金華十校4月讀后續(xù)寫講義高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

金華十校4月讀后續(xù)寫讀后續(xù)寫(滿分25分)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。ItwasourturntoopenourpresentsthisparticularChristmasmorning.Thelivingroomwasalreadycoveredwithtornwrappingpaper.Obviously,thechildrencouldhardlywaittodiscoverthehiddentreasures,whichtheyhadexpectedfornearlyamonth.Nowweadultssataroundtheroomwithourpresentsatourfeet,slowlyremovingthepaper,tryingtomaintainourdignityinfrontofthechildren.Mywife,Brenda,andherfamilyhaveatraditionofgettingeachothergag(惡作劇)gifts.ThisalwaysmakesmeabituneasyatChristmasormybirthday,neverknowingwhatformofembarrassmentlieswaitingformeunderthethinbordersofthewrappingpaper.Recently,mysixyearolddaughterChristyseemedtobusyherselfwithsomethingwhileIwasplayingputervideoflightgames.Nowshewasstandingdirectlyinfrontofme.Theexcitementofthemomentjustbeamedacrossherface.Itwaseverythingshecoulddotokeepherselffromhelpingmeripthepaperfromeachpresent.Finally,IcametothelastgiftandwithmynaturalSherlockHolmesability,Iconcludedthatthishadtobethegaggift.Witheveryonelookingon,IdecidedtogoaheadandgetitoverwithjustletthemhavetheirlaughandItorethepaperandthereitwas...atoyairplaneabouttwoincheslong.OurholidayguestsstartedgigglingtothemselvesasIlookeduptomywifewithanunpleasantsmileonmyfaceandblurtedout,"Atoyairplane?Areyoukiddingme?"BrendagavemethelookthatlookthatalwaystellsmeIhavejustsaidsomethingwrongandshouldhavegivenitasecondthought.Ihadfailedtolookatthenametag(標(biāo)簽)beforeIopenedthepresenttoseewhoitwasfrom.AsIpickedupthepaperfromthefloorandreadthenametag,myheartsank.注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語;3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;4.續(xù)寫完成后,請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph1:Onthetagwerethelettersthatread,“ToDad,LoveChristy”._____________Paragraph2:Staringatthegift,Isuddenlythoughtofawaytoliftherup.__________________主要人物：I信息：ThisalwaysmakesmeabituneasyatChristmasormybirthday,neverknowingwhatformofembarrassmentlieswaitingformeunderthethinbordersofthewrappingpaper.Recently,mysixyearolddaughterChristyseemedtobusyherselfwithsomethingwhileIwasplayingputervideoflightgames.OurholidayguestsstartedgigglingtothemselvesasIlookeduptomywifewithanunpleasantsmileonmyfaceandblurtedout,"Atoyairplane?Areyoukiddingme?"AsIpickedupthepaperfromthefloorandreadthenametag,myheartsank.從以上句子可以判斷出主人公我的特點(diǎn)：不喜歡圣誕節(jié)惡作劇禮物+喜歡玩飛行游戲+覺得飛機(jī)玩偶就是惡作劇禮物+知道飛機(jī)是女兒送的心情沉重MysixyearolddaughterChristy信息：Recently,mysixyearolddaughterChristyseemedtobusyherselfwithsomethingwhileIwasplayingputervideoflightgames.Theexcitementofthemomentjustbeamedacrossherface.Itwaseverythingshecoulddotokeepherselffromhelpingmeripthepaperfromeachpresent.從以上句子可得知女兒的特點(diǎn)：知道我喜歡飛機(jī)游戲+在我要拆禮物時(shí)特別興奮次要人物：MywifeBrenda主要情節(jié)：第一段：從第二段第一句話Staringatthegift,Isuddenlythoughtofawaytoliftherup.我突然想到一個(gè)讓她高興的辦法，可以得知，第一段小女兒應(yīng)該是不開心或傷心的。此外，還需要寫到作者的懊悔，作者對(duì)女兒的道歉解釋或者安慰，但結(jié)果肯定是不盡如人意的。所以第一段情節(jié)：‘我’懊悔+孩子傷心+我道歉/安慰+道歉/安慰不成功第二段：從第二段第一句話Staringatthegift,Isuddenlythoughtofawaytoliftherup.得知，后面主人公‘我’想出了辦法逗孩子開心，所以接下來的內(nèi)容就是讓孩子開心的內(nèi)容，后面女兒肯定是被逗笑的。最后面再來一句升華主題的句子。所以第二段情節(jié)：用自己的辦法讓女兒開心起來+女兒開心反應(yīng)+主旨的升華下水作文：Paragraph1Onthetagwerethelettersthatread,“ToDad,LoveChristy”.ScarcelyhadIdiscoveredthenamewhenanounceofrepentancesurgedthroughmybody,hardlyabletobelieveinmysillyreaction.ItwasinaflashthatChristyburstintotearssinceshemusthavethoughtthetoyairplanecouldexerttremendousfascinationonme.Accordingly,Iwasinaflurrytoconsoletheaggrievedpoorcreature,lappingherinmyarms,beggingforherforgiveness.However,myawkwardandunskillfulparentingexperiencecontributedtomyfailureinfortingher,whichplungedmeintodeepvexation.(88字)Paragraph2:Staringatthegift,Isuddenlythoughtofawaytoliftherup.Ihikedherupontomyshoulders,andpickedupthegift,tryingtomimicthescenewhereshewasontheplane.Iranaroundthelivingroom,incessantlyexclaiming,“Look,weareflyinginthesky.”Notlongafterthat,agaleoflaughtercamefrommydaughter,abigsmilewrittenonherface.Eventually,mysinkinganduneasyheartwasreplacedbyasighofrelief.Sincethen,theplanehasbeeastronglovingbondlinkingmydaughterwithme.(85字)句法：ScarcelyhadIdiscoveredthenamewhenanounceofrepentancesurgedthroughmybody,hardlyabletobelieveinmysillyreaction.我剛一發(fā)現(xiàn)這個(gè)名字，心里就涌起一股悔恨之情，幾乎不敢相信自己的愚蠢反應(yīng)。（倒裝句）ItwasinaflashthatChristyburstintotearssinceshemusthavethoughtthetoyairplanecouldexerttremendousfascinationonme.剎那間，克里斯蒂哭了起來，因?yàn)樗欢ㄒ詾橥婢唢w機(jī)會(huì)對(duì)我產(chǎn)生巨大的魅力。（強(qiáng)調(diào)句）However,myawkwardandunskillfulparentingexperiencecontributedtomyfailureinfortingher,whichplungedmeintodeepvexation.然而，我笨拙的育兒經(jīng)驗(yàn)，使我無法安慰她，這使我深感苦惱。（定語從句）Ihikedherupontomyshoulders,andpickedupthegift,tryingtomimicthescenewhereshewasontheplane.我把她抱到我的肩膀上，拿起禮物，試著模仿她在飛機(jī)上的場(chǎng)景。（非謂語作狀語）Notlongafterthat,agaleoflaughtercamefrommydaughter,abigsmilewrittenonherface.沒過多久，我女兒發(fā)出一陣大笑，臉上寫著燦爛的笑容。（獨(dú)立主格）范文：Onthetagwerethelettersthatread,“ToDad,LoveChristy”.Ifeltsoagonizedandregretfultoseeherjoyreplacedbyalookoftotalembarrassmentandhumiliation.Shemustbeprayingthatnobodywoulddiscoverwhomthegiftcamefrom.Anditwasn'tjustanypresent.SheknewIwasfascinatedwithplanes.IquicklykneltdownandembracedChristytightly,willingtogiveanythingtotakebackthosewords.IexplainedIhadthoughtitwasfromMom,butsinceicamefromher,thatmadeitdifferent.However,nothingIsaidcouldremovethehurtinherheart.(93words)Staringatthegift,Isuddenlythoughtofawaytoliftherup.Itookthattoyairplaneinmyhandandbeganmakingvividairplanenoises.Itaxied(滑行)ontothe"runway",andacceleratedanditwassoonintheair.Iputsomuchexcitementintothatairplanethatotherchildrenwantedaturnplayingwithit.AndjustlikealittleselfishkidIsaid,“No,thisismine!”Itwasn'tlongbeforeChristybelieveditwasreallyacharminggiftandsmiledagain.Now,Ikeepthelittleplaneasareminderofmygirl'sloveandalso,thepowerofwords.(96words)好句：Ifeltsoagonizedandregretfultoseeherjoyreplacedbyalookoftotalembarrassmentandhumiliation.看到她的快樂被完全的尷尬和羞辱所取代，我感到非常痛苦和遺憾。IquicklykneltdownandembracedChristytightly,willingtogiveanythingtotakebackthosewords.我很快跪下來，緊緊地?fù)肀Э死锼沟伲敢飧冻鋈魏未鷥r(jià)來收回這些話。Itaxiedontothe"runway",andacceleratedanditwassoonintheair.我滑行到“跑道”上，然后加速，飛機(jī)很快就飛上了天空。Iputsomuchexcitementintothatairplanethatotherchildrenwantedaturnplayingwithit.我在那架飛機(jī)上投入了如此多的興奮，以至于其他孩子都想玩它。Itwasn'tlongbeforeChristybelieveditwasreallyacharminggiftandsmiledagain.沒過多久，克里斯蒂相信這真的是一份迷人的禮物，再次笑了。Now,Ikeepthelittleplaneasareminderofmygirl'sloveandalso,thepowerofwords.現(xiàn)在，我保留著這個(gè)小飛機(jī)，作為對(duì)我女兒的愛和語言力量的一種提醒。現(xiàn)學(xué)現(xiàn)做之翻譯練習(xí)：1._______________________thenamewhen_______________surgedthroughmybody,hardlyabletobelievein_____________.我剛一發(fā)現(xiàn)這個(gè)名字，心里就涌起一股悔恨之情，幾乎不敢相信自己的愚蠢反應(yīng)。（倒裝句）2.___________________Christyburstintotearssinceshemusthavethoughtthetoyairplanecould____________________onme.剎那間，克里斯蒂哭了起來，因?yàn)樗欢ㄒ詾橥婢唢w機(jī)會(huì)對(duì)我產(chǎn)生巨大的魅力。（強(qiáng)調(diào)句）3.However,myawkwardandunskillfulparentingexperiencecontributedtomyfailureinfortingher,______________________.然而，我笨拙的育兒經(jīng)驗(yàn)，使我無法安慰她，這使我深感苦惱。（定語從句）4.I_______________________,andpickedupthegift,tryingto______________whereshewasontheplane.我把她抱到我的肩膀上，拿起禮物，試著模仿她在飛機(jī)上的場(chǎng)景。（非謂語作狀語）5._______________,agaleoflaughtercamefrommydaughter,______________________.沒過多久，我女兒發(fā)出一陣大笑，臉上寫著燦爛的笑容。（獨(dú)立主格）6.Ifeltso__________________toseeherjoyreplacedby_______________________.看到她的快樂被完全的尷尬和羞辱所取代，我感到非常痛苦和遺憾。7.Iquickly_______________________Christytightly,____________anythingtotakebackthosewords.我很快跪下來，緊緊地?fù)肀Э死锼沟?，愿意付出任何代價(jià)來收回這些話。8.I___________the