2019中考英語(yǔ)作文突破指導(dǎo)課件

中考書面表達(dá)突破新鄉(xiāng)市一中中考書面表達(dá)突破新鄉(xiāng)市一中11聽力<152單項(xiàng)-83完形104閱讀-255詞語(yǔ)<76補(bǔ)全-57作文-20所剩5-10分鐘，檢查：分值高到低、難到易。中考英語(yǔ)大致時(shí)間分配——建議1聽力<15中考英語(yǔ)大致時(shí)間分配——建議2一、題型特點(diǎn)：書面表達(dá)是對(duì)學(xué)生的語(yǔ)言組織能力、行文表達(dá)能力、基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)、語(yǔ)法、詞匯等綜合駕馭能力的考查。中考書面表達(dá)貼近生活，貼近時(shí)代，給同學(xué)們一更多的表達(dá)空間。作文題目由限制性題目到半開放性題目，提示性詞語(yǔ)越來(lái)越少，而給同學(xué)們的空間越來(lái)越大：06年Non-smokingDay;07年“校園節(jié)約從我做起”;到09年的“APersonIwillneverforget”，10年_____isfun一、題型特點(diǎn)：3二、考查形式（體裁）：中考英語(yǔ)考查形式多樣：看圖（表）寫作、書信、通知、日記、記人物等。體裁包括：記敘文、說(shuō)明文和應(yīng)用文；二、考查形式（體裁）：4三、中考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：作文一律按檔給分，與錯(cuò)誤個(gè)數(shù)無(wú)直接關(guān)系。影響作文分?jǐn)?shù)的因素：1題目要求、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；2句子準(zhǔn)確、通順；3層次結(jié)構(gòu)清晰；4拼寫、語(yǔ)法等錯(cuò)誤；5卷面整潔度；2010年河南中考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：三、中考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：影響作文分?jǐn)?shù)的因素：2010年河南中考評(píng)分5四、做題步驟：1審題：審清作文體裁（類型）時(shí)態(tài)、人稱等細(xì)節(jié)；2列提綱（文章結(jié)構(gòu)框架）：分幾段，以及每段大體內(nèi)容；3寫作：在提綱的基礎(chǔ)上補(bǔ)充要點(diǎn)；4復(fù)查：2遍——1遍看查拼寫、語(yǔ)法、標(biāo)點(diǎn)等問(wèn)題；2遍不出聲讀查，靠語(yǔ)感檢查語(yǔ)句是否通順、連貫等；5謄抄：不允許做任何的更改。*總之做到三審：體裁、時(shí)態(tài)、人稱；三思：詞匯—>短語(yǔ)—>句式；三查：要點(diǎn)、拼寫和語(yǔ)法、連貫。四、做題步驟：6五、作文一般框架：文章分3段：（1）綜述：概括性強(qiáng)，最多2句話引入主題；（2）正文——主要內(nèi)容：層次性強(qiáng)，一定要有過(guò)渡型連接詞。最多展開3個(gè)方面，每個(gè)方面最多2句話；（3）結(jié)尾：緊扣主題，2句話內(nèi)結(jié)束，盡量升華。五、作文一般框架：7滿分作文標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：第一檔：（15~13分）完全符合題目要求，觀點(diǎn)正確,要點(diǎn)齊全，立意高。句式多樣，詞匯豐富。語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)意連貫，表達(dá)清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，具有邏輯性。卷面書寫干凈，整潔，無(wú)涂抹，字跡大小適中，疏密合適，書寫美觀。標(biāo)點(diǎn)，大小寫正確。最好能有一兩個(gè)亮點(diǎn)句。（主從，定從，表從，諺語(yǔ)）滿分作文標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：第一檔：（15~13分）8六、如何列提綱：例1：利弊型作文——Microblog的利與弊Para1:（綜述）withthedevelopmentofinternet…moreandmorepopular…Para2:（利）First,convenient,anywhere,anytime;

Second,share…with…;

Last,expressviewsfree,money-free…Para3:（弊）However,onecoinhastwofaces.Ontheonehand,awasteoftime——affectstudy;

Ontheotherhand,notsafe——stolen,hurtfeelingsPara4:（個(gè)人）Asastudent,makegooduseofit.六、如何列提綱：9七、如何列提綱：例2：計(jì)劃安排型作文——談假期安排Para1:（綜述）graduatefrom…,holidayiscoming,planforthisholidayPara2:（正文）Firstly,studycomesfirst.makepreparationsforthefirstsenioryear;

Secondly,visittouristattractions;

Lastbutnotleast,dosportstobuildupmybody.Para3:IamsureI’llhaveameaningfulholiday.(I’mlookingforwardtothecomingholiday.)(Ican’twaittoenjoymysummervocation.)七、如何列提綱：10八、常見的作文類型模板：1書信Dear...,

I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter…------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Bestwishes! Yours,

Lucy

八、常見的作文類型模板：1書信Dear...,11a書信開頭常用語(yǔ)

Iamverygladtoreceiveyourletter(hearformyou).Hello,Jane.Iseverythinggoing(on)well?…/Howiseverythinggoing(on)?

I’mwritingtoyouforsomeadviceonhowto…

I’mwritingtoaskifyoucan...

Howtimeflies!Ithasbeenmonths/yearssincewelastmet.

Thankyouforinvitingmeto….a書信開頭常用語(yǔ)Iamverygladtore12b書信結(jié)尾常用語(yǔ)

Bestwishes(to/foryou).Wishyougoodluck.(Iam)lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.b書信結(jié)尾常用語(yǔ)Bestwishes(to/for13二、口頭通知常見寫作模板：呼語(yǔ)及開場(chǎng)白部分：Ladiesandgentlemen,MayIhaveyourattention,please?Ihaveanannouncementtomake.正文部分：Alltheteachersandstudentsarerequiredtoattendit.Pleasetakeyournotebooksandmakenotes.Pleaselistencarefullyandwe’llhaveadiscussioningroups.Pleasecomeontimeanddon’tbelate.結(jié)束語(yǔ)部分：Pleasecomeandjoininit.Everybodyiswelcometoattendit.Ihopeyou’llhaveanicetimehere.That’sall.Thankyou.二、口頭通知常見寫作模板：14八、常見的作文類型提綱模板：2圖表、數(shù)字比例型（提出討論或調(diào)查的事實(shí)）Lastweek,ourclasshadaclassmeetingon(howto)…Herearetheresults.（表達(dá)出不同看法或觀點(diǎn)）Moststudentsthink…While…20%ofthemchooseto….Another15believe…Therearealsosome…sayingthat…（表達(dá)個(gè)人看法）

Asastudent,Iagreeto…八、常見的作文類型提綱模板：2圖表、數(shù)字比例型（提出討論或153說(shuō)明利弊型Nowadays…isbecomingmoreandmorepopular.Ithasmanyadvantages.First,優(yōu)點(diǎn)1…Besides,優(yōu)點(diǎn)2…

However,everycoinhastwosides.Italsobringsusbadinfluences.Ontheonehand,缺點(diǎn)1…Ontheotherhand,缺點(diǎn)2…

Inmyopinion,個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)…3說(shuō)明利弊型Nowadays…isbec164不同觀點(diǎn)型

Wemadeasurveyaboutwhetherweshould…提出矛盾問(wèn)題.Differentpeopleholddifferentideas.

Somebelieve…正方觀點(diǎn).First,原因1…Besides,原因2…

Whileothersdon’tagree.Theythink…反方觀點(diǎn).Ontheonehand,原因1…Ontheotherhand,原因2…

Asforme,個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)…4不同觀點(diǎn)型Wemadeasurvey175解決問(wèn)題型

Recently,the…problemhasbeenmoreandmoreserious.…shoulddosomethingtosolveit.

Firstly,方法1…Secondly,方法2…Finally,方法3…

Iamsureifeveryonecanmakeacontributionto…,the…willbecomebetterandbetter.5解決問(wèn)題型Recently,the…prob18九、常用過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)敘事文常用的句子間連接詞：Atfirst;atlast;intheend…then/next/afterthat…when/while/assoonas/not…until…atthesametime;attimes;onceinawhile;sothatToone’ssurprise/joyLuckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately…inaword/inall九、常用過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)19議論文常用連接詞 表示并列：either…or;neither…nor;both…and;notonly…butalso;表示遞進(jìn)的：besides;what’smore;what’sworse;(moreover);表示原因的：because;for…;becauseof…;thanksto…;(forthereasonthat…);表示結(jié)果的：so;asaresult;so…that…;therefore;表示目的的：sothat…;inorderthat…;(inorder)to…;for…;表示對(duì)比的：while;ontheonehand+ontheotherhand;Eachcoinhastwosides.;prefer…to…;wouldratherdo…thando…;議論文常用連接詞 20議論文常用連接詞 表示轉(zhuǎn)折的：however;but;表示舉例的：forexample;forinstance;suchas…;like…;thatistosay…表示總結(jié)的：inall/short;inaword;inbrief/total;lastbutnotleast;last;表示利弊的：begood/badforsb.;beharmfultosb.;doharmtosb.;…h(huán)avegreat/muchinfluenceonsb.;sth.benefitsb.;sbbenefitfromsth.;affect;haveaneffectonsb.;表示喜愛的：love/like/enjoy…;befondof…;beinterestedin…;showgreatinterestin…;loseoneselfin…;putone’sheartinto…;begoodat;bepoorat;beweakin;議論文常用連接詞 21議論文常用連接詞 表達(dá)個(gè)人想法的：Ithink/believe…;(as)forme;inmyopinion/view;asastudent;fromthebottomofmyheart;personally;其他：ingeneral;generallyspeaking;tobeshort;tobehonest;totellthetruth;asweknow;makeupone’smindtodo;inaway;

議論文常用連接詞 22議論文常用連接詞 表達(dá)個(gè)人想法的：Ithink/believe…;(as)forme;inmyopinion/view;asastudent;fromthebottomofmyheart;personally;其他：ingeneral;generallyspeaking;tobeshort;tobehonest;totellthetruth;asweknow;makeupone’smindtodo;inaway;

議論文常用連接詞 23十、作文萬(wàn)能句式Iwillworkhardtomakemydreamcometrue.Ihopeyourdreamwillcometrueoneday.Ittakessb.+時(shí)間+todo…Sb.spend（某種人稱時(shí)態(tài)）+時(shí)間/錢+onsth./(in)doingsth.It’simportant/necessary/useful/useless/common…(forsb.)tov…It’snice/kindofsb.tov..It’stimeforsb.todosth.It’sawasteoftimeto…It’s…years/dayssincesb.+vedIt’sgreatfuntodo=sb.havegreatfundoingIt’sapitythat…It’sanhonorto… 十、作文萬(wàn)能句式24十、作文萬(wàn)能句式I’m/We’renotallowedto…I’mafraidofmakingmistakes…Therebe…doing…Greatchangeshavetakenplacein…sthis/arewellworthv-ing.Itseems/seemedthat…Itseems(im)possibletov…Itissaidthat…Asthesayinggoes,……and….aredifferentinmanyways.too+adj./adv.todoTherearemanydifferencesbetween…and… 十、作文萬(wàn)能句式25十、作文萬(wàn)能句式Ihavemadeupmymindto…Iamsurethat…Iamnotsurewhether/if…Iwouldrather….than…Itdoesn’tmatterif…Thankyouforv-ing.Ifeveryonecanmakeacontributiontotheearth/nature/society,ourlifewillbebetterandbetter. 十、作文萬(wàn)能句式26十一、作文萬(wàn)能短語(yǔ)have/lookforachancetododooutdooractivitiesbe/getusedto(doing)sth.learn…from…beproudof/takepridein…playanimportant/activepart/rolein…agreewithsb.todosth.withthehelpofsb.=withone’shelp(反義：withoutone’shelp)be/getreadytodosth.=be/getreadyforsth.payattentionto…takegoodcareof…makefriendswith…geton/alongwellwith…十一、作文萬(wàn)能短語(yǔ)27十一、作文萬(wàn)能短語(yǔ)wishyousuccessful/successastimegoesby…graduatefrom…lookingbacktothepastthreeyears,…（用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)）

passthe(final)examsticktodoingkeepyoumindonyourgoalsmakeupone’smindtodosth.(onsth.)makeadecisiontodoworkhardatEnglishonceinawhile/attimes/nowandthenfromthenon十一、作文萬(wàn)能短語(yǔ)28十一、作文萬(wàn)能短語(yǔ)inthefuture（將來(lái)）/infuture（從今以后）increaseourknowledge/enlargeourvocabularyinfact/asamatteroffactinthebeginning/atfirstfeellikegivinguphavetrouble/difficultyin(doing)sth. have(no)timetodohaveexperiencein(doing)sth.followone’sadvice/suggestionsmastersomebasic…skillsberequiredtodoasksb.forhelpcan’twaittodo十一、作文萬(wàn)能短語(yǔ)29十一、作文萬(wàn)能短語(yǔ)besupposedtodoencouragesb.tododeal/dowith…workout/solvetheproblemsallsorts/kindsof…athomeandabroadoneof…befullof…learnsth.byoneselfcomeupwithgoodideasbesurprisedatsth.(todosth.)inordertokeephealthy/fitagoodwaytov…十一、作文萬(wàn)能短語(yǔ)30十一、作文萬(wàn)能短語(yǔ)keep(on)tryingworryabout…/beworriedabout…inone’sspare/freetimebekind/friendlytobestrictwithhelpotherssaythankyouto…h(huán)avefun/enjoyoneself/haveagoodtimeplentyof+C/Uworryabout/beworriedaboutasksb.forhelp/turntosb.forhelp/callsb.forhelpbepopularwith…sharesth.withsb.knowlittle/muchabout…十一、作文萬(wàn)能短語(yǔ)31十一、作文萬(wàn)能短語(yǔ)do/tryone’sbesttov…be/feelsorryfor…h(huán)elpsb.(to)dosth./withsth.in/duringclassbefore/afterclassteachsb.todosth.十一、作文萬(wàn)能短語(yǔ)32*詞數(shù)80左右，不少于70詞，不多于 100詞。不能使用其他顏色筆、修正液等可被 視為標(biāo)記的工具；絕對(duì)不能透露真 實(shí)信息。*33四、Languageerrorsinwriting

糾錯(cuò)四、Languageerrorsinwriting

糾34１.be多余或缺少I’menjoystudyingEnglish.

Itbadforourhealth.

IenjoystudyingEnglish.Itisbadforourhealth.１.be多余或缺少I’menjoystudying352.時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤Atthattime,theyalwayshelpmewithmyEnglish.

IhadenjoyedstudyingEnglishsinceImeethim.

Atthattime,theyalwayshelpedmewithmyEnglish.IhaveenjoyedstudyingEnglishsinceImethim.2.時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤Atthattime,theyalwa36Myfavoritesportisrun.

Ithinkdosomesportsisveryimportantforus.

Myfavoritesportisrunning.Ithinkdoingsomesportsisveryimportantforus.Myfavoritesportisrun.Myfa373.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤Ilikedosports.IwishtakepartintheOlympicGameswhenIgrowup.

IwishtotakepartintheOlympicGameswhenIgrowup.Ilikedoingsports.3.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤Ilikedosports.Iw384.副詞位置錯(cuò)誤Iverythankher.

Iverylikefootball.

Ithankherverymuch.Ilikefootballverymuch.4.副詞位置錯(cuò)誤Iverythankher.Ith395.代詞錯(cuò)誤Theyaregoodforusbody.

Ihopemealsobecomeabasketballplayer.

They

are

goodforourbody.IhopeIalsobecomeabasketballplayer.5.代詞錯(cuò)誤Theyaregoodforusbo406.缺介詞或介詞錯(cuò)誤IthankhimverymuchhelpmestudyEnglish.

Heevencametomyhomeforhelpme.

IthankhimverymuchforhelpingmestudyEnglish.Heevencametomyhometohelpme.6.缺介詞或介詞錯(cuò)誤Ithankhimverymu41Ilikeitbecauseit’sexcitingandgoodformyhealthy.IhaveevergivedupEnglish.(單詞錯(cuò)誤)(動(dòng)詞P.P.錯(cuò)誤)Ilikeitbecauseit’sexcitingandgoodformyhealth.IhaveevergivenupEnglish.7.其他錯(cuò)誤Ilikeitbecauseit’sexcitin42It’sgoodformyhealth.Notonlymakemebrave,butalsomakemebecometaller.Ifyouwanttokeepfit,itimportantforyoutotakeanhourtosportseveryday.It’sgoodformyhealth.Itnotonlymakesmebrave,butalsomakesmebecometaller.Ifyouwanttokeepfit,itisimportantforyoutospendanhouronsportseveryday.（缺主語(yǔ)）（句型錯(cuò)誤）It’sgoodformyhealth.Noto43Let’spractise.Let’spractise.44Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.1.Iclimedslowlyandwasverytried.2.IthinkitisanunforgetablethingbecauseIhelpedsb.climbedtiredunforgettablesomebody3.Onafridayafternoon,Iwentshoppingwithmymother.Spelling（拼寫）（others)Friday4.Ican’tforgetthatday.Becauseitisthelasttimewecancelebrateherbirthdaytogether.Ican’tforgetthatdaybecause5.Whatacrazydayitwas,Iwillrememberitforever.!Capitalletter（大小寫）Punctuation（標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)）Findoutthemistakesinthef456.Iwillrememberedthatdayforever.remember7.Ithoughtitishungry.was8.Mygrandmotheralwaystidyupmyroom.tidies9.Howunforgettablethisthingsis!thingFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Tense（時(shí)態(tài)）Verbagreement(主謂一致)Wordform(詞形）6.Iwillrememberedthatday4610.Inmyfather’shelp,Ibecamemorepatientthanbefore.Withmyfather’shelp,11.Tocutalongstorytoshort,….Tocutalongstoryshort,…12.IwenttoShihuabyabuswithmymother.bybus13.Mymothertoldmedon’tgiveitup.toldmenottogiveitupFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Phrases(短語(yǔ)和固定搭配）14.Isawanoldladylayinthemiddleoftheroad.sawanoldladylying…10.Inmyfather’shelp,Ibec4716.Weplayedsnowinfrontofhouse.playedwith15.Isatonaseat,listeningmusic.listeningto17.Thenaladyaskedwhohadbrokenherwindow.Weallwereafraid.wereallFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Missingwords（漏詞）18.Weshoulddothingsbyourownhands.withthehouse19.Itistiredwork.tiringWords’order（詞序）Usingwrongword（選詞錯(cuò)誤）16.Weplayedsnowinfrontof4822.Heencouragedmetolookforthewatchbyheart.carefully21.OneSundaymorning,IwenttoShihuabybusandsatbesidemewasagirl.IwenttoShihuaonabusandtherewasagirlsittingbesideme.Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.ChineseEnglish（中式英語(yǔ)）Inmylife,manythingshappened.20.Inmylifehavemanythingshappened.22.Heencouragedmetolookf49Duringthewinterholidays,Ithappenedalotofthings.Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermother.Whenmyfriendsandmeshoppinginashoppingmall,wesawasmallgirlcriedinacorner.Weaskedwhathappenedonher.Shesaidshecuond’tfoundhermother.Sowestartedtohelptshetofoundhermother.Luckily,wefoundhermother,theywereveryhappyandwewerehappy,too.IthinkitwasthemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysbecauseIfoundIalsocanhelpothers.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Checkandcorrectthisarticle.alotofthingshappened.helpingIwereshoppingcryinghappenedtocouldn’tfindhelpherfind.Theycouldalso,soDuringthewinterholiday501.是否有大小寫錯(cuò)誤(capitallettersorlowercaseletters)是否有拼寫錯(cuò)誤(spellingmistakes)是否有標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤(punctuationmistakes)4.是否有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤(grammarmistakes)主謂是否一致動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)的使用是否正確詞組的搭配是否合乎習(xí)慣

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6、改——查錯(cuò)改錯(cuò)7、抄——修改無(wú)誤后，認(rèn)真規(guī)范地謄寫在規(guī)定的地方。復(fù)寫Rewriting：6、改——查錯(cuò)改錯(cuò)7、抄——修改無(wú)誤60WritingMyEnglishTeacherMissSunisourEnglishteacher.Sheis25yearsold.Sheis1.65meterstall.①She

isveryfashionable.②Shelovesherstudents.Shecaresaboutus.③Herlessonsareinterestingandlively;④MissSungetsonwellwithus.Sheisverypopular.Weallloveherandherteaching!Writing612019中考英語(yǔ)作文突破指導(dǎo)ppt課件62homeworkhomework63請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，用英文寫一篇簡(jiǎn)要介紹四川汶川大地震中舍己救人英雄譚千秋老師的短文。字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1． 譚老師個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)況：1957年生于湖南；大學(xué)畢業(yè)后，2． 在四川德陽(yáng)一所中學(xué)教書；外表嚴(yán)肅，3． 對(duì)學(xué)生要求嚴(yán)格，4． 深愛學(xué)生。5． 譚老師英雄事跡：汶川地震時(shí)，他在上課。教學(xué)樓坍塌時(shí)刻，用身體保護(hù)4名學(xué)生英勇獻(xiàn)身，4名學(xué)生得救。6． 你的感受及愿望。參考詞語(yǔ)：1.graduatefromauniversity,大學(xué)畢業(yè)2.bestrictwith…,對(duì)……嚴(yán)格3.theWenchuanearthquake,汶川地震4.collapse,坍塌5.deeds,事跡請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，用英文寫一篇簡(jiǎn)要介紹四川汶川大地震中舍己救人64三段式：首段：正文：結(jié)尾：譚老師的個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)介譚老師的英雄事跡作者的感受和愿望三段式：譚老師的個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)介譚老師的英雄事跡作者的感受和愿望65列出7個(gè)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

1）外表嚴(yán)肅；2）對(duì)學(xué)生要求嚴(yán)格；3）深愛學(xué)生；4）地震時(shí)在上課；5）教學(xué)樓坍塌時(shí)，用身體保護(hù)4名學(xué)生英勇獻(xiàn)身；6）感受；7）愿望。Helooksserious.He’sstrictwithhisstudents.Heloveshisstudentsdeeply.Hewasgivinglessonsatthatmoment.Whentheteachingbui