河北中考英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作講解-話(huà)題-計(jì)劃安排-課件

滿(mǎn)分作文的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

包含所有要點(diǎn)（—不能丟落要點(diǎn)）圍繞內(nèi)容適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，內(nèi)容具體、豐富（—不能限于回答問(wèn)題或逐句翻譯）應(yīng)用豐富的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯（—表達(dá)不能過(guò)于單一）用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚（—表達(dá)有層次，會(huì)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞，注意周?chē)魬?yīng)）沒(méi)有語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤（—杜絕任何小錯(cuò)）.無(wú)“過(guò)”便是“功正確為先；流暢為好；文采為妙。注重銜接與連貫滿(mǎn)分作文的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

包含所有要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)作:

1.分析體裁2.選定人稱(chēng)3.時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤扣三分4.要點(diǎn)全5.字?jǐn)?shù)要夠6.書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要工整寫(xiě)作:書(shū)面表達(dá)要求：1）使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)2）使用正確的詞語(yǔ)3）要有清晰的思路4）要有不同的句子5）要有一定的連接書(shū)面表達(dá)要求：

分析河北近10年中考真題的書(shū)面表達(dá)可知，針對(duì)“計(jì)劃安排”這一話(huà)題，主要考查了介紹自己的周末計(jì)劃。結(jié)合全國(guó)近年與“計(jì)劃安排”這一話(huà)題相關(guān)的書(shū)面表達(dá)可知此話(huà)題主要涉及以下命題角度：活動(dòng)時(shí)間及地點(diǎn)安排、具體活動(dòng)內(nèi)容安排等。命題探索 分析河北近10年中考真題的書(shū)面表達(dá)可知，針對(duì)“計(jì)劃安排”這

人教課本中涉及“計(jì)劃安排”這個(gè)話(huà)題的單元有：教材鏈接 人教課本中涉及“計(jì)劃安排”這個(gè)話(huà)題的單元有：教材鏈接英語(yǔ)課上，老師要求同學(xué)們介紹個(gè)人的周末計(jì)劃，假設(shè)下面表格內(nèi)容是你的計(jì)劃提綱，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中提示的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，介紹你的周末計(jì)劃，并在班上與同學(xué)交流。

審主題：周末計(jì)劃；審時(shí)態(tài)：一般將來(lái)時(shí)審文體：應(yīng)用文審人稱(chēng)：第一人稱(chēng)英語(yǔ)課上，老師要求同學(xué)們介紹個(gè)人的周末計(jì)劃，審主題：周末計(jì)劃Saturday

WatchTVGotoabookstoreSundayVisitgrandparents

...要點(diǎn)1：周六的計(jì)劃要點(diǎn)2：周天的計(jì)劃SaturdayWatchTVGotoabookst要求：(1)發(fā)言稿須包括三個(gè)所列要點(diǎn)和一個(gè)補(bǔ)充要點(diǎn)；

(2)發(fā)言稿中四個(gè)要點(diǎn)都要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

(3)發(fā)言稿中不得涉及真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名；

(4)詞數(shù)：80個(gè)左右(已給出的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。

Hi,everyone!Here’smyplanfortheweekend._________要求：(1)發(fā)言稿須包括三個(gè)所列要點(diǎn)和一個(gè)補(bǔ)充要點(diǎn)；【教材好句范例】1.IwouldliketoinviteyoutotheopeningofournewlibraryatNo.9HighSchool.[八(上)Unit9P71]2.I’mmakingsomeplanstoworkinanoldpeople’shomethissummer.[八(下)Unit2P10]時(shí)間地點(diǎn)安排【教材好句范例】時(shí)間地點(diǎn)安排3.Iwanttoputoffmyplantoworkinananimalhospitaluntilnextsummer.[八(下)Unit2P12]4.MyfamilyistakingatriptoWuhanattheendofthismonthtovisitmyauntanduncle.[八(上)Unit9P66]3.Iwanttoputoffmyplant【句子仿寫(xiě)】1.我想邀請(qǐng)你和我們一起去公園野餐。

_______________________________________________________2.九月末的時(shí)候我將去上海旅行并拜訪(fǎng)我的朋友們。

Iwouldliketoinviteyoutogoonapicnicintheparkwithus.I’mtakingatriptoShanghaiattheendofSeptembertovisitmyfriends.【句子仿寫(xiě)】Iwouldliketoinvitey3.我們班正計(jì)劃于六月十日在我們教室里舉辦一個(gè)聚會(huì)。

_________________________________________________________________________________________4.我們想去田地里采摘水果和蔬菜。

OurclassismakingsomeplanstohaveapartyinourclassroomonthetenthdayofJune.Wewanttogotothefieldstopickupfruitandvegetables.3.我們班正計(jì)劃于六月十日在我們教室里舉辦一個(gè)聚會(huì)。Ou【教材好句范例】1.Marydecidedtotryoutforajobatanafter-schoolreadingprogramlastyear.[八(下)Unit2P11]2.Ourclassistryingtocomeupwithsomeideastocheerupsickchildrenbecausetheyareoftensad.[八(下)Unit2P12]3.I’mgoingto

bringmynewcameratotakelotsofphotos！具體計(jì)劃內(nèi)容【教材好句范例】具體計(jì)劃內(nèi)容【句子仿寫(xiě)】1.今年夏天我決定去海南度假。

_______________________________________________________2.我這周末將去市圖書(shū)館借一些關(guān)于科學(xué)的書(shū)。

3.Frank正盡力在用一種友好的方式和他的同學(xué)們交流。

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IdecidetogotoHainanforvacationthissummer.I’mgoingtothecitylibrarytoborrowsomesciencebooksthisweekend.Frankistryingtocommunicatewithhisclassmatesinafriendlyway.【句子仿寫(xiě)】IdecidetogotoHainan【句子擴(kuò)寫(xiě)范例】1.Ihopetobeateacher.→Ihopetobeateacher.Iwouldbenicetomystudents.2.MaybeI’llbeanairplanepilot.→MaybeI’llbeanairplanepilot.Thatwouldbeacooljob.理想愿望【句子擴(kuò)寫(xiě)范例】理想愿望3.SowhydoIwanttobeafarmer?→SowhydoIwanttobeafarmer?Becauseitisreallyanimportantjob.Everyoneneedsfood,andIwanttogrowthebestcrops.3.SowhydoIwanttobeafa【句子擴(kuò)寫(xiě)】1.Iwillworkhardinthenewyear.(擴(kuò)寫(xiě)具體做法)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.Iwillspendmoretimewithmyfamily.(擴(kuò)寫(xiě)具體表現(xiàn))______________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwillworkhardinthenewyear.Iwillpaymoreattentiontomystudy.Iwillspendmoretimewithmyfamily.Iwillsharemyjoysandtearswiththem.【句子擴(kuò)寫(xiě)】Iwillworkhardinthe3.Iwanttobehealthierthanbefore.(擴(kuò)寫(xiě)具體計(jì)劃)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.Ihopetobeadoctor.(擴(kuò)寫(xiě)原因)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwanttobehealthierthanbefore,soIwilleathealthyfoodanddosports.Ihopetobeadoctor.Becauseitisagreatjob.Everyoneneedshealthybodies,andIcanhelppatients.Iwanttobehealthierthanbe

Ourclassaregoingtohaveapicnicinapark.Wearesupposedtoarriveattheparkat8：00a．m..Afterarrivingthere,someofusaregoingto①____________(活動(dòng)1).Atthesametime,afewclassmateswhoareinterestedinmusiccan②________________(活動(dòng)2).Atnoon,wewill③__________________________________(活動(dòng)3).Intheafternoon,weplanto④_________________________________________________(活動(dòng)4)．playgames活動(dòng)安排singsongstogethersitaroundandhaveawonderfullunchcollectrubbishthatisthrownawaybycarelessvisitorsOurclassaregoingto

Hi,everyone!Here’smyplanfortheweekend.OnSaturdaymorning,I’mgoingtowatchTVtorelaxmyselfafteralongweek’sstudy.Iamfondofwatchingcomediesandcartoons.OnSaturdayafternoon,I’mgoingtoabookstoretobuysomebooks.Readingisoneofmyhobbies.ImissmygrandparentssomuchthatI’mgoingtovisitthemonSunday.I’llhelpthemdosomehousework.AfterIcomeback,I’lldomyhomeworktogetreadyforthenextweek.That’smyweekend.Howdoyoulikeit?

Thankyou!Hi,everyone!Here’smy

(2019黃石改編)假如你是李華，你的外國(guó)同學(xué)Tom寫(xiě)了一封郵件詢(xún)問(wèn)你暑假的安排，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示和要求，給Tom回封郵件。提示：(1)Readsomeusefulbooks. (2)Helpmyparentsdosomehousework. (3)Doexercisewithsomefriends.寫(xiě)作練兵寫(xiě)作練兵(2019黃石改編)假如你是李華，你的外國(guó)同要求：(1)郵件須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 (2)郵件中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名，校名和地名。 (3)詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))要求：(1)郵件須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。DearTom，I’mveryhappytohearfromyou.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________寫(xiě)作練兵寫(xiě)作練兵

NowI’mgoingtotellyoumyplansforthesummervacation. Firstofall,Iwanttoreadsomemeaningfulandgoodbooks.Maybethesebookswillbehelpfulformyfuturestudy.Then,Iwanttospendmoretimehelpingmyparentsdosomehousework,suchasDearTom，寫(xiě)作練兵寫(xiě)作練兵________________________________________________________Iwonderhowdoyouplanyourvacation?Writetomesoon. Yours，LiHua寫(xiě)作練兵寫(xiě)作練兵sweepingthefloororwashingdishesafterdinner.Finally,Iplantogototheparkwithmyfriendsev