩而深刻道歉。19IamsorryagainandIpromisethatIwillnevermakesuchastupidmistakeagain.Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Again,

Ideeply

apologize

forthetroubleIhavecaused.書面表達(dá)假如你是李華，你和Smith先生約定昨天下午三點(diǎn)去他辦公室，聽他給你關(guān)于學(xué)習(xí)英語的建議。但由于一些原因不能赴約，特寫信表示歉意，并希望另約時(shí)間。內(nèi)容如下：（1）.表達(dá)未能赴約的歉意（2）.未能赴約的原因（3）.希望另約時(shí)間要求：100字左右開頭已給出，不計(jì)總數(shù)

Beginning

1.表達(dá)未能赴約的歉意；

（開頭部分的內(nèi)容）

I’mwritingtoexpressmysincereapologyformissingourappointmentat3o’clockyesterdayafternoon,whenyouplanned/intendedtogivemeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwell.I’mwritingtoexpressmysincereapology.Wemadeanappointmentat3o’clockyesterdayafternoon.AndyouplannedtogivemeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwell.Body未能赴約的原因:lookafterafamilymember;getabadcold;picksb.upattheairport…Howtoexpand?wordsandexpression?sentencepatterns?detailinformation?

我妹妹生病了,而爸爸媽媽又在上班，于是我不得不在家照顧妹妹。

Myyoungersisterhadabadfever,butmyparentswereatwork.

Ihadtostayathometotakecareofher,anditcausedmenottomeetyouasappointed.未能赴約原因：Myyoungersisterhadabadfever,butmyparentswereatwork.

Ihadtostayathometotakecareofher,whichcausedmenottomeetyouasappointed.希望另約時(shí)間Ihopeyoucangivemeanotherchancetomakeanappointmentwithyouagain.Onceagain,pleaseacceptmysincereapology.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeanotherchanceto…Wouldyoumindif……

linkingwords銜接語therefore,asaresult,inaddition/besidesforonething,foranother…012016新課標(biāo)全國卷III英語作文假定你是李華，與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書店，因故不能赴約。請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歉意2.說明原因3.另約時(shí)間注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Homework27對得分要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行編寫：①與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書店，因故不能赴約。+②表示歉意=道歉信模板開頭句注意：題目沒有給出具體約會(huì)時(shí)間和另約的具體時(shí)間，需要自己寫出兩個(gè)時(shí)間28對得分要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行編寫：③說明原因；因?yàn)轭}目沒有給具體原因，所以直接套用道歉信原因模板原因模板一：Mymomhasn’tfeltverywellandshehasmadeanappointmentwithherdoctorthisFriday.Becausemydadhasgoneforabusinesstrip,Ineedtogotothehospitalwithmymom.Therefore,Ihavetocancelouroriginalplan.原因模板二：IjustreceivedthenoticefrommyEnglishteacherthatIhavebeenselectedasavolunteerfortheInternationalCultureForumandthereisaveryimportantmeetingthisFridaythatImustattend.Therefore,Ihavetocancelouroriginalplan.29對得分要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行編寫：④另約時(shí)間。因?yàn)轭}目沒有給具體時(shí)間，所以直接套用道歉信時(shí)間模板+自己設(shè)計(jì)時(shí)間DoyouthinkitispossiblethatwegotothebookstorenextFriday?MayIaskyoutopostponeourappointmenttothebookstoretonextFriday?DearB