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第六講I提綱作文
技巧點撥
L寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是仔細(xì)審題和分析所給的提綱,認(rèn)清題目和提綱之間的
關(guān)系,然后確定文章的主題、內(nèi)容以及文體。
2.每一個提綱可以作為文章的一個段落層次,段落的綻開圍繞提綱的中心和內(nèi)
容,不能偏離,也不能隨意增減。
3.提綱只是對文章的提示和概括,不是主題句。還須要依據(jù)提綱的性質(zhì),寫出完
整的、體現(xiàn)提綱主旨的句子,使之成為主題句,然后圍繞主題句進行擴展。
4.收集材料支持主題句。材料可以是事實、例證、親身經(jīng)驗、名人名言、諺語警
句等。應(yīng)當(dāng)留意的是,所選材料要與文章的主題相符,即要“扣題”,也要具有
典型性,能充分說明問題。在有多個例證的段落中,還要留意各個例證之間的連
貫性。
典例演示於
(2024.全國卷I)假定你是李華,正在教你的英國摯友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語。請你寫封
郵件告知下次上課的安排。內(nèi)容包括:
L時間和地點;
2.內(nèi)容:學(xué)習(xí)唐詩;
3.課前打算:簡要了解唐朝的歷史。
留意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
[材料分析]隨著時代的發(fā)展,電子郵件越來越受廣闊中學(xué)生的歡迎,所以寫電
子郵件是中學(xué)生常常做的事,這種形式的寫作貼近學(xué)生生活,使他們感到熟識。
考生成文時應(yīng)留意:1.要點要齊全:(1)時間和地點;(2)內(nèi)容:學(xué)習(xí)唐詩;(3)課
前打算:簡要了解唐朝的歷史。2.時態(tài):以一般現(xiàn)在時為主;3.人稱:其次人稱
為主;4.留意恰當(dāng)運用一些連詞,使文章自然、流暢。5.適當(dāng)運用一些高級句型
和詞匯以提高作文檔次。
【參考范文】
DearLeslie,
IamveryhappythatyouhavemadegreatprogressinlearningChineseandyouare
interestedinChineseculture.NowI'lltellyouthenextlearningprogramme.OnJuly
20,wearegoingtolearnpoemsoftheTangDynastywhichyouareinterestedinin
theLectureHall.Asaforeignlearner,itisdifficultforyoutounderstandthetrue
meaningandthecultureofthem.Therefbre,beforeclass,youcanreadsomebooks
relatedtothehistoryoftheTangDynastytobetterappreciatethepoems.
BesuretogototheLectureHallontime.Youcannotmissthewonderfulpoems.
Bestwishes.
Yours,
LiHua
跟蹤練習(xí)
(2024?石家莊高三仿真)假定你是李華,你的美國摯友Peter對中國春聯(lián)(Spring
Festivalcouplets)產(chǎn)生了深厚愛好,來信向你了解中國的春聯(lián)文化。請你用英語寫
一封回信,為他介紹春聯(lián)的用途、內(nèi)容和寓意等。
留意:L詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
【參考范文】
DearPeter,
I'mgladtoknowyouhaveinterestinSpringFestivalcouplets.Now,letmeintroduce
somedetailsofthemtoyou.
AsasymbolofChinesetraditionalculture,SpringFestivalcoupletsarealwaysstuck
onthedoororthewallofahouse.TheyarenecessitiesforChinesepeopletocelebrate
theSpringFestival.Writtenwithawritingbrushonredpaper,SpringFestivalcouplets
usesomepositivewordsshowingwishesforlove,health,success,wealth,happiness
andsoon.Theyalwayshaveatheme,andtheyrepresentbetterlifeorsuccessful
future,andsomeofthemincludewishesandexpectations.Ofcourse,thetopicof
singingthepraisesofourmotherlandisanothergoodchoice.
Hopeyoufindmyintroductionuseful.
Yours,
LiHua
分類專練
寫概括
1.(2024?南通市高三第一次調(diào)研測試)請閱讀下面短文,用約30個單詞概括下述
信息的主要內(nèi)容。
XueZhaofeng,aprofessorfromPekingUniversity,reportedlyhasmorethan170,
000subscriberstohisonlineteachingcourseandcouldbemakingabout35million
yuan($5.3million)ayear.Xueisonlyoneamongthehundredsofonlineteachers
makingmillionsofyuanamonth.AccordingtoiResearch,anagencyspecializingin
internetdatacollection,theonlineeducationmarketwasworth156billionyuanby
theendoflastyear,anditisexpectedtoreach260billionyuanby2024.
Onlineeducationhasalsofoundmentioninthisyear'sCentralGovernmentWork
Report,whichPremierLiKeqiangdeliveredtotheannualNationalPeople's
Congress.Wecanthusconcludethatonlineeducationnotonlyhashugeeconomic
potential,italsoenjoysgovernmentsupport.
Onlineeducationisnotwithoutproblems,though.Someonline"educators”are
extremelypopularyettheyhardlyteachstudentsanythinguseful.Worse,thereis
hardlyanysupervisionofonlineeducationagencies.AChinaCentralTVreporton
Nov.17saidquiteahighpercentageofsuchagenciesarebeingoperatedwithoutthe
educationbureaus9knowledge.
【參考答案】
Withtheavailabilityofricheducationalresources,onlineeducationisbecoming
increasinglypopular,bringonlineteachersandagenciesalargefortune.However,
onlineeducationhascausedsomeproblemsworthpayingattentionto.
2.(2024?蘇錫常鎮(zhèn)四市高三教學(xué)狀況調(diào)研)請仔細(xì)閱讀下面有關(guān)圖片及文字,用約
30個單詞概括下述信息的主要內(nèi)容。
ChineseactressLiuYifeiissettostarasthetitular
femalewarriorinDisney'slive-actionadaptationofthe
classicChineseepic,Mulan.Thefilmwillbesetforarelease
in2024.
Theoriginalanimatedversionin1998earned$304.3million
worldwideaswellasGoldenGlobeandAcademyAward
nominations.
AHeroBorn,thefirstvolumeoffamousChinesemartial
artsnovelistJinYong'sLegendsoftheCondorHeroes9was
publishedinEnglishforthefirsttime.Afteryearsofhard
work,the400translation,pricedat14.99
pounds($20.8),finallyhitbookstores.Thislatesttranslation
projectisthemostambitiouswithregardtoJinYong'sworks.
It'sbeen14yearssincecustomerservicesmanager
AnthonyGentleswasinspiredtocheerupthe"blankfaces^of
中■WiriTirariMnrir.F--,-二二^一左
phottgfit,apthe吆aypassengerswithwisdomfromhisfavoritebook,TaoTeChing
惚山vteyofaIhousanJj
^Ltniicsrmfsla
fJI(道德經(jīng)).
JMr.Gentlessaidofferinguppearlsofwisdomfromancient
Chinawashiswayoftryingtomakepeoplefeelmore
welcomeastheybravedtheUnderground.
【參考答案】
WhatisconveyedaboveisthattheChinesecultureispermeatingdiverseaspectsall
overtheglobe,thereexistingmanyinstances.
漫畫作文
請依據(jù)你對以下兩幅圖的理解,以“Opportunitiesfavourthepreparedmind”為題,
用英語寫一篇作文。
你的作文應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容:
1.簡要描述兩幅圖的內(nèi)容;
2.概述你對兩幅圖中不同做法的理解;
3.舉例說明兩幅圖對你的啟示。
留意:L可參照圖片適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
2.作文詞數(shù)150左右;
3.作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Opportunitiesfavourthepreparedmind
【參考范文】
Opportunitiesfavourthepreparedmind
Thetwopicturesrevealtwomentakecompletelydifferentattitudestobuildinga
brightfuture.InPicture1,amanisdreamingofopportunitiesforabrightfuture,but
withoutanyaction,whilePicture2showsanothermandevoteshimselftohisstudies
togetfullyprepared.
Themessageconveyedhereisclear,"Opportunitiesfavourthepreparedmind.^^The
differencebetweenthetwoliesonlyinthewayeachtreatsoppoitunities.Successful
peoplealwaysmakeadequatepreparationstoseizeopportunities.Unsuccessful
people,ontheotherhand,worklittleandjustwait,seeingthempassby.
Tofurtherstresstheimportanceofourattitudetowardsopportunities,lefstakeLiu
Xiangforexample.InordertowinthegoldmedalintheOlympics,hetrainedhard
everydayandeventuallymadeit.Therefore,weshouldsparenoeffortstofulfillour
dreams.It9suniversallyacknowledgedthatwewouldaccomplishnothingwithout
actionsandefforts.
圖表作文
請仔細(xì)閱讀下面有關(guān)中國文化和西方文化的關(guān)系的柱狀圖并依據(jù)要求用英語寫
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1.用約30詞概述柱狀圖信息的主要內(nèi)容;
2.談?wù)勀銓χ形鞣轿幕P(guān)系調(diào)查結(jié)果的啟示(不少于兩點)。
【寫作要求】
1.寫作過程中不能干脆引用原文語句;
2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱;
3.不必寫標(biāo)題。
【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
內(nèi)容完整,語言規(guī)范,語篇連貫,詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。
參考詞匯:交融的adj.convergent
【參考范文】
HalfoftherespondentsbelieveChinesecultureandWesternculturewillbemore
diversified.About35%ofthemthinkthetwoculturescanbeconvergentwhiletherest
holddifferentopinions.
Thesurveyresultscouldbeinterpretedfromthefollowingperspectives.Tobegin
with,theworldisgettingmoreinterdependent,whichmeansnosingleculturecould
bedominantoverothers.Tosurviveandthrive,eachcultureneedstodrawuponthe
strengthamongoneanother.Inaddition,becauseofthefrequentinteractionmade
possiblebytechnology,peoplearenowabletocommunicatewitheachotheracross
timezonesandcountries.Thishasledtoatolerantattitudetowardsdifferentcultures,
allowingdifferentvoicestoco-existintheglobaldiscourse.Therefdre,thoughthere
alsoexistotherdifferentopinionsabouttherelationshipbetweenthetwocultures,
cooperationandsharingarethemainstreamandtrend.
Inshort,cultureswillbecomemorediversified,whichIbelieveisagood
phenomenon.
提綱作文
(2024?天津十二重點中學(xué)高三聯(lián)考)假設(shè)你是李津,天津某中學(xué)高三學(xué)生。春節(jié)
剛過,你的加拿大筆友Susan發(fā)來郵件,詢問你有關(guān)在春節(jié)期間天津市禁止燃放
鞭炮的狀況。請你給她回復(fù)郵件,要點如下:
1.春節(jié)燃放鞭炮的傳統(tǒng)及意義;
2.自2024年起,在城區(qū)禁止燃放鞭炮的緣由(污染,火災(zāi),人身傷亡等)及市民遵
守禁令的狀況;
3.你對第一個無鞭炮燃放春節(jié)的感受。
留意:1.詞數(shù)不少于100;
2.郵件的開頭、結(jié)尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。
3.內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,留意行文連貫,要點齊全,語句通順。
參考詞匯:燃放鞭炮:setofffirecrackers
DearSusan,
I'mmorethandelightedtohearfromyou.
Yours,
LiJin
【參考范文】
DearSusan,
I'mmorethandelightedtohearfromyou.Inresponsetoyourenquiry,
rdliketosharesomeinformationconcerningthebanonsettingofffirecrackersin
TianjinduringthisSpringFestival.
Justasyouknow,itisatraditionfortheChinesetosetofffirecrackersinorderto
increasefestivalatmosphere,whichhasalonghistoryandreflectsstrongChinese
culture.However,inrecentyears,moreandmorerelevantproblemshavebeencaused
bythisactivity,includingnotonlyalargequantityoffiresandmoreserious
environmentalpollution,butalsocountlessinjuriesandevenmanydeaths,whichis
thereasonwhythecitygovernmentdeterminedtoputabanonsettingfirecrackersin
ourcity.
SincethebancameintoeffectonJan.L2024,wecitizensallhaveobeyedtheban
strictly.Thankstothecombinedeffortsbyallthecitizens,andforthefirsttimewe
havespentaspecialfestivalwithoutfirecrackers.Ifeelextremelypeacefulandhappy
insuchaclean,secureandquietfestival.
Yours,
LiJin
限時精練
A
請仔細(xì)閱讀下列對話,并依據(jù)要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。
LinTao:Hi,LiYan.LiJun:Oh,myGod.Lookatthesebicycles.
You'reridingabeautifulbike.HanMeimei:Whataterriblething!Arethere
LiYan:Really?Itisfromanypeoplewhoareinchargeoftheseshared
bike-sharingservice.bicycles?
LinTao:DoyouoftenrideasharedLiJun:Idon'tknow.Atleastthereshouldbe
bike?somelawspunishingthosewhodamagethose
LiYan:Yes,Ido.Ilikeit.bicyclesdeliberately.
LinTao:Bytheway,whatdoyouHanMeimei:Yes,thegovernmentshould
knowaboutthebike-sharingservicemakelawstokeepthebike-sharingservice
inChina?goingwell.
LiYan:IthastakenoffandtheLiJun:Usersshouldalsocareabouttheir
markethasbecomefloodedwithmorebehavior.
companiesrecently.HanMeimei:Thafsright.Morestrictrules
LinTao:Howcanwebenefitfromtheshouldbemade.Oncetheusersarefound
service?damagingthebicycles,theycan'tusethe
LiYan:Ifsveryconvenientforustobicyclesanymore.
goout.IfsalsoacheapwayforourLiJun:Iagree.Whatelsecanbedoneto
journey.ltprovidesaneffectivecreateahealthybike-sharingmarket?
solutiontothe"lastkilometer^^HanMeimei:Thebike-sharingcompanies
problem.mustn'tgiveawayusers9personal
LinTao:IthinkI'lllovethismeansofinformation.
transporttoo.LiJun:Ithinkso.
【寫作內(nèi)容】
L用約30個單詞概括上述材料的主要內(nèi)容;
2.用約120個單詞談?wù)勀銓Α肮蚕韱诬嚒钡目捶?,并??3個理由或論據(jù)支撐
你的看法。
【寫作要求】
1.寫作過程中不能干脆引用原文語句;
2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱;
3.不必寫標(biāo)題。
【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
內(nèi)容完整,語言規(guī)范,語篇連貫,詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。
【參考范文】
Thedialoguesaremainlyaboutthebike-sharingboominourcountry,withmore
companiesspringingupinthemarket.Althoughtheservicebringsgreatconvenience
topeople,italsocausessomeproblems.
Ontheonehand,weshouldencouragepeopletochoosebike-sharingservice,which
reallyhelpsprotecttheenvironmentandreducetrafficjams.Besides,thisservicealso
benefitsindividualsinvariousways.Forexample,itprovideslocalpeopleandtourists
withaconvenient,cheapandhealthymeansoftransport.Ontheotherhand,
regulationsandpoliciesaboutthebike-sharingserviceshouldbeputinplace.The
government,companiesandusersshouldallplayaroleinmakingbikesharing
sustainableandenjoyable.
Inaword,bikesharingisaninnovativeservice,whichrelievesurbantrafficpressure
andbringscitizensenormousbenefits.Andmoresharedbikesshouldbelaunchedinto
themarket.
請閱讀下面短文,并依據(jù)要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。
OnNov.25,2024,LuoErinthecityofShenzhenpublishedanarticleabouthis
5-year-olddaughter'sleukemia(白血病)toraisemoneyforhertreatmentvia
WeChat,China'smostpopularmessagingapp.AccordingtotheWeChataccount,Luo
raisedmorethan2millionyuan.
However,hewasfloodedwithconsiderablecriticism.Ononehand,hewasrevealed
astheownerofthreeapartments.Ontheotherhand,theShenzhenhospitaltreating
Luo'sdaughterconfirmedthatthefive-year-oldleukemiapatientwasreceivingthe
highestlevelofmedicalcare,butsaidthecostofthetreatmenttotaled200,000yuan,
withmorethan82%ofthoseexpensescoveredbygovernmenthealthinsurance.That
meantLuoraisedabout75timeshisspendingonhisdaughter'streatmentvia
WeChat.OnNov.30,Shenzhen'scivilaffairsauthoritysaidithadlaunchedan
investigationintothecase.
SomeInternetuserssaidtheythoughtthecampaignmaybeamarketingexerciseor
evenadownrightfraud."Ifitwereme,Iwouldneverusethisincidenttopushmy
kidinfrontofthepublic,“oneInternetuserwroteonChina'sWeibosite.Another
said,“Ifeelthatwearecheatedandrilsavemykindnessforotherswhotrulyneed
itanddon'twritearticlesformarketing.??
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1.用約30個單詞寫出上文概要;
2,用約120個單詞發(fā)表你的觀點,內(nèi)容包括:
(1)你對這一事務(wù)的看法;
(2)從“公允、誠信”等方面談?wù)勀愕玫降膯⑹尽?/p>
【寫作要求】
1.寫作過程中不能干脆引用原文語句;
2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱;
3.不必寫標(biāo)題。
【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
內(nèi)容完整,語言規(guī)范,語篇連貫,詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。
【參考范文】
Afather,whopostedhisdaughter'sillnessviaWeChattoraisemoneyforher
treatment,wascriticizedbythepublicbecausehehadtheabilitytocoverthemedical
expenses.
I'mincompletedisagreementwiththebehaviorofthefather.Ifsapparentthatraising
moneyontheInternetisaneffectivewaytohelpthoseinneed,whichcannotonly
assistthemingettingthroughthehardshipsbutalsobehelpfulincreatinga
harmonioussociety.However,thisfathercanaffordthemedicalexpensesbutturnedto
othersforhelp,whichbetrayedthepublic9strustandmadethemfeelcheated.
AsfarasTmconcerned,onlywhenoneisindesperateneedcantheyseekforhelp
fromothers.Meanwhile,thegovernmentandrelevantauthoritiesshouldmakeefforts
toenhancethesupervisionoftheidentityofthoseseekinghelpandgettothetruthof
theirproblems.
C
(2024?蘇北四市高三上學(xué)期期末聯(lián)考)
下圖反映的是一個來自哈佛高校關(guān)于人生規(guī)劃對個人發(fā)展影響的調(diào)查結(jié)果。調(diào)查
對象是一群智力、學(xué)歷、環(huán)境等都相當(dāng)?shù)哪贻p人。請依據(jù)圖表顯示的調(diào)查結(jié)果用
英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。
Twenty-fiveyearslater:
□A:ordinarypeople
□B:successfulpeople
□C:elites
Influenceofthelifeplanning
你的作文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容:
1.簡要描述圖表中反映出的人生規(guī)劃與發(fā)呈現(xiàn)狀的關(guān)系;
2.談?wù)勅松?guī)劃的重要性;
3.結(jié)合自身實際,談?wù)勀愕娜松?guī)劃。
參考詞匯:elite精英人士
留意:1.不必寫標(biāo)題;
2.可參照圖表適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
3.作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
【參考范文】
Asisclearlyshowninthechartabove,24%ofthesubjectswithshort-termandclear
lifeplanning,and9%withlong-termandclearplanning,endupassuccessfulpeople
andelitesrespectively25yearslaterwhiletherestwithambiguousplanning,ordinary
people.
Thereisnodenyingthattheimportanceoflifeplanningcan'tbeemphasizedtoo
much.Firstly,lifeplanningcandriveustocontinuemovingforwardwhenwearein
difficultyandarouseourpassionsforlearningmore.Moreover,withoutit,wemight
beinthedarkaboutwhattodo,thusachievingnothingintheend.
AsaSeniorThreestudent,mycurrentprimarytaskistoputallmyheartintostudyto
ensureexcellentacademicperformance,andtakingagapyeartodovoluntaryworkis
alsoonmyagenda.Afterthat,I'llgotocollegetomajorinwhatI'minterestedin.
D
(2024?鹽城市高三三模)請閱讀下面圖文,并依據(jù)要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的
文章。
Eachweek,weprovideacartooninneedofacaption.You,thereader,submita
caption,wechoosethreefinalists,andyouvoteforyourfavorite.Captionsubmissions
forthisweek^cartoon,byPaulNoth,mustbereceivedbySu
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