讀后續(xù)寫 表演讓我發(fā)現(xiàn)內在的力量 講義 五校聯(lián)考英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Istaredatmyselfinthemirror:bluetights,yellowvest,afishtailtrailingbehindme,andlargeeyessittingatthetopofmyhead.Iraisedmyeyebrowsandsighed.“Mom,Idon’tthinkthiscostumeisright,”Isaid.“Maybethemakeupwilladdsomething,”Momrepliedhopefully.SomehowMomhadconvincedmetoplaytheFishFootmaninAliceinWonderland.Ican’tsayit’sbeenthetimeofmylife.“WhatifIforgetmylines?”Ihesitated.“OhRiley,isthatwhatyou’reafraidof?Iknowyou’vebeenrehearsingfortwomonths,youwerethefirstoff-bookinyourscene,andIcouldn’tbeprouderofyou.”Momsaid,kneelingdownandhuggingme.Thenextdaywepulledintotheparkinglot,andIsteppedoutofthecar,wearingthequestionablecostume.Ishrankinsidemyself,butMompulledmetowardthemakeuproom.Whenthemakeupwasdone,Ilookedatmyselfinthemirror.Myjawdropped.“Mom!Ican’tgoonstagelikethis!”Icried.“Whynot?”“I’dbealaughingstock（笑柄）!”“Riley,lookaroundyou!You’renottheonlyoneinanoddcostume.”“Whatifwejustsneakout?Noonewillmissme.”Iwhispered.Mom’slipsdisappearedintoathinline,andIknewIhadgonetoofar.“Riley,I’mgoingtowatchyougooutonthatstagetonight.Andthat’stheendofit.”Thenmomdisappearedintotheaudience.Isatthere,aloneandbored,astheplaybeganandthecurtainroseon.ThetwoboysdressedasTwoofClubs（梅花2）nearmechattedcasuallyaboutthisandthat.Suddenly,theyasked,“You’reawfullyquiet.Isthisyourfirstshow?”Itriedtorespond,butmyvoicecaughtinmythroatandrefusedtoescape.Icoughedandnearlyyelled,“YES!”TheAceofDiamonds（方塊A）sittingnearbylaughed.“Theaudiencewillcertainlyhearyouifyoutalkthatloud.Butyoumighthavetoclearyourthroatfirst,”shechuckled.Igavethemaweaksmile.“Don’tworryaboutus,”theAcesaid.“We’reonlyteasing.”“Yeah,”theTwosaid.“Whenyou’vedoneasmanyshowsaswehave,projectingwillbesecondnaturetoyou.”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在相應位置作答。Whenmynamewascalled,Isteppedontothestageuneasily._______________________________________________________________________________SuddenlyIwasdeterminedtomakealastingimpression._____________________________________________________________________________________中文意思：我凝視著鏡子里的自己：藍色緊身褲，黃色背心，身后拖著一條魚尾，頭頂上有一雙大眼睛。我揚起眉毛嘆了口氣。“媽媽，我覺得這套戲服不對，”我說。媽媽滿懷希望地回答說：“也許這個妝容會增加一些東西。”。不知怎么的，媽媽說服了我在《愛麗絲夢游仙境》中扮演魚人。我不能說這是我一生中最美好的時光?！叭绻彝伺_詞怎么辦？”我猶豫了一下。“哦，萊利，這就是你害怕的嗎？我知道你已經(jīng)排練了兩個月了，你是第一個出鏡的，我為你感到無比驕傲?！眿寢尮蛳聛頁肀艺f。我們把車開進停車場，我下車，穿著那件可疑的服裝。我嚇了一跳，但媽媽把我拉向化妝室?；瘖y后，我看著鏡子里的自己。我目瞪口呆?！皨寢專∥也荒苓@樣上臺！”我哭了。為什么不呢？“我會成為笑柄(笑柄）!”“萊利，看看你周圍！你不是唯一一個穿著奇怪服裝的人?！叭绻覀兺低盗锍鋈ピ趺崔k？沒人會想念我的?！蔽逸p聲說道。媽媽的嘴唇消失在一條細線中，我知道我做得太過分了?！叭R利，我今晚要看你走上舞臺。到此結束?！比缓髬寢屜г谟^眾席上。戲開始了，幕布拉開了，我一個人無聊地坐在那里。兩個男孩打扮成兩個俱樂部(梅花2）我旁邊漫不經(jīng)心地聊著這聊著那。突然，他們問：“你太安靜了。這是你的第一場演出嗎？”我試圖回應，但我的聲音卡在喉嚨里，拒絕逃跑。我咳嗽了一聲，差點大喊：“是的！”鉆石王牌(方塊A）坐在旁邊的人笑了?！叭绻阏f得那么大聲，觀眾肯定會聽到你的。但你可能必須先清嗓子，”她笑著說。我勉強地笑了笑?！皠e擔心我們，”王牌說?！拔覀冎皇窃陂_玩笑?！薄笆堑?，”兩人說?！爱斈阕隽撕臀覀円粯佣嗟墓?jié)目時，投影將是你的第二天性。試題分析●寫作分析1.主要人物:①I:Riley,didn’tliketheoddcostume,wantedtosneakoutoftheperformance②Mom:不斷地鼓勵我參與演出③演出的小伙伴們:twoboysdressedasTwoofClubs,theAceofDiamonds2.視角：第一人稱3.主題：人與自我（如何在媽媽和小伙伴們的幫助下找回信心、找到自我）4.前文故事梗概:因表演服太丑，我不太愿意參加演出，想找各種借口“逃脫”。但是，在媽媽和參與表演小伙伴的鼓勵下，還是很不自在地上臺表演。……5.續(xù)寫安排:第一段:Whenmynamewascalled,Isteppedontothestageuneasily.①（與前一句和前文銜接）當時的情緒和想法②（過渡）接下去的表現(xiàn)③（承上啟下）臨近表演結束，又有了什么想法第二段:SuddenlyIwasdeterminedtomakealastingimpression.①（與前一句銜接）怎樣的impression呢②（過渡）我做了些什么③（收尾）通過這次經(jīng)歷明白了什么下水作文Whenmynamewascalled,Isteppedontothestageuneasily.NowaycouldIhavetosneakoutofthestage,thelightsbrighteningthewholestage.Whatsurprisedmemostwasthateveryoneinthescenewasintheuglyandoddcostumes!Butnooneelsewasinalowspirit!Notimecouldbewasted.Withthemusicon,allthepeopleonthestageimmediatelyfellintotheirroles.Iwasnoexception.WhatIhadtodowasactaccordingtowhatIhadbeenrehearsingfortwomonths.Fortunately,thequestionablecostumedidn’tbothermeatall.Theperformancewentonsmoothlyandnolineswereforgotten.Fearseemedtoleavemegradually,andherecamemyincreasingconfidence.(115words)

SuddenlyIwasdeterminedtomakealastingimpression.Mom'scontinuousencouragementandthethreecompanions'casualchatbroughtmethethought."Whynottryingactingmyselfinsteadofjustperformingaccordingtothescriptandlines?"Isecretlyinvolvedmycreativelinesinmypartanditwasperformedsonaturallythatnoonesensedthechange.AmorevividFishFootmancameinfrontoftheaudience.Eventually,whatIharvestedwasthethunderousapplause,whichrangthroughthehall.ThefirsttimeIcametorealizethatasmallpartcouldbringagreatimpactonlyifyouputyourheartinit.Andjustasthecompanionssaid,projectingwouldbesecondnaturetomeafterjoininginshowsandshows.(116words)參考范文Whenmynamewascalled,Isteppedontothestageuneasily.Thebrightlightsblindedmeforamoment,andIfelttheweightoftheaudience’sexpectantgazes.Despitethat,mymusclememorytookover.WehadrehearsedsomanytimesthatIwaslikearobot,recitingmylinesinthemostmonotone（單調的）voiceimaginable.AsmallpartofmybrainwhisperedthatIhadsaidtheselinesmuchbetterinrehearsal,butIpushedthatvoiceaway.Ijustwantedtogetoffstageasfastaspossible.Soon,theendofmyscenewasapproaching,andIgrewuncomfortablyawarethattheaudiencehadindeedbeenveryquietduringit.HadIdonesomethingwrong?Didtheynotlikeme?(117words)SuddenlyIwasdeterminedtomakealastingimpression.IrememberedtheTwoofClubsandtheAceofDiamonds,theireasyconfidence.They,too,hadstartedsomewhere,likelyjustasnervousanduncertainasIwasnow.ThenIstraightenedmyspine,clearedmythroat,andyelledwithalltheforceIcouldmuster.Obviously,theaudienceheardme.Asthedialoguebegan,Ifoundmyvo