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作文講評課蕪湖市第二中學張德芝

“Mydreamcommunity”Let’sexaminethetopicagain:自主學習討論：一重新審題：Examinethetopicagain,andsolvetheproblemsbelowafterdiscussion.1.Style(體裁):______2.Tense(時態(tài)):___________3.Person(人稱):___________4.Structure:(結(jié)構(gòu)):___________首先，體裁---說明文，題型---提綱作文:要點齊全，條理清晰。第二，時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時，第三：人稱---第一，三人稱----注意主謂一致問題。第三，文章結(jié)構(gòu):要完整緊湊，語言要簡練---思維導圖:三段：1.概況：環(huán)境和設施。2.社區(qū)的鄰居和志愿者，3.表達自己住在這樣社區(qū)的感受。這樣下來文章結(jié)構(gòu)就比較完整，條理比較清晰。錯誤診斷：1）拼寫錯誤2）名詞單復數(shù)3）短語搭配錯誤4）主謂一致5）詞性誤用6）句子結(jié)構(gòu)運用問題，特別是“有”字表達7）句子不完整，如缺少謂語動詞。8）句子首字母大寫問題9)卷面涂畫，字跡不清10）要點不全，詞數(shù)不夠。主謂一致卷面涂畫，字跡不清要點不全，詞數(shù)不夠Let’stranslate:e.g.里面有許多樹和花。也有花園，運動場，游泳池

1.Therearemanytreesandflowersinit.Italsohasgardens,communityplaygroundsandswimmingpools.

2.里面也有種有許多樹和花的花園。2.Therearealsobeautifulgardenswithlotsoftreesandflowersinit.合作學習Pairwork:Pleaseworkinpairsandhaveatalkaboutthemistakesinsentencesinthehandoutandcorrectthem.Let’scorrect:合作探究workingroupsof4:1)Correctthemistakesinyourwritingbyyourselves2)exchangeyourwritingwithyourpartners.Trytocorrectthemistakesinhis/herwriting.3)writedownsomegoodsentencesfromyourpartners'writingsinyournotebook.4)showusthegoodsentences幻燈片16wConsolidationwriting:Writeabout“Mydreamschool”Homework:Writeabout“Mydreamschool”Showtime!MydreamcommunityMydreamcommunityisverybigbuttherearen’tmanyfamiliesinit.Manytreesandflowersgrowthere.Theymakethecommunityverybeautiful.Thereisalsoagarden,aplaygroundandevenaswimmingpoolinit.Peoplecangoswimminginitinsummer.Ilikemyneighborsbecausetheyarekindandfriendly.Theyarealwaysreadydohelppeopleinneed.Someofthemarevolunteers.Theyhavemanykindsofskillsandtheyuseth