專題151月浙江卷（蜂鳥報恩）高考英語讀后續(xù)寫歷年真題解析（課件）

讀后續(xù)寫真題2023年1月浙江卷蜂鳥報恩1試題再現2試題分析3寫作思路4范文賞析目錄CONTENTS2023試題再現歷年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析01真題再現2023試題分析歷年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析02梗概

故事講述了主人公“我”發(fā)現一個廢棄房子里面有一只蜂鳥被蜘蛛網困住了。“我”把蜂鳥救了出來。在“我”要離開時，這只蜂鳥停在了我的面前，似乎在和我告別。

主題：人與自然——講述了人與動物之間的趣事，體現了人與自然和諧相處。

視角：第一人稱讀故事兩句段首句1.續(xù)寫詞數應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.

Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.占位符標題05故事線IwenttoafarmIfoundatrappedhummingbirdandsaveditItcamebacktomewanttosaygoodbyeIcamebacktothefarmThehummingbirdappearedclimaxrevesalresulotion文章語言表達WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Foraverylongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.蜂鳥表現出類似人類的情感：感謝野生鳥類盯著人類野生鳥類盯著人類，發(fā)出叫聲文章語言表達Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?主人公對蜂鳥行為進行猜測話語：烹飪對蜂鳥的行為進行猜測2023寫作思路歷年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析03兩種構思方法“四到一行”“線索呼應”看聽想說做找出線索，前后呼應“兩法六句”第一步依據首句，構思框架兩段首句定一框，二框二首正能量。(1)讀懂兩段首句第一段首句后的銜接句、第一段尾句、第二段首句后的銜接句。即第二段的尾句——能體現故事圓滿結局的句子或故事給我們啟示的句子。(2)寫好三個銜接句(3)寫好一個升華句動作描寫增加細節(jié)所見所聞、所說所思所做環(huán)境描寫人物描寫語言描寫心理活動描寫第二步增加細節(jié)，展開續(xù)寫Para1：Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain情節(jié)一：brokenwindowWhenpassingthefamiliardesertedmilkinghousewhereIlastmetmyhummingbird,Iinstantlynoticedthebrokenwindowhadbeenreplacedaspromised.Para1：Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain情節(jié)二：thoughtaboutthehummingbirdIcouldnothelptofondlyrecallthelovelyhummingbirdthatcharmedeveryoneofuswithitsdeterminationtobidfarewell.Whatacuteandintelligentcreatureitwas!Para1：Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain情節(jié)三：wanttoseethehummingbirdagain.Asamatteroffact,IsecretlymadeawishtoseeheronceagainsomehowandsomewhereinthisexpeditionthoughIknewdeepdowninmyheartitwasanextravagantidea.Thingswentasplannedandasusual,cheerfullybutnotsurprisingly.Para2：Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.主要預測：thehummingbirdexpressedhergratitude.Theamazinglittlebirdwithshockingmemoryuseditsuniquewaytoexpresshergratitudetoahumanfriend.Naturewassoadorableandmysteriousthatweallfeltawedandhumblewhenfacedwithit.2023范文賞析歷年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析04

Afewweekslater,Ivisitedthefarmagain.

Thesamedilapidatedhouse,thesamegiganticspiderweb,thesamegreenblackberrypath."Willthehummingbirdbethesame?Willthislovelyandhumanisticcreaturebetrappedinthewebagain?Notlikely,sincetheholeinthewindowhadbeenfixed."Thesequestionsandthoughtspoppedintomyheadlikestrandsofspiderthread.Withsmellofroastedfoodwaftingintheair,myfriendsandIchattedandlaughed