2024屆高三作文復(fù)習(xí)專項：讀后續(xù)寫主題練習(xí)樂于助人課件

OnthebusGivethepassage：Givethepassage：第一步：搞清楚文章中的“5W1H”WhoWhenWhereWhyWhatHowI、ayoungguy（he/him）、manypassenagers（they/them）OnacoldDecembermoringin2020onabusgobacktomyhomwtownthebusbrokedownandIhadtogotoanotherbuswithfourbigbags.waitedfornextbusStorymountainconflictbuildupbeginningresolutionending雨很大，水打濕了我的筆記本電腦，他騰了一個塑料袋給我車壞了。我不得不挪到另外一個車，可是我行李很多，并且乘客也很多第二步：畫故事山，定主題（樂于助人）我坐車回家，遇到了一名男子，他和我交談這個男人幫助我成功地坐上了車因為男人的善意表達感謝，對人生又充滿了希望catioussheeplish“thank”worried、helplesshappy、thankful第三步：開始推理，定主題句2.Thisunforgettableexperiencewascarvedintomyheartandnothingwouldbeabletoeraseit!Theme-kindness/help1.Itwashiskindnessthattaughtmethevalueofhelping,whichIcouldtreasureforever!3.Whathappenedtodaymademeperceivethathelpingisakindofvirtueandonlyalittlekindnesscanlightsomethingshiningmakingtheworldmorebeautifulandharmonious!4.Sometimes,asmallactionofkindnessmaybehelpfulenoughtomakeahugedifference.第四步：開始推理，推理出第一段的最后一句Asthebusleftformyhometown,Ilookedaroundfortheguy.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1.我上車了2.上了車的情緒描寫第五步：開始推理，推理出第一段的內(nèi)容Asthebusleftformyhometown,Ilookedaroundfortheguy.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1.我上車了2.上了車的情緒描寫1.沒上車時的情緒？2.怎么上的車？3.這個男人起了什么作用？第六步：開始推理，推理出第二段的內(nèi)容Asthebusleftformyhometown,Ilookedaroundfortheguy.1.我上車了2.上了車的情緒描寫1.沒上車時的情緒？2.怎么上的車？3.這個男人起了什么作用？1.找到了嗎？2.在車里還是車外？1.在車里的話？面對面對話2.在車外的話，對著他大聲說情緒帶入第七步：作文展示第七步：作文展示第七步：作文展示第八步：范文展示W(wǎng)henthebusfinallyarrived,ithadmanypassengersalready.IwaswonderingwhetherIcouldgoonthebuswiththesefourbigbags.Itseemedthattherewasn’tenoughspaceforus.Hopelessandfrustrated,Isignedheavily,tookadeepbreathandwaitedforthecomingbus.Seeingthat,theguywalkedtomeandsaid,”Don’tworry,Iwillhelpyougetonit.”Hearinghiswords,Iwascuriousabouthowhemadeit.Whenthedooropened,herushedintothebus,andopenedthewindowsimmediately,yellingtomeloudly,”Handmethebags!”Withouteventhinking,IgavehimmybagsandIrushedintothebusquickly.Itwascrowdedonthebus,butatleastIgotonit.Asthebusleftformyhometown,Ilookedaroundfortheguy.Hedidmesuchafavor,and!shouldsaythankstohim.However,remindedbyanotherpassenger,Ifoundthathewasonthesideoftheroad,wavinggoodbyetome.Icametothewindowandshoutedtohim,"What'syourname?"Theguysmiledbutdidn'treply.Thebusbumpeditswayslowlydowntheroadwhilehisfigure