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Aletterofappreciation假如你叫李華,你的英國筆友Jack在你因病住院期間經(jīng)常在網(wǎng)上幫你輔導(dǎo)英語,鼓勵你積極面對病情、學習和生活。請給他寫一封電子郵件,內(nèi)容包括:1.回顧幫助并感謝2.邀請來中國游玩3.表達期待。Requirementsoftheletter審題四問一問類型:二問人稱:三問時態(tài):四問要點:感謝信---感謝朋友以第二人稱為主一般現(xiàn)在時+一般過去時回顧幫助并感謝,邀請來中國游玩,表達期待。思考1.感謝和邀請的比例?2.需要自我介紹嗎?哪個要點使用一般過去時?期待的內(nèi)容是什么?Thestructureoftheletter段落要點遣詞造句Para1.Para2.Para3.寫信目的:問候+表達感謝感謝原因(幫你輔導(dǎo)英語+鼓勵你積極面對)+回報(邀請Jack來華/也可放最后)再次感謝+期待他的到來I'mwritingtoexpress/convey..強調(diào)句,虛擬語氣,定語從句,非謂語ThanksagainLookforwardtoyourarrival1.審題偏題,比重不合理,感謝信寫成了邀請信2.格式錯誤,人稱后沒有逗號3.單詞拼寫錯誤較多,如writing,appreciation,4.語法錯誤,主要出現(xiàn)在虛擬語氣的運用和詞性混亂5.時態(tài)錯誤,幫助時用了一般現(xiàn)在時6.非智力錯誤,后面還有位置沒有看到導(dǎo)致字數(shù)不夠7.句式使用單一、低級,不夠多樣化導(dǎo)致分數(shù)不高OurproblemsHowtoexpressthanks動詞thank/appreciate/acknowledge(正式)
sb.形容詞begratefulto/thankfulto名詞短語搭配3.express/convey/show/extendone’sthanks/gratitude/appreciationtosb.forsth.Writingpurposes常見的感謝內(nèi)容whatyouhavedoneformeyourkindnessandassistanceyourgeneroushelp/generosityyourselfless
dedicationanddevotion.1.I’mwritingthislettertothankyoufor/appreciateeverythingyoudidduringmystayinhospital.2.Iamwritingto
extend/express/convey/showmysincere/heartfelt/cordial/deepest
thanks/gratitude/appreciation
toyouforyourselflessdedicationanddevotion.3.I’mwritingtosayhowgratefulIamforwhatyouhavedoneforme.4.Iamdroppingthesefewlinestoshowmycordialappreciationforwhatyouhavedone.5.Iwouldliketothankyoufromthebottomofmyheart
foryourgeneroushelpandencouragementtome.幫你輔導(dǎo)英語
helpmewithmyEnglishstudy/helpmelearnEnglishofferedmepractical/professional/patientguidancehone/tutormyEnglishyourteachingandguidanceonEnglish鼓勵你積極面對encouragemetofacechallengeswithgreatcourageencouragemetoembracelifeactively/positivelyheartenmetoregardlifeinapositiveattitudeinspiremetoholdapositiveattitudetolifeDetailedreasonsofyourthanks
感謝信中可用句式有:強調(diào)句和虛擬語氣常用的虛擬語氣句式有:Butforyourhelp,Iwouldneverhavemadesuchremarkableprogress.
Withoutyourprofessionalassistance,Iwouldnothavemadesuchasuccess.Ifithadn'tbeenforyourassistance,Iwouldn'thavemademuchprogress.Detailedreasonsofyourthanks
appreciatingandlearningappreciatingandlearning感謝信中可用句式有:強調(diào)句和notonly…butalso…appreciatingandlearning感謝信中可用句式有:倒裝,定語從句和虛擬語氣Detailedreasonsofyourthanks
感謝信中常用句式有:強調(diào)句和虛擬語氣,notonly…butalso…,倒裝,定語從句幫你輔導(dǎo)英語WithoutyourtimelyhelpwithmyEnglishonline,Icouldn’thavegotalongwithmyEnglishstudy.ButforyoureffectiveguidanceonmyEnglish,icouldn'thavemadeupformymissingclassessoquickly.ItisyouwhoconstantlyandpatientlyhelptohonemyEnglishonlinewhenI'mseverelysickinhospital,encouragingmetoembracelifeandbravetheillnesswithenthusiasm.ThankyouforyourilluminatingguidanceonmypoorEnglish,fromwhichihavelaidasolidfoundationformyfuturestudyinEnglish虛擬語氣虛擬語氣強調(diào)句定語從句Detailedreasonsofyourthanks
感謝信中常用句式有:強調(diào)句和虛擬語氣,notonly…butalso…,倒裝,定語從句鼓勵你積極面對Itwasyourconstantencouragementandpositiveattitudetowardslifethatenabledmetogothroughthetoughtime.Itwasyourpositiveattitudethatselflesshelpthatignitedmypassiontofacechallengesinmylifeandstudybravely.Ifithadn'tbeenforunreserveddevotionandconstantencouragement,Iwouldn'thavebeensopositivetomyillness,studyandlife.虛擬語氣強調(diào)句強調(diào)句邀請來華I'dliketoinviteyoutovisitChinasometimeandletmeshowyouaroundmyhometown.Ifpossible,ihopeyoucanvisitChinainthenearfuture.Inreturn,IwanttoinviteyouandyourfamilytopayavisittoChina.
Idohopeyouwouldpayavisittochinasomeday,sothatIcouldhavetheopportunitytorepayyourkindness.
IsincerelyinviteyoutovisitHangzhou,myhometown,whereIcanguideyouaroundthespectacularviewabouttheWestLakeandwelcomeyouwarmlyinreturn.Reward
Thanksagain
1.Again,millionsofthanksforwhatyouhavedone.2.Pleaseacceptmysincerethanksagainforyourgeneroushelp.Goodluckandstaywell!3.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmysincerethankstoyou!Mayyoubeingoodhealth.4.Mygratitudeisbeyondwords/description./Wordsfailtoexpressmydeepestgratitude.Bestwishestoyou!5.Sincerethanksagainforwhatyouhavedone.WishyouahealthyandhappylifeDearJack,I’mwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudeforyourgeneroushelp
duringmystayinhospital.
WithoutyourtimelyhelpwithmyEnglishonline,Icouldn’thavegotalongwithmyEnglishstudy.Besides,itwasyourconstantencouragementandpositiveattitudetowardslifethatenabledmetogothroughthetoughtime.NowIsincerelyinviteyoutocometoChina,whosebreathtakingsceneryandsplendidculturewillsurelyguaranteeanenjoyablejourney.Thankyouagain.Lookingforwardtoyourarrival.Yours,LiHua
Appreciation
DearJack,
I'mwritingtoconveymyheartfeltgratitudetoyouforyourgenerousassistanceduringmystayinhospital.
NeverwillIforgetyourpracticalandpatient
guidanceonmyEnglishonline,whichmadeitpossibleformetomakegreatprogressinEnglishstudy.Additionally,Ifithadn'tbeenfordevotionandconstantencouragement,Iwouldn'thavebeensopositivetomyillness,studyandlife.Inreturnforyourkindness,I’dliketoinviteyoutotravelinChinanextsummervacation.
Thanksagainforallyourhelp.Lookingforwardtoyourarrival.Yours,LiHuaAppreciation
假定你是李華,暑期在英國旅游時得到當?shù)貙?dǎo)游Mr.Smith的悉心照顧,回國后給他寫一封郵件表達謝意。主要內(nèi)容:1.回憶旅行中美好時光;2.遇到的困難和得到的幫助;3.邀請他來中國旅游。注意:1.詞數(shù)
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