人教版高中英語必修一 （Travelling Around）Reading for Writing 教學(xué)課件

SectionⅦ

ReadingforWriting—有關(guān)旅行計(jì)劃的電子郵件

TravellingAround

本單元的寫作任務(wù)是讀理查德給小李介紹旅行計(jì)劃的電子郵件后，給朋友寫一封介紹旅行計(jì)劃的電子郵件。

Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)LearningtowriteafterthemodelDearXiaoLi，MytimehereinChinaisgoingwell.Ilovemynewschoolandclassmates.OvertheOctoberholiday，myparentsandIareplanningtogotoXi’antoseetheTerracottaArmy.I’veheardthatitisanamazingsight，andIcan’twaittogo.TomethestoryoftheTerracottaArmyisalmostunbelievable.It’samazingthattherearemorethan8，000statues，andnooneinmoderntimesknewaboutthemuntilthe1970s.We’realsoplanningtovisitseveralotherplacesinXi’an.MydadandIarebothlookingforwardtogoingtotheShaanxiHistoryMuseum，becausemydadloveshistoryandIhaveheardthatthismuseumisknownasa“Chinesetreasurehouse”！We’realsogoingtotheXi’anCityWallandafewotherfamoussights.We’retakingthetrain，leavingthedaybeforetheOctoberholidaybegins.We’rearrivingat9：30amandwillstartsightseeingrightaway，soIhopewesleepwellonthetrain!Iguessthat’sallfornow！I’llwriteagainsoonandsendphotos！Doyouhaveanyplansforthecomingholiday？Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yourfriend，Richard(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①________________利用

②________________

如下③________________游覽

④________________出發(fā)⑤________________七日游

⑥________________欣賞風(fēng)景⑦_(dá)_______________動身去某地

⑧________________和……一起⑨________________即將來臨

⑩________________乘公共汽車

takeadvantageofasfollowstakeatoursetout/offaseven-daytripenjoythesceneryleavefortogetherwitharoundthecornertakeabusⅡ.While-writing假設(shè)你是王明，寒假即將來臨，你打算和家人去上海玩。請你給你的好友李華寫一封e-mail,分享你的出行計(jì)劃。要點(diǎn)：1.元月21日下午2點(diǎn)左右從醴陵坐高鐵去上海，到上海后入住預(yù)訂酒店，休息一晚。2.第二天進(jìn)上海迪士尼樂園游玩，體驗(yàn)各種游樂設(shè)施，購買紀(jì)念品。3.第三天上午參觀上?？萍拣^，下午登東方之珠，欣賞上海全貌。

4.元月24日乘坐高鐵返回。注意：1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2.詞數(shù)100左右。參考詞匯：highspeedrailway高鐵book預(yù)訂Disneyland迪士尼樂園recreationfacilities游樂設(shè)施souvenir紀(jì)念品ShanghaiScienceandTechnologyMuseum上?？萍拣^OrientalPearlTower東方明珠

Step1

Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Paragraph1：_____________________________________________Paragraph2：____________________________________________Paragraph3：_____________________________________________Step2

Listthewords，phrasesandsentences.1.Wordsandphrases①________________vt.

預(yù)訂②________________

登記③________________提前

④________________同時⑤________________四天的旅行

Iwillhaveafour-daytriptoShanghaiwithmyfamily.WhatweshalldoeverydaywhileinShanghai.Howabouttheplanforyourwinterholiday?bookcheckininadvanceatthesametimeafour-daytrip2.Sentences①隨著寒假的到來，我和我的家人要到上海旅行四天。(as)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________②到達(dá)上海后，我們會先入住酒店好好休息，酒店會提前在網(wǎng)上預(yù)訂，這樣我們才有足夠的精力去參觀上海。(sothat)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________③下午我們將登上東方明珠，在那里我們可以欣賞到上海的全景。(fromwhich)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________Asthewinterholidayiscoming，Iwillhaveafour-daytriptoShanghaiwithmyfamily.UponarrivinginShanghai，wewillcheckinthehotelforagoodrestfirst,whichwillbebookedonlineinadvance，sothatwecanhaveenoughenergytovisitShanghai.WewillclimbtheOrientalPearlTowerintheafternoon，fromwhichwewillenjoythewholeviewofShanghai.DearLiHua，Howiseverythinggoing?Asthewinterholidayiscoming，Iwillhaveafour-daytriptoShanghaiwithmyfamily.Hereismyplan.WeareleavingLilingforShanghaibythehighspeedrailwayataround2：00p.m.onJan.21st.UponarrivinginShanghai，wewillcheckinthehotelforagoodrestfirst，whichwillbebookedonlineinadvance，sothatwecanhaveenoughenergytovisitShanghai.Onthesecondday，wearegoingtotheDisneylandtoexperienceallkindsofrecreationfacilities，andbuysomesouvenirsatthesametime.Onthethirdday，wewillvisitShanghaiScienceandTechnologyMuseuminthemorning.Besides，wewillclimbtheOrientalPearlTowerintheafternoon，fromwhichwewillenjoythewholeviewofShanghai.OnJan.24th，wewilltakethehighspeedrailwaybacktoLiling.Howabouttheplanforyourwinterholiday?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，WangMingⅢ.Post-writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourpassagewithyourpartner，andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Isthereaclearpurposeforthetrip?□2.Doeseachparagraphhaveaclearmainidea?□3.Doesthewriterusethepresentcontinuoustenseforfutureplans?□4.Doesthewriterusecommas，stops，andquestionmarkscorrectly?□5.Areallthewordsspeltcorrectly?□6.Areallthepropernounscapitalised?寫作要點(diǎn)Timeandtraveldestination：OvertheOctoberholiday，myparentsandIareplanningtogotoXi’antoseetheTerracottaArmy.Someotherplacesofinterest：MydadandIarebothlookingforwardtogoingtotheShaanxiHistoryMuseum.WearealsogoingtotheXi’anCityWallandafewotherfamoussights.Meansoftransport：We’retakingthetrain，leavingthedaybeforetheOctoberholidaybegins.亮點(diǎn)表達(dá)1.旅游計(jì)劃①M(fèi)ytravelplanisasfollows.我的旅行計(jì)劃如下。②Here/Belowismytravelplan.這兒/下面是我的旅行計(jì)劃。③Winterholidayiscoming.Ihaveaplanforit.寒假要來了。對此我有一個計(jì)劃。

2.旅游目的地①Thismonth，IwilltraveltoChangshaandZhangjiajiewithmytwofriends，whichissupposedtobeaseven-daytrip.這個月，我將和我的兩個朋友去長沙和張家界旅游，這應(yīng)該是一次七日游。②I’mplanningtotraveltoSuzhou，acitycalledEasternVenice.我計(jì)劃到蘇州旅游，它被稱作東方威尼斯。③TheMayDayiscoming/approaching，andIamgoingtotraveltoShanghaitoseeitsbeautifulscenery.五