2024年英語中考二輪復(fù)習(xí)之書面表達(dá)課件

書面表達(dá)什么是好作文？要求

此題主要考查學(xué)生直接用英語進(jìn)行比較簡單的書面表達(dá)的能力。 具體要求為： 1.切中題意，文理通順 2.上下文連貫，邏輯正確 3.要素完整，語言準(zhǔn)確，得當(dāng) 4.無大小寫和拼寫錯誤，書寫規(guī)范、整潔，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號使用正確 5.達(dá)到一定的詞數(shù)要求（不少于70詞）連貫切題規(guī)范完整正確第一檔(13～15分)：符合題意要求，表達(dá)完整，條理清楚，語句通順，語言正確無誤。詞匯運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確，句型運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)。全文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)密，完整，語言流暢。無任何標(biāo)點(diǎn)或語法錯誤。第二檔(10～12分)：符合題意要求，表達(dá)基本完整，條理較清楚，語句較通順，語言基本無誤。有語法或標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯誤，但句子較為順暢，文章思路清晰，邏輯推理正確，結(jié)構(gòu)完整。第三檔

(7～

9分)：基本符合題意要求，表達(dá)基本完整，條理較清楚，語句較通順，語言有部分錯誤。語法或標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯誤較多。句子不夠順暢，文章結(jié)構(gòu)不嚴(yán)密，但表達(dá)意義清晰。第四檔(4～

6分)：不符合題意要求，表達(dá)不清楚，邏輯關(guān)系混亂，語法或標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯誤過多。字?jǐn)?shù)不夠，語意表達(dá)不清晰，文章邏輯關(guān)系混亂。第五檔(0～

3分)：未能傳達(dá)給讀者任何信息；內(nèi)容太少，無法評判；寫的內(nèi)容均與所要求內(nèi)容無關(guān)或所寫內(nèi)容無法看清。中考英語書面表達(dá)評分規(guī)則如何寫好作文？要求1.切題3.連貫4.正確5.規(guī)范審題切題完整

正確連貫規(guī)范人稱字?jǐn)?shù)時態(tài)：第三人稱：多為一般現(xiàn)在時每個人都有自己喜歡的衣服，請根據(jù)提示語，以“MyfavoriteXXX”為題，寫一篇短文，介紹一件你最喜愛的衣服。人稱：第一、三人稱時態(tài)：描述部分用現(xiàn)在時；記敘部分用過去時是否需要補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容審題要點(diǎn)正確看待作文要求的“正確”切題完整

正確連貫規(guī)范Ihaveagoodfriend.SheisMary.Sheisgoodforme.ShelikestudyEnglish,herEnglishisverygood.Andsheisgoodatmath.Sheverylikemath.Shelikeplaybasketballverymuch.Shealsolikegototheparkinweekend.Theparkhavemanygoodthings.Thisismyfriend.Ihaveagoodfriend.SheisMary.Sheisverygoodtome.ShelikesstudyingEnglishandherEnglishisverygood.Andsheisgoodatmath.Shelikesmathverymuch.Shealsolikesgoingtotheparkonweekends.Theparkhasmanygoodthings.Thisismyfriend.正確簡單內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確無誤高級詞匯刻意使用1.簡單內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確無誤學(xué)生范文：MyWatchSisterIhaveawatchsister.Sheiscute.HisnameisLiJingyi.HerEnglishnameisStar.Shelikesdraw,singandplaygames…Shehavearoundface,asmallmouthandtwobigeye.ShestudiesatNo.5ChangingRoadPrimarySchool.Shelookslikeme,andwearedifferent.Weoftenplaytogetherandhavefun.簡單內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確無誤1.避免中式英語2.人稱代詞的一致性3.動詞的形式變化5連詞的正確使用4.名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)變化簡單內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確無誤1.避免中式英語2.人稱代詞保持一致3.動詞的形式變化5.連詞的正確使用4.名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)變化……練習(xí)Hehastwowateryeye.Tom’sfatherisinterestedtoswimming.Deanalwayswinthesecondplaceinthematch.Theyverylikeeatingjunkfood.Hewenttotheparkandhaveapicnicintheweekend.練習(xí)學(xué)生作文Mydeskmateisaboy.HisnameisZhaoQuanShun.Weareliveaboardingschoollife.HewasoneofthemostgoodplaybasketballthatIhaveeverseen.Hegetupverylateeveryday.Buthegetstoclassjustintime.Why?Becausehenevercleanshisface.Helikespoet.Heoftenwritealotofpoemsgiveothergirls.Andhearereallyexcitedaboutplayingbasketball.Hewasonhisschoolteam.Heoftenmakemehappy.Heisveryfunny.Ireallylikehe.2.高級詞匯刻意使用以寫人類作文為例高級詞匯刻意使用HeisJack.Heis15yearsold.HeisJack.Heisa15-year-oldboy.高級詞匯刻意使用a.后學(xué)優(yōu)于先學(xué)高級詞匯刻意使用Heisaniceboy.Heisahandsomeboy.charming；pretty;lovelyandlively始于顏值高級詞匯刻意使用Heisahandsomeboywithbigeyes.wateryeyesbushyeyebrowshigh-bridgednoselongcurlyhairHeisaniceboy.Hehasbigeyes.高級詞匯刻意使用Heisoutgoingandfriendly.notonly…butalso陷于性格Heisnotonlyoutgoingbutalsofriendly.aswellasHeisoutgoingaswellasfriendly.both…and…smart

hard-workingwarm-heartedfriendlyselflesstalentedoutgoingknowledgeablekind-hearted高級詞匯刻意使用HeisJack.Heis15yearsold.Heisaniceboy.Heisa15-year-oldboynamedJackwhoisnotonlysmartbutalsohandsome.Heisa15-year-oldboynamedJackwhoisnotonlysmartbutalsohandsome.總結(jié)：Mary是一個漂亮且友好的13歲的小姑娘。小明是一個12歲的男孩，聰明又勤奮。XiaoMingisa12-year-oldboywhoisnotonlysmartbutalsohard-working.Maryisa13-year-oldgirlwhoisbeautifulandfriendly.練習(xí)Heisa15-year-oldboynamedJackwhoisnotonlysmartbutalsohandsome.忠于人品高級詞匯刻意使用Shelikesreadingbooks.enjoyisinterestedinisfondof對象明確細(xì)節(jié)詳細(xì)b.事件描述詳細(xì)時間結(jié)果地點(diǎn)原因忠于人品Shelikesreadingbooks.高級詞匯刻意使用Shealwaysreadsbooks.忠于人品Shealwaysreadsbooksinthelibrary.Shealwaysreadsbooksinthelibraryaftershefinishesthehomework.高級詞匯刻意使用Shealwaysreadsdifferentkindsofbooksinthelibraryaftershefinishesthehomework.忠于人品Sheenjoyshelpingothers.Sheiswilling

to

helpothers.Sheiswilling

to

helppeopleinneed.高級詞匯刻意使用Sheiswilling

to

helppeoplewhentheyhavetrouble.忠于人品Shelikesplayingbasketball.Sheisinterestedinplayingbasketball高級詞匯刻意使用忠于人品Sheissointerestedinplayingbasketballthatsheplaysiteveryday.Sheissointerestedinplayingbasketballthatshewinsmanyprizes.高級詞匯刻意使用練習(xí)Shelikesanimals.Shelikesdifferentkindsofanimals,because

shethinksanimalsareourbestfriends.Shelikesdifferentkindsofanimals,sosheaskseveryoneofustoprotecttheanimals.b.事件描述詳細(xì)a.后學(xué)詞匯優(yōu)于先學(xué)詞匯高級詞匯刻意使用c.結(jié)尾總結(jié)提升（注意落筆自身）高級詞匯刻意使用結(jié)尾一：感嘆句高級詞匯刻意使用Whatawonderfulgirlsheis!I'mreallyproudofher.Whatawonderfulgirlsheis!I'mreallyproudofbeingherfriend.結(jié)尾二：so/such...that...高級詞匯刻意使用Jackissuchahard-workingboythatweshouldlearnfromhim.結(jié)尾三：特定場景高級詞匯刻意使用Myfatherissuchagreat職業(yè)thatIwanttobeapersonlikehimwhenIgrowup.切題完整正確連貫切題完整正確連貫規(guī)范行文邏輯切題完整正確連貫規(guī)范“外顯性”邏輯“內(nèi)隱性”邏輯切題完整正確連貫規(guī)范“外顯性”邏輯連詞ontheonehand,ontheotherhand而且：besides，what’smore,moreover,舉例：forexample,and,but,so,however,luckily總之：inaword,aboveall,allinall，切題完整正確連貫規(guī)范練習(xí):選詞填空moreover,so,but,and,forexampleJackisalovely

friendlyboy.Heisinterestedinreadingnovels.

,heenjoysgoingfishingwithhisfriendsonweekends.

henevereatsfish.

hegivest