2024高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)江蘇 書面表達 含答案

第六講I提綱作文

技巧點撥

L寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是仔細(xì)審題和分析所給的提綱，認(rèn)清題目和提綱之間的

關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、內(nèi)容以及文體。

2.每一個提綱可以作為文章的一個段落層次，段落的綻開圍繞提綱的中心和內(nèi)

容，不能偏離，也不能隨意增減。

3.提綱只是對文章的提示和概括，不是主題句。還須要依據(jù)提綱的性質(zhì)，寫出完

整的、體現(xiàn)提綱主旨的句子，使之成為主題句，然后圍繞主題句進行擴展。

4.收集材料支持主題句。材料可以是事實、例證、親身經(jīng)驗、名人名言、諺語警

句等。應(yīng)當(dāng)留意的是，所選材料要與文章的主題相符，即要“扣題”，也要具有

典型性，能充分說明問題。在有多個例證的段落中，還要留意各個例證之間的連

貫性。

典例演示於

（2024.全國卷I）假定你是李華，正在教你的英國摯友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語。請你寫封

郵件告知下次上課的安排。內(nèi)容包括:

L時間和地點;

2.內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)唐詩;

3.課前打算：簡要了解唐朝的歷史。

留意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

［材料分析］隨著時代的發(fā)展，電子郵件越來越受廣闊中學(xué)生的歡迎，所以寫電

子郵件是中學(xué)生常常做的事，這種形式的寫作貼近學(xué)生生活，使他們感到熟識。

考生成文時應(yīng)留意：1.要點要齊全：（1）時間和地點；（2）內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)唐詩；（3）課

前打算：簡要了解唐朝的歷史。2.時態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時為主；3.人稱：其次人稱

為主；4.留意恰當(dāng)運用一些連詞，使文章自然、流暢。5.適當(dāng)運用一些高級句型

和詞匯以提高作文檔次。

【參考范文】

DearLeslie,

IamveryhappythatyouhavemadegreatprogressinlearningChineseandyouare

interestedinChineseculture.NowI'lltellyouthenextlearningprogramme.OnJuly

20,wearegoingtolearnpoemsoftheTangDynastywhichyouareinterestedinin

theLectureHall.Asaforeignlearner,itisdifficultforyoutounderstandthetrue

meaningandthecultureofthem.Therefbre,beforeclass,youcanreadsomebooks

relatedtothehistoryoftheTangDynastytobetterappreciatethepoems.

BesuretogototheLectureHallontime.Youcannotmissthewonderfulpoems.

Bestwishes.

Yours,

LiHua

跟蹤練習(xí)

(2024?石家莊高三仿真)假定你是李華，你的美國摯友Peter對中國春聯(lián)(Spring

Festivalcouplets)產(chǎn)生了深厚愛好，來信向你了解中國的春聯(lián)文化。請你用英語寫

一封回信，為他介紹春聯(lián)的用途、內(nèi)容和寓意等。

留意：L詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【參考范文】

DearPeter,

I'mgladtoknowyouhaveinterestinSpringFestivalcouplets.Now,letmeintroduce

somedetailsofthemtoyou.

AsasymbolofChinesetraditionalculture,SpringFestivalcoupletsarealwaysstuck

onthedoororthewallofahouse.TheyarenecessitiesforChinesepeopletocelebrate

theSpringFestival.Writtenwithawritingbrushonredpaper,SpringFestivalcouplets

usesomepositivewordsshowingwishesforlove,health,success,wealth,happiness

andsoon.Theyalwayshaveatheme,andtheyrepresentbetterlifeorsuccessful

future,andsomeofthemincludewishesandexpectations.Ofcourse,thetopicof

singingthepraisesofourmotherlandisanothergoodchoice.

Hopeyoufindmyintroductionuseful.

Yours,

LiHua

分類專練

寫概括

1.(2024?南通市高三第一次調(diào)研測試)請閱讀下面短文，用約30個單詞概括下述

信息的主要內(nèi)容。

XueZhaofeng,aprofessorfromPekingUniversity,reportedlyhasmorethan170,

000subscriberstohisonlineteachingcourseandcouldbemakingabout35million

yuan($5.3million)ayear.Xueisonlyoneamongthehundredsofonlineteachers

makingmillionsofyuanamonth.AccordingtoiResearch,anagencyspecializingin

internetdatacollection,theonlineeducationmarketwasworth156billionyuanby

theendoflastyear,anditisexpectedtoreach260billionyuanby2024.

Onlineeducationhasalsofoundmentioninthisyear'sCentralGovernmentWork

Report,whichPremierLiKeqiangdeliveredtotheannualNationalPeople's

Congress.Wecanthusconcludethatonlineeducationnotonlyhashugeeconomic

potential,italsoenjoysgovernmentsupport.

Onlineeducationisnotwithoutproblems,though.Someonline"educators”are

extremelypopularyettheyhardlyteachstudentsanythinguseful.Worse,thereis

hardlyanysupervisionofonlineeducationagencies.AChinaCentralTVreporton

Nov.17saidquiteahighpercentageofsuchagenciesarebeingoperatedwithoutthe

educationbureaus9knowledge.

【參考答案】

Withtheavailabilityofricheducationalresources,onlineeducationisbecoming

increasinglypopular,bringonlineteachersandagenciesalargefortune.However,

onlineeducationhascausedsomeproblemsworthpayingattentionto.

2.（2024?蘇錫常鎮(zhèn)四市高三教學(xué)狀況調(diào)研）請仔細(xì)閱讀下面有關(guān)圖片及文字，用約

30個單詞概括下述信息的主要內(nèi)容。

ChineseactressLiuYifeiissettostarasthetitular

femalewarriorinDisney'slive-actionadaptationofthe

classicChineseepic,Mulan.Thefilmwillbesetforarelease

in2024.

Theoriginalanimatedversionin1998earned$304.3million

worldwideaswellasGoldenGlobeandAcademyAward

nominations.

AHeroBorn,thefirstvolumeoffamousChinesemartial

artsnovelistJinYong'sLegendsoftheCondorHeroes9was

publishedinEnglishforthefirsttime.Afteryearsofhard

work,the400translation,pricedat14.99

pounds($20.8),finallyhitbookstores.Thislatesttranslation

projectisthemostambitiouswithregardtoJinYong'sworks.

It'sbeen14yearssincecustomerservicesmanager

AnthonyGentleswasinspiredtocheerupthe"blankfaces^of

中■WiriTirariMnrir.F--,-二二^一左

phottgfit,apthe吆aypassengerswithwisdomfromhisfavoritebook,TaoTeChing

惚山vteyofaIhousanJj

^Ltniicsrmfsla

fJI（道德經(jīng)）.

JMr.Gentlessaidofferinguppearlsofwisdomfromancient

Chinawashiswayoftryingtomakepeoplefeelmore

welcomeastheybravedtheUnderground.

【參考答案】

WhatisconveyedaboveisthattheChinesecultureispermeatingdiverseaspectsall

overtheglobe,thereexistingmanyinstances.

漫畫作文

請依據(jù)你對以下兩幅圖的理解，以“Opportunitiesfavourthepreparedmind”為題，

用英語寫一篇作文。

你的作文應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：

1.簡要描述兩幅圖的內(nèi)容；

2.概述你對兩幅圖中不同做法的理解;

3.舉例說明兩幅圖對你的啟示。

留意：L可參照圖片適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2.作文詞數(shù)150左右；

3.作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Opportunitiesfavourthepreparedmind

【參考范文】

Opportunitiesfavourthepreparedmind

Thetwopicturesrevealtwomentakecompletelydifferentattitudestobuildinga

brightfuture.InPicture1,amanisdreamingofopportunitiesforabrightfuture,but

withoutanyaction,whilePicture2showsanothermandevoteshimselftohisstudies

togetfullyprepared.

Themessageconveyedhereisclear,"Opportunitiesfavourthepreparedmind.^^The

differencebetweenthetwoliesonlyinthewayeachtreatsoppoitunities.Successful

peoplealwaysmakeadequatepreparationstoseizeopportunities.Unsuccessful

people,ontheotherhand,worklittleandjustwait,seeingthempassby.

Tofurtherstresstheimportanceofourattitudetowardsopportunities,lefstakeLiu

Xiangforexample.InordertowinthegoldmedalintheOlympics,hetrainedhard

everydayandeventuallymadeit.Therefore,weshouldsparenoeffortstofulfillour

dreams.It9suniversallyacknowledgedthatwewouldaccomplishnothingwithout

actionsandefforts.

圖表作文

請仔細(xì)閱讀下面有關(guān)中國文化和西方文化的關(guān)系的柱狀圖并依據(jù)要求用英語寫

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1.用約30詞概述柱狀圖信息的主要內(nèi)容；

2.談?wù)勀銓χ形鞣轿幕P(guān)系調(diào)查結(jié)果的啟示（不少于兩點）。

【寫作要求】

1.寫作過程中不能干脆引用原文語句；

2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3.不必寫標(biāo)題。

【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

參考詞匯：交融的adj.convergent

【參考范文】

HalfoftherespondentsbelieveChinesecultureandWesternculturewillbemore

diversified.About35%ofthemthinkthetwoculturescanbeconvergentwhiletherest

holddifferentopinions.

Thesurveyresultscouldbeinterpretedfromthefollowingperspectives.Tobegin

with,theworldisgettingmoreinterdependent,whichmeansnosingleculturecould

bedominantoverothers.Tosurviveandthrive,eachcultureneedstodrawuponthe

strengthamongoneanother.Inaddition,becauseofthefrequentinteractionmade

possiblebytechnology,peoplearenowabletocommunicatewitheachotheracross

timezonesandcountries.Thishasledtoatolerantattitudetowardsdifferentcultures,

allowingdifferentvoicestoco-existintheglobaldiscourse.Therefdre,thoughthere

alsoexistotherdifferentopinionsabouttherelationshipbetweenthetwocultures,

cooperationandsharingarethemainstreamandtrend.

Inshort,cultureswillbecomemorediversified,whichIbelieveisagood

phenomenon.

提綱作文

（2024?天津十二重點中學(xué)高三聯(lián)考）假設(shè)你是李津，天津某中學(xué)高三學(xué)生。春節(jié)

剛過，你的加拿大筆友Susan發(fā)來郵件，詢問你有關(guān)在春節(jié)期間天津市禁止燃放

鞭炮的狀況。請你給她回復(fù)郵件，要點如下：

1.春節(jié)燃放鞭炮的傳統(tǒng)及意義；

2.自2024年起，在城區(qū)禁止燃放鞭炮的緣由（污染，火災(zāi)，人身傷亡等）及市民遵

守禁令的狀況；

3.你對第一個無鞭炮燃放春節(jié)的感受。

留意：1.詞數(shù)不少于100；

2.郵件的開頭、結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3.內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，留意行文連貫，要點齊全，語句通順。

參考詞匯：燃放鞭炮：setofffirecrackers

DearSusan,

I'mmorethandelightedtohearfromyou.

Yours,

LiJin

【參考范文】

DearSusan,

I'mmorethandelightedtohearfromyou.Inresponsetoyourenquiry,

rdliketosharesomeinformationconcerningthebanonsettingofffirecrackersin

TianjinduringthisSpringFestival.

Justasyouknow,itisatraditionfortheChinesetosetofffirecrackersinorderto

increasefestivalatmosphere,whichhasalonghistoryandreflectsstrongChinese

culture.However,inrecentyears,moreandmorerelevantproblemshavebeencaused

bythisactivity,includingnotonlyalargequantityoffiresandmoreserious

environmentalpollution,butalsocountlessinjuriesandevenmanydeaths,whichis

thereasonwhythecitygovernmentdeterminedtoputabanonsettingfirecrackersin

ourcity.

SincethebancameintoeffectonJan.L2024,wecitizensallhaveobeyedtheban

strictly.Thankstothecombinedeffortsbyallthecitizens,andforthefirsttimewe

havespentaspecialfestivalwithoutfirecrackers.Ifeelextremelypeacefulandhappy

insuchaclean,secureandquietfestival.

Yours,

LiJin

限時精練

A

請仔細(xì)閱讀下列對話，并依據(jù)要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

LinTao：Hi,LiYan.LiJun：Oh,myGod.Lookatthesebicycles.

You'reridingabeautifulbike.HanMeimei：Whataterriblething!Arethere

LiYan：Really?Itisfromanypeoplewhoareinchargeoftheseshared

bike-sharingservice.bicycles?

LinTao：DoyouoftenrideasharedLiJun：Idon'tknow.Atleastthereshouldbe

bike?somelawspunishingthosewhodamagethose

LiYan：Yes,Ido.Ilikeit.bicyclesdeliberately.

LinTao：Bytheway,whatdoyouHanMeimei：Yes,thegovernmentshould

knowaboutthebike-sharingservicemakelawstokeepthebike-sharingservice

inChina?goingwell.

LiYan：IthastakenoffandtheLiJun：Usersshouldalsocareabouttheir

markethasbecomefloodedwithmorebehavior.

companiesrecently.HanMeimei：Thafsright.Morestrictrules

LinTao：Howcanwebenefitfromtheshouldbemade.Oncetheusersarefound

service?damagingthebicycles,theycan'tusethe

LiYan：Ifsveryconvenientforustobicyclesanymore.

goout.IfsalsoacheapwayforourLiJun：Iagree.Whatelsecanbedoneto

journey.ltprovidesaneffectivecreateahealthybike-sharingmarket?

solutiontothe"lastkilometer^^HanMeimei：Thebike-sharingcompanies

problem.mustn'tgiveawayusers9personal

LinTao：IthinkI'lllovethismeansofinformation.

transporttoo.LiJun：Ithinkso.

【寫作內(nèi)容】

L用約30個單詞概括上述材料的主要內(nèi)容;

2.用約120個單詞談?wù)勀銓Α肮蚕韱诬嚒钡目捶?，并??3個理由或論據(jù)支撐

你的看法。

【寫作要求】

1.寫作過程中不能干脆引用原文語句；

2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3.不必寫標(biāo)題。

【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

【參考范文】

Thedialoguesaremainlyaboutthebike-sharingboominourcountry,withmore

companiesspringingupinthemarket.Althoughtheservicebringsgreatconvenience

topeople,italsocausessomeproblems.

Ontheonehand,weshouldencouragepeopletochoosebike-sharingservice,which

reallyhelpsprotecttheenvironmentandreducetrafficjams.Besides,thisservicealso

benefitsindividualsinvariousways.Forexample,itprovideslocalpeopleandtourists

withaconvenient,cheapandhealthymeansoftransport.Ontheotherhand,

regulationsandpoliciesaboutthebike-sharingserviceshouldbeputinplace.The

government,companiesandusersshouldallplayaroleinmakingbikesharing

sustainableandenjoyable.

Inaword,bikesharingisaninnovativeservice,whichrelievesurbantrafficpressure

andbringscitizensenormousbenefits.Andmoresharedbikesshouldbelaunchedinto

themarket.

請閱讀下面短文，并依據(jù)要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

OnNov.25,2024,LuoErinthecityofShenzhenpublishedanarticleabouthis

5-year-olddaughter'sleukemia(白血病)toraisemoneyforhertreatmentvia

WeChat,China'smostpopularmessagingapp.AccordingtotheWeChataccount,Luo

raisedmorethan2millionyuan.

However,hewasfloodedwithconsiderablecriticism.Ononehand,hewasrevealed

astheownerofthreeapartments.Ontheotherhand,theShenzhenhospitaltreating

Luo'sdaughterconfirmedthatthefive-year-oldleukemiapatientwasreceivingthe

highestlevelofmedicalcare,butsaidthecostofthetreatmenttotaled200,000yuan,

withmorethan82%ofthoseexpensescoveredbygovernmenthealthinsurance.That

meantLuoraisedabout75timeshisspendingonhisdaughter'streatmentvia

WeChat.OnNov.30,Shenzhen'scivilaffairsauthoritysaidithadlaunchedan

investigationintothecase.

SomeInternetuserssaidtheythoughtthecampaignmaybeamarketingexerciseor

evenadownrightfraud."Ifitwereme,Iwouldneverusethisincidenttopushmy

kidinfrontofthepublic,“oneInternetuserwroteonChina'sWeibosite.Another

said,“Ifeelthatwearecheatedandrilsavemykindnessforotherswhotrulyneed

itanddon'twritearticlesformarketing.??

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1.用約30個單詞寫出上文概要；

2,用約120個單詞發(fā)表你的觀點，內(nèi)容包括：

(1)你對這一事務(wù)的看法；

(2)從“公允、誠信”等方面談?wù)勀愕玫降膯⑹尽?/p>

【寫作要求】

1.寫作過程中不能干脆引用原文語句；

2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3.不必寫標(biāo)題。

【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

【參考范文】

Afather,whopostedhisdaughter'sillnessviaWeChattoraisemoneyforher

treatment,wascriticizedbythepublicbecausehehadtheabilitytocoverthemedical

expenses.

I'mincompletedisagreementwiththebehaviorofthefather.Ifsapparentthatraising

moneyontheInternetisaneffectivewaytohelpthoseinneed,whichcannotonly

assistthemingettingthroughthehardshipsbutalsobehelpfulincreatinga

harmonioussociety.However,thisfathercanaffordthemedicalexpensesbutturnedto

othersforhelp,whichbetrayedthepublic9strustandmadethemfeelcheated.

AsfarasTmconcerned,onlywhenoneisindesperateneedcantheyseekforhelp

fromothers.Meanwhile,thegovernmentandrelevantauthoritiesshouldmakeefforts

toenhancethesupervisionoftheidentityofthoseseekinghelpandgettothetruthof

theirproblems.

C

（2024?蘇北四市高三上學(xué)期期末聯(lián)考）

下圖反映的是一個來自哈佛高校關(guān)于人生規(guī)劃對個人發(fā)展影響的調(diào)查結(jié)果。調(diào)查

對象是一群智力、學(xué)歷、環(huán)境等都相當(dāng)?shù)哪贻p人。請依據(jù)圖表顯示的調(diào)查結(jié)果用

英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

Twenty-fiveyearslater：

□A:ordinarypeople

□B:successfulpeople

□C:elites

Influenceofthelifeplanning

你的作文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容:

1.簡要描述圖表中反映出的人生規(guī)劃與發(fā)呈現(xiàn)狀的關(guān)系;

2.談?wù)勅松?guī)劃的重要性；

3.結(jié)合自身實際，談?wù)勀愕娜松?guī)劃。

參考詞匯：elite精英人士

留意：1.不必寫標(biāo)題；

2.可參照圖表適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3.作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

【參考范文】

Asisclearlyshowninthechartabove,24%ofthesubjectswithshort-termandclear

lifeplanning,and9%withlong-termandclearplanning,endupassuccessfulpeople

andelitesrespectively25yearslaterwhiletherestwithambiguousplanning,ordinary

people.

Thereisnodenyingthattheimportanceoflifeplanningcan'tbeemphasizedtoo

much.Firstly,lifeplanningcandriveustocontinuemovingforwardwhenwearein

difficultyandarouseourpassionsforlearningmore.Moreover,withoutit,wemight

beinthedarkaboutwhattodo,thusachievingnothingintheend.

AsaSeniorThreestudent,mycurrentprimarytaskistoputallmyheartintostudyto

ensureexcellentacademicperformance,andtakingagapyeartodovoluntaryworkis

alsoonmyagenda.Afterthat,I'llgotocollegetomajorinwhatI'minterestedin.

D

（2024?鹽城市高三三模）請閱讀下面圖文，并依據(jù)要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的

文章。

Eachweek,weprovideacartooninneedofacaption.You,thereader,submita

caption,wechoosethreefinalists,andyouvoteforyourfavorite.Captionsubmissions

forthisweek^cartoon,byPaulNoth,mustbereceivedbySu