讀后續(xù)寫作文Ali課件

ContinuationWritingContinuationWriting1ThecostofasmileReflection1.Haveyougotahighscoreinthiswriting?2.Whatproblemsdoyouhave?OrWhydoyoufailtogetagoodresult?ThecostofasmileReflection12Doyouthinksuchkindofendingacceptable?1.Charliemovedtoanothercitywithhissonordaughter.2.Charliewasthebossofabigcompany,soheaskedKathytoworkwithhiminhiscompany.3.TowinKathy'ssmile,CharliegavelotsoftipstoKathy.Thentheywereinlovewitheachother.ButCharliewasseriouslyill.thefuneralMakesurethestorydevelopslogicallyandreasonably.Doyouthinksuchkindofendi3Whendoingcontinuationwriting,whatshouldwepayattentionto?thegivenpassage:Howmanywordsshouldwewrite?Howmanygivenunderlinedwordsshouldbeused?Howmanyparagraphsshouldwewrite?thecontinuationwritingpart:Ingeneral,howmanywordsarethere?Whendoingcontinuationwritin41.續(xù)寫材料是一段350詞以內(nèi)的材料（一般為記敘文）。2.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。詞數(shù)少于130詞,從總分中減去2分;3.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。4.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好。5.續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。注意事項(xiàng)1.續(xù)寫材料是一段350詞以內(nèi)的材料（一般為記敘文）。注意事5

Onedayhedidn'tcometotherestaurant.Shecalledhishome,onlytohearanansweringmachine.Withnervousnesswrappedintoanxiety,Kathywenttohishouseandfoundoutfromhisneighborthathehaddiedthepreviousnight.Onhearingthebadnewsshefeltseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn'thelpcryingbitterly.BecauseCharliehadnofamilyorclosefriends,Kathyputherselfinchargeofhisfuneralarrangements.Sheandtheneighborweretheonlypeopletoattend.范文欣賞：Usevivid

detaileddescriptiontoshowcharacters.Onedayhedidn'tcomet6

Severaldaysafterthefuneral,Kathyreceivedaveryimportant-lookingletterinthemail.ItwassenttoherfromCharlie’slawyer.Enclosedwasacheckforalmost$600,000!Kathynearlyfainted（暈倒）,butthenshenoticedahandwrittennotewhichread，“DearKathy,bythetimeyoureadthis,Iwillbegone.HereIhaveleftformybestfriendasmalltoken（表示）ofmygratitudeIcanneverrepayyouforwhatyou'vegivenme,foryousee,Kathy,asmileisworthmuchmorethan$20.Indeed,asmileispriceless.Conveypositivemessage.Asmilecostsnothing,butitiswortheverything.Severaldaysafterthe7message(positive)development(logical/reasonable)language(vivid)AsuccessfulstorymessagedevelopmentlanguageAsu8ChildrenofHeavenContinuationWriting電影：天堂的孩子ChildrenofHeavenContinuation9ReadforinformationWhatisthetypeofwriting?A.narrative(記敘文）B.exposition（說(shuō)明文)C.argumentation(議論文）

Howmanycharactersarethereinthepassage?Whoarethemaincharacters?Many.ThemaincharactersareAliandhisyoungersister,Zahra.CharacterReadforinformationWhat10Backgroundinformation1.WheredidAliandhisfamilylive?2.Howwasthefamilycondition?HowAliandhisyoungersister,Zahra,livedwiththeirparentsinapoorneighborhood.Theirmotherwasverysickandtheirfatherwasstrugglingtofindajob,andtheyhadonlyalittlemoneywithwhichtobuyfood.Astheyhadnotpaidtherentforseveralmonths,thelandlord

wasbreathingdowntheirnecks.AliandZahralivedina_______neighborhoodwiththeirparents.Thefamily___________tomakeendsmeet.poorstruggled對(duì)某人盯得特別緊Backgroundinformation1.Where11AlilostZahra'sshoes.ThemainstoryAliandZahrakeptitsecretby---.OnedayThedayofraceApieceofnewsAlongdistanceracewouldbeheld.Thethirdprizewasapairofnewshoes..StartHalfwayNearthefinishlineHehadastrongstart.Hegotexhaustedbutpersisted.Hecrashedtotheground.Itseemedthat---.AlilostZahra'sshoes.Thema12Para.1Para.2Para.3Para.4Readforstructure___________information_________ofthestory___________ofthestory__________ofthestoryThefamilystruggledtomakeendsmeet.AlilostZahra'sshoesandsharedhisshoeswithZahratogotoschool.AlidecidedtotakepartinalongdistanceracetowinanewpairofshoesforZahra.Aliwasknockeddownanditseemedunlikelyforhimtofinishthird.BackgroundBeginningDevelopmentClimax(高潮)Para.1Para.2Para.3Para.4Readf13Paragraph1:

Alilookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead.Paragrap2:

Filledwithdelight,Aliwalkedhomequickly.ContinuationWritingAli,Zahra,shoes,race,prize,excitedly,promise,runners,third,collided.DidAliwintheprize?Yes?OrNo?Paragraph1:Paragrap2:Contin14possibilitiesHewonthethirdprize.Hewasawardedforhisbravery.TherunnerwhocollidedhimgavetheshoestoAli.Hedidn’tfinishtherace.Hefinishedfirst.------DidAliwintheprize?Whatevertheresultwas,AlieventuallywenthomewithapairofnewshoesforZahra.possibilitiesHewonthethird15Paragraph1:

Alilookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead.Paragrap2:

Filledwithdelight,Aliwalkedhomequickly.ContinuationWritingWhatwouldyouwrite?Describetheactionandfeelingafterthecrash.ActionWhatwouldyouwrite?DescribethejoywhenAlibroughtshoesbackhome.DescribeZahra'sreactiontoAli.Feelings站起來(lái)往前沖咬緊牙關(guān)揮汗如雨------nervoushappyexcitedmovedgrateful------Ali,Zahra,shoes,race,prize,excitedly,promise,runners,third,collided.Paragraph1:Paragrap2:Contin16DescribeAli'sactionafterthecrash.struggletohisfeet;grithisteeth;runasfastashislegscouldcarryhim;gatherallhisstrength;dripwithsweat/withsweatdripping;dashforwardDescribethejoywhenAlibroughtshoesbackhome.DescribeZahra'sreactiontoAli.can’tconcealhisexcitement;Happytearswelledupinhereyes;beoverwhelmedbyenormousjoy;throwherselfintohisarms;Withtearyeyes,theyhuggedtogether.DescribeAli'sactionaftert17Whatisthethemeforthewriting?Alikepthispromisebecauseofhis

braveryperseveranceloveforhissisterWhatisthethemeforthewrit18AssignmentWritethepassage.AssignmentWritethepassage.19Alilookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead.Refusingtogiveupatthispoint,hejumpedtohisfeetandranasfastashecould.Hedashedacrossthefinishlineandwonthefourthprize.Thinkinghewouldlethersisterdown,Alicouldn’thelpsobbing.Justthenhesuddenlyheardtheannouncementfromthebroadcastthathewonthethird

prizeastherunnerwhocollidedwithAliwasdisqualifiedforbreakingtherule.Holdingtheshoes