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wouldamounttoaprogressineducationalpractice.學生評價老師的教解析:amounttoequaltovEvaluationfromstudentsdeservesmorepraises.來生的評價更加Itwillhaveapositiveimpactonenhancingthequalityofteachingbyeliminatingthose petentorunpopularteachers.這可以淘汰不合格解析petentadjTheencouragementfromstudentswillgreatlyspurteacherspassionofteaching.Hence,thedesiretogainmorepraisesfromstudentscouldgreatlystimulateteachersmotivationtoexcelprofessionally.學生的鼓解析:spurv鞭策解析:toexcelprofessionallyvItiseasyforteacherstotimelyreceivestudentsfeedbacksothattheycouldadjustandoptimizetheirteachingmethods.老師們可以及時地獲解析:teachingmethodsteachingmethodologiesn教學方法解析:better=perfect=optimizev完善Hence，timelyfeedbackfromstudentsisbeneficialtotheperfectionofeducationandtheharmoniousrelationshipoftwoparties.因此，來Teachersareinthebestpositiontoevaluatetheperformanceoftheircolleagues.最好由老師來評價他們同事的教學表現(xiàn)。Encouragingcommentsfromstudentscangiveaboosttoeducators’performance.學生們令人鼓舞的評價可幫助教育者表現(xiàn)優(yōu)異。Teacherscanmakeactiveadjustmentoftheirteaching.老師們可以對Evaluationfromstudentscaninalargerextentcontributetothemutualunderstandingbetweenteachersandstudents.在更大程度上,來Iamnotwillingtodenythebenefitsbroughtaboutbycoworkers’remarksonteachersperformance.我不想否認由同事評價老師帶來的Teachersmightprovidemoreprofessionalsuggestionsonhowtobetterthequalityofeducation，afterall，mostteachershaveaccumulatedapoolofteachingexperiencesandthusclearlyknowhowtoeffectivelyestablishaharmoniousteacherstudentrelationship.老師們也許會對于如何提高Forexample，anexperiencedteachercanhelpgreenhandtomanagetheirclassactivitieseffectively.例如，一個經(jīng)驗豐富的老師可以幫助新givenegativecommentsontheircoworkerssimplybecausetheyhavecareercompetitionwiththem.然而，有些問題不可避免，有些老師可解析:Someproblems，however，mightinevitablyensue一些問題不可StudentsshouldbeallowedandencouragedtomakecommentsontheirItcanperfectthequalityofeducationandpaveanewwayforachievingequalitybetweenteachersandstudents這可以提高教學質(zhì)量，同時，為Developmentsoftechnologyarecausingenvironmentalproblems.SomepeoplethinktheDevelopmentsoftechnologyarecausingenvironmentalproblems.Somepeoplethinkthesolutionisthateveryoneacceptsasimplerlife,whileothersbelievethattechnologycansolvetheseDiscussbothviewsandgiveyour

Thereisnodoubtthatmoderntechnologyhascausedavarietyofenvironmentalissues,bothincitiesandtowns.Ironically,IfeelthattechnologycanaddresssomeoftheseproblemsbutatthesamealeffortisaTheoretically,addressingsomeenvironmentalissuesbyadoptingsimplelifestylesissensible.Accordingtothestatistics,duringthelast100years,theearth'ssurfacetemperaturehasrisendramaticallybecauseofhumanactivities.Therefore,somepeoplefeelthatthechangesinourlifestylescanreversethisworryingtrend.Forexample,thegrowingnumberofvehiclesontheroademitsalargetyofgreenhousegases,suchascarbondioxide,whichwillworsentheairquality.Ifresidentschoseothermodesoftransport,likebusesorsubways,thisseriousconditionwouldbealleviatedtoalargeextent.However,inmyopinion,thiswouldbeveryunpopularwithsomepeople,especiallythoselivinginthesuburb,whodoneedtotravelonroads.Whileitisundeniablethatanindividual'sbehaviourhasaprofoundeffectontheenvironment,otherpeoplearguethattheimprovementintechnologycantacklesomeproblemsinturn.Forexample,thetechnologytodayisavailabletoproduceelectriccarsthatwouldbebothquieterandcleanertouse.Persuadingmanufacturersandtravellerstoadoptthisnewtechnologywouldbeamoreeffectivestrategyforimprovingairqualityfundamentally.Myownviewisthatapartfromindividualeffortandenvironmentalfriendly,weneedtodomore,suchasintroducingrelatedlawsandregulations.Environmentalproblemsaresocomplexthateacheffortshouldbecombinedtogethertowinthebattle.201559環(huán)保類:Developmentintechnologyleadstoenvironmentalproblemsandsomepeoplethinkthatthesolutiontotheseproblemsisforeveryonetoleadasimplerwayoflife,whileotherssaythattechnologycansolvetheseproblemsDiscussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.環(huán)保話題基本表達法environmentalprotectionenvironmentalpreservationenvironmentalconservation=greenismn環(huán)境保護解析:greenismn.綠色保護;environmentallyfriendlyecofriendlyadjenvironmentalprotectionawarenessnruindamagehurttheenvironmentvraiseenhanceboostenvironmentalprotectionawarenessamongstthegeneralpublicv提高全民環(huán)保意識詞匯:amongstthegeneralpublicenvironmentalpollutionenvironmentalcontamination環(huán)境污染trafficcongestion=trafficjamn交通擁 overindustrializationndeationn森林砍airandnoisecontaminationpollutionnthedeteriorationofairqualityn詞匯:deterioratev使得threatenpublichealthandsafetyv公共健康與安全toutilizethenaturalresourcesproperlyvadoptenvironmentallyfriendlyv采取環(huán)保政exploitandpopularizetheuseofecofriendlypowersourcev研發(fā)和推詞匯:exploitv開發(fā);利用;Carryingoutenvironmentalpublicityandeducationtoenhancethewholenation'sawarenessoftheenvironment.開展環(huán)境宣傳教育，提高Toproduceandpopularizelowcarbonandecofriendlyvehiclesaimingtoreducecontaminationcausedbytheemissionofexhaustgas.生產(chǎn)和普首段:背景介紹+爭議焦點+作家立場二段:我的口吻支持正方觀點三段:我的口吻支持反方觀點尾段:再次亮明觀點Ironically,we,humanbeings，arenowfacingwithaseriesofenvironmentrelatedissuessuchasglobalwarmingorthedepletionofresources.Peoplediffergreatlyintheirviewsastohowtoprotecttheenvironment,toresorttothehightechortooptforasimplerlifestyle.Tovoicemyopinion,theperfectcombinationofthetwoapproacheswillbetheidealwaytoresolveenvironmentrelatedproblems.Indeed,plentyofevidencecouldbeexploredtojustifythatitworkstosafeguardoursurroundingsviahightech.First,effortsshouldbemadetoexploreandpopularizenewenvironmentallyfriendlyenergysourcestosubstitutethosehighlypollutedfossilfuels.Toillustrate,itishighlymendedtoproduceandpopularizelowcarbonandecofriendlyvehiclesaimingtoreducecontaminationcausedbytheemissionofexhaustgas.Theuseoffuelcelldrivencarswillposelessthreattotheenvironment.Also,naturalresourcessuchassolarenergy,seaenergy,windenergyandtidalpowercouldandshouldbeappliedtoournormallifeandEventually,theeffectiverecycleofresourcescouldberealizedifwecanrelyonthehightechtoclassifyandhandlevariousrubbishes.Yet,inadditiontorelyingonhightech,itisstillfeasibletocallonpeopletoliveasimpleandecofriendlylife.First,environmentalpollutionwillbeeasediflesshightechproductsareutilizedinourlife.Forexample,thepublicshouldbeadvocatedtoavoiddrivingprivatecarsandtakepublictransit,inthissense,itwilldiminishthewasteofnaturalresourcesandawarenessshouldbestrengthened.Tofosterwaterwiselifestyle,toeconomizeelectricityandtodiminishtheuseofsticbagscouldallserveasperfectexamples.Last,peoplecanalsobeencouragedtovisitthebeautifulcesthatareclosetohome,ratherthantravelingforlongdistanceonholidays.Overall,Ireaffirmmyconvictionthatbothlivingasimplelifeandrelyingonhightechcouldyanindispensablepartintheprocessofenvironmentalpreservation.Therefore,thecombinationofbothmethodsis 2015430日雅思寫作(五Insomecountries,moreandmoreadultsarecontinuingtolivewiththeirparentsevenaftertheyhavecompletededucationandfoundjobs.Dotheadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages?Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofadultschoosetolivewiththeirparentsafterfinishingtheiracademictasksandfindingjobs.Theoveralleffectofthisphenomenonisnegative,althoughtheyoungergenerationcangetmuchhelpfromtheirparents.Itiswidelyacknowledgedthatlivingwithparentscontributestorelieveyoungadults’strainsandstresses.Theybeargreatpressurefromtheirworkandstudy,andarenotwillingtoadapttoanindependentlife.Thefortheirchildren,helthemtoconcentrateontheirwork.Inaddition,youngpeoplecanlearnmuchexperiencefromtheirparentswhoaremoreexperiencedindealingwithinter alrelationshipsandcareerdevelopment.Asanewcomerintheworkingarena,theyounggenerationaretoona?vetomanagetheirvariouschallenges.Undoubtedly,itisofgreatvalueforthemtolivewiththeirparents.Ontheotherhand,continuingtolivewithparentswillunavoidablycause s.Growingupintwodifferenttimes,theviewsand

betweenthesetwogenerationsarelesslikelytobethesame.Withthepassageoftime,thefamilybondwillbealienated.What’sworse,iftheadultsleadalifewithparentsforalongtime,theyareparticularlylikelytohaveasentimentalattaenttotheirparentsexcessively.Itwillbeincreasinglydifficultforthemtostartanewlifewhentheirparentscannotprovidehelpanylonger.ItisdetrimentalforforminganewfamilyintheWhenconsideringtheeffectsoflivingwithparentsonyounggeneration,wecanconcludethatthislifestyleisnotuniversallysuitableforeveryindividual.Astomostyoungpeople,theyhadbettertoliveindependentlyinordertokeepaharmoniousrelationwithparentsandabalancebetweenworkandlife.2015430Insomecountries,moreadultschoosetocontinuetolivewiththeirparentsevenaftertheygraduateandhavefoundjobs.Dotheadvantageofthistrendoutweighthe布局圖:(弊大于利 年輕人和父母同住的利好增強了家庭的紐帶，使父母和的感情更加和諧和親密對于奮斗中的年輕人而言，他們的精力應該地用于發(fā)展事業(yè)。。年輕人和父母同住的弊端解析:論據(jù)可以寫作;寄宿學校時候，同住可能增加兩代人之間的。作家立場:年輕人畢業(yè)后依然和父母Itseemsthatnumerousyoungadults,especiallythoseuniversityleaversorfreshemployeesarefondofsharingthesamehousewiththeirparentsratherthanrentinganapartment.Formanyyears，peoplehavebeendebatingtheprosandconsofthisphenomenonwithoutreachinganydefiniteconsensus.Mystandisthatlivingwithparentsisnotmendatorybecausethedemeritsoutweighthepossiblemerits.Tobesure,somebenefitscouldbegainedbylivingwithparents.Firstofall,youngpeoplearemorelikelytoleadaregularandhealthylifewithsufficientcarefromtheirparents.Moreprecisely,mostoftheadultswholivewiththeirparentscanbetakengoodcareof,thus,theycanbravecareerchallengesenergetically.Also,thereisapossibilityofthe offamilybondsifyoungsterslivefarawayfromtheirparentsforalongtime.Conversely,livingunderthesameroofwiththeirparentscanstrengthenthefamilytie.withparents.Themostglaringdemeritisthatitisfacileforyoungpeopletodeclinetheirindependenceandviabilityvialivingwiththeirparents.Moreprecisely,washingclothes,tidyinguproomsandtacklingcrisisbyoneselfarethebasicabilitiesoneneedsforhisorherfuturelife.acquiringtheseskillsatearlieragehelpsthosewhoareintheformativeyearstofaceuptochallengeslaterintheirlives.Anotherdrawbackderivingfromlivingunderthesameroofwithparentsisthatonemightliveaparasiticlifeinparents'home.Inmarkedcontrast,thosewhoprefertoliveontheirowncouldtraintheirinter alskills,moneymanagement,adaptability.Finally，thefamilyrelationshipmight eevenworseunderthesubtleinfluenceofthegenerationgapbecauseparentsandchildrenusuallydifferentlifeconceptsandOverall,Ireaffirmmyconvictionthatlivingwithparentsisadoubleedgedswordwhichcanbeusedequallyforgoodorevil,however,youngstersshouldbeencouragedtotempertheirindependence,viabilityandadaptability.Choosingtofaceuptothechallengesoflivingindependentlyisoneofthebeststrategiestoobtainthisobjective.解析:Formanyyearspeoplehavebeendebatingtheprosandconsofthisphenomenonwithoutreachinganydefiniteconsensus多年來，人們解析:……isnot mendatorybecausethedemeritsoutweighthepossiblemerits.……是不推薦的，因為其弊大于利。解析mendsbtodosth推薦去做某解析:apossibilityofthe positionoffamilybondsn家庭紐帶分解解析:Tobesure,somebenefitscouldbegainedby解析:canbravecareerchallengesenergeticallyv……可以精力充解析:bravev 拓展:vigorously=energeticallyadv精力充沛地解析:canstrengthenthefamilytiev可以增強家庭紐帶解析:adapt(適應)+ability(能力)=adaptabilityn適應能力解析:Wehavenoreasonshowever,toignorethedownsidestriggeredby……然而，我們沒有理由忽視由……引起的弊端解析:Themostobviousdemeritisthat……最明顯的弊端在于……解析:Anotherdrawbackcomingfrom……isthat……來自……的另外解析:temperone’sindependencev解析:Overall,Ireaffirmmyconvictionthat……總之，我再次重申我的解析:isadoubleedgedswordwhichcanbeusedequallyforgoodorevil……是一把雙刃刀，有利有弊解析:isoneofthebeststrategiestoobtainthisobjective.……解析:obtainthisobjectivevYoungpeoplewhocommitcrimesshouldbetreatedinthesamewayasadultsby.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree？20154Youngpeoplewhocommitcrimesshouldbetreatedinthesamewayasadultsby.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree？Itissometimesarguedthatyounglawbreakersshouldbetriedasadultsforcrimes.I allybelievethatthisispartlyreasonable.Ontheonehand,thosewhoparticipateinviolentcrimesshouldnotbetreateddifferentlythanadultoffenders.Thisisbecausemostcrimes,suchasrapeormurder,arethoughtful,deliberateandcunninginitsnningandexecution.Ifourcourtstrendtowardamorelenientposition,thentherelatedlawsandpunishmentwillnothaveadeterringeffectonteenagers.Asaresult,teenagersarelikelytocommithorriblecrimessincetheyareawarethattheyhavelegalprotection.What’sworse,theseteensmightmitaftertheyarereleasedfromjails.Insomecases,thelightersentencingmightalsoleadtoresentmenttowardsthejudicialsystemasvictimsmightarguethattheseyoungoffendersdonotconfesswhathavedone.Thiscouldalsoresultininsecurityinoursocietyeventually.Ontheotherhand,thecircumstancesofacrimeanditsmotivationshouldbetakenintoconsiderationwhenitcomestojuveniledelinquency.Forexample,becauseofdistressandhunger,someteensmayturntostealingfoodorrobberyduringaperiodoffamine.Underthiscircumstance,harshpunishment,suchaslongtermjailmightnotbethebestsolution.Inmyview,mostoftheyoungoffenderslackparentingandselfdiscipline,whichwouldmeanthatotheralternatives,suchascommunityserviceandrehabilitationmightbebetteralternativesforthem.Inconclusion,Ifeelthatitisvitallyimportantforjudgesandstatelegislatorstoensurethejusticeequalityregardlessofthecriminal’sage.2015425日雅思寫作

類:Youngpeoplewhocommitcrimesshouldbetreatedinthesamewayasadultsby，towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?少年犯應該和成年者受到相同的處全文布局圖首段:++令人擔憂的是，在很多國家,青少年率居高不下，成為困擾很多何行為必然對受害者造成嚴重的身心，因此，所有者，，然而要反駁的是:青少年和成年是有區(qū)別的，簡單認為們?nèi)松鞅媸欠窃鰪娨庾R第二對于一些少年犯而言，，Alarminglytherateofjuveniledelinquency，insomecounties,keepsonsoaringinrecentyears,whichnotonlyharmsthesufferersbutalsoendangersthesecurityofthesociety.令人擔憂的是，青少年率近年解析:endangerv危及到……somepeoplearguethat=anopinionspringsupthat……有人認Mystand，however，isthatprimarilyforastartfirstofallalsofurtherinadditionlasteventuallytomakemyfinalpointinotherwordsmorepreciselybythatImeanindeed,Ihavetoconcedethat=admittedlyIhavetoconfessthat……的確，我承認……Nonetheless,itisrathersuperficialtosimplybelievethat拓展:nevertheless=nonetheless=however=notwithstandingallthat然inclosing，Ireaffirmmystandthatyoungcriminals=teenagelawbreakersnadultperpetrators=adultoffendersn成年youthcrimeteenagecrimejuveniledelinquencynpoisonone’sinnocentmindvarouseone’sviolentimpulsev誘發(fā)沖misleadone’slifeoutlookvminimizethenumberofcrimescommittedv減少的數(shù)量解析:crimescommittedn罪行establishandensurejusticethelawvembarkonthecriminalroadv走 道turntoalifeofcrimev開 的人conductsomeantisocialoffencesv做出了很多 的行reformcriminals=reclaimlawbreakersv改 分endangerthestabilityofthesocietyandharmmanyvictims……危及……h(huán)asadeterrentroletoyin……v……在……方面可以拓展:……canstopsbfromngsthv……可 做providesbwithcustomtailoredwaysofreclamationv給 解析:customtailoredadj因人而異的Youthcrimecantakeavarietyofforms，fromschoolbullyingtostreetorassault.青少年的形式多樣，從校園到暴力，或者是性。解析:avarietyofadj各種各樣的Thesamepenaltyshouldnotbeimposedonjuvenilelawbreakersandadultcriminals，eventhoughyoungperpetratorsshouldbeaccountablefor

Nowadays,olderpeoplewhoneedemploymenthavetocompetewithyoungerpeople.Whatproblemsdothiscause?AndwhataretheNowadays,olderpeoplewhoneedemploymenthavetocompetewithyoungerpeople.Whatproblemsdothiscause?AndwhataretheItistruethatagrowingnumberofyoungadultsarefacedwithincreasingcompetitionfromtheelderlyintheworkce.Althoughtherewillundoubtedlybesomenegativeconsequencesofthistrend,wecantakestepstomitigatethesepotentialproblems.Somerelatedproblemscanbeanticipated.Themainissueisthatmoreyoungemployeesarelikelytosufferunemployment.Thisisbecauseyoungemployeesarerelativelyrestrictedintermsofworkexperienceandcommunicationskills,comparedwiththoseexperiencedworkers.Therefore,employersprefertorecruitolderpeoplewithhigherworkingefficiencyratherthanthosewhojustgraduatefromtheuniversity.Inaddition,withoutadecentjobandsalary,itisextremelydifficultforyoungpeopletomakealivingandraisetheirfamilies,andthisposesathreattosocialstabilitysincesomeofthemmightcommitacrimetomakeafastally,Ifeelthaternmentsandacademicinstitutionsshouldworkhandinhandtotacklethisissue.Mosteldersofretirementage,especiallythoselivinginindustrializedcountriesreceiveapensionmonthly,sothereisnoneedforthemtoseekajob.Inotherwords,theernmentshouldallocatemoremoneytopensionsystem,whichcanbasicallyguaranteethebasicneedsofmostelders.Besidesthat,educationsystemshouldtheirantisocialoffences.thecurriculumusedcurrentlyanddesignmorecareerorientedcourses盡管少年犯也應該為自己的行為負責。解析:beaccountableforHeavierpenaltymightmakethosewhoareledastrayfeeldepressed

jobhunters.Byngthis,youngpeoplecan emorecompetitiveinthejobmarket.Inconclusion,Iaminthecampthatmorestepscanbetakentoimprovethewellbeingofthetwogenerations.hopeless.2015411Itisextremelyhardforreleasedyoungprisonerstoearnadecentespeciallywhentheylackthebasicworkingskillsorsurvivalabilities.對Jobtrainingisforteenageprisonerswhoembarkedonthecriminal

Oldpeopleneedemployment,so,theyhavetowithyoungpeople(forthesamejob),whatproblemsitwillcause?Whatarethesolutions.impulsivelyisworthwhile.對于因為沖動走 道路的少年犯而言，老人需要工作崗位所以他們要和年輕人競爭這會引起哪些問題Thosewhoaresetarelesslikelytoledinto mitcrimeandmorelikelytoturnoveranewlife.刑滿釋放者不容易再次，更加解析:turnoveranewlifevAsforsometeenagecriminalsorthosewhoareledastraytheymayinmostcaseshavefewopportunitiestoreceivefineeducationandthusownpoorlawabidingawareness.對于一些少年犯或者過失者而言，他解析:lawabidingawarenessn意Therefore，anotherkeystrategyistoprovideyoungprisonerswitheducationalopportunities，whichcouldhelpsthosewhoarestillintheformativeyearstoreflectononeselfandmakeacleardistinctionbetweenrightandwrong.因此，另外一個關鍵的策略就是給青少年者提供教育的機會，這可以幫助那些依然在成長中的年輕人自我，明辨解析:thosewhoarestillintheformativeyearsn依然在成長中的年輕人makeacleardistinctionbetweenrightandwrongv明辨是非Whatsanctionswillbeemployedshouldtakethecircumstancesofacrimeanditsmotivationintoaccount.采取何種處罰措施應該考慮到犯拓展:sanctionspunishmentpenaltyn解析:employv使用解析:takeintoaccountFixingpunishmentsforyoungcriminalsandadultoffendersisahastyapproach對于少年犯和成年犯固定刑罰是輕率的做法。解析:isahastyapproach2015411日雅思寫作(七

布局圖:首段:背景介紹+(問題影響)+二段:問題影響的展開:對于年輕人的影響;對于老年人的影響;對于三段:相應的解決策略的展開:如何做;企業(yè)如何做;老人如何做。尾段:亮明觀點+(總結理由)思路拓展:老人和年輕人競爭相同的工作崗位的影響如何解決年輕人和老人共同競爭工作崗位的鼓勵年輕人自我創(chuàng)業(yè)，提供相關的策略，這樣，即使年輕Notably,thecompetitionbetweenyoungjobseekersandseniorjobcandidatesisveryfierce,whichhasareallyadverseinfluenceonyoungadults，theagedandrelevantenterprises.Inthisessay，IwillVirtually，undernocircumstancescanweignorethenegativeinfluencetriggeredbythebetweenyoungjobcandidatesandseniorjobhunters.First,seniorjobcandidateshaveaccumulatedrichexperiencesandwisdom，therefore，theytendtooutshineyoungadultsandthusincreasethelikelihoodofyouthunemployment.Ifyoungstersconstantlysufferfromfailure,then,theymightfeelunmotivatedandfrustrated.Therefore,theymightendup ingthebreadeatersoftheirfamilies.Also,asfortheold,theirdeterioratingenergyandphysiquemightmakeithardforthemtobecompetentatintenseandstressfulwork.Theymightsufferbothphysicallyandpsychologicallyeveniftheysecurereasonablejobs.Last,ifsenioremployeesconstitutethelargestproportionofthe’sstaff,then,itindicatesthedeclineofproductivityandefficiencyoftheConsideringtheseverityofthisproblem，itishightimethatwestartedadoptingeffectivemeasures.First,itisimperativefortheernmenttoencourageyoungsterstoembarkonselfemploymentandproviderelevantpreferentialpolicies,thereby,youngpeoplestillhavehugeroomforemploymenteventhoughtheyareeliminatedbythejobcompetition.Further,itworkstoinviteseniorjobseekerstoactasconsultantsforthecompaniesandprovidesymbolicremuneration.Inthisway,bothpartiescouldputtheirtalentsintofully.Wiseandexperiencedjobcandidatescanprovideambitiousandvigorousyoungsterswithguidance.Finally,onthepartoftheelderly,whatisoftheutmostimportanceistoadjusttheirmentalities,bythatImean,toenjoytheretirementlifeandseekotherpleasureismorecommendableforthem.Insteadofcompetingforthelimitedjobvacancies,tosmelltheflowersisawinwinoptionbothfortheagedandtheyoung.Overall，itisnotaneasytasktoappropriaybalancethejobneedsbetweentheyoungandtheold.EverymethodIhavemethodhasitsuniquemerit，therefore，jointeffortsshouldbemadebytheernment，relevantenterprisesandtheindividualjobhunters.by……文本中，我將會努力探究下由……引起的不良的影響解析:jobcandidatesjobseekersjobhunters解析:undernocircumstancescanweignorethenegativeinfluencetriggeredby……任何情況下我們都不能忽視由于……引起的弊端解析:outshinev使相形見拙解析:feelunmotivatedandfrustratedv解析 最終以……為結breadeatersnbecompetentat……v能勝任…… reasonablejobsv找到理想的工作解析:constitutethelargestproportionofv解析:Consideringtheseverityofthisproblemitishightimethatwestartedadoptingeffectivemeasures.考慮到問題的嚴重性，是我們采取解析:toencourageyoungsterstoembarkonselfemploymentandproviderelevantpreferentials鼓勵年輕人自我創(chuàng)業(yè)，并且提供相關的優(yōu)解析:providesymbolicremunerationv解析:puttheirtalentsintofullyv充分展示才華onthepartofsb對于而言解析:whatisoftheutmostimportanceisto解析:bythatImean我的意思是……解析:ismorecommendableforthem解析:jobvacanciesn工作崗 tosmelltheflowers解析:awinwinoptionn解析:EverymethodIhavemethodhasitsuniquemerit，therefore，jointeffortsshouldbemadeby2015328日雅思寫作(八

SomepeoplesaySomepeoplesaythatcommunicationbyusingcomputersandphoneswillagreeordisagree?Someeducatorshavewarnedthattheprevalenceof phonesandtheinternethasanegativeeffectonadolescents’academicability.Iagreewiththisview.Firstly,thewideuseof“InternetEnglish”isregardedastheculpritofthedecliningwritingskills.Oneobviousreasonisthatyoungadultsmaymakesomegr ticalmistakesunconsciouslybecauseofthefrequentuseofimproperabbreviationsandpunctuationondevices,andthismightposeathreattotheirfuturecareerwhereaprofessionalwritingabilityisrequiredinmostcompanies.Therefore,manylinguistshaveexpressedtheirconcernsthattheinstantmessagingandchattingonphonesmightharmtheabilityofusingformalwrittenEnglish.Secondly,thepoorreadingproficiencycanbeputdowntothefrequentuseofaswell.Comparedtotheoldergeneration,youngpeopletodayareclutteredwithdifferentgadgets,likeiPadand .Forinstance,witheasyaccesstowifi,theycansurftheinternetanywhereandanytimetofollowthelatestinformationoftheiridolsinanothercountry.However,mostsocialnetworksdeliverfragmentanduselessinformation,whichnotonlystealstimeawayfromsolitaryreadingbutalsounderminetheabilitytothinkindependently.Inmyopinion,thisphenomenonshouldbereversedassoonaspossiblebecausereadinghasaprofoundeffectonanation’sfuture.Inconclusion,whiletheseelectronicdevicesmakethecommunicationmuchmoreconvenient,Iaminthecampthattheymightaffectyoungpeople’sacademicperformancenegatively.2015321日雅思寫作(九Somepeoplebelievefamouspeople'ssupporttowardsinternationalaidorganizationsdrawstheattentiontoproblems,whileotherscelebritiesmaketheproblemslessimportant.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.Withthenegativeinfluenceoffamouspeople’sbadbehaviorexposingtoourslightmorefrequently,plentyofcitizensbegintodoubttheirsupporttowardsinternationalaidorganizations.However,manypeoplestillbelievethatfamouspeoplearehelpersratherproblemmakers.Frommypointofview,internationalaidorganizationscanattractmorecitizens’attentiononproblemsifcelebritiesgivetherightsupportandsetupgoodimages.Itissensibletoarguethatinternationalcharitygroupscantakeadvantagesuchasfamoussingers,moviestarsandsportsprofessionals,theactivitiesornsofinternationalorganisationscanberespondedimmediay,iftheyareendorsedbycelebrities.Intheearlytimeofthisyear,ALSIceBucketChallengespreadaroundtheworldwithinafewdaysbythesharingofmanycelebrities.Meanwhile,theorganisationsalsoreceivedmillionsofdonationbyfansaswell.Nevertheless,itisanundeniablefactthatasmallpartofcelebritiesdon’tgainmuchpopularityorbringanyconveniencetointernationalaidorganizations.Althoughsomecelebritiesgivetheirsupporttotheseorganizationsoutwardly,theydon’tbringanytangiblehelp.Forexample,somecelebritiesleadaluxuriouslifeandnevertakepracticalactionstosocialproblems,orevenonlytakeadvantageofinternationalaidorganizationstoadvocateforthemselves.Asaresult,thepublicwilllooseconfidencetotheseorganizations,nottomentionsolvingproblems.Tosumup,Ibelieveinternationalaidorganizationswillreceivemuchmorehelpfromcelebritiesandfigureoutmoreproblemsifcelebritiescanmaketherightchoicesandtheircelebrityeffectisusedappropriay.2015321 現(xiàn):名人效應+慈善組織自然，需要經(jīng)各類的時候，如果可以捐助，可以鼓勵的慈善捐助，有助于幫助受災民眾擺脫困境。對于國際組織的支持有助于擴大慈善組織的很

obligations，todosomepublicserviceactivitiesforthosecharityorganizationscanbeaneffectivewaytoservethispurpose.解析:assumemuchoftheresponsibilityv地承擔責解析However，whetherhasignitedpublicdebate解析:charitableinstitutionacharityorganizationn慈善組織解析:help=assistancen幫助解析:ages=topstars=celebritiesnfamouspeople=influentialfigure=thosewhoenjoy慈善團體建立的初衷就是為世界上有困境的人提供義 ，但是，popularityn名解析:shouldandcouldpassonactiveinfluence

解析:setafinelearningexamplev?？椏梢晕说膮?以自己的積極的影響為慈善組織代言，解析:hence=therefore=inthissense因?？梢蕴嵘壬平M織的美譽度和 作為到社會尊敬的群體受到最多的贊美得到相對高的濟回報他們應該為社會做出更大的貢獻他們對于慈善組織積極宣傳或者 ，就是履行自己的社會責任，體現(xiàn)自我價值的方式。點評: 輔助慈善組織對于被的對象對于慈善組織對于

解析:asareturnedfavor ebeneficiariestoo也可以成為受益者解析:Notwithstandingallthat雖然如此解析:remainsuspiciousofmystand解析:helthepopulationofpovertystrickencountriesshakeoffpovertyv幫助貧困國家人口擺脫貧困解析:tacklingglobalenvironmentalcontaminationv解決全球環(huán)境污染解析:Anotherar