讀后續(xù)寫愛心故事類：圣誕節(jié)奇跡 高三英語復(fù)習(xí)寫作專項(xiàng)

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)愛心故事——圣誕節(jié)的奇跡1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文RightbeforeThanksgiving,Iprayed,“LordpleasemakemeablessingtoothersasSanta”.AweeklaterasmyhusbandandIwerepreparingforthisyear’sSantavisitswithmyMrs.Clausbasket,wediscoveredalettertoSantafromayoungmothernamedMary,whowasillandwasaskingiftherewasaSantaandifmiraclesdidhappenthatheryoungchildrenwouldhaveagoodChristmasbecauseshewastoldbydoctorsthatitcouldbeherlast.Initwashername,phonenumberandaddress.ItriedtomakecontactwithMary,buthowevermanytimesItried,Ihadnoluckingettingsomeonetoanswerthephone.OneweekbeforeChristmas,Idecidedtomakeacallonemoretime.Thistimeawomanansweredthephone.IdiscoveredthatitwasMary’smother.ShefirstsaidthatnoonelivedtherebythenameofMary.Ihadtwochoices:tothankherandhanguporkeeptrying.IdecidedtocontinueandexplainedthatIwasMrs.ClausandthatwehadfoundaletterwrittentoSantabyMaryatthistelephonenumber,expressingthedesiretohelpherkids.ShewasinshockandtoldmethatMaryhadhadanoperationtwoweeksbefore.4續(xù)寫原文Themotherstartedcryingaswecontinuedtalking.Intheend,shesaidshewouldaskMarytocallmebackandwewouldtalkmore.Thenextday,aspromised,IreceivedaphonecallfromMary.Wetalkedaboutherchildren.Shegavemetheirnames,ages,andalittleaboutthem.ItoldherthatwewantedtofulfillherwishesandmakeherdreamcometruethisChristmastohelpherfamily.ShecriedandIdidtooaswespoke.Beforehangingup,shesaidthatshewashappythatherchildrenwouldhaveagoodChristmas.Inthefollowingdays,wewerebusymakingpreparations.Muchtoourdelight,everythingwasreadyjustbeforetheChristmasEve.Wewaitedeagerlyforthedaybreak.5段首句Paragraph1:OnChristmasmorning,wearrivedatMary’shome.Paragraph2:Thetimewentbyquicklyanditwastimetosaygoodbye.6Part2題目分析7點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)8續(xù)寫思路分析本文以人物為線索展開，講述了在感恩節(jié)前夕，作者和丈夫拿著圣誕夫人籃子為今年的圣誕老人來訪做準(zhǔn)備時，他們發(fā)現(xiàn)了一封寫給圣誕老人的信，是一位名叫瑪麗的生病的年輕母親寫的，問是否有圣誕老人，是否真的有奇跡發(fā)生，為了幫助她的孩子們將度過一個愉快的圣誕節(jié)，我們一切都準(zhǔn)備好了，急切地等待著黎明到來的故事。9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：OnChristmasmorning,wearrivedatMary’shome.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“在圣誕節(jié)早上，我們到了瑪麗家?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懽髡咭姷浆旣?，給她和孩子帶來驚喜的經(jīng)過。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2:Thetimewentbyquicklyanditwastimetosaygoodbye.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“時間過得真快，到了說再見的時候了?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫作者幫助一位母親實(shí)現(xiàn)了她的愿望后要離開，并意識到成為別人的圣誕老人就是圣誕節(jié)的意義所在。11續(xù)寫思路分析續(xù)寫線索相見——幫助——感謝——分別——感悟12續(xù)寫素材可用詞匯：行為類①讓位于：givewayto/change/yield②.實(shí)現(xiàn)：fulfill/achieve/realize③.幫助：aid/dosomebodyafavor情緒類①.感謝：showherappreciation/showhergratitude/begrateful/thank②.熱切地：eagerly/earnestly13續(xù)寫素材可用句型：[高分句型1].Havingreceivedpresentsfromus,theyeagerlyunwrappedthem,initialshynessgivingwaytoutterdelight.(運(yùn)用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)[高分句型2].IwashappythatIhelpedamotherfulfillherwishesandrealizedthatbeingSantaforothersiswhatChristmasisallabout.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句)14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)OnChristmasmorning,wearrivedatMary’shome.Itwasadimlylithome,smallandshabby,withlittlefurnitureinit.“MerryChristmas!”wesaidinunisonaswewalkedintothehome.Ayoungfrail-lookingmothercameup,alookofconfusiononherface.Immediately,weintroducedourselves.Sheheldbackherurgetocryandmanagedasmile.Herchildren,shyaroundstrangers,justhidbehindtheirmotherandpeekedfromtimetotime.Havingreceivedpresentsfromus,theyeagerlyunwrappedthem,initialshynessgivingwaytoutterdelight.Thewholefamilythankedussincerely.Afterwards,wehadfuntogethercelebratingChristmas.16范文呈現(xiàn)Thetimewentbyquicklyanditwastimetosaygoodbye.Thechildrenwerenowsoattachedtousthattheyfollowedusoutofthehome.Wecroucheddown,heldtheirhands,andpulledthemintoourarms.Outofexpectations,theyplantedaffectionatekissesonourforeheads.Theirmotherstoodatthedoor,waving,tearsofhappinesswellingupinhereyes.Onthewaybackhome,Itouchedwherethekisslayandfeltasenseofwarmthsurgingthroughme.IwashappythatIhelpedamotherfulfillherwishesandrealizedthatbeingSantaforothersiswhatChristmasisallabout.17范文譯文圣誕節(jié)的早晨，我們到達(dá)了瑪麗的家。這是一個燈光昏暗的家，又小又破舊，里面幾乎沒有家具。“圣誕快樂！”我們走進(jìn)家時齊聲說道。一位年輕體弱的母親走了過來，臉上露出困惑的表情。我們立即做了自我介紹。她抑制住了哭的沖動，勉強(qiáng)笑了笑。她的孩子們在陌生人面前很害羞，只是躲在母親身后，不時地偷看。收到我們的禮物后，他們急切地打開它們，最初的害羞讓位于由衷的喜悅。全家人都衷心感謝我們。之后，我們一起慶祝圣誕節(jié)玩得很開心。18范文譯文時間過得很快，該說再見了。孩子們現(xiàn)在非常依戀我們，他們跟著我們走出了家。我們蹲下來，握