高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)應(yīng)用文寫作+我們的成長+講義

高考英語寫作我們的成長上個月，你校舉辦了“我的成長”的英語主題分享請你寫一篇英語短文，匯報(bào)你們小組四人的分享內(nèi)容，需包括以下要點(diǎn).MemberFangFangSunLeiZhaoYunYouAspectsstudyvoluntaryworkenvironmentalprotectionProgresshavegoodlearninghabitshelpothersinrecycleoldthings范文一Hello,everyone!Wehadasharingsessionon"MyProgress"lastmonth.Hereiswhatwesharedinourgroup.

Everyonehastheirownprogress.Firstofall,FangFang,whowaspoorinstudies,hasdevelopedagoodlearninghabit.Thus,shecanstudyinanefficientway.

Inaddition,SunLeididalotofvoluntarywork,whichprobablyhelpedhimbecomeresponsible.Whenhefinishedhelpingothersinneed,herealizedthatitisnecessaryforteenagerstotakepartinsocialactivities.Moreover,recyclingoldthingsmadeZhaoYunfeelfulfilled.Hecertainlyenjoyedprotectingtheenvironmentbyhimself.AsfarasI'mconcerned,Iwasdealingwithmymentalhealthproblem,anditwasabigsuccess.Iwasgladtochangemydietbecauseitcouldpreventmefromseriousdiseases.Overall,everyoneinourgrouphasmadegreatprogress.Let'smakeadifferencetoourdailylives!范文二Hello,everyone!Wehadasharingsessionon"MyProgress"lastmonth.Hereiswhatwesharedinourgroup.Eachindividualhasforgedtheirownuniquepathofadvancement.

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大家好！上個月，我們參加了一個名為“我的進(jìn)步”的分享會。請?jiān)试S我概述一下我們小組內(nèi)發(fā)生的事情。

每個人都開拓了自己獨(dú)特的進(jìn)步之路。舉例來說，芳芳，之前在學(xué)業(yè)上遇到了困難，現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)培養(yǎng)出了優(yōu)秀的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣，從而提高了她的學(xué)習(xí)效率。

此外，孫磊投身于眾多的志愿活動中，這無疑磨練了他的責(zé)任感。在完成慈善工作后，他開始理解青少年參與社會活動的重要性。另外，趙云從升級利用廢舊物品中獲得了成就感，真正享受到了為環(huán)境保護(hù)做貢獻(xiàn)的機(jī)會。就我個人而言，我面對了自己的心理健康挑戰(zhàn)，并最終取得了顯著的成功。調(diào)整飲食對預(yù)防潛在的健康問題很有幫助。最終，我們小組的每位成員都取得了顯著的進(jìn)步。讓我們共同努力，對我們的日常生活產(chǎn)生深遠(yuǎn)的影響。范文一與范文二優(yōu)化改寫理由供參考1.“Lastmonth,weparticipatedinasharingsessiontitled'MyProgress.'”使用更正式的“participatedin”替換了原先的“had”，提升了句子的正式度，同時明確了分享會的主題。2.“Allowmetorecapitulatewhattranspiredwithinourgroup.”采用了更書面化的用語“recapitulate”和“transpired”，來替代原先的口語化表達(dá)，使文章顯得更加正式和專業(yè)。3.在描述芳芳的進(jìn)步時，用“cultivatedanexemplarystudyregimen”替換了“developedagoodlearninghabit”，使表達(dá)更加生動和具體。4.“therebyenhancingherefficiencyinlearning”中的“thereby”增強(qiáng)了句子的邏輯性，指明了學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣與學(xué)習(xí)效率之間的因果關(guān)系。在描述孫磊的部分，用“embarkedonnumerousvolunteerendeavors”替換了“didalotofvoluntarywork”，使表達(dá)更加豐富多彩。5.“honinghissenseofresponsibility”比原先的“becomeresponsible”更加細(xì)膩地描述了孫磊責(zé)任感的提升過程。6.“Uponconclusionofhischaritableworks”中的“uponconclusionof”使句子更加流暢，并強(qiáng)調(diào)了時間順序。7.在描述趙云的部分，用“derivedfulfillmentfromupcyclingdiscardeditems”替換了“recyclingoldthingsmade...feelfulfilled”，使表達(dá)更加準(zhǔn)確和生動?！癵enuinelyrelishingtheopportunitytocontributetoenvironmentalpreservation”中的“genuinelyrelishing”和“contributetoenvironmentalpreservation”提升了句子的表達(dá)層次，使其更具深度和內(nèi)涵。在8.“Iconfrontedmyownmentalhealthchallenges”中的“confronted”比原先的“dealingwith”更加生動和有力。9.“Adjustingmydietprovedbeneficialinwardingoffpotentialhealthcomplications”中的“wardingoffpotentialhealthcomplications”更加具體和準(zhǔn)確。10.“Ultimately,everymemberofourcohorthasachievedremarkable