初中八年級英語課件A plan for the summer camp

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--WritingAplanforthesummercampChunhanSchoolbyEmmaEmma’shope★Takesomesomeusefulnotestohelpwithyourwriting.★Beactivetotakepartingroupwork.

★Bewillingtohelpandsharewitheachother.EmmaisgoingtowelcomeagroupofAmericanteenagersattheendofJuly.Emma'splanDearEmma,

Longtimenosee!Imissyousomuch!Agroupof12studentsfromourschoolwillcometoYiwuforsummercampattheendofJuly.Theywillstayinyourschoolfortwoweeks.TheywanttolearnChineseandexperiencelifeinYiwu.ThisistheirfirsttimetoYiwusotheywanttoknowabouttheweatherandwhattotake.Pleasemakeasummercampplanforthemandgivethemsomeadvice.Manythanks!Ihopetohearfromyousoon.Yours,Joanne2018年05月17日19:33(星期四)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Emma'semailHowmany?Whatfor?Howlong?Whattodo?Problem?aplanWho?

Howlong?Wheretostay?Whattodo?Whattotake?…Whatothertips?Aplanshouldinclude(包含)：When?

tolearnChinesetoexperiencelifehomestaytoexperiencelifelivewithahostfamilytakepartintheirdailylifetrysometraditionalfoodmakedumplingstaketrips…

Tip1:Usethelinkingwordstomakethesentencesintoapassage.

Firstofall,youwilllivewithahomestayfamilybecauseit'sthebestwaytoexperiencelifeinChina.Youcantakepartintheirdailylifeaswellasdosomeacticitieswiththem.Forexample,it'sagoodideatotrysometradtionalfoodandwatchBeijingopera.What'smore,youcantakesometripsattheweekend.It'sinterestingtogoaroundFutianMarketwhichhasallkindsofthings,andHengdianFilm&TelevisionCtiyisalsoagoodchoice.and,because,aswellas,suchas,firstofall,what'smore,besides,bytheway,…Wheretostayandhowtoexperiencelife?Whattodo?summercamptolearnChinesetoexperiencelifeTip2:Usetransitionalsentencestolinktwopartsandmakethepassagemorenatural.(學(xué)會使用過渡句承上啟下)

aswellas…notonly…butalso…

…ChineselessonsotheractivitiesWhattime?Who?How?Howlong?…Chinesekungfu…afootballmatchYou'dbetter/It'sagoodideatotakesome…because…Level1Summerhereisveryhot,sotokeepcool,you'dbetter…Summerhereissohotthatyou'dbetterkeepcoolwith…Level2Level3Whattotake?Tip3:Polish(潤色)yoursentencetomakeitmoreadvenced(高級).BeginningMainpartEnding

We'resogladthatyou'recomingforthesummercamp.You'lllovecomingtoChinatolearnaboutChinesecultureandimproveyourChineseatthesametime.Here'stheplan.

YouarecertaintogetthebestpossibleexperienceofChineselearningandlifeinChina.We'resoexcitingthatwecan'twaittomeetyou!Aplanforthesummercampadvice/tipswhattodotolearnChinesetoexperiencelifethingstotakeothertips承上啟下過渡

承上啟下過渡

Tip4:It'snecessarytowriteanoutlinebeforewritingacomposition.(寫作前要先寫提綱)

Writing--replytheemailAssessment

AssessmentStandard(評價標(biāo)準(zhǔn))Self-assessment（自我評價）Group-assessment（小組評價）Finalmarks(最終得分)Doesyourcompositionincludeallthekeypoints?○1○2○3○4○5○1○2○3○4○5滿分20分你的得分是____________Doyouuseanylinkingwordsortransitionalsentences?(連接詞或者過渡句)○1○2○3○4○5○1○2○3○4○5Doyouusedifferentsentencepatternsoranygoodsentences?○1○2○3○4○5○1○2○3○4○5Doyouhaveanymistakes?○1○2○3○4○5○1○2○3○4○5Underlinethegoodsentencesandcorrectsomemistakes.Tip1:Usethelinkingwordstomakethesentencesintoapassage.Tip2:Usetransitionalsentencestolinktwopartsandmakethepassagemorenatural.(使用過渡句)Tip4:It'snecessarytowriteanoutlinebeforewritingacomposition.(寫作前要先寫提綱)Whatdowelearntoday?StrategyTip3:Polish(潤色)yoursentencetomakeitmoreadvenced(高級).PackyourbagGetthingsreadyJustgoout

Ifyoudon’tgooutofyourcircle,youwillthinkthatthisisthewholeworld.Ifyoudon’tgooutofyourowncountry,youwon’tknowhowwonderfultheothersare.Let’sshareHomework:Individualwork:A.Correctthemistakesinyourwritingandthenrewriteit.Groupwork:Judgeothers'writingsa