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爸爸帶兒子去朋友家農(nóng)場(chǎng)騎馬迷路目錄CONTENTS1讀原文

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填表格2讀P1P2首句

定情節(jié)發(fā)展列大綱

兩段12句法3寫句式

招招升級(jí)45寫句式

招招升級(jí)

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填表格1Itwassummer,andmy

dad

wantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.

UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthe

farmhouse

listeningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdownthe

river

nearby.Veryearlyinthemorning.UnclePaul

wokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTina

feed

thechickens,

whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethe

sheep

outtograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaul

ridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.2018年浙江卷真題原文Intheafternoon,I

asked

UnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Don’tbe

late

forsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothe

track

sothatyoudon’t

getlost!”“OK!”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutof

sight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelate

afternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(編織的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.n.特點(diǎn)

（adj./v./短語(yǔ)）（主要）角色1wouldliketotakemeonatrip（主要）角色2Ieagertoridehorse（主要）角色3UnclePaulmydad’sfriend;afarm’sowner背景事件Mydadtookmetoexperiencefarmlife.微情節(jié)

動(dòng)作(v.)/情緒(adj.)

Mydadtookmetothefarm.(p1)Iwasimpressedtoseethemridinghorses.(p2)Mydadtookmetoridehorses.(p3)

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定情節(jié)發(fā)展Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse._______________________________________________________Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark._______________________________________________________2Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.P1大意P1角色續(xù)寫思路myhorseImydad

讀P1P2首句

定情節(jié)發(fā)展Howdidmyhorsereact?Andwhataboutme?I;mydad;myhorse2②HowdidIfeel?WhatdidIdo?①Seeingtherabbit,howdidmyhorsereact?

③Howdidmydadfeel?Whatdidhedo?④Howdidthehorsestop?P2大意P2角色續(xù)寫思路

動(dòng)作(v.)

情緒(adj.)

讀P1P2首句

定情節(jié)發(fā)展WewerelostandUnclePaulcametorescueus.mydadandIUnclePaul

2I;mydad;UnclePaul①Lost,whatdidwedo?④Howdidwereturnthefarm?②WhatdidUnclePauldo?Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Howdidwefeel?③WhydidUnclePaulcome?列大綱：兩段12句法3Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.

列大綱：兩段12句法

1）

2）3）4）5）6）7）

8）9）10）11）12）思考：12句話中，有哪幾句是固定內(nèi)容？

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列大綱：兩段12句法1）固定

2）3）4）5）6）固定

7）固定

8）9）10）11）12）固定

結(jié)局/升華主旨續(xù)寫首段首句續(xù)寫二段首句承接首段首句3Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.

列大綱：兩段12句法1）

2）3）4）5）6）

7）固定

8）9）10）11）12）

Weweresafeandsound.Itscaredmyhorse.Everythingwasstrange.Butwefoundwewerelost.Myfatherworriedmealot.

Iwasafraid,too.Thehorsestopped.Wefeltrelieved.Afaintvoicecame.ItwasUnclePaul.Hefoundus.Heguessedwewerelost.3Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.寫句式

招招升級(jí)4Step4.寫句式

招招升級(jí)

e.g.:1）

Itsabruptappearancescaredmyhorse,makingitrunoffthetrackwildly.招式1：

非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞常用句式：①...,doing②Doing...,.....③Havingdone...,...

寫句式

招招升級(jí)

e.g.:2）IsparednoeffortstoholdonashardasIcouldandmydadwastryingtokeepup,extremelyworriedaboutmysafety.3）Relieved,welookedaroundtryingtofindthetrack.招式2：

形容詞作狀語(yǔ)，表示情緒感受

常用句式：①Adj.+adj.,...②...,adj.+adj.4

寫句式

招招升級(jí)e.g.:4）

Soaimlesslydidthefrightenedhorserunthatwegotlostunconsciously.4招式3：“so...that...”

因果關(guān)系邏輯強(qiáng)，動(dòng)作情緒全包含，

想更高級(jí)也容易，so提前變成倒裝

Step4.寫句式

招招升級(jí)

e.g.:5）Nothinginsightwasfamiliarandneitherdidweknowwherethefarmhousewas.招式4：

否定詞置于句首，使用半倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)

①“Notonly+半倒裝,butalso...”

②“Never/No/neither++半倒裝”

寫句式

招招升級(jí)

e.g.:6）Justatthepointofdesperation,fromthedistance

cameafaintvoice.招式5：

完全倒裝

表示時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、方位的介詞或副詞置于句首時(shí)，使用完全倒裝

結(jié)構(gòu)，即“謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞+主語(yǔ)”

4

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范文賞析5Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Itsabruptappearancescaredmyhorse,makingitrunoffthetrackwildly.IsparednoeffortstoholdonashardasIcouldandmydadwastryingtokeepup,extremelyworriedaboutmysafety.Fortunately,minuteslater,thehorsestoppedbeforeariver,outof