書面表達三性訓練完整性層次性合理性課件高考英語復習

書面表達三性訓練——完整性，層次性，合理性（2016年新課標全國卷III）假定你是李華，與留學生朋友Bob約好一起去書店，因故不能赴約。請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歉意；2.說明原因；3.另約時間。注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearBob,I’msorrytosaythatIcannotgotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.IhavejustfoundthatIhavetoattendanimportantclassmeetingthatafternoon.Ihopethechangewillnotcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.ShallwegoonSaturdaymorning?Wecansetoutearlysothatwe’llhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks.Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetat8:30outsidetheschoolgate.Ifnot,letmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishouldbeavailableanytimeafterschoolnextweek.Yours,LiHua1、文章無層次2、關鍵詞缺失3、無法寫出正確句子4、內(nèi)容合理性出現(xiàn)偏差5、卷面書寫問題：完整性層次性合理性DearJack,I’mwritingtomakeanapologytoyoubecauseIcan’tgotothemovieswithyouthisSaturday.Iwantyoutoknowwhathashappened.Justnow,mymotherreceivedacall,sayingmygrandmaisill.It’shalfayearsinceIlastvisitedherinthecountryside.Ireallymissher,whoplayedanimportantroleinmychildhoodwhenmyparentswerebusywiththeirwork.MyparentsaskedmetogowiththemtovisitmygrandparentsthisSaturday.Thus,Ican’tgowithyouasplanned.Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologyandunderstandme.ShallIsuggestthatweputitoffuntilnextweek?Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Task1:閱讀并分析短文Q1:這篇書面表達寫作的內(nèi)容是什么？Q2：這是什么類型的文體？你是如何知道的？Q3：內(nèi)容要點有哪些？是如何展開的？Task1:閱讀并分析短文與外國朋友Jack約好周六下午一起去看電影，但因故不能赴約，寫信表示歉意。道歉信。I’mwritingtosaysorrytoyou...1.表示歉意2.說明原因

3.另約時間DearJack,I’mwritingtomakeanapologytoyoubecauseIcan’tgotothemovieswithyouthisSaturday.Iwantyoutoknowwhathashappened.Justnow,mymotherreceivedacall,sayingmygrandmaisill.It’shalfayearsinceIlastvisitedherinthecountryside.Ireallymissher,whoplayedanimportantroleinmychildhoodwhenmyparentswerebusywiththeirwork.MyparentsaskedmetogowiththemtovisitmygrandparentsthisSaturday.Thus,Ican’tgowithyouasplanned.Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologyandunderstandme.ShallIsuggestthatweputitoffuntilnextweek?Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Task1:閱讀并分析短文承上啟下Q4：文中用到了哪些短語給你留下了深刻印象？Q5：文中有哪些句型是下次寫作我也可以使用的？Task1:閱讀并分析短文makeanapologytoyou...,sayingplayedanimportantroleasplannedputoffanyinconveniencecausedI’mwritingtomakeanapologytoyoubecause...Iwantyoutoknowwhathashappened.Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologyandunderstandme.ShallIsuggestthat...Task2:我來命題Task3:閱讀并比較分析以下英語短文。Q1:以上三篇作文有什么相似之處？Q2：以上三篇作文有什么不同之處？Q3：以上三篇作文對我的啟示是什么?(例如：篇章結構...)1.表示歉意2.說明原因3.希望獲得對方原諒Passage1:另約時間、期待回復Passage2:×

Passage3:補償措施情景Conclusion:道歉信第一段交代寫信目的，因某事向某人道歉，懇請對方接收自己的道歉。Dear_____,I’mwritingthislettertoexpressmyapologythat_____（道歉的原因）Ifeelsorryforitandwantyoutoknowthereason.______（解釋原因一）.Besides,_______(原因二).______(補救措施).

I’dappreciateitifyoucanacceptmyapologyandunderstandmyintention.I’mterriblysorryagainformycarelessness.

Yourssincerely,LiHua第二段向對方解釋導致自己所犯過失或錯誤的原因。第三段希望能夠得到對方的理解和原諒，希望有機會彌補，并提出措施。Conclusion:參考句型PartI：“道歉”句式1.I’mwritingtoexpressmyapologythat.../apologize/makeanapologytoyoubecause/for(doing)...2.I’mterribly/indeed/deeplysorry(totellyou)that...3.I’mwritingtosaysorrytoyoubecauseIcan’tkeep/obeyourpromiseto.../that...Conclusion:參考句型PartII：“解釋原因”句式1.Iwantyoutoknowthereason/whathashappened.2.Iwillbeverygratefulifyouarekindtolistentomyexplanation.3.Thisisowingtothefactthat...4.Thereasonformydelay/absenceisthat...Conclusion:參考句型PartIII：“得到對方原諒并提出措施”句式1.ShallIsuggestthat.../Iwouldliketosuggest...2.Iwouldappreciateitifyouallowmetomakeitanotherday/fixanotherday/日期/時刻(todo...)3.Isitconvenientforyouto...?Conclusion:參考句型PartIII：“得到對方原諒并提出措施”句式4.I’dappreciateitif/Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologyand