Welcome Unit單元話題滿分范文必背 【建構(gòu)遷移+拓展提升】 高一英語(yǔ) 必修第一冊(cè) 單元重難點(diǎn)突破培優(yōu)（人教版2019）

試卷第=page11頁(yè)，共=sectionpages33頁(yè)WelcomeUnit單元話題滿分范文必背(名校最新真題)1．（2021·山東·濟(jì)寧市兗州區(qū)教學(xué)研究室高一期中）假如你叫李華，新學(xué)期開學(xué)兩個(gè)月了，你的英語(yǔ)老師要求你在英語(yǔ)課堂上用英語(yǔ)和同學(xué)們交流一下你到新學(xué)校后的感受。交流內(nèi)容要求包括以下要點(diǎn)：1、校園環(huán)境和教學(xué)設(shè)施；2、師生給你的印象；3、給學(xué)校的兩點(diǎn)建議。注意：1、詞數(shù)80詞左右；2、信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)；3、內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，要注意行文連貫。Hello,everyone,I’mhonoredtostandheretotellyousomethingaboutmyschoollifeinthepasttwomonths………….【答案】Onepossibleversion:Hello,everyone,I’mhonoredtostandheretotellyousomethingaboutmyschoollifeinthepasttwomonths.Ourschoolisverybeautifulwithawoodygarden,wherewecantakeawalk,breathingthefreshairandenjoyingthepleasantscenery.Theadvancedequipmentintheclassroomisjustbrilliantandithelpsourteachersmaketheirclasseslivelyandinteresting.MyclassmatesaresoexcellentanddiligentthatIhavetoworkextremelyhardtokeepupwiththem.Fortunately,myteachersandclassmatesareallfriendlyandenthusiastic.Ihavealreadymadeseveralnewfriendshere.However,thefoodinthecafeteriaisverypoorandIhopeitcangetimproved.Besides,weareextremelybusydoinghomeworkeveryday.HowIwishwecouldhavemoretimeforphysicalexercise!Thankyou!【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過(guò)審題我們可以確定幾個(gè)方面的信息。第一，假如你叫李華，新學(xué)期開學(xué)兩個(gè)月了，你的英語(yǔ)老師要求你在英語(yǔ)課堂上用英語(yǔ)和同學(xué)們交流一下你到新學(xué)校后的感受。交流內(nèi)容要求包括以下要點(diǎn)：1、校園環(huán)境和教學(xué)設(shè)施；2、師生給你的印象；3、給學(xué)校的兩點(diǎn)建議。第二，人稱為第一人稱和第三人稱。第三，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第二步：布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫作段落數(shù)量為三段。第一段，校園環(huán)境和教學(xué)設(shè)施；第二段，師生給你的印象；給學(xué)校的兩點(diǎn)建議。第三段，表示感謝。第三步：確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語(yǔ):awoodygarden，takeawalk，breathingthefreshairandenjoyingthepleasantscenery，advancedequipment,

keepupwith,friendlyandenthusiastic,getimproved，physicalexercise。第四步：確定較為高級(jí)的句子:Ourschoolisverybeautifulwithawoodygarden,wherewecantakeawalk,breathingthefreshairandenjoyingthepleasantscenery.MyclassmatesaresoexcellentanddiligentthatIhavetoworkextremelyhardtokeepupwiththem。第五步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進(jìn)行過(guò)渡銜接:Fortunately，However,Besides。第六步：注意書寫，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦?！军c(diǎn)睛】文章思路清晰，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，段落整齊，語(yǔ)篇連貫，層次清晰。使用了較為高級(jí)的句式:where引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句Ourschoolisverybeautifulwithawoodygarden,wherewecantakeawalk,breathingthefreshairandenjoyingthepleasantscenery.so…that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句MyclassmatesaresoexcellentanddiligentthatIhavetoworkextremelyhardtokeepupwiththem。高級(jí)句式的應(yīng)用提升了寫作的檔次，整個(gè)短文顯示出了作者高水平的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)能力。2．（2021·北京四中高一期中）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高一學(xué)生李華。最近你的英國(guó)筆友Jim寫信告訴你最近他學(xué)習(xí)壓力很大。請(qǐng)你給他回信并提供一些關(guān)于如何處理壓力的建議。內(nèi)容包括：1.表示理解和關(guān)心；2.提出具體建議(不少于兩條)；3.鼓勵(lì)并表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】Knowingthatyouhavestressinyourstudy,Iamwritingtogiveyousomeadvice.Asaseniorhighschoolstudent,noneofusishavinganeasytime,butwestillcandosomethingtosuccessfullygetthroughthenextthreeyears.Themostimportantthingyoushoulddoistotakegoodcareofyourself.Wheneveryoufeeltiredordepressed,sparesometimetohavefunwithyourfamiliesandfriends.Asforstudy,itisessentialtofindoutwhatneedstobedone.Thenmakeascheduleandsettimeforeachsubject.Thatwillensureyouenoughtimetoreview.Anyway,don’tpushyourselftoohard.Ihopeyouwillmakeprogressinyourstudy.【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國(guó)筆友回信，就如何處理學(xué)習(xí)壓力這一問(wèn)題表示理解和關(guān)心，給對(duì)方提出建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累壓力：stress→pressure建議：advice→suggestion照顧：takecareof→lookafter重要的：essential→important2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Thenmakeascheduleandsettimeforeachsubject.Thatwillensureyouenoughtimetoreview.拓展句：Thenmakeascheduleandsettimeforeachsubject,whichwillensureyouenoughtimetoreview.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Knowingthatyouhavestressinyourstudy,Iamwritingtogiveyousomeadvice.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Wheneveryoufeeltiredordepressed,sparesometimetohavefunwithyourfamiliesandfriends.（運(yùn)用了whenever引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）3．（2022·全國(guó)·高一課時(shí)練習(xí)）假如你是某校高一6班學(xué)生李華，學(xué)校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)(theEnglishsociety)現(xiàn)在要招募新成員，你有意參加該社團(tuán)。請(qǐng)用英文給社長(zhǎng)Johnson寫一封自薦信。內(nèi)容提示如下：1.寫作目的，愿意參加；2.個(gè)人情況介紹(興趣、英語(yǔ)情況、技能以及性格等)。注意：1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；2.詞數(shù)：80左右?！敬鸢浮緿earJohnson，I'mLiHuafromClass6,Grade1.I'mgladtohearthatnewmembersarewantedintheEnglishsociety.I'mwillingtojoinit.I'minterestedinEnglishandhaveagoodknowledgeofit.HavinglearntEnglishformorethantenyears,IcancommunicatewithothersinEnglishfluently.What'smore,I'mgoodatsingingsongs,tellingstoriesandmakingspeeches.Aboveall,I'measytogetalongwithandenjoyworkingwithothers.I'mlookingforwardtobeingaccepted.Yours，LiHua【解析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求考生給社長(zhǎng)Johnson寫一封自薦信，申請(qǐng)加入學(xué)校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法是指把主題句作為總說(shuō)，把支持句作為分說(shuō)，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。要求：1.說(shuō)明寫作目的，愿意參加；2.個(gè)人情況介紹(興趣、英語(yǔ)情況、技能以及性格等)；3.期待回復(fù)第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）Begladtodo；bewillingtodosth.；beinterestedin；haveagoodknowledgeof；formorethantenyears；communicatewith；what'smore；begoodat；makespeeches；aboveall；getalongwith；enjoydoingsth.；workwith；lookforwardto第三步：連詞成句1.I'mLiHuafromClass6,Grade1.2.I'mgladtohearthatnewmembersarewantedintheEnglishsociety.3.I'mwillingtojoinit.4.I'minterestedinEnglishandhaveagoodknowledgeofit.5.HavinglearntEnglishformorethantenyears,IcancommunicatewithothersinEnglishfluently.6.I'mgoodatsingingsongs,tellingstoriesandmakingspeeches.7.I'measytogetalongwithandenjoyworkingwithothers.8.I'mlookingforwardtobeingaccepted.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)的問(wèn)題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What’smore；aboveall連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，第五步：潤(rùn)色修改【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]I'mgladtohearthatnewmembersarewantedintheEnglishsociety.（that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句）[高分句型2]HavinglearntEnglishformorethantenyears,IcancommunicatewithothersinEnglishfluently.(havingleant為現(xiàn)在分詞的完成式作狀語(yǔ))4．（2021·四川·雅安中學(xué)高一階段練習(xí)）假定你是李華．你的英國(guó)筆友Jenny詢問(wèn)你進(jìn)入高中后的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給他回一封信，主要內(nèi)容包括：1．學(xué)校印象；2．校園活動(dòng)；3．學(xué)習(xí)情況。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearJenny，Knowingthatyouareinterestedinmynewschoollife，Ifeltdelightedtoshareitwithyou．It'smyhonortobeadmittedtothisschool．ThefirsttimeIenteredthecampus，devotedteachers，friendlyclassmatesandthebeautifulsceneryfascinatedmealot．Colorfulactivitiesandrecreations，suchassportsmeeting，speechcontestsarealwaysheldtocultivateourpersonalitiesandstrengthenourfriendship．What'smore，Icanputmyheartintostudyinharmoniouscooperationwithmyclassmates，whichmakestheschoollifehereunforgettable．Howaboutyourschoollife？Yours，LiHua【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文。要求你給英國(guó)筆友Jenny寫一封信，介紹你的高中生活和學(xué)習(xí)情況。該信應(yīng)該明確三方面的內(nèi)容：1．學(xué)校印象；2．校園活動(dòng)；3．學(xué)習(xí)情況?！驹斀狻窟@篇作文內(nèi)容非常貼近學(xué)生的生活，難度不大?？忌梢愿鶕?jù)自己的實(shí)際情況，介紹高中生活和學(xué)習(xí)情況。文章應(yīng)以現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，間或夾雜著過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。考生可以先根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示列出大綱，然后對(duì)大綱進(jìn)行遣詞造句，細(xì)節(jié)等方面的擴(kuò)展?！军c(diǎn)睛】所給范文要點(diǎn)齊全，條理清楚。長(zhǎng)短句交叉使用，表達(dá)自然順暢。適當(dāng)運(yùn)用了一些較好的句式，例如：定語(yǔ)從句（whichmakestheschoollifehereunforgettable）；被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)（Colorfulactivitiesandrecreations，suchassportsmeeting，speechcontestsarealwaysheld）；非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞（tocultivateourpersonalitiesandstrengthenourfriendship），為文章增色不少。5．（2022·江西省靖安中學(xué)高一階段練習(xí)）假設(shè)你是李華，你收到朋友李磊的信，他告訴你他不適應(yīng)高一數(shù)學(xué)老師講的課，在學(xué)習(xí)數(shù)學(xué)方面有些困難，以至于跟不上其他同學(xué)，因此他感到非常著急。請(qǐng)你給李磊寫一封信，想辦法幫助他解決這方面的困難。參考詞匯：適應(yīng)adaptto要求：1.不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2.詞數(shù)100左右，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearLiLei,Ihavegotyourletter._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【答案】DearLiLei,Ihavegotyourletter.AndIamverygladthatyoubelieveme.IhaveknownyouhavesomedifficultyinlearningMathsbecausecan’tadapttowhatyourmathsteacherteaches.Don’tworryaboutit.Ithinkthefollowingmaybeofhelptoyou.Firstly,you’dbetterlistentotheteachercarefullyinclassandpractisemore.YoucanaskyourMathsteachertoexplainwhatyoucan’tunderstandafterclass.Youshouldbeconfidentandbelieveinyourself.Ithinkyoucanmakeit.Finally,youcancommunicatewithyourclassmatesandgetsomeadviceonMaths.Best

wishes!Yours,LiHua【解析】本文屬于提綱類作文，要求用英語(yǔ)寫一封回信?！驹斀狻恳⒁鈺诺母袷胶吞厥庥迷~?？紤]用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)寫。這篇文章對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次?！军c(diǎn)睛】本篇書面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如：havesomedifficultyindoingsth.做某事有困難，adaptto適應(yīng)。還使用了賓語(yǔ)從句AndIamverygladthatyoubelieveinme.和賓語(yǔ)從句.Ithinkyouwilladapttoitanddowellinitinfuture.等多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)，增加了文章的可讀性。6．（2022·貴州黔東南·高一期中）假定你是星光中學(xué)的高中畢業(yè)生李華，母校將為高一新生舉辦主題為“Whattolearninseniorhighschool?”的英語(yǔ)沙龍活動(dòng)，特邀請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷談?wù)勛约旱捏w會(huì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示準(zhǔn)備一份英語(yǔ)發(fā)言稿。1.學(xué)會(huì)學(xué)習(xí)：方法，習(xí)慣等；2.學(xué)會(huì)做人：真誠(chéng)，友善；3.學(xué)會(huì)其他：考生自擬。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.發(fā)言稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不須抄在答題卡上，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)。Goodmorning,everyone!Itismyhonortobeheretosharewithyoumyopinionsonwhattolearninseniorhighschool.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou!【答案】Goodmorning,everyone!Itismyhonourtobeheretosharewithmyopinionsonwhattolearninseniorhighschool.Inthecomingthreeyears,ourschoollifewillbechallenging.First,weshouldlearntolearnefficiently.Personally,Iusedtotryeffectivemethodtoachievemyacademicgoals.Developingagoodhabitisalsoofimportance.Itreallybenefitedmealottopreviewlessons,getactivelyinvolvedinclass,andreviewwhathadbeentaughtafterclass.Inaddition,weshouldlearnhowtogetalongwellwithothers.Inschool,Irespectedteachersandwasfriendlywithclassmates.Itwaswithsincerityandfaithfulnessthatwecreatedaharmoniousatmosphere.Finally,weshouldtakepartinsportsandoutdoorsactivitiesfrequently.Theywerereallyhelpfultobuildupmybodyandenrichmyschoollife.Nopainsnogains.Iamsurethatwithgreatefforts,youwillenjoyacolorfulandfruitfullifehere.Thankyou!【解析】【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假定你是星光中學(xué)的高中畢業(yè)生李華，母校將為高一新生舉辦主題為“Whattolearninseniorhighschool?”的英語(yǔ)沙龍活動(dòng)，特邀請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷談?wù)勛约旱捏w會(huì)。【詳解】1.詞匯積累在個(gè)人來(lái)看：Personally→Inmyopinion此外：Inaddition→what’smore和……相處好：getalongwellwith→getonwellwith參加：participatein→takepartin2.句式拓展合并簡(jiǎn)單句原句：Finally,weshouldtakepartinsportsandoutdoorsactivitiesfrequently.Theywerereallyhelpfultobuildupmybodyandenrichmyschoollife.拓展句：Finally,weshouldtakepartinsportsandoutdoorsactivitiesfrequently,whichwerereallyhelpfultobuildupmybodyandenrichmyschoollife.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Itreallybenefitedmealottopreviewlessons,getactivelyinvolvedinclass,andreviewwhathadbeentaughtafterclass.（運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Iamsurethatwithgreatefforts,youwillenjoyacolorfulandfruitfullifehere.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）7．（2022·江西·南昌市外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)校高一階段練習(xí)）假定你是李華，下學(xué)期你的美國(guó)朋友Jim將作為交換生到你所在的高中學(xué)習(xí)一年。請(qǐng)寫信向Jim表示歡迎，并簡(jiǎn)要介紹中國(guó)教育和美國(guó)教育的不同。要點(diǎn)如下：班級(jí)學(xué)生數(shù)量不同課堂上課方式不同在校時(shí)間長(zhǎng)短不同注意：1.詞數(shù)100詞左右2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearJim，I’mmorethangladtoknowthatyouaregoingtobeanexchangestudentinourhighschoolforawholeyear!Next,I’dliketointroducesomedifferencesbetweenChineseandAmericanteachingandlearning.First,wehavemorestudentsineachclassthanyoudo.InChina,thenumberofstudentsineachclassisusuallymorethan50.Second,wehavedifferentteachingstyles.Theteachersusuallygivelecturesintheclassandthestudentswillsetdownwhattheteachershavesaid.Third,thetimewhenwestayatschoolismuchlongerthanyours.Wemayspendatleast8hoursatschooleachday.That’sallI’dliketoshare.Ican’twaittomeetyou!Yours,LiHua【解析】下學(xué)期美國(guó)朋友Jim將作為交換生到李華所在的高中學(xué)習(xí)一年，要求寫信向Jim表示歡迎，并簡(jiǎn)要介紹中國(guó)教育和美國(guó)教育的不同。要點(diǎn)包括：班級(jí)學(xué)生數(shù)量不同，課堂上課方式不同，在校時(shí)間長(zhǎng)短不同。【詳解】第一步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文是給朋友的一封信，介紹中國(guó)教育和美國(guó)教育的不同。第二步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：I’mmorethangladtoknow……exchangestudent,introducesomedifferences,thenumberof,differentteachingstyles,can’twaittomeetyou.第三步：根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。第四步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接和過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級(jí)表達(dá)方式，如賓語(yǔ)從句thatyouaregoingtobeanexchangestudentinourhighschoolforawholeyear!和whattheteachershavesaid.定語(yǔ)從句whenwestayatschool和I’dliketoshare.全文中沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。8．（2022·貴州·畢節(jié)市實(shí)驗(yàn)高級(jí)中學(xué)高一階段練習(xí)）假設(shè)你的美國(guó)筆友John來(lái)信想了解你們學(xué)校和你在學(xué)校的學(xué)習(xí)生活情況，請(qǐng)給他寫一封回信。包括以下要點(diǎn)：1.對(duì)學(xué)校做簡(jiǎn)要介紹(擁有80多年歷史)；2.學(xué)校的設(shè)施(擁有現(xiàn)代化的教學(xué)樓、辦公樓；學(xué)校環(huán)境優(yōu)美等)；3.教師們愛崗敬業(yè)、和藹可親。參考詞匯：作簡(jiǎn)介：makeabriefintroduction;學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況：learningandlivingcondition現(xiàn)代化的：modern;愛崗敬業(yè)的：diligentanddedicated;和藹可親的：amiable____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearJohn,Thanksforyourletter.Howisitgoingwithyou?Inyourletter,youaskedmeaboutourschool.Letmemakeabriefintroductionaboutmylearningandlivingcondition.Myschoolhasahistoryofabout80years.However,itdoesn’tlackofmodernteachbuildingsorofficesinourschool.Besides,theenvironmentinourschoolisgood.Therearemanytreesinourschool.Andyoucanseenotrashonyourroadtoteachbuildings.Lastbutnotleast,myteachersarealldiligentanddedicated.Theyareveryconscientious.Meanwhile,theyareamiable,youcanaskthemforhelpatanytime.I’mlookingforwardtomeetingyouinourschool.Ifyouhavetime,welcometomyschool.Yours【解析】本篇表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給朋友回復(fù)郵件，介紹自己的學(xué)習(xí)和學(xué)習(xí)狀況?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)結(jié)構(gòu)：總分總???開頭給出問(wèn)候，引出主題。中間段描述主要內(nèi)容，結(jié)尾段表示期待回復(fù)要求：1.問(wèn)候和引入主題2.主要內(nèi)容1)對(duì)學(xué)校做簡(jiǎn)要介紹(擁有80多年歷史)；2)學(xué)校的設(shè)施(擁有現(xiàn)代化的教學(xué)樓、辦公樓；學(xué)校環(huán)境優(yōu)美等)；3)教師們愛崗敬業(yè)、和藹可親。3.期待對(duì)方回復(fù)第二步:列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）makeabriefintroduction;learningandlivingcondition;modern;diligentanddedicated;amiable;conscientious第三步：連詞成句1.Letmemakeabriefintroductionaboutmylearningandlivingcondition.2.However,itdoesn’tlackofmodernteachbuildingsorofficesinourschool.3.Myteachersarealldiligentanddedicated.Theyareveryconscientious.4.Meanwhile,theyareamiable,youcanaskthemforhelpatanytime.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(從句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果關(guān)系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，第五步：潤(rùn)色修改【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了較多的固定搭配，如makeabriefintroduction;learningandlivingcondition等。全文中沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。9．（2022·黑龍江·牡丹江一中高一階段練習(xí)）一家英語(yǔ)報(bào)社向中學(xué)生征文，主題是“我理想的高中生活”，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要求和你