2023學(xué)年完整公開課版continuouswritingbasedonquestions

Continuouswriting步步高p11FireescapeSixelementsofastoryWhoWhenWhereWhatWhyHowReadtofindbasicinformationWhenWhoWhereWhatWhyHowOneeveningJimandMaryUpstairsintheflatHelpMakcikoutofthedoorMakcikwasinher70slivingKnockingonthedoorloudlyWhathappenednext?第二節(jié)：讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）

閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。注意：1、所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2、應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3、續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4、續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。PredicttowritePara.1:Jimnoticedtheflamewasreachingup.Para.2:Luckily,someneighborspassingbystopped.Q1:HowdidJimfeel?WhatdidJimdo?Q2:WhatdidMarydo?Q3:HowdidJimfeel?Q4:Howwasthesituation?(Worseoff)Q1:Whatdidneighborsdo?Q2:HowwasMakcik?Whatshouldtheydo?Q3:What’stheend?Howdidtheyfeel?DiscussandwriteanoutlinePara.1:Jimnoticedtheflamewasreachingup.Para.2:Luckily,someneighborspassingbystopped.Q1:HowdidJimfeel?WhatdidJimdo?Q2:WhatdidMarydo?Q3:HowdidJimfeel?Q4:Howwasthesituation?(Worseoff)Q1:Whatdidneighborsdo?Q2:HowwasMakcik?Whatshouldtheydo?Q3:What’stheend?Howdidtheyfeel?Checktheunderlinedwords10underlinedkeywords:Jim,flat,smoke,Mary,rush,thedoor,safety,fear,violently,downstairspara1:1.JimfeltnervousandheldMary’shandtightlyandbeggedhertoleave.2.Marykeptknockingonthedoor.3.Jimburstoutcrying.4.Thesmokewasheavier,forwhichtheywerecoughing.para2:1.Theneighborsofferedtohelp.Theyforcedthedooropenwiththeirmight.2.Shewaslyinginbed,unconscious.Shewascarrieddownstairsandrushedtohospital.3.Shecametoherself.Theywererelievedandhappy.1.JimfeltnervousandheldMary’shandtightlyandbeggedhertoleave.(分詞做狀語)2.Marykeptknockingonthedoor.3.Jimburstoutcrying.(定語從句)4.Thesmokewasheavier,forwhichtheywerecoughing.PolishthesentencesFeelingnervous,JimheldMary’shandtightlyandbeggedhertoleave.Marykeptknockingonthedoor,whichmadeJimburstoutcrying.Polishthesentencespara2:1.Theneighborsofferedtohelp.Theyforcedthedooropenwiththeirmight.(現(xiàn)在分詞表伴隨)Theneighborsofferedtohelp,forcingthedooropenwiththeirmight.2.Shewaslyinginbed,unconscious.Shewascarrieddownstairsandrushedtohospital.3.Shecametoherself.Theywererelievedandhappy.(非限制性定語從句)Shewascarrieddownstairsandrushedtohospital,whereshecametoherself.Uselinkingwords

Jimnoticedtheflamewasreachingup.Feelingnervous,JimheldMary’shandstightlyandbeggedhertoleave.Timeseemedtostandstill,thoughtherewereprobablytherefortwoorthreeminutes.Marykeptknockingonthedoor,wonderingifMakcikwasinside,whichmadeJimburstoutcrying.Asthesmokebecameheavier,bothofthemwerecoughingandtheireyeswerestinging.Uselinkingwords

Luckily,someneighborspassingbystopped.Kindly,theyofferedtohelp,forcingthedooropenwiththeirmight.Sureenough,Makcikwaslyinginthebed,unconscious.Outofresponsibility,shewascarrieddownstairsandrushedtothehospital,whereshecametoherself.PeopleintheneighborhoodfeltrelievedandMaryandJimwerehappy.summarize1.readforthemainidea2.predictbyaskingquestions3.writeanoutlinebyyourquestions4.checktheunderlinedwords5.polishwhatyouwrite6.uselinkingwordstocompleteyourwriting好文共賞_馬佳悅

Jimnoticedtheflamewasreachingup.Thethicker,deepersmokemadehimcan’thelpcoughing.Feelinghorrible,hesaidbetweensobs,“Mary,please!Ifwedon’tleavewe’lldie!”ButMarykeptknocking,shethoughtifMakcikdiedbecauseofher,shewouldfeelguiltyallherlife.Therefore,shetriedtoaskforhelpfromneighbors,buttheypushedherviolently.HopelesshitMary’sheart,shedidn’tknowwhattodo.unabletostopcoughingpushedawayherHopelessnesssweptthroughherheartLuckily,someneighborspassingbystopped.Theywereconfusedthatwhytwochildrendidn’trushoutoftheflat

insuchadangeroussituation.Maryshouted,“Anoldladyisinthedoor,wemustsaveher!”Maybeherdeterminationmadethemmoveddeeply,theystartedtohitthedoor.Fortunately,whentheygotintheroomMakcikwasjustblackout.Sotheyliftedherandrunawayquickly.Inthehospital,Makciksaidinwhisper,“Thankyou,littlesweet.Icanhardlyimagineachildsavemylife.Believethat,goodisrewardedgood.”justblackedoutdashedoutoftheflatgoodnessisrewardedwithgoodness好文共賞_柴藝Jimnoticedtheflamewasreachingup.Hestoodverystillwithfearfilledinhishead.Hewassoworriedthatallthethinghethoughtwastorunawaywithhissister.However,hissisterinsistedtoknockedonthedoor.Withoutanswers.Thecloudofsmokegotthickerandthicker.Bothofthemfoundithardtobreatheandstartedcoughing.ItseemedthatJimwastrulyscaredandhenearlywantedtocrywithhisfaceinpale.Theterriblefiregotcloserstepbystep.withfearfillinghisheadthingsinsistedonknockingstillnoanswersgraduallyLuckily,someneighborspassingbystopped.Atthattime,Maryfoundherhopeagain,aheartofstrengthstartedtogrow,insteadofbeingafraidanymore.ShetoldMakcikmustbeathome.Theymanagedtopushthedoorviolently.Indeed,Makcikwasblackingoutinherbed.Theyquicklywentdownstairsandrushedtosendhertothehospital.Ahourlater,thedoctorsaidshewasinsafety.Everyonehadasmileontheirfaces.Sincethen,aseedofbeingsomeonetohelpothershasbeenplantedinJim’smind,growingcommittedly.themWithouthesitate,confirmedly好文共賞_童璐瑩

Jimnoticedtheflamewasreachingup.HefeltafraidandheshoutedtoMary

violently.AflickerofhesitationcrossedMary’sface,butsoonshedeterminedtobreakintotheroom.“Hurryup!”It’stoohottotakeanyactions,theireyesfulloftearsbecauseofthesmoke.flashedthroughMary’smindwithLuckily,someneighborspassingbystopped.Jimheardsomeoneyelledwithfear.“Isawaoldladylyingonthefloor!”O(jiān)neofthemshuddered.Marytookabigstickfromthedoor,andpeopleimmediatelyhitthedoor.Withabignoise,theyrushedintotheroom.Jimcried,hesawthesomke,MarycarriedMakcikonherback.Theysucceedinsavingahelplesspeople.anastheladylyingontheground.Theytothehospital,whofinallyhadanarrowescape.好文共賞_姜燕嵐Jimnoticedtheflamewasreachingup,andthecloudofsmokegotthickerandthicker.Butthereisstillnoanswersinthedoor.Theystartedtofeeldisapointed.Suddenly,asmallandsickvoicecameout—itseemedthatMakcikwasingreattrouble.JimandMarystartedtohitthedoorcrazily,butitdidn’twork–thedoorwasinstill.沒有下劃線，至少降一檔insidedisappointedviolentlysolidLuckily,someneighborspassingbystopped.Afterhearingthebadnews,theyallstoppedescaping.Everyonestartedtohitthedoor.Fortunately,twoheadsarebetterthanone–thedoorfinallywasopened.TheyfindMakciklyingontheground,obviously,Makcikhadhitherfeetandcouldn’twalkanymore.Astrongmanwentoutandcarriedhertotheclosesthospital.Atlast,theoldladywassaved.HowbraveJim,Maryandneibourstheyare!who,好文共賞_項(xiàng)俊峰Jimnoticedtheflamewasreachingup.Hefeltasuddenadartofpanicbuthedidn’tleaveaway.Theytriedtheirbesttoopenthedoorbutitdidn’twork.Timesmarchon,Jimfearedandshouted:“Breakingintheroomistoughforus.Wehavetofleeforourlivesnow!”Maryhesitatedandsaid:“Listen!Forgetthethoughtoffear.Makcikisimportantforus,wehavetosaveher.Weneedtocooperate,you’reobligedtogoouttocallfiremanforhelp.”Afterhearingthis,Jimrushedoutimmediately.204字

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