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CompositionZhundongMiddleSchoolTonyChen Althoughnobodywishestoexperiencefailure,failureplayanimportantroleonthewaytosuccess.Sometime,failurecanbenefitusalot.WhenIfailedmyEnglishexamthreeyearsbefore,Ifeltupsetatfirst,butthenImadeupmymindtoworkevenhard.ThatfailuremotivatedmeputmoretimeandenergyintolearningEnglish.AfterfindoutmyproblemwasalackofvocabularyandIwaspoorlyingrammar,Ichangedmylearningmethods.Ilearntalotfrompastmistake.FinallyImadeagreatprogressinEnglish.Failurereallyhelpedyoutogetclosertosuccess.①名詞②動詞③形容詞副詞④代詞⑤介詞⑥冠詞⑦連詞⑧非謂語動詞正確20051401101112006112210201短文改錯考查點2010/2009高考英語短文改錯分析冠詞

1加詞非謂語2改詞時態(tài)語態(tài)2改詞/去詞名詞數1改詞介詞/搭配

1改詞副詞/形容詞1改詞代詞1改詞連詞1改詞11111122 Althoughnobodywishestoexperiencefailure,failureplayanimportantroleonthewaytosuccess.Sometime,failurecanbenefitusalot.WhenIfailedmyEnglishexamthreeyearsbefore,Ifeltupsetatfirst,butthenImadeupmymindtoworkevenhard.ThatfailuremotivatedmeputmoretimeandenergyintolearningEnglish.AfterfindoutmyproblemwasalackofvocabularyandIwaspoorlyingrammar,Ichangedmylearningmethods.Ilearntalotfrompastmistake.FinallyImadeagreatprogressinEnglish.Failurereallyhelpedyoutogetclosertosuccess. Althoughnobodywishestoexperiencefailure,failureplaysanimportantroleonthewaytosuccess.Sometimes,failurecanbenefitusalot.WhenIfailedmyEnglishexamthreeyearsago,Ifeltupsetatfirst,butthenImadeupmymindtoworkevenharder.ThatfailuremotivatedmetoputmoretimeandenergyintolearningEnglish.AfterfindingoutmyproblemwasalackofvocabularyandIwaspooringrammar,Ichangedmylearningmethods.Ilearntalotfrompastmistakes.FinallyImadeagreatprogressinEnglish.Failurereallyhelpedmetogetclosertosuccess.playsometimebeforehardmotivatedmeputfindpoorlymistakemadeagreatprogressyouplayssometimesagohardermotivatedmetoputfindingpoormistakesmadegreatprogressme時態(tài)語態(tài)主謂一致連接詞介詞副詞形容詞介詞非謂語動詞副詞形容詞名詞單復數冠詞代詞自治區(qū)二模試卷冠詞

1改詞非謂語1加詞時態(tài)語態(tài)1減詞名詞數1介詞/搭配

2副詞/形容詞2代詞1連詞1811

Althoughmostpeoplehaveafamily,intheirdarkestmomentsmanywillturntonobodytheyconsider“atruefriend”forsupportandadvice.Butwhatmakesomeone“atruefriend”,ratherthanjustagoodfriend? Atruefriendwillalwaystryharderhelp.Theywillbesensitivetotheirfeelingsandwillnotcriticizeyou.Theywillofferhelpwithoutbeingaskingandwillneverexpectanythinginreturn. Atruefriendwillputasidewhichevertheyaredoingtocomeandseeyouifyouareinseriouslytrouble.Theywilloffertheirsupportinyourneed,asifeveryoneelseintheworldisagainstyou.Ifyoudon’thavemanyfriends,butyouhaveonetruefriend,andyouareverylucky.Butremember,ifyouhaveatruefriend,youhavetobehistruefriendtoo.Truefriendgiveaswellastake.

Althoughmostpeoplehaveafamily,intheirdarkestmomentsmanywillturntosomebodytheyconsider“atruefriend”forsupportandadvice.Butwhatmakessomeone“atruefriend”,ratherthanjustagoodfriend? Atruefriendwillalwaystryhardertohelp.Theywillbesensitivetoyourfeelingsandwillnotcriticizeyou.Theywillofferhelpwithoutbeingaskedandwillneverexpectanythinginreturn. Atruefriendwillputasidewhatevertheyaredoingtocomeandseeyouifyouareinserioustrouble.Theywilloffertheirsupportinyourneed,evenifeveryoneelseintheworldisagainstyou.Ifyoudon’thavemanyfriends,butyouhaveonetruefriend,andyouareverylucky.Butremember,ifyouhaveatruefriend,youhavetobehistruefriendtoo.Truefriendsgiveaswellastake.烏魯木齊市三模試卷冠詞

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0副詞/形容詞1代詞2連詞3811DearSir,IamLiHua.Iambornin1992andIamgoingtograduateinseniorhighschool.Iamwillingtobeavolunteerinyourcharityaftergraduate. Iamout-goingandwarm-heartedboy.Ihavemanyhobby.Icanalsodogoodincommunicatingwithother. ThereasonwhythatIwanttobeavolunteeristhatIcanpracticemyselffromtheworkandIlovehelpothers.Thisjobcangivehimachancetomakemydreamscometrue.Ineedsuchexperience. bestwishes, LiHuaDearSir,IamLiHua.Iwasbornin1992andIamgoingtograduatefromseniorhighschool.Iamwillingtobeavolunteerinyourcharityaftergraduating. Iamanout-goingandwarm-heartedboy.Ihavemanyhobbies.Icanalsodowellincommunicatingwithothers. ThereasonwhyIwanttobeavolunteeristhatIcanpracticemyselffromtheworkandIlovehelpingothers.Thisjobcangivemeachancetomakemydreamcometrue.Ineedsuchexperience. bestwishes, LiHua短文改錯小練冠詞

1改詞非謂語2加詞時態(tài)語態(tài)1減詞名詞數2介詞/搭配

1副詞/形容詞1代詞2連詞1911較好拿到的分數有：名詞單復數/形容詞副詞/冠詞/代詞做題時應注意：敘事性文章首抓全文時態(tài)，以免理解有誤；論述性文章首抓名詞形容詞冠詞代詞錯誤小結Composition假如你是李華，即將高中畢業(yè)，打算畢業(yè)后利用假期時間去一家慈善機構做一名義工?，F根據以下內容寫一封信介紹你自己，希望成為一名志愿者。1.1992年出生2.熱情開朗，興趣廣泛，擅長溝通，語言表達能力強3.請陳述你想成為志愿者的理由DearSir,IamLiHua.Iwasbornin1992andIamgoingtograduatefromseniorhighschool.Iamwillingtobeavolunteerinyourcharityaftergraduating. Iamanout-goingandwarm-heartedboy.Ihavemanyhobbies.Icanalsodowellincommunicatingwithothers.

ThereasonwhyIwanttobeavolunteeristhatIcanpracticemyselffromtheworkandIlovehelpingothers.Thisjobcangivemeachancetomakemydreamcometrue.Ineedsuchexperience. bestwishes, LiHua17小練習當前不少文學作品被改編成電影。有人選擇看電影，有人則喜歡讀原著。請你以“Filmorbook,whichdoyouprefer?”為題，按照下列要點寫一篇英語短文：1、看電影：省時、有趣、易懂2、讀原著：細節(jié)更多、語言優(yōu)美3、我的看法及理由注意：1、詞數：100-120文章題目和開頭已給出（不計入詞數）。2、參考詞匯：originalwork或bookintheoriginal（原著）關于……人們有不同的觀點。一些人認為……

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