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WriteablogpostUnit3TheInternetWireFraud(電信詐騙)cyberbully(網(wǎng)絡(luò)暴力)identitytheft(身份盜竊)Informationleakage(信息泄露)troll(網(wǎng)絡(luò)挑事者)Whatproblemsarementionedinthepicture?OnlineSafetyProblemsLeadinHowcanwestaysafeonline?2Whattypeofpassageisit?AblogcommentsTitleBeginning/IntroductionBodyEndingCommentstructurePre-writingReadparagraph1
andfindoutthemainideaoftheblogpost1TodayIthoughtI'dblogaboutaquestion
thathasbeenaskedmanytimes—howdoyoustaysafeonlineandavoidbadexperiencesontheInternet?I'mnotanexpert,butmanyyearsasabloggerhavetaughtmeathingortwo.IntroductionTellthereaderaboutyourselfandwhatyouknowaboutthetopic.____________________。OnlineSafety/HowtoStaySafeOnlineTrytowriteatitlefortheblogpost.TomakethecompositionmorepersuasivePre-writing
Readparagraph2
andfindout3guidelinestheauthorprovided1BodyTellthereaderwhattheyshoulddoorkeepinmind.Definenewwordsorkeyterms.dosdon'ts
If…leavethesiteimmediatelyprotectyourprivacybepolitepostcomments/clickonanythinggiveoutyouraddress/phonenumberTip1:Useimperativesentences(祈使句)tomakethelanguagepowerful,andpersuasive.TomakethecompositionmorepersuasivePre-writing
1Howaretheguidelines
connected?besides;inaddition;additionally;moreover;furthermore;what'smore;ontopofthat;firstofall;tobegin/startwith;inthefirstplace;firstandforemostlastly;mostimportantly,lastbutnottheleast;intheendSignalWordsTip2:Uselinkingwordstoexpressideasclearly,logicallyandcoherently(連貫地).Pre-writing
Readparagraph2
again
andfindout3onlinetroublemakerstheblogpostmentions.1IdentitytheftTroll
Cyberbully
acommonandseriousproblemexplanation…isapersonwho
…stirup...definitionLikeatroll...however..comparisonTip4:Adddetailsanduseskillssuchasexplanation、definitionandcomparisontomaketheinformationclearandunderstandable.Howdoesthewriterendthepost?A.Byaskingquestions.B.Byansweringquestions.C.Byaskingandansweringquestions.D.Byaskingreaderstowritecomments.√Pre-writing
Readparagraph3
andchoosethebestanswer.1EndingEndbyaskingthereaderstowritecomments.stronginteractivity(互動(dòng)性)Whydowehavecommentsinablog?
ToputheadstogetherandcomeupwithmoreideasToheardifferentvoicesfromtheoutsideworldBlogpostTitleintroductionBodyEndingTellthemainidea.Introducethetopic.Backgroundinformation.Guidelines/suggestions/tipsUselinkingwordstoexpressclearly.Useimperativesentencestomakethelanguagepowerful.Adddetails.(Examples/Definitions/Comparison)Askforcomments.Asummaryofablogpost.
Headline標(biāo)題醒目Introduction引入話題+背景Ending邀請(qǐng)?jiān)u論HowtowriteablogpostOrganizationofablogpost博文結(jié)構(gòu)Body圍繞話題提出建議Use
what
you
havelearnttowriteablogpostaboutonlinesafety.OnlineshoppingsitesUseawebsiteyouarefamiliarwith.Usestrongpasswords.Don’tusepubliccomputers.SocialnetworkingappsDon’tpostpersonalinformation.Don’tbelieveeverything.Bepolite.OnlinechatroomsDon’tgiveouttoomuchinformation.Nevermeetsomeoneyoumetonlinealone.Chooseoneofthetopicsbelowandusethenotestodraftyourblogpost.Writing
2Usefulexpressionsaboutgivingadvice:1.Ihighlyrecommend/suggest/advisethatyoushoulddo…2.Itishighly/strongly/intenselyrecommendedthatsb.shoulddo...3.Whynot/Whydon'tyoudo…?4.Itisadefinitelygoodidea/choice/optiontodo…5.Iattachgreatimportancetodoingsth.=Greatimportanceshouldbeattachedtodoingsth.6.Youmightaswelldosth.7.IfIwereyou,Iwoulddosth.=WereIyou,Iwoulddosth.EvaluationCriteria評(píng)價(jià)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)itemsScores(25’)Contents內(nèi)容(10’)Introducethetopic
Includeexamples,comparisons,orexplanationsAskreaderstoleavecommentsorsuggestionsStructure(6’)Thetipsandsuggestionsare
wellorganized(有條理的)
byusingsignalwordsIncludetransitionalsentences過渡句
Language(6’)Advanced高級(jí)的
expressionsorsentencepatterns句型
;grammarorspellingmistakesOthers(3’)Handwriting書寫Let'spolishthepassage.1.當(dāng)談及網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物安全,作為一個(gè)有經(jīng)驗(yàn)的網(wǎng)民,我確信對(duì)此我還是
略知一二的。Para1:introduction
Whenitcomestoonlineshoppingsafety,asanexperiencednetizen,IamsurethatIknowonethingortwo.2.隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的快速發(fā)展,在過去幾年里網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物也大幅度地增長(zhǎng)。但網(wǎng)上
購(gòu)物真的安全嗎?當(dāng)然不!WiththerapiddevelopmentoftheInternet,onlineshoppinghasgreatlygrowninthepastfewyears.However,isonlineshoppingreallysafe?Ofcoursenot!3.雖然網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物給我們帶來極大的便利,但也有著很多不安全的隱患。我
們要如何使網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物更加安全呢?Althoughonlineshoppingbringsusgreatconvenience,therearemanyinsecurerisks.Howshouldwemakeonlineshoppingsafer?1.有著以下幾點(diǎn)簡(jiǎn)單的建議,你可以愉快地享受網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的便利。Para1:introductionWiththesefollowingsimpletips,youcanenjoytheconvenienceofonlineshoppingwithmuchpleasure.2.當(dāng)你在網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物時(shí),這些簡(jiǎn)單的建議能夠幫助你避免一些糟糕的購(gòu)物
體驗(yàn)。Whenyoushoponline,thesesimplesuggestionscanhelpavoidsometerribleexperiences.3.建議當(dāng)你在網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物前,有必要閱讀以下幾點(diǎn)建議,這會(huì)使網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物
毫無(wú)風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。Itisrecommendedthatitisnecessarytoreadthefollowingadvicebeforeshoppingonline,which
makesyouronlineshoppingrisk-free.+transitionalsentences過渡句
首先,挑選熟悉的購(gòu)物網(wǎng)站。最好在你了解且信任的網(wǎng)站上購(gòu)物,它會(huì)保護(hù)好你的隱私。如果你很需要從不知名的網(wǎng)址購(gòu)買商品,在購(gòu)買前先試著去瀏覽一下網(wǎng)站的其他評(píng)價(jià)。Para2:rules/advice
Firstofall,choosethewebsiteyouarefamiliarwith.It’sbesttoshopfromthewebsiteyouknowandtrust,becauseitcanprotectyourprivacy.Ifyoufeeltheneedtoshopfromanunknownwebsite,trytogothroughothers’reviewsonit.linkingwords+imperativesentences其次,使用較為復(fù)雜的密碼。只有幾個(gè)數(shù)字或字母的簡(jiǎn)單的密碼很容易被入侵(hack)。為了安全起見,更加推薦使用較為復(fù)雜的密碼。而且,不要輕易泄露你的密碼。Para2:rules/advice
Second,useastrongpassword.Asimplepasswordwithonlyfewnumbersorlettersiseasilyhacked.Forbettersafety,astrongpasswordishighlyrecommended.Plus,don’tgiveoutyourpassword.linkingwords+imperativesentences最后,勿使用公共網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物。使用公共網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物有著巨大的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。你可以使用手機(jī)熱點(diǎn)(hotspot)去購(gòu)物,而不是公共網(wǎng)絡(luò)?;蛘撸梢詫⒛阆胍?gòu)買的商品加入購(gòu)物車,直到回家后再使用安全網(wǎng)絡(luò)去購(gòu)買。Para2:rules/adviceThird,don’tshoponpublicnetwork.ShoppingonpublicWifiisahugerisk.(Youcan)useyourphoneasahotspotinsteadofpublicWifi.Or,addthoseitemsthatyouwanttobuyintoyourshoppingcartandshopuntilyouareathomeandonyoursafenetwork.linkingwords+imperativesentences1.你有什么關(guān)于安全網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的建議嗎?歡迎在下方評(píng)論!Para3:Ending(askotherstogivecomments)Doyouhaveanygoodtipaboutshoppingonlinesafely?Yourideasarewelcomedbelow!2.歡迎大家分享自己的故事和發(fā)表任何與安全網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的評(píng)論!Youarewelcomedtoshareyourstoriesandmakeanycommentononlineshoppingsafety!Samplewriting1:OnlineShoppingSafety Whenitcomestoshoppingonlinesafety,asanexperiencednetizen,whosenetageismorethat10years,I’msurethatIknowonethingortwo.Herearesome
tips
foryou. First,itishighlyrecommendedthatyou
usetheshoppingwebsitesyouarefamiliarwith.Downloadfamiliarapporsoftwareliketaobao.Inaddition,whenregisteringashoppingwebsite,youmightaswelluseastrongpasswordandkeepitwell.Furthermore,neverusepubliccomputerstoshoponline,oryourprivacywillberecordedinthecomputers.Last,greatimportanceshouldbeattachedtoinstallingafirewalltowatchoveryourinformation.AfirewallisakindofsoftwaretoprotectyourusingInternet. Doyouhaveanygoodtipsaboutshoppingonlinesafely?Yourideasarewelcomedbelow!
Today,Iwanttoblogaboutshoppingonlinesafety,whichhasdrawnwideattentionnowadays.
WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,manypeopleareusedtoshoppingonline.Shoppingonlineembracesmanyadvantages.Justbyaclickofthemouse,youcanbuywhateveryou’reinterestedinwithoutgoingoutdoors.Whenshoppingonline,youcanchoosefromvarietiesofgoods,whosepricesaregenerallylower.
Nevertheless,somepeopleholdthebeliefthatitsdrawbacksoverweighmerits.Initially,it’sveryeasyforyoutobuygoodsdifferentfromthepicturesyouseeontheInternet.Inaddition,shoppingonlinemaycausepeopletobuygoodsthatarenoturgentlyneeded.
Frommystandpoint,theInternetisadouble-edgedsword.OnlyifweusetheInternetmorenormatively,canweshoponlinemoresafely.What’syouropinionaboutshoppingonline?Postyourcommentsbelow!SampleSamplewriting2:HowtostaysafeintheonlinechatroomTodayIthoughtI'dblogaboutaquestionthathasbeenaskedmanytimes---howdoyoustaysafeonlineandavoidbadexperiencesintheonlinechatroom?I'mnotanexpert,butmanyyearsasabloggerhavetaughtmeathingortwo.
Firstofall,there'sthegoldenruleoftheInternet:keepoutofwhatmakesyouuneasy.Don'tpostcommentsorclickonanything.Besides,protectyourprivacy.Don'tgiveouttoomuchprivateinformationlikeyouraddress,phonenumbers,th
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