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目錄TOEFL.iBT高分作文思路＋范文完美重排版…………3本局部填補了目前網(wǎng)絡iBT備考資料的空白。根據(jù)李笑來老師提供的作文思路與《iBT高分作文》原書范文重排。本局部對iBT考試的獨立寫作局部與口語局部均具有重要的參考作用。范文中加粗局部均依為原書所有。附錄一185題庫按關鍵詞分類…………184照錄原書附錄附錄二李笑來作文筆記〔獨立局部〕…………………185根據(jù)本人新東方聽課詳盡筆記整理而成附錄三句法多樣性專題………………193摘自李笑來老師網(wǎng)站〔〕附錄四例證表達法………199摘自李笑來老師網(wǎng)站〔〕時間匆忙，歡送指出錯誤，將在后面的版本中修正。感謝笑來老師給我們提供了如此之好的備考材料，一切版權歸笑來老師所有。僅供廣闊iBT考生備考參考，建議購置原版以更好使用。LostLawyer2006年11Page2of201TOEFL.iBT高分作文思路＋范文完美重排版1.Whypeopleattendcollege?Peopleattendcollegeoruniversityformanydifferentreasons(forexample,newexperiences,careerpreparation,increasedknowledge).Whydoyouthinkpeopleattendcollegeoruniversity?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.『分析』說明人們選擇上大學的具體原因(一個或者多個)：增加經(jīng)驗、拓展知識、開闊視野為了實現(xiàn)理想(ideal;idealistic)(如，周恩來就是為中華之崛起而讀書)為了保證將來的就業(yè)時機父母要求子女上大學別人都上大學了，所以自己也選擇讀書找不到工作("無知"，總是一局部人做出某個選擇的理由。上大學如是[1]，去博物館如是[12]，從事危險運動亦如是[43]。)相關題目：[168]『范文』Aftergraduatingfromhighschoolmanyyoungpeoplehavetheoptiontodirectlyentertheworkforce.Moststudentswhohavetheopportunity,however,decidetogotocollegebeforefindingjobs(Theyattendcollegetoobtainmorechoices,-highersalaries,andmoreopportunitiesforadvancementinanincreasinglycompetitivejobmarket.Beforeattendingcollege,studentshavealimitedopportunitytospecialize.Afterobtainingaspecificcollegedegreeajobapplicantcanbecompetitiveforpreviouslyunavailablejobs.Forinstance,applicantswithComputerSciencedegreeswouldnotonlybequalifiedforjobsinhigh-techcompanies,theywouldalsobewellpreparedforanyjobwithcomputerskillsasaprerequisite.Withalargerrangeofpotentialjobstochoosefrom,degreeholdersaremorelikelytofindajobthatsuitstheirparticularneedsandinterests.Additionally,employersarewillingtopayapremiumforhighlyqualifiedapplicants.Forexample,manycompaniesdesireemployeeswhoarecompetentinmorethanonelanguageandofferhighersalariestoattractthem.Evenifajobapplicantwithoutacollegedegreehashighstandardizedtestscores,employersmaystillplacePage3of201TOEFL.iBT高分作文完美重排版EditedbyLostLawyerahighervalueonanapplicantwithsimilartestscoreswhoalsopossessescredentialsfromawell-knownuniversity.Becauseoftheextenttowhichacollegedegreeisacceptedbyemployersasproofofcompetenceinagivenfield,collegegraduatesarenotonlymorelikelytoreceivemorejoboffers,theycanalsocommandhighersalariesthanapplicantswholackcollegediplomas.Finally,inadditiontoofferingmorechoicesandhighersalaries,acollegedegreeoffersaccesstojobswithaclearpathtowardsprofessionaladvancement.AB.S.inbiology,forexample,couldallowastudenttofindajobinalabaftergraduation,afirststepontheroadtowardsacareerinscientificresearch.Thesamemajorcouldalsobeusedtoapplytomedicalschool,andacareerasadoctor.Bothoftheseavenueswouldbeunavailablewithouttakingthefirststepofanundergraduatedegreeinbiology.2.Areparentsthebestteachers?Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Parentsarethebestteachers.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.『分析』因觀點絕對而不能同意。不是所有的父母都是好老師最好的老師不僅僅是父母有些父母盡管善良，但對教育孩子一無所知z有些父母不配做孩子的老師，對孩子有不良影響『范文』Obviously,inmostcasestheearliestteacherspeoplehavearetheirparents,andparentsaregenerallymostconcernedaboutthedevelopmentoftheirchildren.However,itisnotcompletelytruetosaythatparentsarethebestteachers.Firstofall,notallparentsaregoodteachers.Asnormalindividuals,someparentsmoreorlesshavesomebadhabits.Eventhoughparentsalmostinstinctivelydevotethemselvestocultivatingtheiroffspring,theoutcomemightturnouttobedisappointment,forallchildrentendtounconsciouslyorsubconsciouslycopyeverythingincludingbadonesfromtheirparents.Anotherdeficiencyofparentsasteachersisthefactthatmostparentsarelackofcommonsensesofeducation.Alltoooftenweobservesomeparentstendtopursuetheircherishedbutfaileddreambyforcingtheirchildrentodevelopinaprearrangeddirection.Ironically,whentheirchildrendonotfollowtheinstructions,thechildrenwillberegardedasdisobedientorallegedlyrebellious.Infact,itisparentsratherthantheirchildrenthatvirtuallydisobeycommonsensesMoreover,someparentsarequalifiedasgoodteachers,butnotallofthemarethebestones.Whenchildrenareinthepreliminaryschool,itisnotsurprisingthatparentsareperhapscapableofteachingtheirchildrenalmosteverysubjectevenbetterthanprofessionalteachersintheschool.Butthesituationwillnotlastlong.Weliveinaworldwhereknowledgeisaccumulatedbymultiplyingandatthesametimebecomesmoreandmorespecialized.Therefore,tobeaprofessionalinacertainfieldtodaytakesmuchlongertimethanhaseverbeenbefore.Noparentisabletobeprofessionalinallfields,thoughtheymightbeexpertsinoneormorefields.Wiseparentsoftenreleaseratherthanchargetheirchildrenasearlyaspossible.Theyareawareofthepossibilityoutsidethefamily.Parentsmay,nevertheless,helptheirchildrenmuchmorethandogoodteachers.Mostpartsofchildreneducationarevirtuallybeyondteachers'reaches.Itisparentsthatsupplement.Psychologystudieshaveshownusthatparents'lovesometimeshasastonishinglymagicpowertotheirchildren.AlbeitEinstein'smotherandthatofForestGumparebothgoodexamples.Ontheotherhand,parentsmightdotheirchildrenharmmorethandobadteachersaswell.Thenaturesofthosechildrenwhoseparentshavedivorcedareoftenseverelydistorted.Inaword,itisrathersuperficialtosimplysaythatparentsarethebestteachers.3.Doeseasier-preparedfoodimprovethewaypeoplelive?Nowadays,foodhasbecomeeasiertoprepare.Hasthischangeimprovedthewaypeoplelive?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.『分析』總體上，“食物變得越來越容易準備”是一種進步[37]，所以自然會帶來improvement。使人們的生活方式發(fā)生了一些變化：好的：節(jié)省時間，越來越方便，一定程度上把婦女從繁雜的家務中解放了出來也有不好的變化：準備食物是一種重要的家庭活動，可是食物變得容易準備一定程度上使家人在一起的時間減少了，比方“速凍餃子”[quick-frozendumpling]快餐業(yè)的高速開展的一個直接結果是，人們普遍變胖了，尤其是孩子相關題目：[13]『范文』Peopletodaycanpreparetheirmealmucheasierthanhaseverbeenbefore.Toprepareasingledinner,providenthousewivesusuallyhadtoworkforhoursinthepast:theyhadtobuyhomedirtyvegetableswhichhadtowash,meatwhichhadtoslice,andsoonsoforth.Eachandeverystepofpreparationwasatime-consumingtask.Butnow,thingsareentirelydifferent.Supermarketsprovidevegetablesandmeatcleanandneat,someofthemevenhaverelevantingredientsandneedonlyafewminutestobemadeintodeliciousmeals.Andthischangehasindeedgreatlyimprovedthewaypeoplelive.Inasense,foodpreparationisnolongeratedioustask,atleastmucheasiertotolerate.Suchachangehasliberatedmanywomenandgiventhemchancetodomoremeaningfulthings,forexample,ahigherpayjoboramorerespectfulone.Ontheotherhand,moremenarebecomingwillingtodothethingthattheyoncehatedsomuch,andinsomecasessuchtransformationofmenbroughtdramaticpositiveimpactonthefamily.Today,it'snothardtoimagineawifecomeshomeafteraday'shardworkandhowdelightfulsheistofindouthishusbandhasalreadypreparedherseveralherfavoritedishes!Childrencanmoreeasilybecomeindependent—atleasttheycanmakethemselvesbreakfastsordinnerswhenparentsareoccasionallynotpresent.Butsuchachangehasalsobroughtsomeunexpectedconsequences.Girlsnowadaysarebecomingmoreandmorereluctanttodeemhouseholdworkastheirresponsibility.Thereasonisquitestraightforward:itwasoncereallyridiculoustoinsistmendotrivialhouseholdworkratherthangoworkandearnmoneytosupportfamily,butconditionshavealterednow,girlsmightthink:"Icanworkaswell,ormaybeIcanearnahighersalarythanyoudo,dearboyfriend,ifyouwanttomarryme,answermeonequestionfirst,willyoupreparemebreakfastanddinnereveryday?"Andsomeboys,ontheotherhand,arebecominghesitanttogetmarried,orsimplyremainsolitary,amongmiscellaneousreasonstheydosoisonething:"Icantakecareofmyself,atleastIdon'treallyneedsomeonepreparemedinner!"Anyway,suchachangeispositiveanditdidimprovethequalityofpeople'slife.Atleastithasbroughtgirls,boys,husbands,wives,childrenandeveryoneelsewhohastopreparefoodanopportunity,nomatterwhatkindofopportunityitis.4.Whichismoreimportant,bookknowledgeorexperience?Ithasbeensaid,"Noteverythingthatislearnediscontainedinbooks."Compareandcontrastknowledgegainedfromexperiencewithknowledgegainedfrombooks.Inyouropinion,whichsourceismoreimportant?Why?『分析』注意一定要先進行比擬從書本中獲取的知識優(yōu)點：題材、范圍更多有更多的深度更加的系統(tǒng)缺點：有時過于教條也不見得完全準確從經(jīng)驗中獲取的知識優(yōu)點：獲取直接、簡單明了更加地實用有些知識無法從書本中獲得缺點：不系統(tǒng)，很大的隨意性很容易產(chǎn)生片面理解不一定要說A比B更重要，或者B比A更重要。也可以選擇在不同的情況下，有不同的比擬。學習抽象的知識，書本是最好的來源。學習游泳，這只能靠經(jīng)驗。另外，大多數(shù)的知識要書本經(jīng)驗相結合才可以。相關題目：[116]有些科目或者知識適合通過實踐學習，比方，語言，體育有些科目或者知識適合通過閱讀學習，比方，物理、化學、歷史、地理有些科目或者知識適合通過與別人交流來學習，比方銷售技巧；管理技巧所以不能一概而論(treatdifferentthings/problems/matters]asthesame)，要看學什么，以及學習的階段?！悍段摹籌ngeneral,knowledgegainedfrombookshasawiderrangethanthatgainedfromexperience.Wenowliveinaworldthattypophileisnolongerexorbitant,andthatprintedmattersarereadilyavailable.Inlibraries,wecanlearnnearlyeverythingonlyifwehavealreadyacquiredbasicreadingskills,philosophy,history,literature,physics,mathematics,chemicals,biology,geography,anthropology,andthelistwillgoon.Unliketheexperienceofanindividualthatislimitedbytherangeofthatindividual,booksseemtohavealmostnolimitation.Sittinginthelocallibrary,wevirtuallycantraveleverywherethroughaninterestinggeographicencyclopedia,andcertainly,withnearlynoexpenseatall.Ontheotherhand,itcanbearguedthatsometimesknowledgegainedfromexperienceismuchdeeperandmorecomprehensivethanthatgainedfrombooks.Itisquitetruethatnoteverythingiscontainedinbooks.Howtodealwithpersonalfinance,howtocopewithcurrentsocialtrends,evenhowtomosteffectivelyorganizeourownmind,andnumerousotherthingscanseldombefoundthoroughlyandcomprehensivelydiscussedinbooks,wehavetogaintheknowledgebyourownexperience.Andthesadnewsisthatevensomeknowledgethatiscontainedinbooksusuallyneedsfurthercomprehension,mainlythroughexperience.Astowhichsourceismoreimportant,theanswersvary.Someknowledgecanbeacquiredonlythroughbooks.It'shardtoimaginewecanhaveagoodunderstandingofhistorywithoutreadingbooks.Ontheotherhand,someknowledgecanbeobtainedonlythroughexperience.Whenwetrytolearntoswim,merelyadetailedmanualofswimmingskills,evenabundantlyfilledwithillustrations,isatmostuseless.Wehavetojumpintothewaterandthengaintheknowledgewithexperience.Wehavetousebooksandexperienceassourcesimultaneouslytogetwhatwewanttoknow.Takelearningphysicsforexample,bothbooksandexperiencesareequallyimportantsources,andexamplesassucharenumerous.Therefore,Ithinkwhetheronesourceismoreimportantthantheotherdependsoncircumstances.5.TheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofanewfactorynearyourcommunityAcompanyhasannouncedthatitwishestobuildalargefactorynearyourcommunity.Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofthisnewinfluenceonyourcommunity.Doyousupportoropposethefactory?Explainyourposition.『分析』先討論“假設工廠真的落成了，而帶來的好處和害處”，而后發(fā)表看法。好處：直接增加了就業(yè)時機(到工廠去上班)；間接增加了就業(yè)時機(會有很多效勞業(yè)，比方飯店、商店、超市等等跟著開業(yè))如果工廠規(guī)模足夠大，物流規(guī)模也足夠大，那么將最終成為交通改善的起點大的工廠可以繳納很多稅，對地方財政有好處，進而促進社區(qū)的繁榮害處：帶來各種污染，比方，噪音、廢氣、污水等等工廠不一定會贏利相關題目：[16]、[25]、[26]、[30]、[79]『范文』Page8of201TOEFL.iBT高分作文完美重排版EditedbyLostLawyerIliveinaprimarilyagriculturalcommunity,andmostofthepopulationliveshandtomouth.Parentskeepchildrenhomefromschooltoworkinthefields.Ifthereisafloodoradrought,peoplestarve.Anewfactorywouldmeanregularmonthlysalariesaswellasprotectionagainstnaturaldisastersorasuddendropinthepriceofourmainagriculturalproduct,say,corn.Regularsalarieswouldallowfamiliestheconfidencetomakeinvestmentsintheirfutures.Thelocalswouldbeabletoplantheirfinancesaccuratelyandfreethemselvesfromdebt.Thisinturnwouldencourageentrepreneurshipandfurtherdevelopthelocaleconomy.Peoplecouldbegintoopenshops,restaurants,dormitories,andentertainmentfacilitiestoservethefactoryworkerswiththeirsavings.Profitsfromthesesmallenterpriseswouldfurtherenrichthelocalcommunityandturnourrelativelypoorfarmlandintoatrulyprofitabledevelopmentzone.Perhapsmoreparentscouldthenaffordtosendalloftheirchildrentohighschoolandmaybeevencollege.Therewouldcertainlybenegativeeffectsaswell.Iftheareabecomesprosperous,immigrantsfrompoorerregionswillcomeherelookingforwork.Becauseoftheirrelativepovertytheywillworkharderforlessmoneythanthelocalsanddrivewagesdown.Theremightbemoreimmigrantsthanfactoryjobsavailable,leadingtoanunemploymentcrisiswitharisingcrimerateasapotentialnegativesideeffect.Ontheotherhand,theproposedfactorywouldalmostcertainlyhaveadverseeffectsonthelocalenvironment,particularlyinregardstopollutingthewater.Thisisperhapsthemostseriousconcern,becausewithoutcleanwatertheareacannotsustainlifeofanykind,com,livestock,orhuman.However,becauseoftherelativelydesperateeconomicsituationofmyhometown,Ibelievethepotentialbenefitsofopeninganewfactorywouldoutweightherisks.Ifwetaketheproperprecautions,suchasimposingstrictenvironmentalstandardsandprovidingadequatesocialservicesforimmigrants,thewholeareastandstobenefit.6.ThemostimportantthingyouwanttochangeaboutyourhometownIfyoucouldchangeoneimportantthingaboutyourhometown,whatwouldyouchange?Usereasonsandspecificexamplestosupportyouranswer.『分析』改變其環(huán)境，因為一個好的環(huán)境會使人們更加快樂更加健康更加有效率相關題目：[52]、[141]、[165]都可以選擇改變其環(huán)境。這些題目實際上可以用一篇文章應對。Page9of201TOEFL.iBT高分作文完美重排版EditedbyLostLawyer『范文』IwasborninasmalltownnamedHailin,locatedintheNorth-EastofChina.Themostseriousproblemsinmyhometownarethebackwardideasaboutawoman'splaceinthefamily,school,workplace,andsociety.Thesenegativestereotypeshurtnotonlywomen,butallofsocietyaswell.Ifpossible,Iwouldchangetheattitudesofthepeopleinmyhometownsotheywouldviewmenandwomenequally.Discriminationagainstwomeninmyhometownbeginsbeforetheyareevenborn.Becausepeopleherebelievethatonlyamancancarryonthefamilyline,everyfamilywantstohaveatleastoneson.Eachfamilyisonlysupposedtohaveonechildbecauseoftheoverpopulationproblem.Thismeansthatifafamilycanfindoutafetusisfemalebeforeitisborntheymightabortit.Orinothercases,peoplewillhavemanyfemalebabiesbeforetheyhaveason,whichonlymakesthepopulationproblemworse.Iffemalebabieswereconsideredasimportantasmalebabies,thenthesetwoproblemsprobablywouldnotexist.Discriminationagainstgirlscontinuesastheygotoschoolandwork.Theprevalentstereotypeisthatwomenarenotassmartasmenandweshouldn'twastetimeandmoneyeducatingthem.Familiesofteninsistthattheirdaughtersstayathomeandhelpwithhouseworkwhilesendingtheirsonstoschool.Girlsareborneverybitassmartasboysandequallydeservetoreapthebenefitsofeducation.Manyoftheworld'sfamousscientistsandleadersarewomen,fromMarieCurietoMargaretThatcher.Weneedtoeliminatethestereotypethatwomenarelessintelligentthanmensothatourcommunitycanbenefitfromtheachievementsthatwomenarecapableofmakingwhenarmedwitheducation.Infact,womenneedtoberespectedenoughtoholdprofessionalandleadershipjobsinourcommunity.Thiswouldmeanthatintheclassifiedsectionofnewspapers,therewouldnolongerbejobsfor"menonly."Wewillneverknowhowmanywomencouldhavedonethosejobsbetterthanamancouldhaveuntiltheparentsofeverybabygirldecidethattheirdaughterisworthasmuchastheirson.ThisisprobablythemostimportantthingthatIwanttochangeaboutmyhometown.7.Theinfluenceofmoviesortelevisiononpeople'sbehaviorHowdomoviesortelevisioninfluencepeople'sbehavior?Usereasonsandspecificexamplestosupportyouranswer.『分析』電影、電視等群眾傳媒(massmedia)往往可以對人們的行為產(chǎn)生影響通過改變?nèi)藗兊膬r值觀、世界觀、審美觀而改變?nèi)藗冃袨橥ㄟ^制造“社會熱點”而使群眾不停地討論一件事情通過滿足人們的夢想，或使人們處于平衡狀態(tài)，或使人們一定程度上失衡『范文』Theimpactthatmoviesortelevisionhashadonourdailylife,andsocietyingeneral,isundeniable.Nodoubtitwillbecomeevengreaterasthescopeofwhichcontinuestogrow,andastherelevanttechnologiesbecomemoreandmoresophisticated,andsofascinatingthatvirtuallynobodywillbeabletoescape.Already,itcanbeseenhowwesternmoviesareexercisinginfluenceonouryouthgeneration:theygrowlong-hairregardlessoftheirgender,commonlypartofwhichisdyedingold;theywearjeansineachandeveryseason,usuallythekneesofwhicharedeliberatelytattered;boysarefondofearringsorotheroddpendants;andgirlsarekeenonMarlborosandweirdbadwords.Themajormeansthatmoviesandtelevisioninfluencethepublicisbycreatingtopicsofdiscussioninthesociety.Moviesofferpeople(theconsumers)issuestotalkandthinkabout.Titanichadbroughtaworldwideuproarbyitsextollingoffascinatingimmortallove;PrimeColorandWagtheDogmetthenationaldebateonrightanddutyofthepresidentoftheUnitedStates.AntiwarmoviessuchasTearsoftheSunandAllQuietontheWesternFrontamongnumerousothershavebeenraisingthequestionthatisanywarreallytoupholdjusticeorisitreallyworthythatanindividualmakessacrificestohiscountryandatthesametimeignoreshisownfamilyorhispersonalvalues?Televisionalsoshapesourunderstandingofwhatisimportantandwhatisnotimportant(toknow).The"important"issuesarebeingdiscussedoverandoverorinthebeginningofaprogram.The"notimportant"storiesaretheonesthatarenotbeingtoldatall.The"notveryimportant"storiesareprobablyveryshortandhiddeninthelastpart.Byprearrangingpublicissue,moviesandtelevisionmakedecisionsforus.Eventhoughtherearecriticalthinkingindividualsinanysociety,theyaredefinitelyinminority;thepublicinwholeindeedlackskillsofcriticalthinking,andthereforetheyareoftenledbythemoviesandtelevision.Inbrief,moviesandtelevision,byofferingtopicsandaffectingthewaysinwhichwediscuss"theimportantissues",hasastronginfluenceonourperceptionofthetruth,oftheworldorofthestructureofoursociety.Wehavetoadmitthatithasaroleinourlivesasasourceofinformation,experiences,entertainment,amusementandrelaxation.8.Hastelevisiondestroyedcommunicationamongpeople?Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Televisionhasdestroyedcommunicationamongfriendsandfamily.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouropinion.『分析』不．能．同．意．這．個．觀．點．。一方面人們看電視的時間越來越多；另外一方面人與人之間的關系越來越冷漠。但是這兩個現(xiàn)象并不是完全、直接的因果關系。造成人們關系冷漠的原因很多，比方，來自方方面面的壓力：工作、生活。Page11of201TOEFL.iBT高分作文完美重排版EditedbyLostLawyer『范文』Whiletelevisionhasbeensomewhatharmfulinitseffects,ithashardly"destroyed"communicationamongfriendsandfamily,althoughforsomepeople,theassertionthattelevisionhasdestroyedcommunicationamongfriendsandfamilyseemsprettyplausible.Television,inventedinlastcentury,withitswideavailability,increasinglyprosperousprograms,becomesoneofthemostpowerfulmeansofcommunicationinthehistory,andismoreandmoredifficulttoignore.Televisionisasmuchapartofourlivesasareourmeals,work,orschool;studiesconsistentlyshowthattheaverageAmericanchildspendsalmostasmuchtimewatchingtelevisionasdoesheorsheinschool.Weallhaveonly24hoursadayanditisclearthatthemoretimeonespendsonwatchingtelevision,thelesstimeonedoeswithhisorherfamilyandfriends.Hencethepassageprintedinthenewspaperormagazinetitled"Televisiontookmyhusbandaway."Temptingassuchclaimmightbe,itishardlytrue.Insteadoftelevision,itistheincreasingpressureofmodernlifethattookherhusbandaway.Wehavenodefiniteevidencetosaypeoplenowadaysenduremorepressuresthandidtheircounterpartsinthepast,butitisabsolutelytruethatpeoplenowadaysundergogreatpressuresthatcomefromvariousdirections,includingwork,school,economy,andsoforth.InvestigationsshowthatpeoplewhoearnmorethanRMB50,000annuallyspendatleast60hoursonworkperweek,muchmorethanthosewhoearnRMB20,000annually.Todayabachelor'sdegreemaynolongerguaranteeadecentpay,moreandmorecompaniesposttheirwantadsclaimingthatapplicantsmusthaveatleastmaster'sdegrees,whichtaketwoorthreeyearslonger.Peoplenowadayshaveverylittletimeforanything;televisionismerelyamongmanyotherfactorsthataffectcommunication,andisdefinitelynotthemaincauseofdegradation.Itseemsthatthemoreoneiseducated,themoreoneisawareofthedeleteriouseffectsthatexcessivetelevisioncauses,andeitherdeliberatelyavoiditoractuallydonotenjoyit.Ontheotherhand,therereallyaremanypeopleaddictivetotelevision.Butthefactis,weretelevisionnotexistent,surelythesepeoplewouldhavefoundotherescapes,suchasalcoholorgamblingforexample.Inotherwords,peoplealwaysfindawaytodowhattheywanttodo.Therefore,Icanhardlyagreethattelevisionhasdestroyedcommunicationamongfriendsandfamily.9.Liveinasmalltownorinabigcity?Somepeopleprefertoliveinasmalltown.Othersprefertoliveinabigcity.Whichplacewouldyouprefertolivein?Usespecificreasonsanddetailstosupportyouranswer.『分析』生活在大城市的優(yōu)缺點：信息興旺，工作時機多，生活設施完善；人情淡薄生活在小城市的優(yōu)缺點：溫馨，安靜，空氣好；人們相互了解、友善；信息閉塞；沒有好工作Page12of201TOEFL.iBT高分作文完美重排版EditedbyLostLawyer陳述自己的偏好(可以采取"itdepends"的策略，不同的階段有不同的偏好)相關題目：[20]『范文』Peopleseldomagreewitheachothereveninsuchtrivialissuesaspreferencebetweenabigcityandasmalltown.It'salittlebithastetosaythatitisbettertoliveinabigcitythaninasmalltown,orviceversa.Livinginabigcityhasseveralbenefits.First,there'remorejobopportunitiesreadilyavailableinbigcitiesthaninasmalltown.Moreover,notmerelyaretheremorejobpositionsinbigcitiesandthequalitiesofthepositionaremuchhigheraswell.Inaddition,thepayismoredecent.Second,childrenaresupposedtobeabletoreceiveaneducationwithahigherqualitycomparedwiththeircounterpartswholiveinasmalltown.Forfamilies,children'seducationisalwaysputinthefirstplace.Finally,livinginabigcityusuallyhasasuperiorlivingstandardtothatinasmalltown.Therearemorecommoditiesandservicesincitymarkets;therearemorepublicutilitiesavailableinbigcities;thereareevenmuchmoretelevisionchannelsinbigcities.However,livinginasmalltownalsohassomeadvantages.Peoplewholiveinasmalltownoftenhaveamuchcomfortablelifestyle.Mostofthemdonothavetosufferhighworkingstress.Althoughtheaveragepayismuchlessthanthatofbigcities,thepriceofdailynecessities,suchasvegetablesormeat,isusuallylessexpensive.Insteadofsufferinglonelinesswhichisprevalentinbigcities,childrenmightgrowupmorehealthilybecauseofharmoniousrelationshipamongresidentsinsmalltown.Peopleinasmalltowndonothavetogetupsoearlyinthemorningbecausetherehasbeennotrafficjam,andnobodydrivesofastinasmalltownastocausecaraccidents.Theymighthavefewerchannelsintelevision,buttheyhavemorefriendsreadilyavailabletochatorentertainwith.Accordingtomycurrentsituation,althoughIamlongingforthecozyatmosphereandrelationshipamongneighborsandfriendswhichalmostonlyexistinsmallcities,Ihavechosentoliveinoneofthebiggestcitiesinmycountry—Beijing,sinceIhavefoundaprettygoodjobhere,andadecentpay.IthinkIwouldpreferlivinginasmalltownwhenIgetretiredoneday.10.Doesluckhaveanythingtodowithsuccess?“Whenpeoplesucceed,itisbecauseofhardwork.Luckhasnothingtodowithsuccess.”Doyouagreeordisagreewiththequotationabove?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestoexplainyourposition.『分析』nothing是一個絕對詞，所以，不能完全同意也不能完全不同意。選擇“很大程度上同意”。指出luck確實存在指出可能導致人們成功的假設干原因：老實、睿智、幽默；執(zhí)著；肯于做不喜歡的事情[27]；相關題目：[27]、[63]『范文』Hereisatruestory,astoryaboutanAfricanmancalledCinquewhoslewamostterrifyingbeastthatanyonehaseverseen,alion.Hissiblingsinthevillagewhoknowaboutthisanecdotegavehimgreatrespectandcallhimthebigman.However,hetoldthetruthlater."Ithadkilledseveralpeople,evenhuntersamongus.Everyoneincludingmewasafraid."Iwaslyingdownwithmyfamily,whenoutofnowhereitappeared."Asitcameforme,IpickedupabigrockandIthrewit.Andthatwasn'tbravery,becauseanymanwoulddothesametoprotecthisfamily."Butbysomemiracle,yousee,Ihitit.Idon'tknowhowthatkilledit,butitdid.Arock,yousee,arock."Ireceivedthegratitudeofeveryoneinthevillage.Iwasgivenrespect.TheytreatedmeasifIwasaprince.Theygavemethefinestcountrycloth.Allthesethingstheygaveme,Itookthemall.ButIknewIdidn'tdeserveit,forwhenIthrewthatrockatthatbeast,ifImissedit,Iwouldn'tbesittingheretodaytryingtoexplainthesethingstoyouorsomebodyelse,I'djustbedead.I'mnotabigman,justaluckyone."Yousee,luckdoesexist.Whenitappears,mathematiciansdescribeinsuchawaythatsomethinghasanextremelysmallprobabilitybutitdoeshappen.Peopleoftensay,onehastohaveanopportunitytosucceed.Inthiscase,luckistheopportunity,andtosomeextentisanindispensablefactortoachievesuccess.Whenpeoplesayluckhasnothingtodowithsuccess,Iwonderitisnottheirintentiontodenyexistenceofluck,buttoencourage.Becauseluckinfactisafactorthatonecannotandshouldnotcounton,eventhoughweknowpeoplewhohavesucceededhavetheirownluck.Itissomewhere,