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speaking寫作模板寫作模板參照學(xué)科網(wǎng)《備戰(zhàn)2023年中考英語高分作文》之《研讀中考作文真題總結(jié)黃金模板》咨詢建議類的書面表達(dá)題都比較貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際生活，緊密聯(lián)系熱點(diǎn)話題，寫作話題真實(shí)從而讓考生有話可寫。書面表達(dá)情景實(shí)用性程度高，各地試題都符合同學(xué)們的認(rèn)知水平和日常生活經(jīng)歷，題目設(shè)計(jì)關(guān)注學(xué)生成長，注意培養(yǎng)其良好的道德品質(zhì)和健全的人格。所涉及話題關(guān)注社會(huì)，富有時(shí)代特色，能喚起同學(xué)們強(qiáng)烈的主人翁意識(shí)和責(zé)任感。這種貼近生活、立足基礎(chǔ)、發(fā)揚(yáng)個(gè)性的命題理念仍將是今后幾省各地中考書面表達(dá)的基本思路。中考五星高頻考點(diǎn)，題目難度中等，在全國各地中考試卷選填題中多有考查。易錯(cuò)歸納易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)01：倉促下筆，不認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)02：思路不夠清晰，沒有列出寫作提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。不顧單詞在句子中的成分，盲目填寫。正確的方法是要分析所填詞充當(dāng)?shù)木渥映煞?正確判斷所填詞的詞性。若作謂語便需要用動(dòng)詞，并且動(dòng)詞有時(shí)態(tài)的變化。易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)03：漢語式英語。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意英語句子的句式特點(diǎn)，也要顧及句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。典例解析假如你是李華，看到某英語報(bào)社將要組織的勞動(dòng)體驗(yàn)和體育鍛煉夏令營活動(dòng)的宣傳。請(qǐng)用英語給編輯寫一封信，談一談你更想?yún)⑴c的一種活動(dòng)及理由，并對(duì)你選擇的活動(dòng)提出建議。要求：1.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括一種活動(dòng)的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.對(duì)你所選擇的活動(dòng)說明理由，并對(duì)其提出建議;3.文章不少于90詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名等信息。DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchmeaningfulcamps.Iprefer__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchmeaningfulcamps.IpreferlivingskillstrainingbecauseallthelivingskillsIwillgetduringtheprocesswillbeofgreatvaluetomylaterlife.Thelivingskillstrainingwillbeonafarm.There,Icanlivewithlocalpeoplewhowillhelpmelearnmoreabouttheircustomsandlifestyles.Moreover,whatmakesmeinterestedisthatIcancookbymyself.Inthesummercamp,Icantakepartinactivitiesonthefarmsuchasfeedinganimalsandpickingfruit.Ialsohavesomeadviceforyou.Ihopetherewillbemoreactivitieslikegrowingplantsandvegetables.IhopeIwillenjoymyselfonthefarm.Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文屬于書信作文寫作，要求根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容給報(bào)社編輯寫一封信，談?wù)勀銜?huì)選擇的夏令營活動(dòng)項(xiàng)目及選擇的理由，并對(duì)活動(dòng)提出建議。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第一人稱單數(shù)來寫，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，一般將來時(shí)為輔。寫作時(shí)承接短文開頭，即直接說明選擇的活動(dòng)項(xiàng)目以及總體原因，作為信件的第一段；第二段根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)依次說明選擇此項(xiàng)目的具體原因；第三段對(duì)此項(xiàng)目提出一兩個(gè)建議并結(jié)尾。具體原因的闡述為本文重點(diǎn)，寫作時(shí)應(yīng)巧妙運(yùn)用銜接語言，使列舉原因更有條理，更清晰易懂。勞動(dòng)教育是青少年全面發(fā)展的重要組成部分。因此，青少年應(yīng)該主動(dòng)參加各類勞動(dòng)，如社區(qū)服務(wù)、學(xué)校勞動(dòng)和日常家務(wù)等。近期，育才中學(xué)圍繞“勞動(dòng)讓我成長”這一主題開展了問卷調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你參考問卷內(nèi)容或結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，以“Let’sTakePartinLaborActivities”為題，寫一篇不少于80詞的短文。要求如下：1.請(qǐng)列舉2~3項(xiàng)你經(jīng)常參加的勞動(dòng)；2.重點(diǎn)談?wù)勀銋⒓觿趧?dòng)的收獲并提出建議；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)個(gè)人信息。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Let’sTakePartinLaborActivitiesLaboristhesourceofallhappiness.Laborisoneofthenecessaryconditionsforstudents’all-rounddevelopment.AndIthinkitisgoodtodohousework.Doingchoreshelpstodevelopchildren’sindependenceandteachesthemhowtolookafterthemselves.Iusedtobelazyathome.Seeingthis,mymothercameupwithanidea—Ihavetoearnmypocketmoneybydoinghousework.Itchangedmealot.Forexample,whenIcan’tworkoutamathproblem,Iprefertosweepthefloorortidyupmyroomtoclearmymind.Oncemymothertoldmetobuysomefruit.Iquicklymadealist,comparedpricesandboughtfreshfruit.InowhaveahabitofmanagingmoneyandIknowit’sgreatofmymothertolookaftermyfamilysowell!ThisishowIlearntodohousework—it’saskillthatlastsalifetime.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Let’sTakePartinLaborActivities”為題，結(jié)合提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第一和第三人稱來行文，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。作文要分別介紹經(jīng)常參加的勞動(dòng)以及參加勞動(dòng)的收獲并提出建議。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。“讀萬卷書，行萬里路。”閱讀已成為我們生活必不可少的一部分。你校英語社團(tuán)將舉辦以“熱愛閱讀”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，以“EnjoyReading,EnjoyLife”為題寫篇短文，分享你對(duì)閱讀的看法，并提出建議。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.閱讀給你和同學(xué)們帶來了什么好處，如：開闊視野……；2.同學(xué)們?cè)陂喿x中還存在什么問題，如：一些人不愿意閱讀，一些人沒時(shí)間閱讀……；3.針對(duì)存在的問題，提出你的建議(至少2條)。提示詞：開闊視野openupone’smind注意：1.詞數(shù)80—100，已經(jīng)給出的部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.短文必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使其連貫、通順；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名和地名等相關(guān)信息。EnjoyReading,EnjoyLifeReadinghasbecomepartofourlife________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】EnjoyReading,EnjoyLifeReadinghasbecomepartofourlife.Itcannotonlyopenourminds,butalsomakeusrelaxedandmoreknowledgeable.Ourstudycanbeimprovedifwereadmoregoodbooks.Manystudentshavedifficultyinreading.Somestudentsdon’tlikereading,becausetheythinkitisboring.Somestudentshavenotimetoread.Theythinkreadingisawasteoftime.Inmyopinion,wecanlearnalotofinterestingthingsfrombooksaslongaswekeepreading.Wecanreadanywhere,suchastakingabus,takingaplaneandsoon.Booksareourfriends,solet’sreadthemfromnowon.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。結(jié)合要點(diǎn)提示，以“熱愛閱讀，享受生活”為題寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。分為三段式：第一段介紹閱讀的重要性；第二段介紹學(xué)生們?cè)陂喿x上的問題，并就此提出自己的建議；最后一段呼吁人們開始閱讀。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。近期，恩施州《幺妹帶你慢慢?！仿毠すらg操比賽掀起了全民健身的熱潮，越來越多的人認(rèn)識(shí)到了運(yùn)動(dòng)的重要性。請(qǐng)你為某網(wǎng)站寫一篇文章，談?wù)勀阕钕矚g的運(yùn)動(dòng)。要點(diǎn)提示：1.你最喜歡的一項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)；2.這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)的好處（至少2點(diǎn)）；3.做這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)時(shí)的注意事項(xiàng)（至少2點(diǎn)）；4.建議人們多運(yùn)動(dòng)。寫作要求：1.文中必須包含所有提示要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.條理清晰，字跡工整；3.詞數(shù)為80左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和地名等相關(guān)信息。Nowadays,moreandmorepeopletakepartinsportstokeephealthy._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Nowadays,moreandmorepeopletakepartinsportstokeephealthy.Ofallsports,Ilikeswimmingbest.Becauseitcannotonlybegoodformyhealth,butalsomakemerelaxed.However,weshouldpayattentiontothissport.First,wehadbetternotswimtoolong.Becauseitmayletushaveacrampintheleg.Second,wehadbetternotswimintheevening,whichmakesustooexcitedtogotobed.Let’sdosportsfromnowonandenjoyit.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞“運(yùn)動(dòng)”寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第一人稱為主。分為三段式：第一段介紹自己喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)是什么，介紹這種運(yùn)動(dòng)的好處；第二段介紹游泳時(shí)的注意事項(xiàng)；最后一段呼吁人們運(yùn)動(dòng)起來。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤?！半p減”之后，如何讓我們的暑假生活過得快樂而有意義？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下圖片及文字提示，以“HappySummerVacation”為題給校報(bào)英語專欄寫一篇短文，為同學(xué)們提供一些建議并說明理由。注意：（1）詞數(shù)90左右，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；（2）文中應(yīng)包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息。HappySummerVacationThesummervacationiscoming.Withmorefreetime,howcanwehaveahappyandmeaningfulvacation?Hereismyadvice.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】HappySummerVacationThesummervacationiscoming.Withmorefreetime,howcanwehaveahappyandmeaningfulvacation?Hereismyadvice.First,wecandosomesports.Wecangorunningeverymorning.Itcanhelpuskeephealthy.Besides,wecandosomehouseworkathome.It’snecessaryforustolearnsomelifeskillsandlookafterourselves.What’smore,weneedtoreadsomebooks.Readinghelpsimproveourknowledgeandopensupawholenewworldtous.Wecanalsojoinsomeclubs,suchastheSingingClubortheDancingClub.Itcanhelpusdevelopourhobbies.Ihopeyoucanhaveacolourfulvacation.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“HappySummerVacation”為題，結(jié)合提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第一人稱來行文，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段從運(yùn)動(dòng)，做家務(wù)，閱讀和參加俱樂部四方面給出建議；第三段收尾。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。假如你是李明，你的朋友Jack給你發(fā)郵件請(qǐng)求你的幫助。請(qǐng)根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容進(jìn)行回復(fù)。要求：①邏輯清晰，內(nèi)容完整，書寫規(guī)范；②回復(fù)內(nèi)容至少包含三條建議；③詞數(shù)：30左右。開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearLiMing,

Ispendallmyweekendsplayingcomputergamesandmymotherisveryangrywithmeaboutit.Iwanttomakeachange.Couldyougivemesomeadvice?

JackDearJack,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopemyadvicecanbehelpfultoyou.LiMing【參考范文】DearJack,I’mgladtohelpyou.Ithinkyou’dbetterfinishyourhomeworkfirst.Ifyoulike,youcanhelpdohousework.It’sagoodideatodosomeoutdooractivitiesorreadsomebooks.Ihopemyadvicecanbehelpfultoyou.LiMing【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇電子郵件，根據(jù)Jack的郵件內(nèi)容，針對(duì)他的問題提出建議。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。注意建議要不少于三條，同時(shí)要看清題目字?jǐn)?shù)要求：詞數(shù)在30左右。寫作時(shí)力求語句通順，無單詞語法錯(cuò)誤。假設(shè)你是劉軍，在上周末的鄉(xiāng)村旅游中，你發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些游客的不文明行為。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表信息給某英文報(bào)VOICE欄目的編輯寫一封郵件，反映這些問題并提出建議。UncivilizedbehaviorsSuggestions●threwrubbisheverywhere●pickedflowers●climbedtrees●putrubbishintobins●…注意：（1）郵件內(nèi)容必須包括上表所有信息，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；（2）你的建議至少兩條；（3）詞數(shù)：80—100；（4）郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：不文明行為uncivilizedbehavior；編輯editorDeareditor,IwasshockedtoseesomeuncivilizedbehaviorswhenItookatriptoavillagelastweekend._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiuJun【參考范文】Deareditor,IwasshockedtoseesomeuncivilizedbehaviorswhenItookatriptoavillagelastweekend.Somevisitorsthrewrubbisheverywhereandleftplasticbagsflyingaround.Somepickedflowerswithoutpermissiontotakephotossothattheycouldshowoffonline.Andsomeclimbedtreesforfun,whichmightresultinseriousaccidents.Ithinkitwrongtoenjoyoneselfatthecostofothers.Visitorsaresupposedtoprotecttheenvironment,likeputtingrubbishintoproperbins.Andtheyshouldbecarefulnottocausetroubletothelocalsandkeepawayfromdanger.Inthisway,agreener,cleanerandmorecivilizednewvillagewillbethereforusalltoenjoy.YourssincerelyLiuJun【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文主要以題干表格中的內(nèi)容講述一些游客的不文明行為并提出相關(guān)的建議，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱以第三人稱為主。第一段主要描述自己發(fā)現(xiàn)的游客的一些不文明行為；第二段提出自己的建議。寫作時(shí)運(yùn)用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。今年4月，教育部頒發(fā)了《義務(wù)教育勞動(dòng)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（2022年版）》。從2022年秋季學(xué)期起，多種勞動(dòng)技能將納入中小學(xué)課程，引發(fā)同學(xué)們的熱議和關(guān)注。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容對(duì)即將開設(shè)的勞動(dòng)課（laborclasses）寫一封信給校長，提出你的想法及建議。1.感覺非常高興及興奮。從中可以學(xué)到一些勞動(dòng)技能，學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己（learnsomelaborskills,lookafter）。2.希望學(xué)校能提供給每班勞動(dòng)課的場(chǎng)地。每周開課兩節(jié)。由生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富的老師教授同學(xué)們?nèi)绾巫鲲?、種菜……（補(bǔ)充兩個(gè)內(nèi)容）（provide...for,withrichexperience,teach）。3.希望學(xué)校在期末舉行各種勞動(dòng)技能比賽；邀請(qǐng)家長們參觀并分享勞動(dòng)課成果（attheendof,hold,laborachievements）。寫作要求：1.不得使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名；2.內(nèi)容需包含以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫；3.字跡工整，語言精練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清晰；4.詞數(shù)100左右。（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。）Dearheadmaster,

MynameisLiHua.I’minClass6,Grade8.Itissaidthatwearegoingtohavelaborclassesnextterm.Allmyclassmatesareinterestedinit.I’mwritingtoyoutosharemyideasaboutthecominglaborclasses.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’sallmyopinions.We’relookingforwardtotheclasses.Thankyou!Yours,LiHua【參考范文】Dearheadmaster,

MynameisLiHua.I’minClass6,Grade8.Itissaidthatwearegoingtohavelaborclassesnextterm.Allmyclassmatesareinterestedinit.I’mwritingtoyoutosharemyideasaboutthecominglaborclasses.

Ifeelveryhappyandexcited.Ithinkwecanlearnsomelaborskillsandlearntolookafterourselves.Ihopetheschoolcanprovideaplaceforeachclasstowork.Theschoolcanhavetwoclassesaweek.Theteacherswithrichexperienceteachstudentshowtocook,growvegetables,washclothes,cleanthehouseandothersimplehousework.Ialsohopethattheschoolcanholdallkindsoflaborskillscompetitionattheendofthetermandinviteparentstovisitandsharelaborachievements.

That’sallmyopinions.We’relookingforwardtotheclasses.Thankyou!Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于書信類寫作。書信的第一段和第三段已給出，第二段則需要包含題目中所給的三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，缺一不可。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)使用第一人稱書寫；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；在展開寫第二段的時(shí)候需要用到括號(hào)中的所給內(nèi)容，并在第二點(diǎn)中進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展。寫作過程中需體現(xiàn)詞匯及句式的多樣性，同時(shí)保證敘述過程條理清晰。假定你是李華。你的英國朋友Mike來信說他在人際交往方面感到迷茫，希望得到你的幫助。請(qǐng)寫封回信，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示理解和安慰；2.建議：正確認(rèn)識(shí)自己的不足；處理好和父母的關(guān)系；處理好與同學(xué)、朋友之間的關(guān)系；3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearMike,How’severythinggoing?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearMike,How’severythinggoing?I’msorrytohearthatyouhavedifficultygettingalongwithothers.It’scommontohavethefeeling.Takeiteasy.I’llgiveyousomeadvice.

First,youshouldgetathoroughunderstandingofyourself:awareofyourstrengthandshortage.Second,youshouldcommunicatewithyourparents.Tellthemyourfeelingssothattheywillunderstandyoubetter.Third,youcantakepartinsomeactivitieswithyourclassmates.Itwillhelpyoufindmoreaboutyourclassmatesandtheycanlearnmoreaboutyoutoo.Thenyoucanbecomefriends.

Ihopethesesuggestionscanhelpyou.Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文。針對(duì)Mike交友方面的問題提出合理的建議。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第二人稱和第三人稱為主。分為三段式：第一段表達(dá)安慰和理解；第二段根據(jù)提示材料提出合理的建議；最后一段表達(dá)祝愿。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。近段時(shí)間，某中學(xué)不少學(xué)生因感冒不能正常上課，影響了學(xué)習(xí)。為此，學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華準(zhǔn)備利用EnglishBroadcast時(shí)間建議學(xué)生養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣和加強(qiáng)體育鍛煉，以提高身體素質(zhì)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提示，為他準(zhǔn)備一份英語，發(fā)言稿?，F(xiàn)象因感冒不能上課，影響了學(xué)習(xí)建議生活習(xí)慣健康飲食……保證睡眠……加強(qiáng)鍛煉參加體育活動(dòng)……其他……期望……參考詞匯：affectvt.影響要求：（1）短文須包含要點(diǎn)提示中的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）詞數(shù)：80左右（短文開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名。Boysandgirls,WelcometoourEnglishBroadcast!I’mLiHua,thechairmanofStudents’Union.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall!Thanksforyourlistening!【參考范文】Boysandgirls,WelcometoourEnglishBroadcast!I’mLiHua,thechairmanofStudents’Union.Recentlyquiteafewstudentsinourschoolcouldn’thavelessonsasusualbecausetheyhadacold.Thisaffectedtheirstudies.Inordertomakeyoustronger,I’llgiveyousomeusefuladvice.Firstly,it’simportanttohaveahealthyeatinghabit.Youshouldeatmorevegetablesandfruitbutlessjunkfood.Secondly,you’dbettersleepwell.Don’tstayuplate.Besides,doexerciseeveryday.Youcantakeawalkorrun.Lastly,agoodattitudetowardslifeisalsogoodforyourhealth.I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyouhappierandhealthier!That’sall!Thanksforyourlistening!【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇演講稿。根據(jù)表格提示要點(diǎn)，寫一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣和加強(qiáng)體育鍛煉的建議，以提高身體素質(zhì)的作文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；人稱以第二人稱為主。寫作時(shí)可分為三段，第一段承接開頭，點(diǎn)明主題；第二段介紹具體的建議；第三段表示感謝。寫作時(shí)可適當(dāng)使用過渡詞使文章通順，