Unit1ReadingforWriting建議信講評課件高中英語人教版

Unit1TeenageLife

Polishyourwriting假定你是李華，你收到一封來自朋友Lucy的電子郵件，她在郵件中說自己剛上高一，在英語學(xué)習(xí)方面遇到了一些困難，希望你給她一些建議。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給她回封郵件：1.寫信目的和表示安慰；2.給出建議和原因；3.表達(dá)希望。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80詞左右。2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。lead-inbeginningmainbody

endingoutlinewishsuggestions

+reasons/benefits

showunderstanding+writingpurpose

(giveadvice)高考應(yīng)用文給分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第五檔（很好）(13～15分)：完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。(1)覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)清楚、合理；(2)應(yīng)用了較多復(fù)雜、高級的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；(3)語法即使有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯所致；表現(xiàn)了較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力；(4)自然流暢地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。注意：書寫差，給分降檔Usefulcohesivewords(銜接詞)：*Firstly/forastart/firstofall*Secondly/moreover/furthermore/inaddition/what’smore/besides*Thirdly/thelastpoint/thelastbutnottheleastagoodcompositionstructurecontentslanguageCommonproblems（一）structure分段過多標(biāo)點(diǎn)分段不清缺少銜接Commonproblems（二）contents要點(diǎn)不全內(nèi)容不相關(guān)內(nèi)容不具體Commonproblems（三）language語言累贅句型單一Howtopolish

yourwriting?Polishyourcompositionbyimprovingyourhandwriting（書寫）Comparethesetwosentences.Whichsentencedoyouthinkcanattracttheteachers?Polishyourcompositionbyimprovingyourlanguage1.YoutellmethatEnglishisdiificulttolearn.2.I'minformedthatyouhavetroubleinlearningEnglish.PolishyourcompositionbyimprovingyourlanguageA.excellentwordsandphrases(詞匯短語的選擇靈活新穎)B.

avarietyofsentencepatterns(句型結(jié)構(gòu)運(yùn)用高級多變）excellentwordsandphrases1.IamsorrytoknowthatyouhavesometroubleinlearningEnglish.Polish:IunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterribleaboutlearningEnglish.

oushouldlistentotheteachercarefully.Polish:Youaresupposedtoconcentrateon/focusontheclass.excellentwordsandphrases3.YoushouldreadEnglishaloudinthemorning.

Polish:ReadingEnglishaloudinthemorning____________toyourEnglishlearning.4.

ItisbeneficialtoimproveyourEnglish.(改為beof+名詞）Polish:It_____________toimproveyourEnglish.isofbenefitUseavarietyofsentencepatterns豐富句型5.ReadingEnglishbookshelpsalot.(改為強(qiáng)調(diào)句）Polish:____isreadingEnglishbooks_____helpsalot.6.Ihopemysuggetionswillbeofgreathelp.(改為強(qiáng)調(diào)句）Polish:

I____hopemysuggestionswillbeofgreathelp.Itthat

do

Useavarietyofsentencepatterns豐富句型7.Inthisway,youcanmakegreatprogressinEnglish.(改為倒裝句）Polish:____inthisway,____youmakegreatprogressinEnglish.8.Whenyouarehavingclass,youshouldlistencarefully.(改為省略句）Polish:

When______class,youshouldlistencarefully.OnlycanhavingUseavarietyofsentencepatterns豐富句型9.YourEnglishwillimprovebytalkingwithothersinEnglish.(改為狀語從句）Polish:

___youtalkwithothersinEnglish,yourEnglishwillimprove.10.YoushouldhaveagoodattitudetowardslearningEnglish.Ithelpsalot.(改為定語從句）Polish:YoushouldhaveagoodattitudetowardslearningEnglish，______helpsalot.IfwhichUseavarietyofsentencepatterns11.YoucanreadmorebookswhichiswritteninEnglish，thenyoucanlearnmorewords.（the+比較級，the+比較級）Polish:__________

Englishoriginalsyouread,_______

you'lllearnEnglish.Themore

thebetterUseavarietyofsentencepatterns(saying)12.Formingagoodhabitisimportant.practicemakesperfectPolish:：AsAristotleputsit，goodhabitsformedatyouthmakeallthedifference.Sowhynotformgoodhabits,suchastakingnotesandlisteningtotheteachercarefully