托福作文寫作錯(cuò)誤公開課一等獎(jiǎng)市優(yōu)質(zhì)課賽課獲獎(jiǎng)?wù)n件

AcademicWriting7類常見錯(cuò)誤1.省略Wealthyparentsshouldn'tspoiltheirchildren.Shouldn’tI’mCan’tHe’s

Shouldn’t→shouldnot

I’m→IamCan’t→cannotHe’s→heis/hehashewas2.InformallanguageToday,newspapersreportlotsofcrimesinhorribledetails.lotsofahostofavastnumberof

numerous

agreatdealofagreatamountof

可數(shù)不可數(shù)3.Spelling英美詞匯差異Theimpactoftourismonthesetraditionalneighbourhoodsmustbeanalysed.Theimpactoftourismonthesetraditionalneighborhoodsmustbeanalyzed.

英式美式

seze/ceanalyseanalyzecivilisecivilizepractisepracticeglobaliseglobalizev.

英式美式

ourorcolourcolorneighbourneighborfavouritefavoriten.

英式美式

長(zhǎng)短

storeystorydialoguedialogarchaeologyarcheologyjewellryjewelrytravellertraveler詞匯長(zhǎng)短4.詞匯沒有特色例句1Seriouscrimesharmpeople’slives.

→severe→offense/criminalact→damage/destroyundermine/jeopardize→individuals/man/mankindseriouscrimeharmpeople例句2TheadvantagesofspaceresearcharemorethanitsDisadvantages.例句2TheadvantagesofspaceresearcharemorethanitsDisadvantages.bemorethan→outweigh例句3Ourworldisbecomingmoreandmore

reliantonmodernTechnology.moreandmore→increasingly+adj

onarise5.句子無(wú)銜接1.Theenvironmentisbecomingworse.Wemustworktogethertodealwiththissituation.分析句間關(guān)系

加銜接詞Theenvironmentisbecomingworse;

therefore,

wemustworktogethertodealwiththissituation.2.Opinionsfromdifferentpeoplewillhelpusfinishourworkbetterandfaster,theiropinionscanserveasasoundinformationchannel,whichleadstoabettersolutiontoaproblem.2.Opinionsfromdifferentpeoplewillhelpusfinishourworksbetterandfaster,becausetheiropinionscanserveasasoundinformationchannel,whichleadstoabettersolutiontoaproblem.6.感情色彩過(guò)于強(qiáng)烈loveletter式寫作So,weshouldmakesurethatglobalizationdoesnotharmourowntraditionalculture!!改。So不要和should連用，感情強(qiáng)烈?！鷗herefore7.宗教作為引言WemustbefriendlytoothersbecausetheBiblesays,“treatyourneighborsasyouwouldliketobetreated.”引言：名人名言/公認(rèn)的觀點(diǎn)Bible圣經(jīng)：信仰，非