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Workaholicslivefortheirwork,oftenspendingmanyextrahoursatwork,andoftentakingworkhometocomplete.It'sfinetoliveinawork-hardculture,butwhenworkbecomestheonlyreasonforapersonsexistenceabovemoreimportantthings(suchasfamilyandfriends),theissuebecomescritical.That'stheproblemmoreandmoreAmericansarefacedwith.Americansareworkingmorehoursperweekthaninyearspast,andwithmanycompaniesreducingemployees,moreandmoreworkersareworriedabouttheirownjobs.Somestudiesshowthatasmanyas40percentofAmericanworkersdon’tevenbothertotakevacations,partlybecauseoffearstheymaynothaveajobtocomebacktoiftheydo.Besides,itisobviousthatpartofthematterisfinancial.Moreandmgrepeoplebegintodefinesuccessintermsoffinancialmeasures.Thehigheronesincomeis,themorerespectonegets.Finally,peoplenowadaysliveandworkinaconnectedenvironment---e-mails,instantmessaging,faxmachines,andcellphones---makinghardforthemtotrulygettimeawayfromtheirwork,evenwhentheyareonholiday.Whenworkbecomestheonlyreasonforbeing---whenitbecomestheonlythingpeoplethinkabout,theonlythingthattrulymakespeoplehappy,manyAmericansfindthattheyarenolongerclosetotheirkids.Divorceratejumpsandseriousstress-relatedhealthproblemscomeup.Undoubtedly,itistimetodosomething.Toreduceworkaholism,youmuststayawayfromworkonceinawhile.Therearemanywaystodothat:Spendtimewithfamilyandfriends:Callhomeoftentostayconnected;LearntosaynotonewassignmentsConsiderexercisestogetyourbodybacktoahealthyshape:Fighttheurgethateverythingyoudomustbeperfect.Itwilltakesomeeffort,butforyourselfandthoseyoulove,youreallyshouldmaketheeffort.Haveatryandyouwon'tregretit.WritingStyle:NarrationArgumentationExpositionExpositiontoexplainordescribesomethingtotellussomescientificknowledgeorsocialphenomenon1

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Topic:workaholicphenomenonThisexpositiontellsusasocialphenomenon2Readfortopicandpredict

Readingtip1:payattentiontothemostfrequently-appearedwords,orsimilarwords.Workaholicslivefortheirwork,oftenspendingmanyextrahoursatwork,andoftentakingworkhometocomplete.It'sfinetoliveinawork-hardculture,butwhenworkbecomestheonlyreasonforapersonsexistenceabovemoreimportantthings(suchasfamilyandfriends),theissuebecomescritical.That'stheproblemmoreandmoreAmericansarefacedwith.Workaholicsproblem4Paragraph1Keypoint:MoreandmoreAmericansarefacedwiththeproblemsof.....ThenumberofworkaholicsinAmericais......Writingtip1:Somesimilarsentencestructurescanhelpyoutorestate.

Americansareworkingmorehoursperweekthaninyearspast,andwithmanycompaniesreducingemployees,moreandmoreworkersareworriedabouttheirownjobs.Somestudiesshowthatasmanyas40percentofAmericanworkersdon’tevenbothertotakevacations,partlybecauseoffearstheymaynothaveajobtocomebacktoiftheydo.Besides,itisobviousthatpartofthematterisfinancial.Moreandmorepeoplebegintodefinesuccessintermsoffinancialmeasures.Thehigheronesincomeis,themorerespectonegets.Finally,peoplenowadaysliveandworkinaconnectedenvironment---e-mails,instantmessaging,faxmachines,andcellphones---makinghardforthemtotrulygettimeawayfromtheirwork,evenwhentheyareonholiday.4Paragraph2Readingtip2:Likingwordscanhelpyoutofindthekeypoints.

goingaftermoney;Keypoints:AmericansareworkingmorehoursSupportingreasons:fearslosingthejob;

Thereasonwhy.....are...connectedtechonogyWritingtip2:Youcantrytocombinethekeypointstogetherbychangingpartofspeech(轉(zhuǎn)變?cè)~性).damageourhealthWhenworkbecomestheonlyreasonforbeing---whenitbecomestheonlythingpeoplethinkabout,theonlythingthattrulymakespeoplehappy,manyAmericansfindthattheyarenolongerclosetotheirkids.Divorceratejumpsandseriousstress-relatedhealthproblemscomeup.Undoubtedly,itistimetodosomething.

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istimetodosomething.......notonly......,butalso........Keypoint:extremeworkaholicResults:breakthefamily;

Writingtip3:Somelinkingwordscanbeusedinthesentence.Readingtip3:transitionalsentencecanhelpyoutopredictthefollowingpassage.

Toreduceworkaholism,youmuststayawayfromworkonceinawhile.Therearemanywaystodothat:Spendtimewithfamilyandfriends;Callhomeoftentostayconnected;Learntosaynotonewassignments;Considerexercisestogetyourbodybacktoahealthyshape;Fighttheurgethateverythingyoudomustbeperfect.Itwilltakesomeeffort,butforyourselfandthoseyoulove,youreallyshouldmaketheeffort.Haveatryandyouwon'tregretit.4Paragraph4Aimingat.......,youcanmakeeffortstotakevariousways,whichwillbeworthwhile.Readingtip4:Punctuation(標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào))canhelpyoutofindthekeypoints.

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takeeffortsworthwhileToreduceworkaholism,youmuststayawayfromworkonceinawhile.manywaysWritingtip4:someadvancedsentencestructureswillbehelpful.Para.Keypoints1

ThenumberofworkaholicsinAmericaisincreasingrapidly.2ThereasonswhyAmericansworkmorehoursarefearslosingjob,goingaftermoneyandconnectedenvironment.3Extremeworkaholicsnotonlybreakthefamily,butalsodamagehealth.4Aimingatreducingworkaholism,youcanmakeeffortstotakevariousways,whichwillbeworthwhile.

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Para.3:Para.4:workaholicphenomenonthreereasonsproblems/harmfuleffectsways/suggestions5Structureofthepassage

6somelinkingwords表并列、遞進(jìn)：notonly...butalso,...表原因：because(of),thereasonwhy....,表結(jié)果：asaresult,consequently,...表總結(jié)：therefore,inconclusion,.........ThenumberofAmericans(whoare)becomingworkaholicisincreasing.(要點(diǎn)一)ThereasonwhyAmericasworkmorehoursareavoidinglosingjobs,goingaftermoneyaswellascommunicationtechnologies.(要點(diǎn)二)Notonlywillworkaholismbreakpeople'sfamilies,butalsodamagetheirhealth.(要點(diǎn)三)

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