廣東高考英語(yǔ)作文高分策略課件

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英語(yǔ)的句子按結(jié)構(gòu)分為簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句和復(fù)合句。簡(jiǎn)單句有五個(gè)基本句型：1.主語(yǔ)+系動(dòng)詞+表語(yǔ)2.主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)（不及物動(dòng)詞）（+狀語(yǔ)）3.主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)（及物動(dòng)詞）+賓語(yǔ)4.主語(yǔ)+及物動(dòng)詞+間接賓語(yǔ)+直接賓語(yǔ)5.主語(yǔ)+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)并列句是兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句通過(guò)and,or,but,so等連接在一起的句子。復(fù)合句是含有一個(gè)或一個(gè)以上的從句的句子。從句有名詞性從句（主語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句、表語(yǔ)從句及同位語(yǔ)從句）、定語(yǔ)從句和狀語(yǔ)從句。英語(yǔ)的句子按結(jié)構(gòu)分為簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句和復(fù)合句。簡(jiǎn)單句有五個(gè)基3

以上兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句，我們?cè)鯓硬拍芎喜⒊梢粋€(gè)高級(jí)的句子呢？最重要的是，我們要理解句子間的邏輯關(guān)系，然后用并列句和復(fù)合句表達(dá)出來(lái)。請(qǐng)看下面兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句：1.他考試不及格。Hedidn’tpasstheexam.(主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ))Hefailedintheexam.(主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+狀語(yǔ)）2.他的家人很失望。Hisfamilyweredisappointed.（主語(yǔ)+系動(dòng)詞+表語(yǔ)）以上兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句，我們?cè)鯓硬拍芎喜⒊梢粋€(gè)高級(jí)的句子呢？最重要4※因?yàn)樗荚嚥患案?，所以他的家人很失望?.Hisfamilyweredisappointedbecausehehadn’tpassedtheexam.(含_____從句的復(fù)合句)2.As/Becausehehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.(含______從句的復(fù)合句)3.Hedidn’tpasstheexam,sohisfamilyweredisappointed.（______句）4.Hisfamilyweredisappointedthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.（that引導(dǎo)______從句的復(fù)合句，主要放在表示情感意義的形容詞之后，如：sorry，，glad,happy,delighted,pleased等）原因狀語(yǔ)原因狀語(yǔ)并列原因狀語(yǔ)..※因?yàn)樗荚嚥患案瘢运募胰撕苁?.Hisfami5※因?yàn)樗荚嚥患案?，所以他的家人很失望?.Thathisfamilyweredisappointedwasbecausehehadn’tpassedtheexam.（含______________的復(fù)合句）6.Thereasonwhyhisfamilyweredisappointedwasthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.(含_________________的復(fù)合句)主語(yǔ)從句及表語(yǔ)從句定語(yǔ)從句及表語(yǔ)從句※因?yàn)樗荚嚥患案瘢运募胰撕苁?.Thathis6※他考試不及格使得他的家人很失望。7.Thathehadn’tpassedtheexammadehisfamilydisappointed.(含_________的復(fù)合句)8.Itmadehisfamilydisappointedthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.(含_______的復(fù)合句，it是形式主語(yǔ))9.Itwasthathehadn’tpassedtheexamthatmadehisfamilydisappointed.(_____句型，強(qiáng)調(diào)主語(yǔ)從句)主語(yǔ)從句主語(yǔ)從句..強(qiáng)調(diào)※他考試不及格使得他的家人很失望。7.Thathehad7※他考試不及格，這使得他的家人很失望。10.Hedidn’tpasstheexam,anditmadehisfamilydisappointed.(________句)11.Hedidn’tpasstheexam,whichmadehisfamilydisappointed.(含________的復(fù)合句)并列定語(yǔ)從句※他考試不及格，這使得他的家人很失望。10.Hedidn’8※得知他考試不及格后，他的家人很失望。12.Afterhisfamilylearnedthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,theyweredisappointed.(含____________________復(fù)合句)13.Afterhisfamilyweretoldthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,theyweredisappointed.(含__________________的復(fù)合句)14.Hisfamilyweredisappointedatthenewsthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.(含_________________的復(fù)合句)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句和賓語(yǔ)從句的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句和賓語(yǔ)從句同位語(yǔ)從句的.※得知他考試不及格后，他的家人很失望。12.Afterh9

當(dāng)然，合并簡(jiǎn)單句不一定非要用并列句和復(fù)合句。我們也可以用含非謂語(yǔ)的動(dòng)詞的句子來(lái)表達(dá)。我們應(yīng)該知道，狀語(yǔ)從句、定語(yǔ)從句、名詞性從句都可以相應(yīng)的轉(zhuǎn)換成非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做狀語(yǔ)、定語(yǔ)、主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)和表語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)將2、6、7、11、12、13等復(fù)合句轉(zhuǎn)換成含非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的簡(jiǎn)單句。

因?yàn)樗荚嚥患案?，所以他的家人很失望?.As/Becausehehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.Nothavingpassedtheexam,hemadehisfamilyfamilydisappointed.Withhimnotpassingtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointedBecauseofhisnotpassingtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.(現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)的完成式作原因狀語(yǔ)).(with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)作原因狀語(yǔ))（介詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)）..當(dāng)然，合并簡(jiǎn)單句不一定非要用并列句和復(fù)合句。我們也可以用含10

當(dāng)然，合并簡(jiǎn)單句不一定非要用并列句和復(fù)合句。我們也可以用含非謂語(yǔ)的動(dòng)詞的句子來(lái)表達(dá)。我們應(yīng)該知道，狀語(yǔ)從句、定語(yǔ)從句、名詞性從句都可以相應(yīng)的轉(zhuǎn)換成非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做狀語(yǔ)、定語(yǔ)、主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)和表語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)將2、6、7、11、12、13等復(fù)合句轉(zhuǎn)換成含非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的簡(jiǎn)單句。

2.As/Becausehehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.Nothavingpassedtheexam,hemadehisfamilyfamilydisappointed.Withhimnotpassingtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointedBecauseofhisnotpassingtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.(現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)的完成式作原因狀語(yǔ)).(with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)作原因狀語(yǔ))（介詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)）..當(dāng)然，合并簡(jiǎn)單句不一定非要用并列句和復(fù)合句。我們也可以用含116.Thereasonwhyhisfamilyweredisappointedwasthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.(含定語(yǔ)從句及表語(yǔ)從句的復(fù)合句)Thereasonforhisfamily’sbeingdisappointedwashisnotpassingtheexam.(“介詞+動(dòng)名詞”作定語(yǔ)及動(dòng)名詞作表語(yǔ))。7.Thathehadn’tpassedtheexammadehisfamilydisappointed.Hisnothavingpassedtheexammadehisfamilydisappointed.（動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)作主語(yǔ)）.6.Thereasonwhyhisfamilyw126.Thereasonwhyhisfamilyweredisappointedwasthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.(含定語(yǔ)從句及表語(yǔ)從句的復(fù)合句)Thereasonforhisfamily’sbeingdisappointedwashisnotpassingtheexam.(“介詞+動(dòng)名詞”作定語(yǔ)及動(dòng)名詞作表語(yǔ))。7.Thathehadn’tpassedtheexammadehisfamilydisappointed.Hisnothavingpassedtheexammadehisfamilydisappointed.（動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)作主語(yǔ)）.6.Thereasonwhyhisfamilyw1311.Hedidn’tpasstheexam,whichmadehisfamilydisappointed.Hedidn’tpasstheexam,makinghisfamilydisappointed.(現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作結(jié)果狀語(yǔ))12.Afterhisfamilylearnedthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,theyweredisappointed.Havinglearnedthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.（現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)）.After

learningthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.

（“介詞+動(dòng)名詞”作時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)）Hisfamilyweredisappointedtolearnthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.(動(dòng)詞不定式作原因狀語(yǔ))11.Hedidn’tpasstheexam,w1413.Afterhisfamilyweretoldthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,theyweredisappointed.Havingbeentoldthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.Afterbeingtoldthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.Hisfamilyweredisappointedtobetoldthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.（現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)的被動(dòng)式作時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)）（“介詞+動(dòng)名詞”的被動(dòng)式作時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)。）(動(dòng)詞不定式的被動(dòng)式作原因狀語(yǔ))13.Afterhisfamilyweretold15

句子合并的方法多種多樣，重要的是清晰句子結(jié)構(gòu),理清句子邏輯關(guān)系，學(xué)會(huì)分析句子成分。

句子合并的方法多種多樣，重要的是清晰句子結(jié)構(gòu),16

即時(shí)練習(xí)。根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)意思，完成英文句子。1.他很忙，他沒(méi)來(lái)。1）___________hewasbusy,hedidn’tcome.2）____________(be)busy,hedidn’tcome.3)Itwasbecausehewasbusy_________hedidn’tcome.4)Hewasbusy,________hedidn’tcome.5)Hedidn’tcome_________hewasbusy.6)________hedidn’tcomewasbecausehewasbusy.7)Hisnot___________(coming)wasbecausehewasbusy.8)Thereasonwhyhedidn’tcomewas______hewasbusy.9)_________hewasbusymadeunabletocome.10)__________(he)beingbusymadehimunabletocome.11)Hewasbusy,and______madehimunabletocome.12)Hewasbusy,___________himunabletocome.13)Hewasbusy,_______(make)himunabletocome.即時(shí)練習(xí)。根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)意思，完成英文句子。17

2.杰克出生在英國(guó)，他在美國(guó)長(zhǎng)大。1）JackwasbornintheUK,_________hegrewupintheUS.2)____________hewasbornintheUK,JackgrewupintheUS.3)_________(bear)intheUK,JackgrewupintheUS.4)Jack,_________wasbornintheUK,grewupintheUS.5)Jack,_________(bear)intheUK,grewupintheUS.2.杰克出生在英國(guó)，他在美國(guó)長(zhǎng)大。18

寫(xiě)作的基本能力是“信息句子化”，在簡(jiǎn)單句的基礎(chǔ)上運(yùn)用語(yǔ)法知識(shí)合并句子，體現(xiàn)句子的多樣化，增添語(yǔ)言色彩，從而使寫(xiě)作獲高分。寫(xiě)作的基本能力是“信息句子化”，在簡(jiǎn)單句19

請(qǐng)看下面一篇基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作學(xué)校英語(yǔ)論壇針對(duì)目前城市交通擁堵、污染嚴(yán)重的問(wèn)題進(jìn)行了“治堵方案大家談”的討論。以下是討論概要：治堵方案1.少開(kāi)私家車；多人共乘一輛小車。2.政府完善公共交通以方便市民。3.修建綠道（greenlanes）,鼓勵(lì)騎自行車。好處：省錢、省時(shí)、節(jié)能、環(huán)保?！緦?xiě)作內(nèi)容】請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上概要寫(xiě)一篇短文，包括以下內(nèi)容：1.存在的問(wèn)題；2.解決的方案；3.方案的好處。請(qǐng)看下面一篇基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作20經(jīng)過(guò)審題，我們可以列出以下的信息點(diǎn)：1）Wehadadiscussion.2)Ourstreetsarecrowdedwithtraffic.Therearetoomanyprivatecars.3)Theairisseriouslypolluted.4)Somesolutionsareputforward./Everyoneisencouragedtooffersuggestions.5)Carownerscouldreducetheuseofprivatecars.6)Theycouldsharetheircarswiththeirfriendsandworkmates.7)Thegovernmentshoulddosomethingtoimprovethepublictransportsystem.8)Thegovernmentshouldbuildmoregreenlanes.9)Thepublictransportsystemshouldbemoreconvenientforcitizens.10)Peopleshouldbeencouragedtousetheirbicycles.11)Money,timeandenergywillbesaved.12)Themeasuresarefriendlytotheenvironment.經(jīng)過(guò)審題，我們可以列出以下的信息點(diǎn)：21請(qǐng)運(yùn)用我們剛才所提及的名詞短語(yǔ)、介詞短語(yǔ)、with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)、非謂語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)、并列連詞和復(fù)合句來(lái)整合信息。名詞短語(yǔ)整合信息點(diǎn)2、3。運(yùn)用介詞短語(yǔ)充當(dāng)定語(yǔ)整合信息點(diǎn)2、3;2、3、4;11、12。運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)整合信息7、8、9;5,8,10;2,3;5,6。運(yùn)用with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)整合信息6、12。運(yùn)用復(fù)合句整合信息。請(qǐng)運(yùn)用我們剛才所提及的名詞短語(yǔ)、介詞短語(yǔ)、with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)22Increasingnumbersofprivatecarscontributetoheavytrafficjamsandseriousairpollution.

名詞短語(yǔ)整合信息點(diǎn)2、3句。2)Ourstreetsarecrowdedwithtraffic.Therearetoomanyprivatecars.3)Theairisseriouslypolluted.Increasingnumbersofprivate23Peoplearemoreawareofthefactthatincreasingnumberofprivatecarshasgivenrisetoseriousproblemsliketrafficjamsandairpollution.（2,3）運(yùn)用介詞短語(yǔ)充當(dāng)定語(yǔ)整合信息點(diǎn)2、3;2、3、4;11、12。2)Ourstreetsarecrowdedwithtraffic.Therearetoomanyprivatecars.3)Theairisseriouslypolluted.4)Somesolutionsareputforward./Everyoneisencouragedtooffersuggestions.11)Money,timeandenergywillbesaved.12)Themeasuresarefriendlytotheenvironment.Weheldadiscussioninthehopeofcomingupwithsomepracticalsolutionstoendtheshamefulconditionoftrafficjamsandairpollutioninourcity.(2,3,4)Bytakingtheabovemeasures,notonlycanwesavemoney,timeandenergybutalsowecancontributetoacitywithbetterenvironment.（11,12）Peoplearemoreawareofthef24Thegovernmentshouldimprovethepublictransportsystemtomakeitmoreconvenientforpeople.（7、8、9）運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)整合信息7、8、9;5,8,10;2,3;5,6。Buildingmoregreenlanesisobviouslyagoodwaytoencouragecyclinginsteadofdriving.(5,8,10)Thereisawidespreadconcernoverenvironmentalpollutionandtrafficjamscausedbyprivatecars.(2,3)First,carownerscouldsharetheircarswiththeirfriendsandworkmates,thusreducingtheuseprivateofcars.（5,6）Thegovernmentshouldimprove25Hopefully,withpeoplesharingprivatecarswitheachother,ourcitywilldefinitelybeanenvironment-friendlyplacetolive運(yùn)用with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)整合信息6、12。Hopefully,withpeoplesharing26Whenitcomestotrafficjamsandairpollution,somepeoplecomeupwiththeideathatcarownerscouldreducetheuseofprivatecarsbysharingcarswiththeirfriendsandworkmates.

運(yùn)用復(fù)合句整合信息。定語(yǔ)從句整合2、3句。Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,moreandmorepeoplehavetheirowncars,whichinturnleadstosuchproblemastrafficjamsandairpollution.狀語(yǔ)從句整合7、9句Ifthegovernmentcouldimprovethepublictransportsystem,itwouldbemoreconvenientforpeopletotravel.

名詞性從句整合2、3、6句。Whenitcomestotrafficjams27Recentlytheissueoftrafficjamsandairpollutioncausedbyprivatecarshasbeenbroughttotheconcernofallpeople,especiallyusstudents,whocameupwithsomepracticalsuggestioninadiscussion(信息點(diǎn)1-4).Inouropinion,citizenscouldreducetheuseofprivatecarsbysharingwiththeirfriendsandworkmates(信息點(diǎn)5-6).Besides,whatreallymattersisthatthegovernmentimprovesthepublictransportsystemtomakeitmoreconvenientforpeopletotravel（信息點(diǎn)7和9）.Meanwhile,thegovernmentshouldhavemoregreenlanesbuilttoencouragecycling（信息點(diǎn)8和10）.Bytakingtheabovemeasures,notonlycanwesavemoney,time,andenergybutalsowecancontributetoacitywithbetterenvironment（信息點(diǎn)11和12）.Recentlytheissueoftraf28

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謝謝您的光臨！29高考大綱中常用哪些連接詞1.

表示遞進(jìn);在同一話題上補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容另外，還有：and,andthen,even,whatismore/worse/better,besides,also,moreover,inaddition…2.表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系但是，然而，相反：but,however,yet,instead,ontheotherhand,oth