考研英語寫作公開課一等獎?wù)n件省賽課獲獎?wù)n件

possibleBelikelyto;beaptto;chancesarethatBECAUSEThanksto;Owingto,inthat;BeattributedtoveryExtremely;Highly;dramaticallyenormouslyIMPORTANTcritical;essential;imperative;crucial…詞匯多樣性第1頁More…think

----believe,argue,claim,insist,maintain,assert,beconvinced,contendharbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,Frommyownperspective,It’suniversallyacknowledgedthat,…

Itcanneverbedenied,…

Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…第2頁disagree----frownon,disapproveof,objecttosolve----tackle,resolve,address,copewithdevelop----foster,cultivate,nurtureadvantage----merit,privilege,blessingdisadvantage----demerit,defect第3頁reason----contributeto,resultin,ascribe…to..,attribute…to…,derivefrom..,

so----thus,therefore,asaresult,asaconsequence,consequently,notsurprisingly第4頁show----depict,describe,reveal,demonstrateGood----fantastic,adorable,amazing,incredible,magnificent,fascinatingspectacular,although----inspiteof,regardlessof,第5頁Like---beinterestedin,sthappealstosb.,sthexertanfascinationonsb.Payattentionto---captureone’sattentionRemember---bearinmindRich---financiallywell-off第6頁命題規(guī)律二、話題規(guī)律文化：考過5次

1、流行文化：考過3次——93年（電視廣告）、23年（偶像崇敬）、23年（網(wǎng)絡(luò)）

2、文化交流與融合：考過2次——23年（美國小女孩穿中國服裝）、23年（文化火鍋）

青年面向社會：考過4次23年（溫室花朵經(jīng)不起風(fēng)雨）、23年（終點又是新起點）、23年（自信）、23年（團(tuán)結(jié)合作）第7頁兩代關(guān)系：考過3次92年（代溝問題）、23年（溫室花朵經(jīng)不起風(fēng)雨）、23年（養(yǎng)老足球賽）

愛心：考過3次95年（希望工程）、23年（希望是一盞燈）、23年小作文（給希望工程寫信祈求捐款）

環(huán)境：考過3次99年圖表作文（保護(hù)野生動物）、2023年圖畫作文（保護(hù)海洋資源）、23年小作文（限制使用塑料袋）健康：考過2次96年提綱作文（健康）、97年圖表作文（吸煙）命題規(guī)律第8頁命題規(guī)律規(guī)律總結(jié)：命題側(cè)重于對青年人價值觀塑造考題集中于抽象話題貼近日常生活,不會包括政治或敏感話題第9頁圖畫作文3句話引出圖畫（1句）描述圖畫（1句）小結(jié)（1句）圖畫出現(xiàn)很自然，不突然盡管圖畫很簡單，但其寓意卻是非常深奧第一段圖畫描述段第10頁圖畫作文引出圖畫（1句）1.近來有一場有關(guān)一張圖畫討論2.當(dāng)談到人們茶余飯后話題，就（無疑）是

那張圖畫了3.伴隨時間流逝，一張有趣圖畫始終引發(fā)

著各方人士廣泛關(guān)注——直接引出——第11頁圖畫作文1.伴隨社會發(fā)展和人們生活變化，…….

問題已日益顯著——間接引出——Subsequenttosocialdevelopmentandchangesofpeople’slives,theissueof…….hasincreasinglybecomeobvious.第12頁圖畫作文自從改革開放三十年間，各個方面都發(fā)生了重大變化，尤其是……..問題

Thepastthreedecadeshaswitnessedenormouschangesinvariousaspectssincereformandopeningup,especiallytheissueof…….第13頁圖畫作文描述圖畫（1句）正如圖畫所描述，在(…..)中有……,and它……周圍有……..倒裝句(所有倒裝)定語從句伴隨狀語時態(tài)：一般目前時或者目前進(jìn)行時第14頁圖畫作文2023第15頁圖畫作文AnAmericangirlintraditionalChinesecostume(服裝)2023第16頁圖畫作文2023第17頁圖畫作文2023第18頁圖畫作文2023第19頁圖畫作文2023注意：當(dāng)兩副圖畫時每一副圖畫都要描述到

不能將兩幅圖畫概括描述第20頁圖畫作文2023圖一：把崇敬寫在臉上圖二：花300元做個"小貝"頭注：Beckham（貝克漢姆）：英國足球明星第21頁圖畫作文第一段3句話引出圖畫（1句）描述圖畫（1-2句）小結(jié)（1句）小結(jié)（1句）：承上啟下1.盡管圖畫很簡單，但其寓意卻是非常深奧.2.作者真實目標(biāo)不是圖畫本身，而是要引導(dǎo)我們?nèi)ヌ角笤趫D畫背后更深刻寓意.第22頁文化“火鍋”，既美味又營養(yǎng)2023圖畫作文第23頁圖畫作文

1Withthepassageoftime,aninterestingpicturehasbeenarousingtheattentionofpeoplefromallwalksoflife.2Asisvividlyandadequatelyrevealedinthedrawing,onthegroundstandsahugehotpotwhichcontainsvariousaspectsofChineseandforeigncultures.3Simpleasthedrawingis,itsintendedmeaningisnothingbutsignificantandenlightening.3句話，60

words第24頁圖畫作文2023第25頁圖畫作文

1Whenitcomestopeople’sconcernatleisuretime,itisnothingbutaninterestingpictureinanewspaper.2Asisvividlyandadequatelyrevealedinthecartoon,inseparatedroomssitawidevarietyofindividualswhoaresurfingontheInternet.3Simpleasthedrawingis,itssymbolicimplicationsturnouttobehighlyprofoundandthought-provoking.3句話，59

words第26頁圖畫作文第27頁圖畫作文Withsocialdevelopmentandchangesofpeople’slives,theissueofhealthhasincreasinglybecomeobviousandsignificant.Asisvividlyandadequatelydepictedinthecartoon,onthestreethappilyrunsayoungmanwhoisdoingexercises,withhisdogjoggingnexttohim.Plainasthepictureis,itssymbolicimplicationsturnouttobefar-reachingandenlightening.3句話，63

words第28頁圖畫作文2023年——合作第29頁圖畫作文Currently,therehasbeenanextendedandenthusiasticdisputeatanInternetforumwhichcentersonapicture.Asisvividlyandadequatelydepictedinthedrawing,onawindingpathruntwohandicappedyoungmenwhobindtheirlamelegstogethertosupporteachother,withtheircrutchesleftbehind.Whilethecartoonisplain,itssymbolicconnotationsturnouttobeexceedinglyprofoundandthought-provoking.第30頁圖畫作文圖一：拼命學(xué)英語圖二：漢語錯別字第31頁圖畫作文Currently,therehasbeenanextendedandenthusiasticdiscussiononanInternetforumwhichcentersaroundtwointerestingpictures.Asisvividlyandsufficientlydepictedinthecartoons,inaclassroomsitsayounggirlwhostudiesEnglishcrazilyalldaylongandayoungboyliesaroundbooksthinkingofmanywrongChinesecharacters.Simpleasthedrawingsare,theirsymbolicimplicationsareprofoundandthought-provoking.3句話，67

words第32頁圖畫作文三段(12句)第一段—描述圖畫第二段—why?好/不好第三段—how?提倡/約束引出圖畫1描述圖畫1-2

小結(jié)1指出寓意1

論證寓意3小結(jié)1承上啟下1提議措施2升華結(jié)尾1圖畫描述段寓意分析段提議措施段段落模塊-框架第33頁圖畫作文第二段5句話指出寓意（1句）implicationsinlife寓意分析（3句）好/不好小結(jié)（1句）總結(jié)分析，加強語調(diào)寓意分析段第34頁圖畫作文指出寓意（1句）看到這幅精心制作圖畫，我們不禁想到現(xiàn)實中一種主要問題通過畫這幅圖畫，作者試圖提醒我們現(xiàn)實中一種主要問題這幅圖畫讓我們想到現(xiàn)實中一種主要問題

提醒我們第35頁圖畫作文寓意論證（3句）正面論述：好/不好（1句）支持上述論點：舉例論證

（1句）

事實論證

因果論證背面論證：（1句）第36頁圖畫作文正面論述（1句）：好/不好自信能夠有助于我們共同努力、取得進(jìn)步Cofidencecancontributeto

ourconcertedeffortsandgreatprogress.論證主體積極動詞影響賓語①掌握兩類動詞：有助于

不利于②幾類固定方面第37頁圖畫作文幾類固定方面(萬能思緒)：社會：經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展和繁華、文化前進(jìn)、文明8提升、社會形象、社會進(jìn)步、社會

友好、社會穩(wěn)定、社會風(fēng)氣個人：個人成長、個人形象和名譽、素質(zhì)7提升、成績?nèi)〉?、正確人生觀和

價值觀、良好生活前景、良好意志第38頁圖畫作文寓意論證（3句）正面論述：好/不好（1句）支持上述論點：舉例論證

（1句）

事實論證

因果論證背面論證：（1句）第39頁圖畫作文Ontheonehand,cooperationisabletogiveincentivetoagoodsocialethosandgreaterachievements.IcanthinkofnobetterexamplesofthispointthanthefactthateveryoneworkedtogethertomakeBeijingOlympicGamessuccessfullastyear.Ontheotherhand,thosewhofailtohelpeachothersaredoomedtobeinatoughsituationwhendealingwiththeworld.寓意論證第40頁圖畫作文圖一：把崇敬寫在臉上圖二：花300元做個"小貝"頭注：Beckham（貝克漢姆）：英國足球明星2023第41頁圖畫作文Ontheonehand,toadmireastarisabletointerferewithagoodsocialethosandpersonalgrowth.Noonecandenythefactthatcrazinessaboutafamouspersonmaydoharmtothedevelopmentofrightoutlookonlifeandworld.Ontheotherhand,ifyoungstersallpursuedcelebritiesthroughoutthesociety,wewouldnotmakeoneachievementafteranother.寓意論證第42頁圖畫作文2023第43頁圖畫作文Ontheonehand,confidenceiscapableofboostingandcontributingtopersonalgrowthandsocialimage.Oneofmyclassmates,forexample,believeshimselfgreatly,andhehasenoughcouragetoovercomeanything.Ontheotherhand,thosewhoarenotconfidentenougharedoomedtobeinanawkwardsituationindealingwiththeworld.寓意論證第44頁圖畫作文2023第45頁圖畫作文Ontheonehand,over-protectionisabletohamperandundermineeconomicdevelopmentandprosperityandpersonalgrowth.Icanthinkofnobetterexamplesthanthefactthatchildrenarespoiledbytheirparentsandcannotdoanythingthemselves.Ontheotherhand,thosewholiveunderover-caringaredoomedtobeleftinanawkwardsituationwhendealingwiththeworld.寓意論證第46頁圖畫作文雙重方面寓意論證（3句）論述好一面支持上述論點：舉例論證

（1句）

事實論證

因果論證論述不好一面注意：論述好一面和不好一面中間要加上“一方面、另一方面”連接第47頁圖畫作文2023年——網(wǎng)絡(luò)“近”與“遠(yuǎn)”第48頁圖畫作文Ontheonehand,Internetisabletopromoteandgiveimpulsetointerpersonalcommunicationandinformationsharing.IcanthinkofnobetterexamplesofthispointthanthefactthatwecantalkonlinebyMSNorQQeventhoughwearethousandsofmilesaway.Ontheotherhand,addictiontoInternetmayinterferewithone’spersonalgrowthandmakehimdistantfromothers.寓意論證第49頁圖畫作文困難使人強亦會使人弱第50頁圖畫作文Ontheonehand,difficultiesareabletoboostandgiveincentivetoone’spersonalgrowthandstrongresolution.Themassiveearthquakelastyear,forinstance,motivatedallChinesepeopletobecomemuchstrongerandbraver.Ontheotherhand,hardshipsmayjeopardizeandspoilone’scourageandoutlookonlifeandworld.寓意論證第51頁圖畫作文5句話指出寓意（1句）implicationsinlife寓意分析（3句）好/不好小結(jié)（1句）總結(jié)分析，加強語調(diào)小結(jié)（1句）看過上面分析，我們還能夠忽視……主要性/危害嗎？第52頁圖畫作文2023年——合作第53頁圖畫作文1

Thedrawingseekstoprovideuswithinsightsintoasignificantissueinlife:cooperation.Ontheonehand,2

collaborationisabletogiveincentivetoagoodsocialethosandgreaterachievements.3

IcanthinkofnobetterexamplesofthispointthanthefactthateveryoneworkedtogethertomakeBeijingOlympicGamessuccessfullastyear.Ontheotherhand,4

thosewhofailtohelpeachothersaredoomedtobeinatoughsituationwhendealingwiththeworld.

5

Afterobservingtheremarksabove,canwestillaffordtoignoretheimportanceofteamwork?第54頁圖畫作文2023年——網(wǎng)絡(luò)“近”與“遠(yuǎn)”第55頁圖畫作文Onseeingsuchafinecaricature,wecannotresistthinkingofacriticalissueinreality:thebenefitsandharmsofInternet.Ontheonehand,Internetiscapableofpromotingandgivingimpulsetointerpersonalcommunicationandinformationsharing.Idon’tneedtolistallexamplesbutit’senoughtomentionthatwecantalkonlinebyMSNorQQeventhoughwearethousandsofmilesaway.Ontheotherhand,addictiontoInternetmayinterferewithone’spersonalgrowthandmakehimdistantfromothers.Afterobservingthecommentsabove,canwestillignoretheimportanceofproperuseofInternet?第56頁圖畫作文2023第57頁圖畫作文

Bydrawingthecartoon,thecartooniststrivestoremindusofacriticalissueinlife:love.Ontheonehand,lovecanpromoteandgiveincentivetogoodsocialdevelopmentandpersonalreputation.IcanthinkofnobetterexamplesofthispointthanProjectHopewhereahostofindividualscontributetheirlove.Ontheotherhand,iftherewerenoloveinoursociety,wewouldnotachieveonesuccessafteranother.Afterobservingthewordsabove,canwestillaffordtoignoretheimportanceoflove?第58頁圖畫作文2023第59頁圖畫作文Onseeingsuchadelicatecartoon,wecannotrestrainfromassociatingitwithacrucialissueinlife:treatingoldpeoplebadly.Ontheonehand,suchbehaviorisabletoundermineandinterferewithgoodsocialethosandpersonalreputation.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattotakenocareofparentsmaydamageanddoharmtosocialprogressandpersonalmanners.Ontheotherhand,thosewhotreattheiroldparentsinanawfulwayaredoomedtobeinatoughsituationwhendealingwiththeworld.Afterobservingthecommentsabove,canwestillneglecttheharmofabusingagedparents?第60頁文化“火鍋”，既美味又營養(yǎng)2023圖畫作文第61頁圖畫作文Onseeingsuchthepicture,wecannotresistassociatingitwithasignificantissueinsociety:culturalcommunication.Ontheonehand,communicationacrossculturesisabletoboostandgiveimpulsetogoodsocialdevelopmentandprosperityaswellasaperson’sgrowth.Oneofmyfriends,forexample,learnsalotaboutforeignliterature,andhemakesprogressinstudy.Ontheotherhand,thosewholackinlearningfromforeignculturesaredoomedtobeinatoughsituationwhendealingwiththeworld.Afterobservingthecommentsabove,canwestillturnablindeyetotheimportanceofculturalcommunication?第62頁圖畫作文第63頁圖畫作文Onseeingsuchadelicatecartoon,wecannotrefrainfromassociatingitwithasignificantissueinlife:health-consciousness.Ontheonehand,notionofhealthiscapableofboostingandgivingimpulsetogoodsocialethosandpersonalgrowth.Forinstance,supposingapersontakeshealthseriously,hewillbecomehighlystrongandavoidvariousdiseases.Ontheotherhand,thosewhofailtoliveuptohealth-awarenessaredoomedtobeleftinatoughsituationwhendealingwiththeworld.Afterobservingthecommentsabove,canweaffordtoignoretheimportanceofhealth-consciousness?第64頁圖畫作文圖一：拼命學(xué)英語圖二：漢語錯別字第65頁圖畫作文Bydrawingthecartoons,thecartoonistseekstoremindusofasignificantissueinreality:tobecrazyaboutEnglishandignoreChinesestudy.Ontheonehand,suchmalpracticeiscapableofhamperingandcreatinganobstacletogoodsocialdevelopmentandpersonallifeprospect.AgoodcaseinpointisthefactthatahostofEnglishlearnerstendtohavebadscoresonChinesetests.Ontheotherhand,thosewhoarekeenonEnglishregardlessofChinesearedoomedtobeleftinatoughsituationwhendealingwiththeworld.Afterobservingthecommentsabove,canweaffordtoignoretheharmofdisregardingChinesestudy?第66頁趨勢段1.Werethesituationtocontinue,Oursocietywouldbeboundtosufferahugelossinallaspects/benefitalotinallaspects.2.Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,Itwouldcertainlyexertanegative/positiveeffectonoursociety.第67頁圖畫作文第三段提議措施段

4句話承上啟下1提議措施2宣傳/約束升華結(jié)尾1第68頁圖畫作文承上啟下（1句）誠然/毫無疑問，對問題結(jié)識并不等于行動總之，目前該是我們采取某些措施時候了綜上所述，對于這個問題，我們有必要采取某些行動第69頁圖畫作文提議措施（2句）

部門：1.所有有關(guān)部門必須做到各盡其責(zé)不(社會)能玩忽職守2.有關(guān)部門應(yīng)當(dāng)制定某些有關(guān)規(guī)

章制度

3.有必要開展多種宣傳活動來提倡/制

止…..行為和意識…..主要性第70頁圖畫作文

個人：1.應(yīng)當(dāng)多學(xué)習(xí)和讀書以更深刻領(lǐng)

會…..主要性

2.培養(yǎng)自己……正確意識和做法

避免……不良影響注意：兩個措施之間要用“另外”連接3.提升個人素質(zhì)和涵養(yǎng)第71頁圖畫作文升華結(jié)尾（1句）只有把這些措施付諸于實際，我們才能普及對這個問題重視只有我們共同努力，我們才能全面地建立友好社會只有這樣，我們才能真真正正地實現(xiàn)可連續(xù)發(fā)展第72頁圖畫作文2023年——合作第73頁圖畫作文

1Undoubtedly,awarenessofanissuecannotbeidentifiedwithactions.2Authoritiesconcernedaresupposedtoundertakevariousadvertisingcampaignssuchasbenefitcommercials,handoutsandlecturestoadvocatetheimportanceofcooperation.Inaddition,3

itisanecessityforeachindividualtocultivateanddeveloprightnotionandpracticeofcooperation.4

Onlybyourconcertedefforts,canwebuildaharmonioussocietyinallaspects.第74頁圖畫作文2023年——網(wǎng)絡(luò)“近”與“遠(yuǎn)”第75頁圖畫作文Insummary,itishightimethatwetookavarietyofeffectiveandpracticalmeasures.Authoritiesconcernedaresupposedtomakesomerelevantrulesandregulations.Inaddition,itisanecessityforindividualstocultivateanddeveloptheawarenessofproperuseofInternetandavoidtheadverseinfluenceofInternetaddiction.Onlybyenforcingthesemeasures,canweeffectively,efficiently,andeventuallyfurtherimprovethecurrentsituationandhaveabrightandbrilliantfuture.第76頁圖畫作文2023第77頁圖畫作文Insummary,regardingtheissueinquestion,itisamusttotakeavarietyofeffectiveandpracticalmeasures.Authoritiesconcernedaresupposedtoundertakevariouspublicitycampaignstoadvocatetheawarenessandpracticeofconfidence.Additionally,itisourprioritytostudyandreadasmanybooksaswecanforbette