2024屆3月T8聯(lián)考英語讀后續(xù)寫遇險(xiǎn)類-電梯中遇險(xiǎn) 講義

2024年T8聯(lián)考讀后續(xù)寫原題目呈現(xiàn)：斜體為從句，藍(lán)色為好的表達(dá)，黃色為非謂語動(dòng)詞，紅色為三連動(dòng)Whenwewerefinally

dismissed

fromthelastclassoftheday,thestudents

streamedoutoftheclassrooms.Itwasanother

boring

dayafterschool.

I

draggedmyfeethomeasIsighed.Yetanotheruneventfulday,Ithought.

LittledidIknow（倒裝）

thatthedaywould

takeaturnfortheworse.Theliftlobby(電梯間)ofmyflatwasoldanddirty.Thewalls,

whichwerepaintedwhite,hadbeen

dirtied

overmanyyears.I

reached

myflat’slobby,

andpressed

theliftbuttonand

wentin.Justthen,MrsLim,myelderlyneighbour,hobbled(蹣跚)in.

Shelookedancientwithtissuepaperwhitehair,

wearing

afadedold-fashioneddress.

Iheldtheliftdooropen,

flashing

afriendlysmile,and

politely

greetedher.Iaskedher

howshefeltthatday

andpressedthebuttons.Shethankedmefor

being

sopolite,

then

weweresilentfortherestoftheride

（并列句）.Theliftfelldown

increasinglyfast.Therewereloud

clanking

sounds

hereandthere

whiletheliftgrewslowerandslower.

Myheartbeathardandfast

asmyhandsturnedcoldandwetwithsweat.

Unfortunately,thelift

cametoanabruptstop

atthefifthfloor.Ipressedthebuttonshardseveraltimes,

but

itwasofnohelp（并列句）.Thelightsonthebuttonshadgoneout.

Itsoondawnedonme

that

weweretrapped.

Anicyfearcreptupmyspine.

MrsLimwashysterical(歇斯底里).“Wewillnevergetout!”

shecriedwithherfacepale.Ithadbecomeacolourlessmask.Ihadnotime

tolose.Ipressedthebellintheliftimmediately.

Thesoundwassurelydeafening,

but

whatotherchoicedidIhave（并列句）?MrsLim

burstintotears.Itriedmyverybest

tocomfort

her,

telling

her

thateverythingwouldbeallrightandthatweneededtofindouthowtogetoutsafely.MrsLimbegan

having

troublebreathing,

and

Iimmediatelyhelpedher

sit

downandloosenedhercollar（并列句）.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為

150

左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Severalminutespassed,butnohelpcame.

Bang!MyhopeswereliftedwhenIheardthefirefightersontheothersideoftheliftdoor._______________________________________________參考答案Severalminutespassed,butnohelpcame.

Theair-conditioninghad

diedout,

and

theliftbecamereallystuffy(悶熱的).Wewere

sweatingbuckets

(大汗淋漓）.Wetried

toring

theemergencyalarmagain.Everysecond

thatpassed

waspainful“Help!!!”.I

screamedatthetopofmylungs,

trying

togetsomeone'sattention.

Awaveofdespairwashedoverme.

Ifeltlike

wewouldnevermakeit.Inonelasteffort,Itried

banging

onthedoors.

Thenextfewminutesfeltlikehours

aswewaited

incompletesilence.Bang!MyhopeswereliftedwhenIheardthefirefightersontheothersideoftheliftdoor.

Helpwasfinallyhere!Thebravefirefightershitthedoorsopen

using

theirtools.

Itfeltlikeahundredpoundweightwasliftedoffme,

and

Mrs.Limthankedtheheavens

thatsomeonehadcometoourrescue.

I

madeasighofrelief

whenthedoorswerefinallyopened

and

allthisdramawasover.Thefirefighterpraisedmefor

helping

Mrs.Lim.IreturnedtheirpraisewithgratitudeandMrs.Limthankedmeandevengavemeahug.參考范文一Severalminutespassedwithoutanyassistancearriving.Astheairintheliftlobbygrewincreasinglythin,Ifoundmyselfstrugglingtobreathe.Bothofusweregrippedbytensionandanxiety,desperatelysearchingforawayout.Iattemptedtopushopenthedoor,butitfeltasheavyasatonofbricks,refusingtobudge.Inamomentofdesperation,Icalledoutforhelpatthetopofmylungs.JustasMrs.Limbegantolosehope,Irememberedtheemergencybutton.Ipresseditandwaitedanxiouslyforhelptoarrive.Afterwhatfeltlikeaneternity,Iheardfootstepsapproaching.Bang!MyheartleapedwithjoywhenIheardthefirefightersontheothersideoftheliftdoor.Mrs.LimandIshoutedwithexcitement,beckoningfortheirassistance."Here!We'rehere!Pleasehelpus!"Oureyessparkledwithnewfoundhope.Thefirefightersrespondedswiftly,breakingthroughthedooroftheliftlobbytoreachus.Finally,Mrs.LimandIemergedfromthelift,breathinginthefreshairwithgratitude.Weexpressedourdeepestthankstothefirefighters,embracingeachothertightlyinrelief.Inmomentsofdanger,itiscrucialtoholdontohope,foritisourbeacontoanewbeginning.參考范文二Severalminutespassedwithoutanyassistancearriving.Myheartwaspoundingrapidly.Idecidedtobreathedeeplytoclearmyhead.Anideaflashedthroughmymind.Immediately,Ipickedupmyphoneandcalled911.Whataterribleday!IcomfortedMrs.Limthatweweredefinitelytoberescued.Theliftlobbywasstillsinking.Igraduallybecamedesperate.Istoodsilently,tearsrollingdownmycheeks.Mrs.Limbeattheliftlobbyindespair.Afterfifteenminutes,Iheardfirefighterscomingandfeltaglimmerofhope.Bang!MyspiritssoaredwhenIheardthefirefightersontheothersideoftheliftdoor.Thelightoutsideshoneinthelift.Wordscouldnotexpressmyexcitement.ItookMrs.Limandwalkedout.Iwasbreathingfreshair.Thewholeplacewasfilledwiththunderousapplause.Theunforgettableexperiencewascarvedintomyheartandnothingwouldbeabletoeraseit.Itturnsoutthatthere'salwaysawayoutofanytroubleaslongaswenevergiveuphope.參考范文三Severalminutespassedwithoutanyassistancearriving.Realizingthatallwecoulddowastokeepourselvessafeandwaitforhelp,IreturnedtoMrs.Lim,satnearherside,andtalkedtohertohelphercalmdown.Astimepassed,thesituationworsened,anditseemedlikenobodywouldfindustrapped.Withthethinair,lowtemperature,anddiscouragingdarkness,westoppedtalking,justlookedateachother,andwaited.Asurgeofnegativityanddisappointmentenvelopedthewholeliftlobby.Bang!MyspiritssoaredwhenIheardthefirefightersontheothersideoftheliftdoor.Immediately,westoodup,pattedonthedoor,andshoutedwithallourmight,"Wearehere!Help!Help!"Ultimately,weweresavedbythefirefighters.Afterbeingreleasedfromtheliftlobby,Mrs.LimandIshowedgenuinegratitudetothemandhuggedeachothertightly,withtearswellingupinoureyes.Gettingawayfromdanger,thespecialdayfinallytaughtmethatIhadtheabilitytofindsmallbutbeautifulthings.Whatasomewhatbadbuttotallymeaningfulday!

參考范文四Severalminutespassed,butnohelpcame.

Thecoldcreptin,andmyfeetfeltlike

blocksofice.Theairseemedtooheavy,pressingdownonuswithaweightthatmade

ithardtobreathe.Mrs.Limlookedatmewitheyesfulloffear,sayingsoftly,

“I’m

goingtodieinhere.”

ButIcouldn'tgiveup.Ihittheemergencybutton,hopingit

wouldtellthefirefighters.Then,IgentlycalmedMrs.Lim,tryingtomakeherless

scared.Suddenly,avoicefromoutsiderespondedtoourcall,sayingthathelpwas

coming.Bang!

MyhopeswereliftedwhenIheardthefirefightersontheothersideoftheliftdoor.

Reliefcameoverme,andIshoutedtoguidethemtowherewewere.Itwasn’tlong

beforethesoundsoftheirworkreachedus,givingusthewilltowait.Withafew

strongmoves,theyopenedthedoor,andlightcameintothedarkspace.Mrs.LimandI

shoutedinhappiness,ourheartsbeatingfastwiththankfulnessaswewalkedoutinto

thefreshair.Shewasquicklytakentothehospital,andasIsawherleave,Icouldn’t

helpbutthinkabouttheday'sscary,yetintheend,successfulevents.高分語塊

朗讀下列語塊，達(dá)到流利、快速的程度。1.Severalminutespassed--