高考作文概要寫作Summary-Writing(必修三第四單元課文)

Summarywriting2021/5/912017高考新作文概況PARTI應(yīng)用文寫作：80±20詞共15分PARTII讀后續(xù)寫：原文350詞左右

續(xù)寫150±20詞PARTIII概要寫作：原文350詞左右

概要60±202021/5/92Asummaryisa

shortstatementthatgivesonlythemainpoints

ofsth,notthedetails《牛津高階英漢雙解詞典》讀者在正確理解文章的基礎(chǔ)上,在不改變?cè)闹行乃枷?、體裁和結(jié)構(gòu)的前提下，用簡(jiǎn)明、精練的語句高度濃縮文章的主要內(nèi)容和觀點(diǎn)。

Itisabrief,thorough

and

objective

restatementofthemainideaandkeypointsofalongercomposition.01Whatisasummary?2021/5/93a60-wordsummaryuseyourownwordsinthethirdpersonwithabriefsentenceconnectionbetweensentences(句子銜接)02RequestsofSummaryWriting2021/5/94Step1.Determinethetypeofwritingandidentifythetopicaswellastheauthor’spurposeStep2.Dividethepassage&summarizethemainideaofeachpartStep3.HighlightthekeyinformationofeachpartStep4.MakeanoutlineofthepassageStep5.WritethefirstdraftStep6.Revisethesummary03StepsofSummaryWriting2021/5/95Unit4Astronomy:thescienceofthestarsSection3--TextRevisionTask1-Listenforthemainidea2021/5/96Step1.

確定體裁，明確主題，Step2.

劃分文章結(jié)構(gòu)，劃分層次Step3.

找出每層主旨信息Step4.

列出文章提綱

Step5.

擬寫草稿Step6.

修改文章03StepsofSummaryWriting2021/5/97Step1.Determinethetypeofwritingandidentifythetopicaswellastheauthor’spurpose

確定體裁，明確主題體裁：主題：記敘文文藝復(fù)興時(shí)期的藝術(shù)2021/5/98

提煉要點(diǎn)整合刪除細(xì)節(jié)刪除具體例子（引用一兩個(gè)說明問題即可）避免重復(fù)

同義轉(zhuǎn)換:近義詞、同義詞等替換語言

句子重構(gòu):調(diào)整詞類、時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)等

邏輯：銜接（照應(yīng)、替代、省略、連接和詞匯銜接）

04SkillsofSummaryWriting2021/5/99typeskeyinformation記敘文narration人物+時(shí)間+地點(diǎn)+事件（起因+發(fā)展+結(jié)果）說明文exposition描寫某事物的性質(zhì)功用。即“對(duì)象+性質(zhì)功用+利好”；針對(duì)某個(gè)問題提出解決方法或措施。即“問題+解決方法”；介紹某現(xiàn)象及其原因和結(jié)果。即“現(xiàn)象+原因+結(jié)果”議論文argumentation論點(diǎn)+論據(jù)(+結(jié)論)1.確定文體thetypesofthepassage√√2021/5/910Step2.Dividethepassage&summarizethemainideaofeachpart明確文章結(jié)構(gòu)Para2Para1Para3Para4Para52021/5/911Step3.Highlightthekeyinformationofeachpart劃主題句與關(guān)鍵信息2021/5/912Para1-TheoryMainidea:However,accordingtoawidelyacceptedtheory,theuniversebeganwitha“BigBang”thatthrewmattersinalldirections.Tip1:

注意語句標(biāo)記詞如however后所說的話往往就是point。然而，如何改寫用自己的話來概擴(kuò)呢？Mainidea:The“bigbang”theoryexplainedtheorigionoftheUniverse.Tip2:省略定語從句，改寫主語和賓語的位置2021/5/913Para2-EarthTopicSentence:None.（6個(gè)句子的邏輯關(guān)系理清楚）Information:theearthwasacloudofdust.thedustsettledintoasolidballproducegasestobeatmospherewaterappearedTips:有些段落需要把信息點(diǎn)提煉出來在進(jìn)行歸納。因此此句概括為：Theearthexplodedviolentlybutintimecreatedatmosphereandwaterappeared.如何和第一段（

The“bigbang”theoryexplainedtheorigionoftheUniverse.概要相連接呢？Afterthat,theearth...2021/5/914Para3-waterTopicSentence:WatermadelifedeveloppossiblyTips:補(bǔ)充說明第二段水的作用，可以作為次要點(diǎn)放在第三段結(jié)合處理。2021/5/915Para4TopicSentence:Nonepoints:plantsinwater,shellfish,fish,plantsonlandlandanimals,forest,reptiles,dinosaurs,mammals.Mainidea:Thankstothewater,variouswildlifedevelopedandappearedontheearth.。Tips:學(xué)會(huì)使用概括性詞匯來代替具體事實(shí)2021/5/916Para5-HumansTopicSentence:Nonepoints:finally,cleveranimalsappearedandspread.notlookaftertheearthwell.theearthmaybetoohottoliveon,whether...dependonMainidea:Fianlly,Humansruletheearthbutthetimeoftheirexistenceisuncertain.Tips:積累概擴(kuò)性詞匯。2021/5/917Step4.MakeanoutlineofthepassagePara1Para2Para3Para4Para5

TopicSentence:TheoryEarthWaterLifeHumans2021/5/918Step5.Writethefirstdraft

The“bigbang”theoryexplainedtheorigionoftheUniverse.Afterthat,Theearthexplodedviolentlybutintimecreatedatmosphereandwaterappeared.Thankstothewater,variouswildlifeappearedanddevelopedontheearth.Fianlly,Humansruledtheearthbutthetimeoftheirexistenceuncertain.(49).Rewrite:

.Rewrite:

2021/5/919Step5.Rewritethesummary

ThetheoryexplainedthattheorigionoftheUniversebeganwithabigbang.Afterthat,Theearthexplodedviolentlybutintimecreatedatmosphereandwaterappearedonitssurfacewhichmadelifepossilbe.Thankstothewater,variouswildlifeappearedanddevelopedontheearth.Fianlly,Humansruledtheearthtilltodaybuttheirexistenceandfuturedependsontheirproblemsolving.(62)2021/5/920Idea1:Peoplebegantoconcentratelessonreligiousthemesandadoptamorehumanisticattitudetolife.Rewrite：Firstly,peoplefocusedmoreonhumanisticthemesratherthanreligiousones.Idea2:AtthesametimepaintersreturnedtoclassicalRomanandGreekideasaboutart.Theytriedtopaintpeopleandnatureastheyreallywere.Rewrite：Secondly,paintersreturnedtoclassicalideas,whichattachedgreatimportancetorealpeopleandnature.focusedmoreon同義轉(zhuǎn)換句型轉(zhuǎn)變短語連接刪除細(xì)節(jié)2021/5/921Para1IntheRenaissance,newviewpointswereinplaceofthosehundredsyearsago.Firstly,peoplefocusedmoreonhumanisticthemesratherthanreligiousones.Secondly,paintersreturnedtoclassicalideaswhichfocusedonrealpeopleandnature.(38words)Step6.Re