2024年高考英語滿分作文考前必備【萬能模板】04：熱點(diǎn)話題預(yù)測之提出建議素材

專題04熱點(diǎn)話題預(yù)測之提出建議真題指引2023新高考全國Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷假定你是李華，外教Ryan準(zhǔn)備將學(xué)生隨機(jī)分為兩人一組，讓大家課后練習(xí)口語，你認(rèn)為這樣分組存在問題。請你給外教寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括；1.說明問題；2.提出建議。注意:

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右：

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearRyan

I’mLiHuafromClass________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearRyan,

I’mLiHuafromClass3.Ithinkit’snotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.

Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇是應(yīng)用文寫作，要求考生給外教寫一封郵件，告訴他將學(xué)生隨機(jī)分為兩人一組，讓大家課后練習(xí)口語，你認(rèn)為這樣分組存在問題?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累首先：tobeginwith→firstofall提高：improve→progress建議：suggestion→advice選擇：choose→select2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.拓展句：Mysuggestionisthatwearesupposedtogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）[高分句型2]Besides,Studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.（運(yùn)用了省略句和who引導(dǎo)定語從句）最新名校真題Passage12023年2月四省聯(lián)考你剛觀看了你校與英國一所友好學(xué)校聯(lián)合在線上舉辦的音樂會(huì)。請?jiān)诰€上留言板上寫一則評(píng)論，內(nèi)容包括：1.音樂會(huì)特點(diǎn)；2.觀看感受；3.意見建議。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Thisonlineconcertisabsolutelyfantastic.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thisonlineconcertisabsolutelyfantastic.Theperformersfromthetwoschoolshavedonetheirbestinentertainingtheaudiencewithonesongafteranother.Theirperformancesareundoubtedlyofhighquality,whichmakestheconcertalmostnodifferentfromaliveone.IenjoyedeverysecondoftheconcertandwasparticularlyattractedwhentheboysandgirlsfromBritainstartedtosingthetraditionalChinesesong“LiangZhu”.Theyperformedthesonginawaythattouchedmyheartandgavemeafeelingofconnection.IhopetherewillbemoreopportunitiesinthefutureforusChinesestudentsandourinternationalfriendstolearnaboutandfromeachother.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于開放作文。要求考生就學(xué)校與英國一所友好學(xué)校聯(lián)合在線上舉辦的音樂會(huì)，在線上留言板上寫一則評(píng)論。【詳解】1.詞匯積累確定無疑地：undoubtedly→withoutdoubt尤其地：particularly→especially感動(dòng)：touch→move希望：hope→expect2.句式拓展同義句原句：Theirperformancesareundoubtedlyofhighquality,whichmakestheconcertalmostnodifferentfromaliveone.拓展句：Thereisnodoubtthattheirperformancesareofhighquality,whichmakestheconcertalmostnodifferentfromaliveone.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Theirperformancesareundoubtedlyofhighquality,whichmakestheconcertalmostnodifferentfromaliveone.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】IenjoyedeverysecondoftheconcertandwasparticularlyattractedwhentheboysandgirlsfromBritainstartedtosingthetraditionalChinesesong“LiangZhu”.（運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）Passage2湖北十一校2024屆第一次聯(lián)考假如你是李華，你校交換生Harvey在校園網(wǎng)上發(fā)布了一則廣告，尋找一個(gè)合適的寄宿家庭(hostfamily),以更好地體驗(yàn)當(dāng)?shù)厝说纳詈吞岣咚闹形乃?。請你給他寫一封郵件，推薦自己的家，內(nèi)容包括：1、推薦的理由：2、學(xué)習(xí)中文的建議。注意：1、詞數(shù)80詞左右：2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearHarvey,I’mLiHuafromClass3.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearHarvey,I’mLiHuafromClass3.Havingnoticedyouradvertisementforahostfamilyontheschoolwebsite,I’mwritingtorecommendmyhome,whichIthinkistheperfectplaceforyou.Myhomeislocatedinabeautifulneighborhood,andit’sjust5minutes’walktoacitypark,wheremanypeopleoftenplaytraditionalinstruments,ChinesechessandTaiChi.Furthermore,everymorningonthestreettherearevariousfreshlymadelocalsnackswithreasonableprice,whichareauthenticallydeliciousaswellasgreatforyourbudget.Asformyfamily,they’reallfriendlyandeasy-going.MydadisintenselyinterestedinChinesecalligraphywhilemymotherisgoodatcooking,whichmeansyou’reabletopracticeChineseandlearnsomeChineserecipesifyoulivewithusBytheway,thebestwaytoimproveyourChineseiscommunicatingasoftenaspossiblewithnativesandI’dmuchliketohelpyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHuaPassage32023·浙江省·期中考試隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的普及，網(wǎng)絡(luò)詐騙，網(wǎng)絡(luò)欺凌等青少年網(wǎng)絡(luò)安全問題成為大家關(guān)注的一個(gè)焦點(diǎn)，李華所在的班級(jí)圍繞“網(wǎng)絡(luò)安全問題”召開主題班會(huì)，假定你是李華，以“Howtostaysafeonline”為標(biāo)題，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。主要包括以下內(nèi)容：1.強(qiáng)調(diào)網(wǎng)絡(luò)安全的重要性；2.提出建議（如保護(hù)好個(gè)人隱私、文明上網(wǎng)等）；注意：1.詞數(shù)80詞左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】HowtostaysafeonlineGoodafternoon,mydearclassmates/fellowstudents!WiththewidespreadoftheInternet,wehaveeasyaccesstoalmosteverythingwewanttoknow.Meanwhile,therearealsohidden/potentialdangersthatwecan'tseethrough.Thenwhatshouldwedotostaysafeonline?Firstofall,don'tclickonanystrangelinksoastoavoidpropertyloss.Second,protectyourprivacy.Don'tgiveawayyourpersonalinformationlikenameoraddress,andneverseestrangersyoumeetonline.Finally,alwaysbepoliteinthevirtualworld.Trynottobeatargetforacyberbully.Onlywhenweobeytherulesabovecanwebui