2023年實用的商務英語作文集合篇

2023年實用的商務英語作文集合篇商務英語作文篇1

這部分寫作題型對大多數(shù)中國考生來說比較新奇，但是，無論求學還是工作，這是更接近實際的商務寫作形式。圖表描述試題要求考生在25-30分鐘內完成120個單詞量左右的寫作。圖表描述從考題內容上來看，好像考試賜予考生肯定的寫作自由度，但是，考生假如不駕馭必要的圖表描述寫作要領，會感到無所適從，不知如何著手答題。

在BEC考試中，試題都為了考査和測試考生的識讀、理解視覺信息的實力。BECHigherWritingTest第一部分試題旨在測試考生是否具有把視覺信息轉化為書面文字表達的實力。考生在規(guī)定的時間內做好這種試題，除了必要的語言表達實力外，還必需駕馭把圖表轉換成文字表述的技巧和要領。

做好這部分考題，首先要理解題目的背景語言資料和視覺資料。背景語言資料往往特別簡潔，通常是協(xié)作視覺資料而給出的必要的簡要文字說明。嚴格來說，這種文字說明應當是視覺信息的一部分，因為一個圖表或圖示沒有文字說明，就會毫無意義。因此，把握好題目的視覺信息是做好這部分考題的關鍵。對一個視覺信息，從不同的角度可進行多種分析，得出多種相關結論，限于答題宇數(shù)的要求，通常寫作題目中會明確指定一到兩個分析方向，但也只是供應了分析的方向，沒有詳細的分析細微環(huán)節(jié)，更沒有分析結論。

對多數(shù)中國考生來說，由于習慣于宏觀分析，由于漢語語匯豐富，由于很多詞匯釋義籠統(tǒng)簡單產生歧義，由于大都習慣于先用漢語表述再把漢語轉譯成英語，而很少運用直觀的視覺手段去表達思想，因而讀圖對中國考生來說是比較生疏的難題，更不用說依據(jù)圖表進行分析，干脆用英語表述并得出結論。本單元就視覺信息可能出現(xiàn)的種類以及相應的分析和結論做出舉例和解說，希望考生能夠熟識這些圖形，駕馭解答考題的方法和步驟，正確分析圖表，用英語進行表述并得出結論。

商務英語作文篇2

文體介紹

人員出訪，經常須要事先與要見面的人或公司進行預約。這類預約e-mail較易寫，只要做到清晰、簡潔、禮貌就行。它一般包括下列內容：

（1）懇求約會并說明緣由。

（2）建議準確的約會時間和地點等。假如你的時間比較充裕，預約時可給出你可接受的時間由對方確定。

（3）請對方答復并進行確認。

回復這類電子郵件可分為接受和拒絕兩種。接受的內容一般有：表明來信收悉；表示接受；重述詳細時間、地點等；表達希望會見或感謝的心情。拒絕的內容一般包括：表明來信收悉；說明拒絕的緣由；致歉。

當要變更預約時，應說明變更的`緣由，同時致歉。

好用范例

（1）

subject:requestforanappointment

dearmr。smith

iamscheduledtovisittheu。s。onbusinessattheendofthismonth，andwishtocallonyouatyourofficeonthatoccasion。

iwillbearrivinginwashingtononoraroundaugust20andstayingthereforaboutaweek。itwouldbeverymuchappreciatedifyouwouldkindlyarrangetomeetwithmeeitheronaugust22or23，whicheverisconvenientforyou。ifneitherisconvenient，couldyoupleasesuggestanalternativedatebyreturne-mail。

thankyouinadvanceforyourkindcooperation。iamlookingforwardtomeetingyouinwashingtonsoon!

sincerelyyours，

lilei

guangzhoutradingcompany

主題：懇求約見

敬愛的史密斯先生：

我預定這個月底出差赴美，希望屆時能到貴公司訪問你。

我預料在8月20日或其前后抵達華盛頓，大約停留1周。若便利的話，望你能擠出時間在8月22或23日與我見面，我將非常感謝。假如這兩天都不行，請以電子郵件回復并告知其他日期。

先在此感謝你的大力幫助，期盼不久在華盛頓與你見面！

你真誠的

李蕾

廣州貿易公司

（2）

subject:urgent-needtochangeappointment

dearmr。zhang，

withregardtoourappointmenttovisityourchina’sfactoryonaugust2，iregretthatimustaskyoutochangethedatetoaugust3duetoanunexpectedmatterthatrequiresmypersonalattention。

i’mawfullysorryforthislast-minuterequest，butihopeyouwillbeabletomeetwithmeonaugust3ataround10:00am。ifyouarenotavailable，willyoupleaseletmeknowbye-mailasap?

hopethiswillnotcauseyoutoomuchinconvenience。thankyou。

商務英語作文篇3

Anumberofemployeesclearlysufferfromalackofmotivationasaresultofdissatisfactioninoneormoreareasoftheirwork.Thekeyfindingsareoutlinedbelow:

Stafffeelundervaluedbythecompany,bothonafinancialandapersonallevel.Itisgenerallyfeltthatthecompanyˇscompetitorsofferhigherlevelsofremuneration.TheperceptionthatthemanagersareunappreciativeofstaffeffortsisparticularlynoticeableintheSalesDepartment.

Certainemployeesfeelunder-challenged.Thecompanyisclearlynotexploitingitshumanresources.

ThereappearstobeabreakdownofcommunicationintheProductionDepartment.Theconfusionandresultantill-feelingtowardsmanagershasthepotentialtodisrupttheproductioncycles.

Recommendations

Westronglyrecommendthefollowingmeasures:

Anevaluationofjobprofilesthroughoutthecompanytoassesswhetherskillscouldbeutilisedmoreefficiently

Areviewofthecurrentsalarystructureinvolvingthecomparisonwithsimilarorganisations

ItisalsoessentialtoinvestigateandtakeactionregardingthecommunicationintheProductionandSalesDepartment.

商務英語作文篇4

Ourcountryisknownas“nationoftheetiquette”thelaudatoryname,theadvocationetiquetteisourcountrypeople'straditionalmoralexcellence.Fromancienttimestillnow,ourcountry'setiquettestandardistheChineseuniquecivilizationsymbol,isChinesenationmoralexcellencemanifesting.Theetiquette,tookonetraditionalmoralexcellence,hasthehistoricalinheritance,hasvitalitywhichdoesnotfade.

Theetiquetteinvolveswhichinthecommercialcontactareverymany,butfrombasicspeaksbetweenthehumanandhuman'scontact,thereforeweareusedtothecommercialetiquettelimitsartwhichassociatesforthecommercialpersonnel.

Asthenamesuggests,thecommercialetiquetteisrefersinthepeoplecommercecontactthesuitableetiquettestandard,isinthecommercialcontact,bytheprocedure,thewaywhichcertain,isestablishedbyusageindicatedrespectsoppositepartytheprocessandthemethod.Theritualstemsfromvulgarly,popularizesfortheritual.Thecommercialetiquetteoperationality,howisshoulddo,howshouldn'tdo.Achievesinthecommercialcontact“restrainsoneself,respectsotherpeople”tobeabletocausethepeoplewitheasehappilytoassociate.Notonly“considersforotherpeople”isthecommercialcontact,alsoisbetweenthehumanandthehumanthenormalcontactbasicprinciple.Thereforesaidthestudyandthecorrectutilizationcommerceetiquettenotonlyisapersonintrinsictutelageandthequalityexternalperformance,alsoisinthehumancommunicationthesuitableonekindofart,onehumanrelationswayorthehumanrelationsmethod,areinthehumancommunicationareestablishedbyusageshowrespect,thefriendlycustomprocedure.Carriesoninthehumancommunicationcommunicatesmutuallycertainlymustgraspthecommercialetiquettetheskill.Lookedfromindividualanglethat,graspscertaincommercialetiquettetobehelpfulinenhancespeople'sowntutelage,beautifiesown,thebeautifiedlife.Andcantheveryeffectivepromotionsocialcontact,theimprovementinterpersonalrelationship,butalsoishelpfultothepurificationsocialconvention.Considers,asmile,aconcernallcangivehuman'sbymindinwarmth,andmaycauseownmoodtobealsohappyalongwithit,whynot?

商務英語作文篇5

Thankyouforyourletterof2November.Wearedelightedtohearthatyouaretopleasedwiththerefurbishmentofyourhotel.Asyourknow.inourlineofwork,wedependongood,reportsaboutourprojectstowinfurtherbusiness.Ourclientsalwaysshoparoundandlookforreferencesbeforecommittingthemselves.Withyourpermission,wewouldliketouseyourhotelasareferencewhenwediscusssimilarrefurbishmentsinthehotelindustry.Wouldyouagreetooursuggestingthatfutureclientsshouldcallyou?Itwouldalsobemosthelpfulifwecouldoccasionallybringaclienttolookatyourhotel.Wewould,ofcourse,stayovernightatleast.I’llcallyounextweektohearyourreaction.Thanksagainforyoukindwords.

從11月2日的來函得悉閣下對貴飯店的整修感到滿足，此消息對本公司實是一激勵。設計行業(yè)重視聲譽，客人在選擇設計公司時必定會有所比較。如蒙允許，本公司欲請貴飯店作舉薦人，證明有關整修的質素。未知可否讓其他客戶來電垂詢?此外，如獲允準間或聯(lián)同客戶前來參觀貴飯店整修，定必有莫大幫助。當然，本公司會預訂房間，至少留宿一晚。

商務英語作文篇6

DearMrZampieri

Withreferencetoyourletterdated14June,inwhichyourequestedinformationaboutACutAbove,pleasefindencloseddetailsaboutourcompanyandtheservicesweoffer.

Ouraimisalwaystoprovideourclientswiththebestpossiblecombinationoffood,entertainmentandlocation.BychoosingAcutAbove,youcanrelaxandenjoyyourspecialoccasionwhilewedoallthework.EventscateredforbyAcutAboveincludecorporatefunctionssuchasconventionsandChristmasballsandalsofamilycelebrationssuchasbirthdays,weddingsandanniversaries.

ACutAboveoffersavarietyofservicesfromsimplyprovidingagourmetmenutohelpingyouchoosetherightvenueandorganiseentertainment.Wespecialiseinusingourexperiencetomeetyournees.Tohelpusachievethisaim,wealwaysarrangeameetingwithanewclientwellbeforethedateofanyeventinordertodiscussthevariouspossibilities.

Asyoucanappreciate,weareunabletogivequotationsbeforeourinitialbriefingwithaclientaspriceperheadvaireswithchoiceofmenu.

Toarrangeameetingorforanyfurtherinformation,pleasedonothesitatetocontactmyselforElenaPolidoroon01234578.

ACutAbovelookforwardtohearingfromyou.

Yourssincerely

SineadWalsh

商務英語作文篇7

Dear

Everyonehereat[nameoffirm]wassaddenedtolearnof[nameofemployee]suddenillness.

Weknowthatthiscameonwithoutanywarningandwhiletheproceedsfromthegrouppolicyinsurancecoveragewilldefrayasubstantialamountofthemedicalcosts，youmayhaveneedforsomeadditionalfinancialassistancetoseeyouthroughthisdifficulttime.

Pleasedonothesitatetocallonusifyouneedourassistanceinthisarea.Weconsider[nameofemployee]tobeoneofourmostvaluableemployeesandafineindividualaswellandwouldbemostappreciativeifyouwilllethimknowthatweareallthinkingofhim

商務英語作文篇8

作為國際貿易合同中的要件（condition）之一，包裝是進出口業(yè)務中一項不容忽視的環(huán)節(jié)。從經濟學角度上來說，包裝是現(xiàn)實貨物商品價值和運用價值的一種必要手段。進而言之，假如包裝美觀適銷，還可以提高售價。這一點在國際貿易中尤為突出。不斷改進和提高商品的包裝，不僅可以削減貨損，節(jié)約運費，而且還可以擴大銷量，提高售價，并能反映一個國家在科學技術和文化藝術方面的水平。

2。好用范例

subject:aboutthepacking

dearsir，

on10july，wereceivedyourconsignmentof40cardboardcartonsofsteelscrews。

weregrettoinformyouthat10cartonsweredelivereddamagedandthecontentshadspilled，leadingtosomelosses。

weacceptthatthedamagewasnotyourfaultbutfeelthatwemustmodifyourpackingrequirementtoavoidfuturelosses。

werequirethatfuturepackingbeinwoodenboxesof20kilosnet，eachwoodenboxcontaining40cardbaordpacksof500gramsnet。

pleaseletusknowwhetherthesespecificationscanbemetbyyouandwhethertheywillleadtoanincreaseinyourprices。

welookforwardtoyourearlyconfirmation。

sincerelyyours，

xxxx

主題：包裝事宜

敬愛的先生：

7月10日收到貴公司40個紙板箱鋼螺釘。然而，當中10個紙箱于運輸途中破爛，另貨物散落，造成損失。本公司了解到此非貴公司之過，但希望能改進包裝的方法，以避開同類事務發(fā)生。日后的包裝木箱凈重20公斤，可裝每個凈重500克的紙板箱40個。煩請確認上述方法，并告知新方法會否引致價格上漲。

盼望早日賜復。

你真誠的xxx

3。典型句型

(1)aboutpacking，wewillcontactourmanufacturersandcalltheirattentiontothematter。

關于包裝問題，我方將與廠商聯(lián)系，要求他們對此加以重視。

(2)correctanddistinctmarkingfortheoutsidecontainersisabsolutelynecessary。

我包裝箱必需刷有正確明顯的標記。

(3)inordertopreventdamages，theitemwillbepackedinwoodwool。

為了防止貨物損壞，貨物將用細刨花之類的東西來填充包裝箱。

(4)ourpackingiswellsuitedforlongdistanceshipments。

我們的包裝很適合長途運輸。

（5）pleaseseetoitthatthepackingissuitableforalongseavoyage。

請保證包裝可以適合長途海運

商務英語作文篇9

Businessetiquetteismadeupofsignificantlymoreimportantthingsthanknowingwhichforktouseatlunchwithaclient.Unfortunately,intheperceptionofothers,thedevilisinthedetails.Peoplemayfeelthatifyoucan'tbetrustednottoembarrassyourselfinbusinessandsocialsituations,youmaylacktheself-controlnecessarytobegoodatwhatyoudo.Etiquetteisaboutpresentingyourselfwiththekindofpolishthatshowsyoucanbetakenseriously.Etiquetteisalsoaboutbeingcomfortablearoundpeople(andmakingthemcomfortablearoundyou!)

Peopleareakeyfactorinyourownandyourbusiness'success.Manypotentiallyworthwhileandprofitableallianceshavebeenlostbecauseofanunintentionalbreachofmanners.

DanMcLeod,presidentofPositiveManagementLeadershipPrograms,aunionavoidancecompany,says,"Showmeabosswhotreatshisorheremployeesabrasively,andI'llshowyouanenvironmentripeforlaborproblemsandobviouslypoorcustomersrelations.Disrespectfulanddiscourteoustreatmentofemployeesispassedalongfromthetop."

TheSolution

Mostbehaviorthatisperceivedasdisrespectful,discourteousorabrasiveisunintentional,andcouldhavebeenavoidedbypracticinggoodmannersoretiquette.We'vealwaysfoundthatmostnegativeexperienceswithsomeonewereunintentionalandeasilyrepairedbykeepinganopenmindandmaintainingopen,honestcommunication.Basicknowledgeandpracticeofetiquetteisavaluableadvantage,becauseinalotofsituations,asecondchancemaynotbepossibleorpractical.

Therearemanywrittenandunwrittenrulesandguidelinesforetiquette,anditcertainlybehoovesabusinesspersontolearnthem.Thecaveatisthatthereisnopossiblewaytoknowallofthem!

Theseguidelineshavesomedifficult-to-navigatenuances,dependingonthecompany,thelocalculture,andtherequirementsofthesituation.Possibilitiestocommitafauxpasarelimitless,andchancesare,soonerorlater,you'llmakeamistake.Butyoucanminimizethem,recoverquickly,andavoidcausingabadimpressionbybeinggenerallyconsiderateandattentivetotheconcernsofothers,andbyadheringtothebasicrulesofetiquette.Whenindoubt,sticktothebasics.

TheBasics

Themostimportantthingtorememberistobecourteousandthoughtfultothepeoplearoundyou,regardlessofthesituation.Considerotherpeople'sfeelings,sticktoyourconvictionsasdiplomaticallyaspossible.Addressconflictassituation-related,ratherthanperson-related.Apologizewhenyoustepontoes.Youcan'tgotoofarwrongifyoustickwiththebasicsyoulearnedinKindergarten.(Notthatthosebasicsareeasytorememberwhenyou'reinahard-nosedbusinessmeeting!)

Thissoundssimplistic,butthequalitiesweadmiremostwhenweseetheminpeopleinleadershippositions,thosearetheverytraitsweworksohardtoengenderinourchildren.Ifyoualwaysbehavesothatyouwouldnotmindyourspouse,kids,orgrandparentswatchingyou,you'reprobablydoingfine.Avoidraisingyourvoice(surprisingly,itcanbemuchmoreeffectiveatgettingattentionwhenlowerit!)usingharshorderogatorylanguagetowardanyone(presentorabsent),orinterrupting.Youmaynotgetasmuch"airtime"inmeetingsatfirst,butwhatyoudosaywillbemuchmoreeffectivebecauseitcarriestheweightofcredibilityandrespectability.

Thefollowingareguidelinesandtipsthatwe'vefoundhelpfulfordealingwithpeopleingeneral,inworkenvironments,andinsocialsituations.

It'sAboutPeople

Talkandvisitwithpeople.Don'tdifferentiatebypositionorstandingwithinthecompany.Secretariesandjanitorialstaffactuallyhavetremendouspowertohelporhinderyourcareer.Nexttimeyouneedadocumentpreparedoraconferenceroomarrangedforapresentation,watchhowmanypeopleareinvolvedwiththatprocess(you'llprobablybesurprised!)andmakeitapointtomeetthemandshowyourappreciation.

Makeitapointtoarrivetenorfifteenminutesearlyandvisitwithpeoplethatworknearyou.Whenyou'revisitinganothersite,lingeroveracupofcoffeeandintroduceyourselftopeoplenearby.Ifyouarriveearlyforameeting,introduceyou