人教版高中英語必修一 （Sports and Fitness）Reading for Writing 教學課件

Unit3Sportsandfitness

SectionⅦ

ReadingforWriting—有關身心健康的比較說明文

本單元的寫作任務是讀一篇關于健康的文章后，寫一篇有關身心健康的比較說明文。Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)LearningtowriteafterthemodelGOINGPOSITIVEIalwayswantedtolookliketheslimgirlsonTVeventhoughIknewthatitwasimpossible.IworriedaboutmyweightandtriedeverynewdietIreadaboutonline.Itriedno-fat，low-fat，5：2，onlybananas，nobananas—Ialmostwentbananas，too.ThenIreadanarticlethatsaidinsteadofasking“AmIfat？”Ishouldbeasking“AmIfit？”Ihadnoideaalettercouldmakesuchadifference!OnceIstartedthinkingaboutfitnessratherthanweight，thingsbegantochange.Insteadofsaying“Iwanttolosethreekilos”，Iwouldsay“Iwanttoruntwokilometresineightminutes”or“Iwanttobeabletodo30push-ups”.RatherthancuttingoutthefoodsIenjoyed，Iaddedhealthyfoodstomymeals.Icouldstillhaveaburgernowandthen，butIwouldaddasaladoranapple.Finally，Istoppedcomparingmyselfwithactressesandmodelsandlookingforthingsthatwerewrongwithmyfaceorbody.Instead，ImadealistofthethingsIlikedaboutmyself.Bybeingpositiveaboutmyselfandmybody，Ibecamebothhappierandhealthier.(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①___________________adj.健康的②___________________adj.不健康的③___________________綠色食品④___________________健康飲食⑤___________________不健康的飲食習慣

healthy/fitunhealthy/unfitgreenfoodhealthyfood/dietunhealthyeatinghabit⑥________________良好的生活習慣⑦________________adj.肥胖的⑧________________強身健體⑨________________充足的睡眠⑩________________進行運動?________________減肥?___________________對……有益處?________________節(jié)食?________________養(yǎng)成一個……的飲食習慣

?___________________身體健康/不健康?____________________________對某人的健康/視力有益/害

goodlivinghabitsoverweight/fatbuildupone’sbodyenoughsleeptakeexerciseloseweightbegoodfor/dogoodtogoonadietforma...eatinghabitbeingood/poorhealthbegood/badforone’shealth/eyesⅡ.While-writing寫一篇100詞左右的短文，介紹你自己是如何平衡學習和休息的。內容包括：1.以前無法平衡學習和休息；2.現在已經做到二者平衡；3.你的做法。Step1

Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Paragraph1：___________________________________________________________Paragraph2：___________________________________________________________Paragraph3：___________________________________________________________Icouldn’tbalancerestandstudybefore.Howtobalancerestandstudy.Icanbalancerestandstudynow.Step2

Listthewords，phrasesandsentences.1.Wordsandphrases①________________adj.勞累的②________________v.認識到；意識到③__________________平衡休息和學習④________________忙于⑤________________休息一下⑥________________結果⑦________________生?、郷_______________一直⑨________________打籃球⑩________________落后

tiredrealizebalancerestandstudybebusywithhavearestasaresultfallillallthetimeplaybasketballfallbehind2.Sentences①我經常忙于學習，因此沒有時間休息。(so)________________________________________________________________________②不是整天學習，而是我開始抽時間休息。(ratherthan)________________________________________________________________________③我不是整天做作業(yè)，而是一天打一個小時籃球。(insteadof)________________________________________________________________________Iwasoftenbusywithmystudy，soIhadnotimetohavearest.Ratherthanstudyingallthetime，Ibegantosparesometimetohavearest.Insteadofdoingmyhomeworkalltheday，Iwenttoplaybasketballforanhouraday.Twoyearsago，Icouldn’tbalancerestandstudy.Iwasoftenbusywithmystudy，soIhadnotimetohavearest.Asaresult，Ioftenfelttiredandstressed.AtlastIfellillandhadtostayinhospitalfor3weeks.AfterIrecoveredfromillness，Ibegantothinkaboutmyproblems.Igottorealizetheimportanceofbalancingrestandstudy.Ratherthanstudyingallthetime，Ibegantosparesometimetohavearest.Insteadofdoingmyhomeworkalltheday，Iwenttoplaybasketballforanhouraday.Finally，Igottobalancerestandstudy.Ibecamequitehealthy.Ididn’tfallbehind;instead，Istudiedbetterthanbefore.Ⅲ.Post-writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourpassagewithyourpartner，andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Doesthewriterexplainwhyhe/shechanged/wantedtochange?□2.Doesthewritertellhowthechangeshaveimprovedorwillimprovehis/herlife?□3.Isthetextwell-organised?□4.Doesthewriterusewordsandexpressionstoshowsimilaritiesanddifferences?□5.Arethereanygrammarorspellingerrors?□6.Doesthewriterusecorrectpunctuation?寫作要點Thepast：Iworriedaboutmyweightandtriedeverynewdiet.Thechanges：Ifocusedonfitnessratherthandietandweight.

Thepresent：IbecamepositiveandIbecamebothhappierandhealthier.常用詞匯like，so，too，still，similarly，similarto，thesame(...as...)，incommon(with)，both...and...，instead，than，however/but/though，differentfrom，ratherthan，insteadof，thedifferenceis...亮點表達1.Takingexerciseiscloselyrelatedtohealth.

運動與健康息息相關。2.Weshouldgetintothehabitofkeepinggoodhours.

我們應該養(yǎng)成早睡早起的習慣。3.Smokinghasagreatinfluenceonourhealth.

抽煙對我們的健康有很大的影響。4.Accordingtoarecentsurvey，fourmillionpeopledieeachyearfromd