如何從評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)入手備考GRE寫作

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如何從評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)入手備考GRE寫作

GRE寫作滿分要點(diǎn)解析，主要包括以下四點(diǎn)：

1、迎合GRE考試評(píng)卷人的評(píng)卷思路：

每個(gè)評(píng)卷人對(duì)你文章的評(píng)閱特別快，不行能對(duì)每個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)都很認(rèn)真地去看?？忌鷳?yīng)當(dāng)迎合評(píng)卷人的評(píng)卷思路，用最規(guī)范的結(jié)構(gòu)和最清楚的表達(dá)來(lái)體現(xiàn)自己的思路：首段要鮮亮地提出觀點(diǎn)，中間段落層次要拉開(kāi)，每段的開(kāi)頭應(yīng)當(dāng)就是該段的topicsentence。

2、嫻熟把握新GRE寫作題庫(kù)：

為了達(dá)到公正，ETS公布了它考試的全部寫作題庫(kù)，那么為了達(dá)到能和nativespeaker一起競(jìng)爭(zhēng)，考生應(yīng)當(dāng)在考前對(duì)全部題目都進(jìn)行預(yù)習(xí)(節(jié)省考試時(shí)的審題時(shí)間)，并通過(guò)100-150個(gè)提綱的寫作了解GRE寫作的一般結(jié)構(gòu)，通過(guò)30-50篇寫作來(lái)練習(xí)自己的寫作思路和表達(dá)。對(duì)題庫(kù)中的題目越嫻熟，對(duì)考試越有利。

3.新GRE寫作評(píng)分注意三方面

首先，從ETS公布的各分?jǐn)?shù)段評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)看，其評(píng)分主要注意以下三個(gè)方面：①、規(guī)律分析力量(要求insightful);②、文章的組織(要求well-organized);③、語(yǔ)言力量(要求standardwrittenEnglish;concise;variedstructure等)。

4.盡量提高AI部分的寫作力量而力保AA部分滿分

由于AA的寫作不牽涉自己觀點(diǎn)的綻開(kāi)，只須指出規(guī)律上的漏洞，因此在經(jīng)過(guò)訓(xùn)練以后，寫起來(lái)并不困難;而AI的寫作需要自己綻開(kāi)自己設(shè)立的觀點(diǎn)，不但需要規(guī)律上的洞察力量，還需要論證觀點(diǎn)的力量，語(yǔ)言組織的力量，因此對(duì)于中國(guó)考生來(lái)講比較困難，難以短期內(nèi)有較大提高。

但是這兩個(gè)部分在總分中的權(quán)重是一樣的，因此考生的策略應(yīng)當(dāng)是盡量提高AI部分的寫作力量而力保AA部分滿分(或高分)。由于假如AA部分滿分的話，AI部分只需爭(zhēng)取在4分以上就可以保證整體作文分?jǐn)?shù)在5分以上。

GREissue寫作優(yōu)秀實(shí)例：錢是否花在當(dāng)下

題目：

Itismoreimportanttoallocatemoneyforimmediate,existingsocialproblemsthantospenditonlong-termresearchthatmighthelpfuturegenerations.

與其花錢進(jìn)行可能有助于后代的長(zhǎng)期性討論，還不如把錢花在迫在眉睫，已經(jīng)存在的社會(huì)問(wèn)題上。

正文：

Inthiscontradictoryeraofpleasureandpain,loyaltyandtreachery,joyoflifeandfearoffuture,whichariseaconsiderableofproblemsgovernmenthasbeenboredby.Nomatterhowseriousandurgentoneaspectturnsouttobeinacertainperiod,governmentissupposedtocallforabalancebetweenallocatingmoneyforimmediateproblemsandspendingitonlong-termresearchwhenmakingbudget.

Toberesponsibleforcurrentcitizens,governmentshouldsolvethoseexistingsocialproblems,suchasunemployment,illiteracy,andsocialcrimes,inordertooilthesocialmachine.Tosomeextent,increasingtheamountofjobsmaygetmorebenefitthanitself,becauseitisawaytoreleasesocialpressureanddissatisfactionofthoseunemployedworkerswhomayeventuallybeeaticklishfactortosociety.

Additionally,illiteracyistosocietyastheshortestbaffleistoacask.Anditcoulddonothingbutlengthentheshortestbaffletothesamelengthastheotherbafflesifmorewaterissupposedtobepouredinthiscask.Asamalignanttumor,socialcrimesdoharmtotheeconomyandsecurityofoursocietyand,insomecases,isapotentialfuseespeciallywhenthereisaninternalorexternaloppositiontothegovernment,so,tokeepsocietystabilizedandbooming,governmenthastopaymoreattentiontosocialcrimes.

Ifnot,citizensmayfeelunderperilandloseconfidencetotherulingclass.Asaresult,forsavingmoney,thegovernmentisboggeddowninSargassoSeaoftroubles.Nonetheless,thegovernorsarenotbornonlyfortoday’speople.Thatistosay,anothersignificantandmeaningfulresponsibilityofgovernmentistotryitsbesttosupplyourposterityasocietythatconsistsofpeoplewhoarewelleducatedandobtainadesirablejoborcareer,lessjuvenilecrimeanddrug,andstableeconomy.As

H.W.Beecherpointed,“Weshouldsoliveandlaborinourtimethatwhatcametousasseedmaygotothenextgenerationasblossom,andwhatcametousasblossommaygotothemasfruit.Thisiswhatwemeanbyprogress.”Itistruethatlong-termresearchcouldnotgiveoutanimmediatevalue,forexample,howtoafforestawasteland,butweshouldn’tbesonarrowfociandmisprizetherealvaluenormallyingupinaboutdecadesormore.“Lifecanonlybeunderstoodbackwards,butitmustbelivedforwards”,saidbyKierkergaard.Thephrase“belivedforwards”here,inthiscase,meansdiggingouttheprofitinfuture,thesameasfutures.Althoughnooneknowswhetherornotthefutureisinconcordwithwhatweexpect,westillcouldinvestinitbasedonapileofwideinvestigationandacogentdemonstrationratherthanagambling.

Simplyput,withoutspendingmoneyonimmediateandexistingsocialproblems,oursocietycannotkeepflourishandrobust.Withoutinvestingonsomanylong-termresearches,wewilllivenoguaranteesandaimless.Therefore,toensurethestabilityandhealthaswellaslastingdevelopmentofoursociety,spendingmoneyonimmediatesocialproblemsandinvestingonlong-termresearchesweighthesame.

GREissue寫作優(yōu)秀實(shí)例：競(jìng)爭(zhēng)利弊問(wèn)題

題目：Competitionisultimatelymorebeneficialthandetrimentaltosociety.

歸根結(jié)底，競(jìng)爭(zhēng)對(duì)于社會(huì)是利多弊少。

正文：

Darwinsuggestedthattheprocessofevolutionisonebasedonpetition.Thisdeadlypetitionweedsouttheweakandonlythefittestofthespeciessurvives.Humans,beingtheproductofmillionsofyearsofevolution,arebynature,petitivebeings.Yet,humansarealsosocialbeings.Likethebeesinthehive,wearenotverysuccessfullivingpletelyonourown.Weneedtocooperatewithotherindividualsforoursurvival.Thus,aconflictensues,betweenourinnatepetitiveness,andourneedtocooperate.Thereareprosandconsassociatedwithboth.However,itismybeliefthatoverall,petition,ismoredetrimentalthanbeneficialtohumansociety.

First,letustrytoidentifywhythereispetitioninthefirstplace.Inanenvironmentabundantwithresources,wheresupplyoutstripsdemand,thereisverylittleneedfortheinhabitantstofightwitheachotheroverthem.Thisisnotthecaseonplanetearth.Resourcesarelimited,andthereisconstantjostlingtogettothefrontofthequeuetogetacquirethem.Forexample,thousandsofprospectivestudentsapplytogainentrancetotopuniversitiesaroundtheworld,butthereareonlyahandfulofplacesinthoseuniversities.Thus,thereispetitiontogetintotothesehallowedinstitutionsofhigherlearning.Fromautilitarianperspective,petitionisagoodthing.Inevolutionitisresponsiblefortheeliminationofweakgenes.Inthebusinessenvironment,itgetsridoftheweakerplayers.Inpolitics,itweedsoutunpopularcandidates.Inacademia,itgetsridofweakstudents.

Furthermore,petitionleadstoselfimprovement.Businesseswillstrivetoofferbetterproductsandservicesatlesserprices.Theconsumerreapsrichrewardsfromthispetitivespirit.Politiciansstrivetodotheutmostforthepeople,sotheywouldgetreelected.Studentsexcelintherestudies,tryingtooutdoeachother.

Thus,ostensibly,petitionisresponsibleforthebettermentofthesocietyasawhole.However,thisisjustthesuperficialview.Underneaththesurface,petition,ineveryaspect,isslowlyeatingawayattheveryfabricofthesociety.

Whileitistruetosaythatpetitionincorporateworldhasbroughtgreatbenefitstotheconsumer,thesocietyasMissedAherewholeisplayingagreatpriceforit.Mostbusinessesareexploitingcheaplabourinthethirdworldtomaximisetheirprofits.TherearethousandsofsweatshopsrunbywellknownwesterncorporationsincountrieslikeIndonesia,BangladeshandChina.Peopleareforcedtoworkinsqualidconditions,often16hoursaday.Theyareluckytoreceiveadollaradayfortherelabours.Themomentagovernmentinanyofthesecountriestrytoimprovetheworkingconditionsoftheemployees,thesemultinationalgiantsfleethecountry,oftenleavingwholemunitiesfacingfinancialruin.Thecorporationsareawarethatthereareplentyofotherlabourmarketsthatcouldbeexploitedwithgayabandon.

Thatisjustthehumancost.Whatabouttheenvironmentalcosts?Competitionhasforcedmanycorporationstostreamlinetheiroperations.Environmentalstandardsarenormallythefirstvictimsofthisstreamlineprocess.Asignificantamountofenvironmentalpollutionandlanddegradationhasbeenblamedonindustry,yetthefactorieskeepproducingmoreandmore.Thousandsofitemsgounsoldeachyearduetopetition.Onlyafractionofthismerchandiseisrecycled.Therestgoestothealreadyoverflowinglandfills.

Inpolitics,thedetrimentaleffectsofpetitionareblatant.Politiciansoftenresorttopopularyetsociallydamagingpoliciestogainvotes.Thesemeasuresincludeimprudentspendingtorabblerousing.ThecurrentvolatilityinIsraelandPalestine,theethnicconflictinSriLanka,andthefamineinZimbabweareall,atleastpartially,