讀后續(xù)寫2個(gè)萬能情感句

讀后續(xù)寫技能:兩個(gè)的萬能情感句（解析版）目錄TOC\o"1-3"\h\uPart1第一個(gè)情感萬能句： 1Part2第二個(gè)情感萬能句： 4Part3素材積累：情感描寫高級(jí)句型 7一、人物情緒描寫之一： 7二、人物情緒描寫之二： 9三、人物情緒描寫之三： 12四、其他情緒 13五、情感描寫詞句積累 13Part4綜合模擬演練 161．（2023·全國·高三專題練習(xí)）2 162．（2023·全國·高三專題練習(xí)）3 193．（2022秋·山東臨沂·高三統(tǒng)考開學(xué)考試） 224．（2022春·江蘇鹽城·高三江蘇省阜寧中學(xué)?？计谥校?25Part1第一個(gè)情感萬能句：Toone's+情緒名詞，主句這個(gè)句式，非常簡(jiǎn)單。屬于入門級(jí)的情感描述句。主句是用來描述情緒產(chǎn)生的原因。首先我們來看例句：

Tomysurprise,TomwonthefirstprizeintheEnglishSpeechContest.令我驚訝的是Tom居然獲得了英語演講比賽的第一名。

要想這個(gè)句子學(xué)好，必須積累情緒名詞，比如：

【正態(tài)度】amazement驚奇,delight高興,joy高興,satisfaction滿足，excitement興奮,【負(fù)態(tài)度】annoyance煩惱,disappointment失望,horror恐怖,shame,羞恥sorrow悲傷【中性態(tài)度】puzzlement迷惑,regret后悔,relief欣慰,surprise/amazement驚訝下面我們把這個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句型，進(jìn)行升級(jí)。

【升級(jí)1】加強(qiáng)情緒的語氣

比如我想要表達(dá)的是：非常令我吃驚的是，湯姆在英語演講比賽中獲得了一等獎(jiǎng)。你可以這樣寫：Much/Greatlytomysurprise,TomwonthefirstprizeintheEnglishSpeechContest.

也就是在to前面加上much,greatly，或者在名詞前面添加great這個(gè)形容詞：

Tomygreatsurprise,TomwonthefirstprizeintheEnglishSpeechContest.

【升級(jí)2】tothe+情緒名詞+of

sb（名詞或者代詞），比如我想要表達(dá)的是：令他的父母感到吃驚的是，他在英語演講比賽中獲得了一等獎(jiǎng)。

Tothesurprisefhisparents,hewonthefirstprizeintheEnglishSpeechContest.這里把Tomysurprise改成了Tothesurprisefhisparents，本質(zhì)上，是兩種所有格的變換。

【升級(jí)3】情緒名詞疊可以加使用。比如我要表達(dá)：令他驚訝和高興的是，他在英語演講比賽中獲得了一等獎(jiǎng)

Tohissurpriseandjoy,hewonthefirstprizeintheEnglishSpeechContest.

【升級(jí)4】：“toone’s+情緒名詞”位置可變換

這個(gè)短語的位置可以句首，句中，句末。請(qǐng)看下面例句：I，tomysurprise,foundthatTomwonthefirstprizeintheEnglishSpeechContest

Part2第二個(gè)情感萬能句：sb.feltagreatsenseof+情緒名詞+wellingupinsb’sheartandsurgingthroughsb.表示“某人感到一股強(qiáng)烈的在內(nèi)心升騰、奔涌?！边@個(gè)萬能句也可以用來描寫情緒和心理，比句式結(jié)構(gòu)比第一個(gè)句子要復(fù)雜，表現(xiàn)力也要更豐富。wellup表示“涌出”，我們可以這樣記憶well表示“好”以外，還可以表示“井”?！坝砍觥笔怯玫搅恕熬边@個(gè)含義。surge表示“洶涌”。這個(gè)句子的亮點(diǎn)是后半句wellingupinsb’sheartandsurgingthroughsb.，把情緒的描寫形象化，具體化了。我們先來看兩個(gè)例句：舉例1：Sunny感到一股強(qiáng)烈的恐懼，在她心中升騰，奔涌。Sunnyfeltagreatsenseofhorrorwellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.舉例2：Jessica感到一股強(qiáng)烈的嫉妒，在她心中升騰，奔涌。Jessicafeltagreatsenseofjealousywellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.（jealous嫉妒的，jealousy是“嫉妒”的名詞形式。）我們?cè)賮砜纯?，這個(gè)句型還可以如何拓展升級(jí)。非常簡(jiǎn)單，就是加上非謂語動(dòng)詞，在不同的位置，發(fā)揮的作用不同。升級(jí)一：句首可以加上doingsth，表示這種情緒產(chǎn)生的原因。舉例：看到一把斧子破門而入，Sunny感到一股強(qiáng)烈的恐懼在內(nèi)心升騰，奔涌Seeinganaxpiercingthroughthedoor,Sunnyfeltagreatsenseofhorrorwellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.升級(jí)二：句尾可以加上doingsth，表示這種情緒產(chǎn)生后的結(jié)果。請(qǐng)看下面的例句：杰西卡感到一種強(qiáng)烈的嫉妒感在她心中涌出來，把罐頭扔向女人。Jessicafeltagreatsenseofjealousywellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher,throwingthecanatthewoman.（這句話里的can是名詞，罐頭。）What+情緒動(dòng)詞+sb

+was+that從句What主語從句描述情緒，that表語從句描述情緒產(chǎn)生的原因，在續(xù)寫里我通常和學(xué)生說的是故事發(fā)展情節(jié)。【舉例】

讓我驚訝的是Tom居然獲得了英語演講比賽的第一名。

What

surprised

mewas

thatTomwonthefirstprizeintheEnglishSpeechContest.

【歸納整理】

【高興類】delight,please,excite,cheer,amuse,satisfy,pleasure/happiness/joy【生氣類】annoy,upset【驚訝類】surprise,astonish,shock,amaze,astonishment【害怕類】frighten,scare,terrify,fear/fright【失望類】depress,disappoint,discourage,bore,disappointment【憂慮類】worry,concern，【其他類】puzzle,confuse,interest,relax,touch,move,embarrass,impress沮喪depression/frustration哀傷sadness/sorrow困惑puzzlement/confusion著急anxiety疲憊tiredness/exhaustion緊張tension

尷尬embarrassment后悔regret憤怒anger/rage內(nèi)疚guilt感激gratitude如釋重負(fù)relief羞愧shame激動(dòng)excitement

Part3素材積累：情感描寫高級(jí)句型人物情緒描寫之一：開心（通過心理、表情、動(dòng)作來表達(dá)）平庸版：Hewashappy.進(jìn)階版:1.Hereyesshone/glittered/sparkled/twinkledwithjoy.Herfacelitupwithpleasure.（容光煥發(fā)）Herheartwaspoundingwithexcitement.（砰砰直跳）Happiness/joy/pleasure/delighttookholdofhim.(極度開心)Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness/joy/pleasure/delight.(幸福洋溢)Heshedtearsofjoy.（流下開心的淚水）第一組例句：1.Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasurewhenhesawthenews.當(dāng)他看到新聞，他的眼里閃耀著快樂。Hegrinnedwithdelightwhenhesawus.當(dāng)他看到我們，咧開嘴開心地笑了。Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.她臉上的笑容像鉆石一樣閃耀。Icouldn’trestrainmyjoyandjumpedintothehouse.我抑制不住內(nèi)心的喜悅，蹦蹦跳跳地進(jìn)了家門。Hecastusalook/glance,withhisfacewearingabroad/wide/radiant/warmsmile.她看向我們，面帶燦爛/溫暖的笑容。Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,itseemedasifthebabywereonthetopoftheworld.當(dāng)媽媽親吻他的臉頰時(shí)，小嬰兒開心極了。第二組例句：Bathedinsunshine,weallcheeredandjumpedwithjoy.沐浴在陽光下，我們都高興地歡呼和跳了起來。Thecrowdbecamerestless(騷動(dòng)),excitementfillingtheroom.人群變得焦躁不安，房間里充滿了興奮。TearsofhappinesspoureddownSusan’scheeks.幸福的眼淚順著蘇珊的臉頰流了下來。Ifeltthewarmthsurgingthroughme.我感到溫暖在我心中涌動(dòng)。Ithinkhe’dmighty(及其)happythat...我想他會(huì)很高興的。Hiseyestwinklewithpleasureeverytimeherememberslastwinter.每當(dāng)他想起去年冬天，就喜上眉梢。Smilesaredancinginhiseyes./Hereyesdancedwithjoyandhappiness.微笑在他的眼睛里跳動(dòng)著。/她的眼睛里閃爍著喜悅和幸福。Ilaughedoutloud/laughedheartily(哈哈大笑)whenIsawthatfunnyvideo.當(dāng)我在看有趣的錄像的時(shí)候我大聲笑了。第三組例句：Eyeslightup.精神振奮、高興Ibeamedat(對(duì)...微笑)him,“Welcomeback,...”我微笑著對(duì)他說，“歡迎回來，……”Hersmilehitthedeepestofmyheart.她的微笑觸動(dòng)了我內(nèi)心深處。Hearingthis,everybodywaswildwithjoy(欣喜若狂)One’seyesbrimoverwithwarmexcitedtears熱淚盈眶Oneevening,standingunderajeweledsky,Ifoundmyselfthankfulforallthehardships.一天晚上，站在珠光寶氣的天空下，我發(fā)現(xiàn)自己對(duì)所有的苦難都心存感激。人物情緒描寫之二：傷心（心理、表情、動(dòng)作）平庸版：Hewassad.進(jìn)階表達(dá)：不同的哭：cry哭（泛指，哭出聲）sob嗚咽，啜泣wail嚎啕大哭weep小聲/無聲流淚burstintotears放聲大哭fightbacktears抑制住淚水beclosetotears/beonthevergeoftears快要哭了beintears含淚Hereyeswerewetwithtears她的眼睛被眼淚弄濕了第一組例句：Hesighedwithdisappointment.他失望地嘆了口氣。Hestruggledtofightbackhistears.他試圖控制住自己的淚水。Hiseyesbrimmedwithtearsofsorrow.他的眼里噙滿了悲傷的淚水。Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他靜靜地站著，眼淚流下他的臉頰。IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.我感覺自己漂浮在悲傷的海洋里。Isawanoldladywailingwithfistbeatingherchestinthestreetcorner.我看到一個(gè)老奶奶在街角捶胸痛哭。Whenheembracedmewithhisarmsopenwide,Ifeltmythroatchokewithsob.當(dāng)他張開雙臂擁抱我時(shí)，我覺得自己喉頭哽咽。Uponhearingthebadnews,shefeltseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn’thelpcryingbitterly.一聽到這個(gè)壞消息，她就被一股悲傷之感控制，忍不住哭泣。第二組例句：Jackisovercomewithgrief.杰克悲痛欲絕。Griefcomesinwaves.悲傷如潮水一般涌來。Thelastwordwentlikeabullet(子彈)tomyheart.傷心、扎心 Arippleofsadnesswelledupinsidehim涌起陣陣悲傷Thegloom（憂郁）deepenedastheresultcamein.更加難過Myheartseemedtobetorn.(心都要撕碎了)Hereyesarefloodedwithtears.她的眼睛里充滿了淚水。Tearsarerollingdownfromhereyes.眼淚從她的眼睛里流下來。Eyesbegintowater.眼睛開始流淚。Isobbedbitterly,tastingthesaltfromthetearsthatstreameddownmyface.我痛苦地抽泣著，品嘗著眼淚流下的鹽分。IfeltsosadthatIfoundmyselfcryingunconsciously,unabletoholdbackmytears.我感到很難過，我發(fā)現(xiàn)自己不知不覺地哭了起來，忍不住眼淚。Therewasclearlynothinglefttodobutdropherselfontotheshabbylittlecouchandweep.顯然沒有什么可做的，只能躺在破舊的小沙發(fā)上哭著。Anairofsorrowanddepressionsettledoverthecrowd.人群中籠罩著一種悲傷和沮喪的氣氛。Hertearsseemedtogrieve（使傷心）thekindheartedothers,fortheyimmediatelytookouttheirhandkerchiefsandbegantoweepalso.她的眼淚似乎使善良的其他人感到傷心，因?yàn)樗麄兞⒖棠贸鍪峙粒查_始哭泣。人物情緒描寫之三：Nervous/Frightened（緊張、害怕）Isaidnervously,myvoicetremblingabit.我緊張地說，聲音有點(diǎn)顫抖。Iwasseizedbyasuddenimpulse（沖動(dòng)）torun.我突然有了一種想逃跑的沖動(dòng)。Feartookholdofme./Panicseizedus.我們驚慌失措。MybodytensedasIheard...我的身體緊張，因?yàn)槲衣牭?。。。Ichewedmylip.我咬了咬嘴唇。Itossedandturned。我整夜翻來翻去。...Ireplied,feelingalump(塊狀物)riseinmythroat.我回答說，覺得有點(diǎn)惡心在我的喉嚨里。Ifeltthatthebloodinmybodycooled\frozerapidlybecauseoftheterriblesight.我覺得我體內(nèi)的血液因?yàn)槟强膳碌木跋蠖杆俚貎鲎×薟ithapoundingheartandcold,moistpalms,Ifeltfaint.心怦怦直跳，手掌冰冷潮濕，我感到頭暈。10.Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.我嚇得僵住了，害怕得一英寸也不敢動(dòng)。其他情緒Nevergetconceited(驕傲自滿的)becauseofvictoryorloseheartincaseoffailure.勝不驕、敗不餒Auniquesenseofaccomplishmentarises.產(chǎn)生了一種獨(dú)特的成就感Thepolicewroteaticketwithatrickysmile(狡黠的微笑).和關(guān)心，我的心感覺非常溫暖。Ifeelliketherearehundredsofbutterfliesdancinginmyheart.(感覺到愛)我覺得有數(shù)百只蝴蝶在我的心中翩翩起舞。Theactorplayingthefatherwastoowooden.飾演父親的演員太呆板。I'vejustbeentothedentistandmyfaceisstillnumb.我剛剛?cè)タ戳搜泪t(yī)，臉上現(xiàn)在還沒知覺呢。StevelookedblankandsaidhehadnoideawhatIwastalkingabout.史蒂夫顯得很迷惑，說他不知道我在說什么。She

passed

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nod.

她冷漠的點(diǎn)了一下頭就過去了。Hollysmileddistantly.霍利恍惚地笑了笑。情感描寫詞句積累①Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.她臉上的笑容像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光。②Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface.他臉上露出了一種理解的微笑。③

Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一陣激動(dòng)聲穿過他們。④

Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.笑聲在房間里縈繞。⑤Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.他的眼睛閃爍著快樂。⑥Awildgaiety（快樂）

tookholdofher.一種瘋狂的快樂控制了她。⑦Unforgettablewerehereyesthatshonelikediamondsandlipsheldinasteadysmile.令人難忘的是她的眼睛像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光，嘴角保持著穩(wěn)定的微笑。⑧

Iwaswildwithjoy.我欣喜若狂。⑨

Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.我高興得難以形容。⑩

Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.她臉上帶著燦爛的笑容。?Hersmilelitupthewholeroom.她的笑容照亮了整個(gè)房間。?Sheshedtearsofjoy.她高興得流下了眼淚。?Hereyesweresparklinglikediamonds.她的眼睛閃著鉆石般的光芒。?Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness.她洋溢著幸福。?Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.她激動(dòng)得滿臉通紅。?

Joywelledupinsideher.她心中涌起喜悅。?

Iwasfloatingonair.我漂浮在空中。?

Amusementgleamedinhiseyes.他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。2.憤怒：①

Iwasseizedbyanger.我充滿了憤怒。②

Hewasfumingwithrage.他氣得大發(fā)雷霆。③

Hisangerboiledover.他的憤怒爆發(fā)了。④

Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.他幾乎控制不住怒火。⑤

Hewasbreathingfireandfury.他充滿著怒火。⑥

Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.他的聲音因憤怒而顫抖。⑦

Hegavemealookofburninganger.他憤怒地看了我一眼。⑧

Heglaredatmewithburningeyes.他用灼熱的目光怒視著我。⑨

Heflaredupattheword.他一聽到這個(gè)字就勃然大怒。⑩

Hisfacecloudedwithanger.他氣得臉色陰沉。

①Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他靜靜地站著，眼淚順著面頰流了下來。②

IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.我漂浮在悲傷的海洋里。③Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftears.她的手在顫抖。她快要哭了。④Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine.聽到這個(gè)消息，他絕望地把悲傷淹沒在酒里。⑤Sheburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom.她突然哭了起來，跑出了房間。⑥Shesobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands.她掩面哭泣。⑦Itriedtofightbacktears.

/Myeyeswerefilledwithtears.我努力忍住眼淚。/

我的眼里充滿了淚水。⑧Afrown（皺眉）nowstoodonhisface.他皺起了眉頭。⑨Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.

他們坐在那里，帶著一臉憂郁。

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Thenewscastacloudofgloomoverhisface.這消息使他臉上蒙上了一層陰影。?Hebrimmedoverwithsorrowwhen...他滿是悲傷……?Theywereimmersedinsorrow.他們沉浸在悲痛之中。?

Thesedayshewasinlowspirits.這些日子他情緒低落。

4.害怕：①Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.他轉(zhuǎn)過身來，眼里充滿了恐懼。②Fearslowlycreepsuponher.恐懼慢慢地蔓延到她身上。③Shewasstruckwithhorrorwhen...她感到恐懼……④Shewaschokedbyfear.她因恐懼而窒息。⑤Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.她臉色蒼白地站在那里，舌頭打結(jié)。⑥Afloodoffearwelledupinhim./Fearfloodedoverhim.他心中涌起一陣恐懼。

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恐懼淹沒了他。⑦Herheartbeatsoviolentlythatshefeltnearlysuffocated（窒息）.她的心跳得厲害，幾乎窒息而死。⑧Sheshookallover,feelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.

她渾身顫抖，覺得如坐針氈。5.

感動(dòng)：①

Toucheddeeply/immensely,we…被深深感動(dòng)，我們……②

Tearsfillinghereyes,sheofferedherheartfeltgratitude.她熱淚盈眶，表示衷心的感謝。③

Withtearsstreamingdownherface,she...

淚水順著她的臉頰流了下來，……Part4綜合模擬演練（2023·全國·高三專題練習(xí)）2閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ALEXpedaledhisbikealongthecountrylanethatledtohishouse.Asheroundedabend,thetipsofthecattailsthatgrewaroundJohnson’sPondcameintoview.Hisdadtookhimcanoeingtheresometimes,andAlexlovedit.Thepondwasalwayssoalivewithactivity.Frogscroakedalongtheshore,dragonflieshuntedamongthecattails,andsometimesAlexdiscoveredturtles(烏龜)basking(曬太陽)onsunnyrocks.Alexwascuriousabouttheturtleshesaw.Oneweek,whenitwastoorainytogocanoeing,heandhisdadwenttothelibrarytocheckoutbooksonturtles.Alexlearnedthatturtlesdon’thavewarmbloodlikepeopledo.That’swhytheyhavetositinthesuntowarmthemselves.Nowitlookedliketomorrowmightbeanothersunnyday.HedecidedhewouldaskDadiftheycouldgocanoeingandlookforturtlesagain.JustthenAlexsawsomethingintheroadupahead.Itlookedlikeabiggrayrock.Butitwasafunnyplaceforarocktobe.Andthen,asAlexwatched,therockstartedtomove.Whenherodehisbikeuptogetacloserlook,hesawthatitwasn’tarockatall.Itwasalargeturtlecrawleditswayacrosstheroad.Ithadabony,beak-shapedmouthandalong,jaggedtail.Alexknewrightawayitwasasnappingturtle.Healsoknewnottogettooclose.Hehadreadthatasnappingturtlehasapowerfulbiteeventhoughitdoesn’thaveteeth.Itcouldevenbiteoffsomeone’sfinger.Hestoodatadistanceandwatchedtheturtlemoveslowlyovertheroad.Outofthecornerofhiseye,hesawacarapproaching.Theturtlewasstillonlyhalfwayacrosstheroad.Alexknewhecouldn’tpickituptomoveitsafelytothegrass.Whatcouldhedo?注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150詞左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Thinkingfast,hestartedjumpingupanddownandwavingbothhandswildly.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Tomakethewarningsign,Alexhurriedbackhomeandstartedhisworkwithsomeleftoverwoodandpaint.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Thinkingfast,hestartedjumpingupanddownandwavingbothhandswildly.“Stop!Stop!”hecried.Thecarslowedtoastop,andthedriverstuckhisheadoutofthewindowwithapuzzledlook.Alexdartedforwardandpointedatthemovingturtle.“I’mjusttryingtosaveit.”heexplained.Withanunderstandingsmile,thedriverapplaudedhisefforts.Seeingthecarpullingaway,Alexwaslostindeepthoughts.“MaybeIcouldputupasigntowarnpeopletherewereturtlescrossingtheroad,”hesaidtohimself.Tomakethesign,Alexhurriedbackhomeandfoundsomeleftoverwoodandpaint.Hehammerednailsintothewoodtomakeaflatboard,afterwhichhepaintedavividpictureofaturtleinthemiddleandadded“Slow!TurtlesCrossing”atthebottom.HehadcompletedallhisworkwhenDadarrivedhome,whoofferedtocarrythesigntothespot.Togethertheyfixedthesignintothegroundbythesideoftheroad.Withtheirworkdone,theybothbreathedasighofreliefandheadedhomewithgreatsatisfaction.【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了Alex沿著鄉(xiāng)間小路騎自行車回家時(shí)，看到有一只嚙龜在路上慢慢移動(dòng)，他在書上讀到過，嚙龜?shù)囊Ш狭軓?qiáng)，甚至能咬掉人的手指，所以他不能把它撿起來安全地轉(zhuǎn)移，這時(shí)一輛汽車駛來，嚙龜還在半路上，他能怎么辦呢？【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“他快速地思考著，開始上躥下跳，瘋狂地?fù)]舞著雙手?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼慉lex示意司機(jī)停車，并想出立牌子提醒人們的辦法。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“為了制作標(biāo)牌，Alex匆忙趕回家，找到了一些剩余的木頭和油漆?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫Alex回家制作牌子并和爸爸一起釘在路邊的地上。2.續(xù)寫線索：司機(jī)停車——解釋原因——想出辦法——回家制作牌子——把牌子釘在路邊——滿足行為類①呼喊：cry/shout②稱贊：applaud/praise③陷入沉思：belostindeepthoughts/falldeepintothought情緒類①困惑：puzzled/confused②心滿意足：withgreatsatisfaction/feelverysatisfied【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1].Hehammerednailsintothewoodtomakeaflatboard,afterwhichhepaintedavividpictureofaturtleinthemiddleandadded“Slow!TurtlesCrossing”atthebottom.（由“介詞after+關(guān)系代詞which”引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）[高分句型2].HehadcompletedallhisworkwhenDadarrivedhome,whoofferedtocarrythesigntothespot.（由從屬連詞when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句和關(guān)系代詞who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）（2023·全國·高三專題練習(xí)）3閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Myhusband,Donald,tookourdaughterSarahoutforsomeicecreamthenightbeforedrivinghertocollege.Astheywerewalkingbacktothecar,theysawayoungmansittingonthegroundandgivinghispuppyacone.“Acutedog,”Donaldsaidastheywalkedby.“Afreedog,”theyoungmanreplied.Donaldaskedhimwhathemeantbythatandthemanexplained.HewasmovingawayfromVermontanddidnotthinkthetravelwouldbegoodforthedog.Hehadraisedherfromasmallpuppy.Themansaidshewasa6-month-oldcrossbetweentheDobermanandtheLabradornamedRhubarb.Donaldtookhisphonenumber.Therest,astheysay,ishistory.Rhubarbwasasweetdogandveryfriendlyandlovedeveryone.Wheneversomeonecametothehouse,shewasalwayshappy.ShealsogotalongwithWillie,anolderSamoyedwehad.Williewasnotwellanddiedaboutayearlater,but,fortunately,Rhubarb’scompanyhelpedhimkeepgoingforlongerthanthatifhehadbeenalone.ButtheinterestingthingaboutRhubarbwasthatsheneverbarked.Shewouldsometimesgetexcitedwhenshesawachipmunk(花栗鼠)andmakealittlecryingsound.Onehotnightwhenshewasabout4yearsold,wewenttobedwiththewindowsopenandthedoorsunlocked.Atabout3a.m.,IwokeuptothesoundofRhubarbbarking.IwokeDonaldandwegotoutofbed.Rhubarbwascomingtowardus.Weturnedonthelightsandnoticedthedoortothekitchenwasopen.Thenwesawthedoorleadingintothehousefromthegaragewasalsoopen.Wequicklylockedallthedoors,andwedidnotgetanysleepthatnight.Itwasdeepintothenight,sowedidn’tcallthepolice.Paragraph1:Thenextdaywenoticedtherewascigaretteashonthefloor.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Mypursewasrightnexttothedoor.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Paragraph1:Thenextdaywenoticedtherewascigaretteashonthefloor.Actually,itwasathiefwhoenteredourkitchenandgarage.Muchtoourrelief,thankstoRhubarb,thethiefstolenothing.Icalledthepolicetoreportthebreak-in.Ialsotoldthemnothinghadbeentaken,buttheysentapoliceofficerovertotalkwithusanyway.Infact,recentlymanylocalhomeshadbeenbrokeninontheweekend.Mostpeople’swalletsandpurseshadbeenstolen.Paragraph2:Mypursewasrightnexttothedoor.However,Rhubarbhadscaredthethiefawaybeforeheorshecouldstealit.Whenthepoliceofficerleft,hesaidweshouldrewardRhubarbwithabigsteakdinner.Rhubarblivedtobealmost12yearsold,butthatnightwastheonlytimeshebarkedinherentirelife.Fortunately,sheneversawtheneedtowarnusofanyotherdanger.WewereverythankfultoRhubarb.Welovedherlikeamemberofthefamily.【導(dǎo)語】本文以作者家里的一條狗為線索展開，講述了作者收養(yǎng)了一條名叫大黃的拉布拉多雜交犬。這條狗和家人相處愉快，在她大約4歲的時(shí)候，她成功嚇跑了小偷，保護(hù)了作者一家的財(cái)物的故事?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“第二天，我們注意到地板上有煙灰?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懽髡咭患野l(fā)現(xiàn)晚上有人闖入，隨后報(bào)警的過程。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我的錢包就在門邊。”可知，第二段可描寫作者一家發(fā)現(xiàn)并沒有丟失財(cái)物，更加感激狗狗大黃。2.續(xù)寫線索：發(fā)現(xiàn)有人闖入——報(bào)警——警員查看——財(cái)物沒有丟失——對(duì)大黃充滿感激行為類①進(jìn)入：enter/breakinto②打電話：call/ringup/phone③把……嚇跑：scareaway/scareoff情緒類①感激的：thankful/grateful②幸運(yùn)地：fortunately/luckily【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Actually,itwasathiefwhoenteredourkitchenandgarage.(運(yùn)用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)[高分句型2]Whenthepoliceofficerleft,hesaidweshouldrewardRhubarbwithabigsteakdinner.(運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句和省略連接詞的賓語從句)（2022秋·山東臨沂·高三統(tǒng)考開學(xué)考試）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文，續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。MalachiBradleydoesn’tshowsignsofbeingpanickedorworriedwhenhetalksabouthowhespent29hourslostinaroughareaoftheHighUintas.“Ididn’treallyfeelscared.Iwasjusttryingtogetbacktomyfamily,”the10-year-oldsaidTuesdayinaquiet,almostmatter-of-factwayjustonedayafterhewasrescued.Whenaskedwhathappenedtohim,hesimplyreplied:“Alotofthings.Ihikedalongway.”Malachiconfidentlybelieveshecouldhavesurvivedtwoorthreeweeksonhisown,dressedinonlyhisjeansandhisshoes,andwithnofood,tentorblankets.ButthelookintheeyesofMalachi’sfather,DannyBradley,toldadifferentstory,oneofmuchdeeperconcern,whenherealizedhissonwasmissing.“It’sahorriblefeeling,justknowinghowvasttheUintaMountainsare,”hesaid,“Iquicklyfelthowseverethesituationwas.”MalachirecalledhisgreatadventureTuesday.Heshowednosignsofgoingwithoutfoodforadayorsleepingbetweenrocksforanhouratnighttoblockthecoldwind.ButheadmittedwhenhegothometohisownbedonMondaynightthathewasasleepwithinaminuteofhisheadhittinghispillowandstayedtherefor12hours.HisadventurebeganSundaywhenMalachi,hisfather,twosiblings(兄弟姐妹),andafamilyfriendwereabouttoleavetheircampsitenearPaulLaketogohome.“Wewerejustgoingtocookupafishhecaughtandheadout,and,”DannyBradleypaused,“itendedupbeingalotlonger.”Malachisaidhewenttolookformushroomsabout10:30a.m.Hehadjustwalkedalongwaywhenheencounteredasnake.Hewassofrightenedthathedecidedtogetbackbuthecouldnolongerseethelakewherehiscampsitewassetup.Heknewhewaslost.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Malachididn’thavehiswhistlewithhimthathenormallycarriesincasehegetslostwhenexploring.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ButonMondayafternoon,Malachitookoffhisshoestotakeabreakinanopenareaandheardanotherhelicopternearby.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Malachididn’thavehiswhistlewithhimthathenormallycarriesincasehegetslostwhenexploring.Hedidn’tknowwhattodobuttowalkalongtheroadandcallouthisfamilieswhilewalking.However,nobodyansweredhim.Notknowinghowlonghehadwalkedfor,hesuddenlyheardahelicopternearby.Hebegantoshoutasloudlyashecouldsothathecouldbeheard.Unfortunately,thehelicopterfliedawayforitwastoodarktoseehim.Feelingalittlebitdepressed,hetriedhisbesttofollowthehelicopterthoughhelostitveryquickly.NotuntilthesunrosedidMalachirealizethathehadwalkedforthewholenight,hungry,tiredandcold.ButonMondayafternoon,Malachitookoffhisshoestotakeabreakinanopenareaandheardanotherhelicopternearby.Hetriedtoyellforhelpagainwithhisclotheswavinginhishand.Tohisdisappointment,thehelicopterbegantoflyawaytoo.Hethoughthewasabouttostayhereforanothernightwhenthehelicopterturnedback.【導(dǎo)語】這是一篇記敘文。文章以倒敘的手法講述了主人公Malachi在山上走丟的故事。10歲的Malachi在走失了29個(gè)小時(shí)后終于被找到了，他云淡風(fēng)輕的講述了自己走丟這段時(shí)間的經(jīng)歷，但從他父親的反應(yīng)來看，事情遠(yuǎn)非如此簡(jiǎn)單。Malachi在周日上午和家人一起露營的時(shí)候不小心走失，一直到周二才被找到?；貞浧鹱约哼@兩天的經(jīng)歷，Malachi雖然沒有表現(xiàn)得很驚慌，但回到家后卻倒頭就睡，并且一睡就睡了12個(gè)小時(shí)?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：由第一段首句內(nèi)容“Malachi沒有帶他的哨子，他通常會(huì)帶著哨子以防在探險(xiǎn)時(shí)迷路。”可知，第一段可描寫Malachi走失后的經(jīng)歷及心里想法。由第二段首句內(nèi)容“但在周一下午，Malachi脫下鞋子，在一個(gè)開闊的地方休息，聽到附近有另一架直升機(jī)?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫Malachi遇到直升機(jī)后的反應(yīng)。2.續(xù)寫線索：走失但沒帶哨子——不知所措只能大喊家人的名字——遇到一架直升機(jī)但未被救——第二天下午再次遇到直升機(jī)——有幸被救行為類①呼救：shoutforhelp/callforhelp/cryforhelp②返回：turnback/comeback/flyback情緒類①感到有點(diǎn)沮喪：feelalittlebitdepressed/feelalittlebitfrustrated②令某人失望：toone’sdisappointment/toone’sdepression【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】NotuntilthesunrosedidMalachirealizethathehadwalkedforthewholenight,hungry,tiredandcold.(運(yùn)用了部分倒裝和that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)【高分句型2】Hebegantoshoutasloudlyashecouldsothathecouldbeheard.(運(yùn)用了sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句)（2022春·江蘇鹽城·高三江蘇省阜寧中學(xué)?？计谥校╅喿x下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。OneSaturdayafternoon,IwaswatchingTVinthelivingroomwithmygrandpawhenablindingflashoflightningflashedacrossthesky,followedbyadeafeningsound,andthepicturesonTVdisappearedwiththatsound.BeforeIrealizedwhathadhappened,agray-whiteshadowrushedinthroughtheopenwindowandflewovermyhead.Bang!Ithitthewallandslidofftothefloor.Shakingwithfear,Iapproacheditcautiouslyandsawthatitwasapigeon.Itlookedatmeinfear,tryingtoopenitswingsandstrugglingitsfeet,butapparentlypowerless.SoIcalledmygrandpaandimmediatelysetouttogiveitahelpinghand.Takingitinmyhands,Ifeltafewdropsofwarmthonmyhands.Itwasblood!Igentlyspreaditswingsandtherewereafewredfeathersinside.“Don’tworry.We’llgetitoutalive,”Grandpasaidtome.Thenhegotthefirst-aidkit.Withsomecotton,wedriedtheblood,cleanedthewoundandthenputitunderahairdryertodry.Allwentsmoothly,forthepigeonhadnostrengthlefttoresist.Therehappenedtobeanemptybirdcageathome,soIputitingentlyandaddedalittlewaterandsomegrains.Forthenextfewdays,themomentIgothomefromschool,Iwouldruntofeedthepigeon.AndGrandpahelpedalot,tidyingupthecagedaily.Littlebylittle,itsstrengthreturned.Oneevening,IfeditwiththebiscuitIwaseating.Itenjoyedit!Oneweeklater,itswoundalmosthealed(痊愈);itsfeathersgrewanditbecamebrave.WheneverIsatatthetableeatingbiscuits,itlookedupatme,cooing(咕咕地叫)constantly.Tomyjoy,Icouldalsoreachintothecagetotouchi